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A short Spyro oneshot [CLOSED]
JetH7 Blue Sparx Gems: 827
#1 Posted: 20:41:50 02/07/2012 | Topic Creator
Hello all, this is JetH7. I've recently started writing FanFiction, mainly Spyro and I'd really like to see how you guys think I'm doing. Here's the link to a small oneshot based off TLoS ANB, I'd be really happy someone could take the time to read. Thanks! smilie http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8273678/1/Im_Sorry
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I am the ghostly watermelon!!
spyro and sonic Diamond Sparx Gems: 8325
#2 Posted: 21:11:49 02/07/2012
Wow, that was incredible, amazing, stupendous, marvelous. I really quite liked your story. You should keep writing like this as it is definitely one of the better fan-fics I've read. The only criticism I have is that there were a few grammatical errors, but I am very strict on that kind of thing so it many not matter as much to others. Keep it up. smilie
JetH7 Blue Sparx Gems: 827
#3 Posted: 22:06:37 02/07/2012 | Topic Creator
Quote: spyro and sonic
Wow, that was incredible, amazing, stupendous, marvelous. I really quite liked your story. You should keep writing like this as it is definitely one of the better fan-fics I've read. The only criticism I have is that there were a few grammatical errors, but I am very strict on that kind of thing so it many not matter as much to others. Keep it up. smilie


Holy crap, I'm not use to geting such praise! smilie Thanks!
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