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Skylanders Vacation: World Tour(Chapter 1) [CLOSED]
Ignitor101 Blue Sparx Gems: 719
#1 Posted: 19:32:45 03/06/2012 | Topic Creator
Hugo:Everyone gather!

smilie:What is it Hugo?did you lose your glasses again?

Hugo:NO!even better!our district has been chosen to go on a trip!

smiliesmilieoh!want kind of trip?

Hugo:A WORLD TOUR!

smilieI'll get the plane ready!

smilieI'll calm down the sky spirits

2 days later...

Flynn:Everybody get on the Plane!BOOM!

That was Chapter 1 tell me what you think!
TheSpyrofan12 Emerald Sparx Gems: 3205
#2 Posted: 20:05:12 03/06/2012
Good, but a little short. Try to make it longer inthe future.
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Bring the Fanta
Ignitor101 Blue Sparx Gems: 719
#3 Posted: 21:40:34 03/06/2012 | Topic Creator
Thanks, yeah u would have made it longer but I was in hurry
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