legend of the skylanders

Chapter 1 the fire armour
This story starts in a deep dark forest where the brave knight igniticus was walking down the forest looking for some thing to do. He had already conquered monsters but his true goal was to slay a dragon. Of course an evil dragon. He knew there were good dragons in the world. But ignitcus wanted to slay an evil one like all the great knights did. He walked and walked and walked he was tired and sat down under tree. “Oh I wish I could slay a dark dragon” he groaned
“did someone say they need to slay a dark dragon” came a voice ignitcus turned around to see an old spell caster
“here I have fire proof armour it will protect and sword” said the spellcaster
“what’s the catch” ignitcus asked suspiciously
“nothing have fun” the spell caster disappeared
“come my steed” ignitcus roared Then a griffin came down from the sky. It was his griffin steam Boom
“help help are village is being attacked by a dragon” said a random villager
“off we go Boom to battle this dragon” Ignitcus jumped on the griffins back and they took off to find this dragon.
Ignitcus landed got off his stead. He saw a small purple dragon firing flame breath all over the place.
“stop right there you fiend, your rein of terror is over stop there and fight me” ignicus spoke confidently
“hahahahahah you dar challenge me the messenger of malfor feel my wraith” The dragon the blasted ignitcus; with fire. Instead of shaking it off the flames he felt as though his body was all covered in fire. He felt like he was burning form the inside out.
End of chapter 1
Chapter 2 Choperrock
He rolled on the floor screaming. His whole body was like being in side the sun. The pain was intoxicating he felt powerful yet weak. Then the pain subsided. Igniticus felt strangely warm. He stumbled out of the town he walked for a hour. No even knowing were he was going or what had happened he saw a pub ahead. He walked in, there were just junkies but couple other knights. He sat down by the counter next to a knight and some kind of skeleton knight.
“What do ye want” The bar tender asked
“a glass of the coldest water you can find” Igniticus
Ÿou come into a pub and order that” the Knight asked “ ye see this boys this guy comes into a pu an order that!” There was laughting from all the other knights and junkies.
“Leave him alone” The skeleton knight said
“hey choperrock jest cuz ye makers left ye ter die does not mean ye get ter spoil me fun” The knight said. He banged igniticus’s shoulder. Without thinking he then punched the knight so hard he fell off his seat.
“Some one cruising for a bruising” the knight said “lets get em boys”. All the knight but the skeleton Then they got up and surrounded Igniticus. The skeleton knight got up pulled out his sword and shield
“I will fight with you by the name the names Choperrock or chop for short.” Said chop.
“the names Igniticus” He said while pulling out his sword. The battle started. It went on for a while. Then it happened while igniticus punch a knight he felt the sword pierce his body. I he felt the same burning sensation as when he was hit by the dragon. It then subsided. Everyone in the room stared at him.
“yyyyy your on fire, nno you are fffire.” One of the junkies said. He looked in the mirror his body was gone he was fire was where it should be. He suddenly felt in raged his fire turned puple his armor black and silver. He turned around.
“You will all die” He roared. Then therewas a huge exsplotion of fire the pub exploded. The Knights and junkies ran.
“I WILL HAVE DESTRUCTION” igniticus roared
End of chapter 2
for those who dont know
igniticus is

Choperock is

and boom is

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