Hey i know i said i would make sneak peaks but i have already started writing it so why wait first two chapter are going up today please enjoy
legend of the skylanders rologue: the darkest flame
Chapter 1 the fire armour
This story starts in a deep dark forest where the brave knight igniticus was walking down the forest looking for some thing to do. He had already conquered monsters but his true goal was to slay a dragon. Of course an evil dragon. He knew there were good dragons in the world. But ignitcus wanted to slay an evil one like all the great knights did. He walked and walked and walked he was tired and sat down under tree. “Oh I wish I could slay a dark dragon” he groaned
“did someone say they need to slay a dark dragon” came a voice ignitcus turned around to see an old spell caster
“here I have fire proof armour it will protect and sword” said the spellcaster
“what’s the catch” ignitcus asked suspiciously
“nothing have fun” the spell caster disappeared
“come my steed” ignitcus roared Then a griffin came down from the sky. It was his griffin steam Boom
“help help are village is being attacked by a dragon” said a random villager
“off we go Boom to battle this dragon” Ignitcus jumped on the griffins back and they took off to find this dragon.
Ignitcus landed got off his stead. He saw a small purple dragon firing flame breath all over the place.
“stop right there you fiend, your rein of terror is over stop there and fight me” ignicus spoke confidently
“hahahahahah you dar challenge me the messenger of malfor feel my wraith” The dragon the blasted ignitcus; with fire. Instead of shaking it off the flames he felt as though his body was all covered in fire. He felt like he was burning form the inside out.
End of chapter 1
Chapter 2 Choperrock
He rolled on the floor screaming. His whole body was like being in side the sun. The pain was intoxicating he felt powerful yet weak. Then the pain subsided. Igniticus felt strangely warm. He stumbled out of the town he walked for a hour. No even knowing were he was going or what had happened he saw a pub ahead. He walked in, there were just junkies but couple other knights. He sat down by the counter next to a knight and some kind of skeleton knight.
“What do ye want” The bar tender asked
“a glass of the coldest water you can find” Igniticus
Ÿou come into a pub and order that” the Knight asked “ ye see this boys this guy comes into a pu an order that!” There was laughting from all the other knights and junkies.
“Leave him alone” The skeleton knight said
“hey choperrock jest cuz ye makers left ye ter die does not mean ye get ter spoil me fun” The knight said. He banged igniticus’s shoulder. Without thinking he then punched the knight so hard he fell off his seat.
“Some one cruising for a bruising” the knight said “lets get em boys”. All the knight but the skeleton Then they got up and surrounded Igniticus. The skeleton knight got up pulled out his sword and shield
“I will fight with you by the name the names Choperrock or chop for short.” Said chop.
“the names Igniticus” He said while pulling out his sword. The battle started. It went on for a while. Then it happened while igniticus punch a knight he felt the sword pierce his body. I he felt the same burning sensation as when he was hit by the dragon. It then subsided. Everyone in the room stared at him.
“yyyyy your on fire, nno you are fffire.” One of the junkies said. He looked in the mirror his body was gone he was fire was where it should be. He suddenly felt in raged his fire turned puple his armor black and silver. He turned around.
“You will all die” He roared. Then therewas a huge exsplotion of fire the pub exploded. The Knights and junkies ran.
“I WILL HAVE DESTRUCTION” igniticus roared
End of chapter 2
for those who dont know
igniticus is
Choperock is
and boom is
please tell me what you think of it
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#2 Posted: 03:31:48 16/04/2012
Good!
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#3 Posted: 11:31:50 16/04/2012 | Topic Creator
thanks
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#4 Posted: 17:00:26 16/04/2012
cool.
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#5 Posted: 19:26:30 16/04/2012
not bad but you were a little mixed with your words like when you said are instead of our
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#6 Posted: 12:19:16 12/05/2012
GREAT!! If this was made into a movie and I was a critic I give it 5 stars!!!
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#7 Posted: 12:35:16 13/05/2012
Good.
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#8 Posted: 01:30:53 14/05/2012
Of course this is great! It's ignitor! Please do more!
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#9 Posted: 12:41:20 19/05/2012
So... When's the next chapter?
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#10 Posted: 12:57:51 19/05/2012 | Topic Creator
next three chapter are up
Chapter 3 The fire with the Boom Boom looked around. “Where did he go?” After igniticus got hit she had seen him walk away she had scared off the dragons herself. She was getting worried. He ad been gone for an hour. She saw a knight running away. “ have you seen a short knight who has been burnt?” she asked “ ya he turned into some fire thing and blew up the pub you better run” The knight replied “ this can’t be good” She thought. Then flew ith the direction the knight pointed to. When she got there She saw a skeleton knight blocking fire blasts from a knight who was on fire. It was igniticus! Boom landed next to the skeleton. “Are you his stead?” He asked “yes Booms the name” she replied “ Choperrock, What happened to him” choperrock asked “ He got hit by the fire of an evil dragon,… And excepted strange armour from a spell caster” Boom said “it must be that witch coligrus noficus, She travels around triking people this armour turns the user into a flame demon when he gets mad he goes on a rampage destroying anything and everything.” Choperock said “this is not good” Suddenly out of no where a huge blast of magic hit igniticus he fell to the ground. His armour turned back to silver and blue and his flames back to orange. Choperrock and Boom turned around. There was a elven witch standing behind them. They stared. The witch then muttered some magic words. And fired magic at the group. End of chapter 3 Chapter 4 a flame hex The magic blast then hit the flames behind the heros and but the burning pubs fire our. “who are you?” Boom asked “why did you do this to igniticus?” “I am hex and I did not do this to him.” Said hex “ive heard fo you” said Choperrock “you’re the witch who helps people your not evil in anyway” “yes it is sad people think all witches are bad but it is not true in any way, And your friend…” Hex said as igniticus got up. “ Is there a way to cure this armour?” Igniticus asked “Sadly no but there is a way to stop from losing control, you need to go to the top of mount volco and jump inside. Good luck” Said hex “are you comeing with us?” Boom asked “no I have something very important to deal with but we will meet again hex said End of chapter 4 Chapter 5 a path to a fire The three hero’s traveled through the woods avoiding people. Igniticus was stuck in this firey form. But it had its perks. He had gain fireery powers and a blade of fire. It turns out choperock was created by an ancient race and was now a wondering knight helping people here and there. Mount volco was miles away many islands from here. Apearently you have to pass many tests on the island of zolcoba the location of mount volco. The heros finally reached the end of the island. “Well this will be the first time we set foot of our island of knightmald.” Igniticus said “so how do we get across?” choperock asked “ well I cant carry both of you across” boom said “look over there sky rays” igniticus said. Sky rays are huge floating mant rays the fly through the skys. When one flew close enough to them the three jumped on and it carried them to the island of zolcoba. End of chapter 5
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#11 Posted: 13:03:45 19/05/2012
Great.
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#12 Posted: 13:06:51 19/05/2012 | Topic Creator
thanks i keep writing the chapter but forget to post them im also writing on of these for voodood
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#13 Posted: 13:08:17 19/05/2012
Can't wait.
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#14 Posted: 17:11:43 23/05/2012
Cool!
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#15 Posted: 14:40:58 02/09/2012 | Topic Creator
sorry for not writeing ive ben busy im going to finish this before i write the others
chapter 6 lord of the fire rings: the return of the burn igniticus looked up at the mountain. it was huge taller than anything he had ever ween. "we ve got to keep moving" said choperock "i heard there are orks patrolling these hills" the three heros walked threw the forest and got to the foot of the mountain. there was a large castle with orks every where. and behind the heros where a huge army of knights. "so say your speech" one of the knights said to igniticus "what?" he replied "you wanted to lead so say your speech" the knight said "ok...uh..." boom face palmed "uh today we fight for uh freedom? and justice? so who with me?" he stuttered there was a moment of silence. then the army started yelling battle crys "CHARGE!" he yelled. the army ran towrad the ork castle. a army of orks ran out of the castle and a huge battle began. The three heros just stood there. "uh what the heck just happend?" boom asked "no idea lets keep going" choperock said "well we have time lets fight are way to the mountain" ignitcus suggested "ill be on the peak when you boys are done" boom said as she flew away. igniticus and choperock ran toward the battle. a ork threw his speark at igniticus. He slashed it in haff with his sword. He then shot out some fire at the ork he ran away. another ork looked at him. he ran up with his sword. igniticus kicked him then slashed at another ork. He me eyes with a ork. he looked stronger than the others. he was weilding a axe. he yelled something in ork, then charged igniticus swinging his axe at him igniticus clocked it with his sword. he swung back but the ork blocked it. he cept swinging only to be blocked every time. the ork steped back, he then made two swings of his axe and the head came shooting off. this knocked igniticus backwards. The ork ran up and took a swing at igniticus. before it hit him he sent out a exsplosion of flames. the caught the ork off guard, he fell over. That gave igniticus the chance to hit him, he ran um and jumped swinging his sword down. the ork rolled out of the way, sticking his foot out triping igniticus. The ork got up pointing his axe at igniticus. "any last words" the ork said. suddenly a huge wall of bones came smashing into the side of the ork, knocking him side ways. igniticus looked up, Choperock was standing there with his sword in the ground "come on lest go" he said. igniticus and choperock ran toward the mountain, 30 minutes later and they where at the top. Boom was already there. "what took you too so long?" boom said. Igniticus just ingnored her. "Hex said that you have to jump in the volcano and the evil will be gone from your flames" choperock said. suddently the lava started bubling and a lava monster jumped out and in front of the three. "nobody comes in eruptys volcano!" it said end of chapter 7 yes this was a lotr spoof
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Good!
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thank you
chapter 8 the end flame the monster stood in front of them. it was getting ready to attack. "why are you attacking us?" choperock asked "becuase you on my mountain" it said "is that the real reason" 2hours later "and that why i live in this volcano" it cred "do you feel better?" choperock asked "yes thank you" it said then jumped back into the lava. "you know it would have taken less time if we just fight it" igniticus said. he then went over to the edge. and jumped in. he felt the evil leave him. he jumped out of the volcano. a huge beam of light came flying out of him and landed in the volcano. "ok so now what?"boom asked "lets go look for adventure?" choperock suggested "then adventure we shall look for!" igniticus said. the four walked of later the volcano started bubbling. "rise dark flame rise and do my bidding" a voice said "rise the fources of speed and darkness" a crystal hand came of the volcano "rise...SPEED DEMOND" end of chapter 8 and end of part 1 im taking a break from this to finish my other skylanders fanfic
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