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portal to mlp [CLOSED]
gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426
#1 Posted: 11:38:42 07/04/2012 | Topic Creator
hey story fan,I still guess to write story right now.
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"let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. (smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie are my collecting skylander)
gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426
#2 Posted: 01:12:05 13/04/2012 | Topic Creator
chapter 1: part1


gary,ice golem and xnya went portal with striker."wait,I think this portal go through to mlp"xnya said.soon,they went portal to mlp until they turn pony."what happen to us?"gary said."look my hand with hooves and yours too"xnya said
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"let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. (smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie are my collecting skylander)
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Kirby_rules Ripto Gems: 504
#3 Posted: 01:18:09 13/04/2012
Short...
gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426
#4 Posted: 02:53:52 13/04/2012 | Topic Creator
oh,I already edit story long.


chapter 2: part 2

rainbow dash flew down and she meet new pony"well well,you look twlight sprkle who are you?,new pony"she said."me?heh,let me think my name gary and yeah,I look twlight sprkle"gary said smile"oh hey,what new pony?"ice golem said."take a look mirroir"rainbow dash said""gasp,I look applejack"ice golem said confuse.
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"let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. (smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie are my collecting skylander)
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gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426
#5 Posted: 22:47:06 15/04/2012 | Topic Creator
chapter 3: part 3

"and you are,xnya"rainbow dash said."mhm,what you talking about?" xnya said.rainbow dash grab xnya."hey,are you taking me"xnya said."to the cloud and I have somthing to show you"rainbow dash said
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"let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. (smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie are my collecting skylander)
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Kirby_rules Ripto Gems: 504
#6 Posted: 01:41:59 16/04/2012
Okay grammar and longer chapters with more detail....
gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426
#7 Posted: 01:45:59 17/04/2012 | Topic Creator
oh ok,I would add more chapter long
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"let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. (smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie are my collecting skylander)
gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426
#8 Posted: 05:34:19 18/04/2012 | Topic Creator
chapter 4: part 4

"mhm,you look like me,xnya"rainbow dash said."maybe,I look like you"xnya said.
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"let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. (smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie are my collecting skylander)
gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426
#9 Posted: 06:24:51 23/04/2012 | Topic Creator
chapter 5: part 5


middle anywhere,orange pony bump xnya."oof,you better look out when you....wait for second,you are look strange"she said and xnya standup."come on xnya,we going to visit spike and applejack,twlight sparkle"gary and ice golem said."alright,I going going"xnya said.
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"let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. (smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie are my collecting skylander)
gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426
#10 Posted: 13:11:57 24/04/2012 | Topic Creator
chapter 6: part 6

In while,gary,ice golem and xnya went visit twlight sparkle,spike."not now,I still busy to read books"twlight sparkle said."omg,they come here"spike said."I said not now,spike"twlight said continue."erm hello,they already here, sparkle"spike said"I said....oh hi,new pony and I compete forgot said welcome"sparkle said laugh.

smilie
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"let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. (smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie are my collecting skylander)
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Blayze Gold Sparx Gems: 2299
#11 Posted: 10:42:51 26/04/2012
Really good, maybe keep working on grammar and paragraphs would be nice.
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I'm wearing lots of belts..... for no reason at all ~Jinx
gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426
#12 Posted: 13:21:04 26/04/2012 | Topic Creator
thanks,I write more story in morning but not tonight now.
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"let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. (smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie are my collecting skylander)
gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426
#13 Posted: 06:45:33 27/04/2012 | Topic Creator
chapter 7: part 7


"geeze,you look like me,gary"sparkle said."where?gary said."well,sparkle say you look like twlight,gary"spike said."oh"gary said."you be fly like rainbow dash and your hair,tail like me"sparkle said."well yeah,you follow me,gary"rainbow dash said.
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"let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. (smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie are my collecting skylander)
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gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426
#14 Posted: 22:50:50 27/04/2012 | Topic Creator
chapter 8: part 8


"how I look?"gary said."you look awsome like me and you are,xnya"sparkle said."me?I look better"xnya said.
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"let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. (smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie are my collecting skylander)
gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426
#15 Posted: 14:50:17 28/04/2012 | Topic Creator
chapter 9: part 9


"*touchs gary's tails*your tails looks like twlight" dash said"yeah,I know my tail"gary said
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"let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. (smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie are my collecting skylander)
gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426
#16 Posted: 02:15:01 29/04/2012 | Topic Creator
chapter 10: part 10


shining armor see new pony."you should guard at the door and who are you in royal guards?" shining armor said."well my brother,his name name gary and another one ice golem"sparkle said."*take off gary's helmet* this one"gary said."yeah"shining armor said.
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"let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. (smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie are my collecting skylander)
gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426
#17 Posted: 02:21:25 29/04/2012 | Topic Creator
chapter 11: part 11


*wait gary,your hair look twlight and your wings look rainbow dash too"shining said."geeze,I sure I can fly"gary said
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"let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. (smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie are my collecting skylander)
Blayze Gold Sparx Gems: 2299
#18 Posted: 10:17:39 30/04/2012
Woooo! Go rainbow dash!
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I'm wearing lots of belts..... for no reason at all ~Jinx
gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426
#19 Posted: 11:18:32 30/04/2012 | Topic Creator
chapter 12: part 12


"look your cutie mark,gary"sparkle said"mhm,my cutie mark are shadow"gary said"shadow?"sparkle said."my eye was green"gary said.sparkle told where gary come from."well,you come from unknown place in pony valley"sparkle said.
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"let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. (smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie are my collecting skylander)
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gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426
#20 Posted: 11:54:12 01/05/2012 | Topic Creator
chapter 13: part 13


"alright,let go to cloud" rainbow dash said."*still scared*everypony see me as black pony like this" gary said.
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"let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. (smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie are my collecting skylander)
gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426
#21 Posted: 09:55:17 04/05/2012 | Topic Creator
chapter 14: part 14


In while,twlight would told him about his wings and horns."you be able fly as alicorn,gary"sparkle said."like she said you can fly,gary"spike said.
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"let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. (smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie are my collecting skylander)
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gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426
#22 Posted: 14:16:51 08/05/2012 | Topic Creator
chapter 15: part 15


"here we are,rarity's workshop dress"sparkle."welcome to my......geeze*still checking"are you new around here"rarity said.
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"let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. (smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie are my collecting skylander)
gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426
#23 Posted: 13:54:53 30/05/2012 | Topic Creator
chapter 16: part 16

one day,changeling grabbing gary and spike."help me,twlight"spike shout help."alrght,let gary go"shining armor yell."muhaha,you have unleased your magic horn to defeat me"chrysails said
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"let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. (smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie are my collecting skylander)
gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426
#24 Posted: 05:57:11 14/08/2012 | Topic Creator
chapter 17: part 17

astrello went visit libarary to meet twlight sparkle.zecora already make potions for astrello and shining armor told gary when he saying."you already become luna's royal guards"shining armor said.
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"let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. (smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie are my collecting skylander)
fluffy Os Green Sparx Gems: 283
#25 Posted: 18:17:46 20/08/2012
Please stop double posting and edit your posts!
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smilie smilie smilie smilie
gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426
#26 Posted: 00:20:47 21/08/2012 | Topic Creator
I trying not double post
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"let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. (smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie smilie are my collecting skylander)
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