darkSpyro

This is my fanfic Thank you to equator and Thespyrofan12 for reading over the first chapter so here it is

THE LEGAND OF THE SKYLANDERS BOOK ONE
WHEN IT ALL BEGAN

Spyro stared into the dark cloud. It almost made him freeze he saw something in the distance "are you ready" Pyroton said to his fellow skylanders
“Charge” and he ran toward the dark clouds while the others followed him.
24 hours earlier
Spyro the dragon walked down the path he went every day down to the local theatre. He had needed to get a job after he wupped ripto last week again. so he decided to tell the mabu children about all his great adventures. but after a while it got boring for the mabu as well. He longed for another adventure. he went into the theatre and sat in a chair looking as bored as a dragon could. he heard a knock on the door
"come in" spyro said very boredly thinking it was just some mabu kids. but when the door opened it was not a mabu it was cynder.
"hey cynder" he said
"hi" she replied you
"you still putting on shows for the little folk"
"yes" he moaned
" i need something to do
"then go around i heard there is a contest at storm giant mountain" she said
"oh well something to do "he groaned. Then he set off for Storm Giant Mountain.
It was not a hard journey if you can fly. on the way when he was walking to the mountain he ran into a storm giant who looked familiar.
"hey aren't you the famous lightning rod" spyro asked
"why yes i am"
rod replied
"and you're the purple dragon spyro heard a lot about you"
"where are you off to" spyro asked
" to join the skylanders of course" rod said
" skylanders?"
" you know protectors of skylands every ones heard of them"
"where are they" spyro asked.
"Core island" bellowed rod and the two went to the core island after picking up cynder of coarse.
Spyro rod and cynder landed on the core island. There was some sort of temple there with a huge door. "who are you" bellowed a voice that seemed to come from every direction. Spyro stared up at a balcony and started to speak like this was not an odd thing to happen. "I am Spyro this Cynder and Lightning Rod we have come to join the skylanders" "very well than i am eon and these are the skylanders" a door opend and a ton of different creatures came out dragons robots trolls gill man you name it it was there.
" this is Sonic Boom, Whirlwind, Warnado, Stump Smash, Stealth Elf, Zook, Camo, Chop Chop, Hex, Ghost Roaster, Dino-rang, Prism Break, bash, terrafin, sunburn, ignitor, flameslinger, eruptor, Gill Grunt, Zap, Slam Bam, Whamshell, Double Trouble, Wrecking ball, Voodood, Trigger Happy, Drobot, Boomer, and Drill sergeant and there leader pyroton. [since most know what all these ones look like exsept pyrotonhe is a lime green dragon who looks a bit like spyro] I am eon the portal master”
“You lightning rod you will join the air team cynder the undead team and spyro you will lead the magic team." All of a sudden there was a big cloud of darkness behind them. The skylanders turned around. " The darkness and kaos have returned skylanders ATTACK." Eon yelled. The Skylanders ran to there positions.
“What the darkness and kaos” spyro asked gill grunt
“no time to exsplan they are both evil” gill grunt said. Spyro stared into the dark cloud. It almost made him freeze he saw something in the distance.
"Are you ready" Pyroton said to his fellow skylanders
“charge” and he ran toward the dark clouds while the others followed him.

end of chapter 1

What will happen when they enter the cloud

I will want fan skylanders for the second book but first i need to finish the first one but feel free to post ideas in my guest book

Yay!
Spyro!

thank you Mr-McChicken22 i think you are the first person to read the improved version of the story other than ma of coarse

It's cool, but some proofreading would be nice.

i will write the next chapter later today or tomorrow

nice fan fic zook it up i really injoyed it

Great!

Nice!

thanks guys i really appreciate it so hear it is chapter 2

Chapter 2

The fiendish dragon stared into Spyros eyes. There was no life in its eyes. Darkness reeked about it. Then it pounced.
1hour earlier
Spyro entered the cloud along with the others. There was a HUGE army trolls drow cyclopes pirates all. The Skylanders were battling the armies and the odd part was they were winning by far. Spyro knew this was a good idea and joined the battle. He saw zook blasting some drow sky high and hex raining skulls on the heads of trolls. Pyroton was smashing everything in his path no wonder he was the leader of the Skylanders.
Mean while Kaos was watching the battle
“Glumshanks why am i losing” yelled kaos
“maybe if you sent out you super minions “ moaned glumshanks
“ah excellent idea how do i come up wit these send out the elite minions” yelled kaos
“yes master” glumshanks groaned
Spyro had just finished blasting a troll with fire then he looked up
“look out meteors” he yelled when the meteors landed some thing came ou of them evil look alikes of the Skylanders. The one in front of him looked just like him. The fiendish dragon stared into Spyros eyes. There was no life in its eyes. Darkness reeked about it. Then it pounced.

end of chapter

sorry if this was short but i was short on ideas but i hoped you liked it

Cool fanfic zook it up.

thanks you darksoyro12

Your welcome zook it up .

Dark Spyro?

Good Chapter.

its not dark spyro you know when you fight kaos he has evil version of the skylanders well this is one of those but hes spyro

i will try to make a new chapter tomorrow

Good so far.
Can't wait for the rest!

thanks for all the nice comments ok here is chapter 3

Chapter 3

Spyro looked down. He was sadden by the sight. He looked up in the air and roared as loud as he could.
45minutes later
Spyro leaped out of the way as the dark dragon pounced. It hit the ground hard. Then out of nowhere pyroton charged at the dragon and he went flying into the air.
"Thanks" said spyro
"look heres the deal" said pyro ton while smashing a troll "I've heard about your adventures but this is the big leagues there no messing around i don't like you very much but i think need you on the skylanders"
Then out of nowhere a dark version of pyroton leaped on him spyro shot it with fire. Then pyroton released a turbo blast that vaporized the dragon.
"lets call it even" spyro said. The battle continued and spyro stayed by pyrotons side for most of the battle. All of the dark minions where defeated as well as all the other minions.
Mean while where kaos was
"glumshanks why are we losing" roared kaos
" maybe you should try your secret weapon"
"Of coarse again how do i come up with these prepare the weapon"
"yes master" moaned glumshanks
back to the skylanders
"thats the last of them" gill grunt said happily
"Good work skylanders" Pyroton said Then all of a sudden the dark spyro minion came crashing down atop pyroton's head and slashed away at him with his claws. It had no effect the he blasted pyroton wit a strage beam then flew off. Pyroton fell to the ground limply
"no" yelled spyro he ran over to pyrotons dead body the skylanders gatherd around.
"You spyro with my dieing breath i make you leader of the skylanders" Pyroton said in his last dying breath. Spyro looked down he was sadden by the sight. He looked up in the air and roared as loud as he could.

End of chapter 3

Yes pyroton is dead. What is kaos's secret weapon? will i stop asking questions? We might find the answers in the next exsiting episode of Pokemon! sorry i mean legend of the skylanders!

Again some proofreading would be nice. It's difficult to read.

Err... Who's Pyroton? I mean, what does (sorry did, he's dead now ) he look like? Is he a dragon? a human? a clock?

he is lime green dragon looks a bit like spyro his purpose in the story was only to die

Then what was the point? Also the time elaspation is confusing

good to know i think i will not do that anymore and i wanted there to be a reason spyro becomes the leader of the skylanders sorry i forgot that i said he became the leader already

spyro becomes the i?
Ahh... Spyro becomes an eye!

Sorry, that was terrible.
I did understand that btw, so no need to explain!

Hope fully i will be able to make the new chapter soon i am still not sure what is going to happen yet

sorry for the double post but here is the new chapter no more time lapse but i am thinking of bringing it back for the last couple chapters but here is chapter and sorry for the wait i was not sure what i wanted to happen yet but here it is

Chapter 4
Spyro looked around at his fellow skylanders.
"kaos may have defeated are leader but we are skylanders we can deafeat kaos together who's with me" spyro roared
"arrghh" said the skylanders
"attack" roared spyro . The skylanders charged at kaos's castle spyro looked in the air. He saw the dark version of himself. He blasted it with fire but mist. Then it blasted all the skylanders with a huge fire ball that sent them flying. They traveld farther and farther away. Then spyro saw a small circle in the distance it got bigger and bigger and spyro and the others landed all around the planet

Mean while on earth Spyro got up he looked around there where strange houses every where
"were am i" spyro asked
"your on earth hi my name is gus i was told that you would be here do you know were the others are?"
"yes i think zap landed in the house next door" said a confused spyro
"oh no a crazy scientist named docter mc fungus lives there he does all kinds of crazy experiments" said gus "we better hurry!"
Olivia closed the book.
"im tired of this book" Olivia groaned. She put the book down she had been reading it for a while it had gotten very predictable.
"I wish something existing would happen for a change" she mumbled. She looked up in the sky she saw a comet not a uncomen sight but there where alot of them. three of them seemed to be heading for her house. Wait they where the three commets landed in her back yard. She ran to her back yard and saw something amazing! There was a small purple dragon a small read gremlin and a blue fish person.
"do you need any help" she asked. She then reckonized them
"hey aren't you skylanders?" she asked
"yes wee are were aree we?" asked spyro
"earth" she replied
"we need to find the others and a portal to get back to skylands
"i think i have on follow me" said Olivia and the three skylanders followed her to her living room. There was a toy for every skylander on the table
"maybe if you try to go inside the toy and i put it on the portal ti will transport you back to skylands" she said
"worth a try" said spyro the three skylanders Toched there plastic versions of themselves and they turned into the toys. Olivia turned on the portal and put the three on. They were sent into skylandes
"home at last" spyro said "time for some revenge!

End of chapter
ohh cliff hanged maybe not really but do not worry they will find the others and every skylander will have a line. ps equator the part that seems like your fanfic is a book it was suppost to be a joke but if you do not like it just tell me and i will take that part away

Why don't you proofread?!? :/

i do proofread

Then how come it has bad puncuation and capitols?

Im not a very good proofreader then i will try to do a better job then

Okay, thanks

new chapter soon still not sure what is going to happen next

good so far.

new chapter why not

chapter 5

Hugo looked around. He was in a balloon with Flynn flying over a very large mabu town
"Where do you want me to land Hugo" said Flynn
"with all the chompies around and the island getting ripped apart by a giant tornado i think over there's fine" Hugo pointed to a fairly comm spot he got out. Hugo looked around then out of no where Spyro Trigger happy and Gill Grunt appeared.
"Skylanders your back and just in time this island is getting ripped apart by a tornado and has a chompy infestation you need to help" said Hugo
"sure thing lets go guys." said Gill Grunt. The three Skylanders battled the chompies and saved the villagers
"im going to go back to earth to find the others gill your in charge till i get back" said Spyro he then disappeared to find the others

end of chapter five
next chapter will be Spyro and Olivia finding the air Skylanders

Knowing you, why not life so you can get in faster?

because when you play the game the first eternal source is air

Yes I know.

But this isn't the game. This is your story. And in your story, you can do ANYTHING you want!

Equator's right.

You don't have to base it on the game.

i know but i just do not want to do life yet maybe i will change the order but magic is going to be last for some important reasons

Oh, makes sense.

It's getting better.

thanks going on holiday soon might not get any chapters in till next next week

Do you have any ideas of when the next chapter will be up?

next chapter will be on Sunday or Monday i am on vacation and there is no quite time for me to focus but hope fully soon
chapter will be tomorrow

new chapter finally i have time so hear it is

chapter 6
gill grunt trigger happy flynn and hugo arived back at the ruins
"so" gill grunt said "how are we going to beat kaos"
"we should rebuild the core of life send word to spyro he should find the air skylanders" said hugo

meanwhile
Spyro landed in the same yard he did a few hours ago. he went in side the house. Olivia was sitting on the couch
"oh your back" she exclaimed
"i need your help to find the other skylanders" Spyro replied
"lets go then" Olivia said
"hugo says we should find the air skylanders" spyro and Olivia walked down the street [they had but spyro in a baby carriage] they looked up and saw huge storm with lightning tornados rainbows and winds.
"hop on my back" said spyro and he took off they flew over to the storm. They saw lightning rod warnado whirl wind and sonic boom
"hay guys roared spyro we need to get back to skylands" there was no response
"lets try throwing the toys at them" Olivia suggested. She throw the toys at them. The toys absorbed the four skylanders and they fell to the ground. spyro caught them
"lets get them back to skylands" said spyro and they flew off.

end of chapter 6
next chapter the air skylanders go to find the eternal air source
sorry for the short chapters i had a bit of writers block and do not worry i will make finding the others more interesting

Three skylanders? i thought there was four there...

sorry was a typo it ment to say four

It's great so far.

sorry severe case of writers block but ill see what i cann do

chapter 7

"we found the air skylanders" spyro said
"excellent" hugo replied "you should find the water skylanders next"
"one thing hugo" said spyro
"yes"
"do you know why pyroton was so powerful?" asked spyro
"pyroton was an elder elemental he is the strongest kind of skylander he hailed from dragons realms like yourself"
"ok thanks hugo over and out" spyro turned off the comunications

Hugo turned around there was a flash of light. The air skylanders where right behind him
"thank heavens you came we have lots of work to do you guys need to goo find the eternal sir source you should start looking around the parelisis pastures flynn will take " sad hugo he was out of breath
"okaaay" said lightning rod "soo lets go"
The air skylanders headed off to the pasture

they landed
"this palce seems all right" said sonic boom
"look at the sheep" whilwind said Warnado looked at the sheep. All of a sudden all the sheep turned purple and there eyes became red and the grew long teeth
"run" yelled warnado. The four skylanders ran [lightning rod floated quickly] warnado turnd aroun and blasted the sheep with a huge tornado they went flying away
"that was close" lightning rod said with a breath of releif" sonic boom turned around and looked at a stone wall. it had markings on it.
"we should go to the sky scooner docks" said sonic boom.

end of chapter 7

pm me for a sneek peak of book 3 the darkest flame

Hmm... very good so far, I like it

I have a few tips though:
-You should capitalize all names when they come up, not leave some lowercase yet others uppercase
-Try to capitalize the begining of your sentences
-Try to check your spelling a bit, some people hate it when things are misspelled, you can mainly asure this by first typing chapters in a program that has a spell check like Microsoft Word (of course some things such as Skylander names will be counted as wrong, just ignore that when it happens)

But, all in all, I'm interested in this Keep it up!

I write my chapters at school then type them up on the computer.

a still have writers block but here it is [this is the beginning of my plan]

Chapter 8 [in think] the drow army

"i placed there eternal sources were you said so you can find them master"
"good step one is complete now begin phase two after subject one is down"

"here you are" Flynn said as he landed the balloon. The four skylanders got off

"so where should we look first" Warnado asked
"lets follow the docks" suggested Whilwind. The air skylanders walked down the docks
"attack" screamed a drow All of a sudden the four were surrounded by tons and tons of drow.
"looks like someone is about to get blown away" roared warnado. lightning rod facepomed. The four battled the drow. Warnado smashed them while whirlwind blasted them and sonic boom mashed them.
"time for a storm" bellowed lightning rod. The four skylander combined the attacks and blasted a huge storm the made the drow ether fly away or they jumped of the docks.
The four then continued searching till the made it to the end of the dock.
"there's nothing hear" said Sonic boom. All of a sudden a ton of drow airships surrounded them.
"who the heck are you suuupost to be" bellowed a drow who appeared to be the commander.
"we are skylanders we order you to make your men stand down" replied Sonic boom
"What in the malefors depths of skyless earth cakes are you saying i am the cooomanding officer general hp walkerbuger and i will not listen to your giber jaber all guns fire on my cooomand" he roared
"not if i can help it" warnado threatened "FOR THE WIND!" He lept at the comand ship with such force it broke in half.
"you heard the man or ugh turtle" lightning rod said. The skylander deafeted the ships
"you have not seen the last of meeeee" said the drow captain as he flew away on his jet pack
Then Flynn's balloon landed next to the four
"word is the drow have the eternal air source at their stronghold lets go" said the Flynn and the skylanders left.

end of chapter 8

i think my writer block might be over will write more soon plz ask for the sneak peak people i have already started writing book three i have finished the first chapter so ask away or i will just give it away!!