darkSpyro

It was a normal day in skylands. Trigger Happy,Boomer,and Zook were playing a game to see who could cause the most destruction. Spyro,Cynder,Stealth Elf,and Flame Slinger were all out on a double date. Terrafin was digging a bunch of holes in the ground and Gill Grunt was filling them with water. They were making a swimming pool for all the other skylanders. Every other skylander was out on one mission or a nother.All of a sudden Terrafin bumped into something and the earth started to shake. Then a giant tree like beast with a red mace on his right on his arm rose out of the ground. "I am Tree Rex" said the beast"Bring me all of the skylanders"


All of the skylanders hade gathered around Tree Rex."Skylanders,I have a very important mission for all of you"."What is it" said Spyro? " A mission to beat the ultimate force of evil" said the giant " All who don't wish to participate don't have to". " Well I volantere" said Spyro." So do I" said Terrafin. " You can also count me in" said Zap. All in all Spyro, Terrafin, Zap, Voodood,
Chop-chop, Bash, Lighting Rod, Trigger Happy, Drobot, Sunburn, Camo, Drill Seargent, Boomer, Stump-smash, And Stealth Elf voluntered." Okay" said Tree Rex" Get a good nights sleep and I will tell the people who voluntered the mission tomorrow, I bid you all a good night"

It seems a bit... disorganized. I can't understand any of it...

It's in the prossess, Plus this is my first time trying to do eneything like this

Well, I suggest pacing yourself, making a neat format of writing that is structured and easy to read, use good grammar, use spell check, and try to work the kinks out so it looks neat and proper before you post.

Hope this helps.

Thanks it douse help

maybe add somethings to make things a little funny it might bring in more attention <3 hope it helped

Shouldn't this be in the er... FAN FIC section? You'll get more people who want to read it there. Good story by the way