Story try 4
Chapter 1, part 1 - Beauty Sleep
I listened to the sound of the rain battering the roof and looked out my window, lightning flashed and the storm clouds rumbled. I remembered when my mum told me it was the giants bowling on the clouds but me, thunder and lightning are natures fireworks.
I sighed and looked back down at the safari tabs open on my iPhone. Darkspyro, my favourite site to visit. I looked at the time 10:00 I closed safari and locked my iPhone. I put it on the charger next to my bed. Well, that was an hour wasted on Darkspyro, again.
I closed my eyes, I needed my beauty sleep. Now GO AWAY I'm sleeping.
Give me feedback did you like it was it good?
Thank you :3
It's a Skylanders story but I guess Haters don't die they just multiply
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Chapter 1, part 2 Help please
I woke up as lightning flashed and struck the ground in my backyard. I jolted up and grabbed the small flashlight near my bed and my Sunburn figure (which I got early for winning a competition) and headed down the hall to the living room/kitchen. I shone the flashlight around the room, it was the usual dim darkness of nothing moving, but out side a faint light was glowing.
I headed to the backdoor, outside it had stopped raining. I stopped and wondered if the rain had stopped what had made that lightning strike.
If it's those neighbours, they are going to pay for waking me up at 2:00 in the morning I thought as I opened the door to the backyard. When I looked outside, I saw something that made me think this was defiantly a dream. Sitting in the middle of my yard was a huge Portal of Power.
For the sake of dreaming I ran over to look at it. It was big enough for a person to stand on it, and to prove my point... I stood on it. To tell you the truth I didn't know what was going to happen.
Nothing did.
I jumped off and put the flashlight on the ground. I studied the Portal of Power for a while.
Maybe… I ran inside and grabbed my iPhone. I opened the tabs I had open before and looked to see who was Online at DarkSpyro. Maybe just maybe someone could help.
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Now who wants to be online X3
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Chapter 1, part 3 OMG!
I walked outside to the Portal of Power and took some pictures. I opened the notebook app and typed down everything that had happened so far. I walked around the side and found a sort of keyhole, shaped like the Portal from the game. I put everything down and ran into my room to get it.
I walked back outside with the PoP (portal of power) in hand, I stuck the PoP in the hole. The portal glowed brighter and then went back to glowing softly. I grabbed my stuff and hopped on. This time I was sucked into the PoP, it was crazy.
I felt strange, like I was being pulled apart and squashed together at the same time. Eventually I passed out from the pain.
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#1 Posted: 10:52:48 28/01/2012 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 15:37:37 28/01/2012
cool!
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#3 Posted: 11:25:28 29/01/2012
lol, nice story! can't wait to hear more. I assume it will be soon seeing how you posted all these in about 24 hours?
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#4 Posted: 11:51:26 29/01/2012 | Topic Creator
I guess just writing little bits at a time
Probably tommorow cause it's the first day back at school then Chapter 2, part 1 - wait what! The sun hit my face and streched one arm out. Well, that's probably the weirdest dream I'll ever have I thought, I rolled over only for my face to hit a rock. "Oww… what the heck," I opened my eyes and jolted up. I was in a cave you know dark and suprizingly warm. "My back," I said. "You might wanna lay back down, I've never seen someone wake up like that before," laughed an unknown voice. I rubbed my back, I freaked out when I felt something connected to my back. I tried to stand but I kept falling over, finally I gave up and looked myself over. "Holy Flip I'm a flippen' dragon," I gasped. A figure walked into the light, he was Half/dragon half/phoenix (and 100% fire power ) "What and you haven't been a dragon your whole life," He said. I couldn't believe it, it was Sunburn. "Sunburn?" I asked. "Yes, wait… holy **** how do you know my name?" he freaked out and teleported next to me. "Umm… lucky guess?" Cr** I'm not supposed to know him yet I mentally face/palmed.
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#5 Posted: 13:35:44 29/01/2012
Love the story can't wait to read more!
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#6 Posted: 20:10:02 29/01/2012 | Topic Creator
Thank you
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#7 Posted: 07:17:35 30/01/2012 | Topic Creator
Edit: put all of chapter 1 in my first post
Chapter 2, part 2 "Are you one of those pets sent by the dark wizards to capture me?!" He snorted saying the word pets with disgust. "No! No no, I can't remember anything from my past I need help," I lied. "Then how do you know my name?" he eyed me. "Uhh... There's a wanted poster outside you cave," I said looking at it. "What… oh," he sat down. "Are you alright?" I got up and sat next to him. He turned away, "I'm sorry for acting that way, it's just… all these wizards are after me because I'm the last of my kind… and I've never had anyone actually care for me and not try to hurt me." I looked down, This is defiantly not what I expected. I thought. I tested my wings to see if it was any different to any other thing I could move. I heard Sunburn sob and then sniff, so I put my wing over him. "Please don't cry," I told him. He was visibly shocked, "I-I'll go get us something to eat then," he said quickly before taking off, burning the wanted sign on his way. Did he just blush I thought.
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#8 Posted: 02:42:26 31/01/2012
Cool story! Don't stop!
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#9 Posted: 04:50:02 31/01/2012 | Topic Creator
Trying not to.
More story soon, I'm on a roll
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#10 Posted: 11:12:29 31/01/2012 | Topic Creator
Chapter 3, part 1- In which Cyclone sees her first drow and we meet a new friend.
I shrugged (as best I could with my hands well paws on the ground) and looked myself over. I was a blue/purple colour that changed depending on the way the light shone onto me. I had a longer than usual tail and normal sized wings. I stopped looking myself over when I heard someone walk into the cave. I looked over my streched out wing to the cave entrance, standing there looking quite confused was a small drow spearman. His armor was way to big and he was a lighter green than most, I hissed at him and he ran away, screaming like a little girl. I flicked my tail in delight. I liked flicking my tail. I laid down on my back and looked up at the roof of the cave. I decided to send on of my friends on DarkSpyro a pm. I searched the cave until I found my iPhone. --------- I collapsed on my bed, and grabbed my laptop. I logged onto DarkSpyro and put on some music. I opened a pm that Cynder134 had sent me. It read: Help Skylands is real and I've meet Sunburn, don't know how to get back. I laughed and replied: You're kidding, stop trying to pull my leg, I won't believe you. She pmed me back: No it's true I'll send you a picture. ----------------- Sorry that's all you get for now
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#11 Posted: 13:27:09 31/01/2012
Really good story can't wait to hear more! What was the deal with the drow spearman part though?
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#12 Posted: 20:52:03 31/01/2012 | Topic Creator
One of the evil guy's (Kaos) minions sent to capture Sunburn, but he wasn't there at the time.
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#13 Posted: 00:45:04 01/02/2012
This is really good!
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#14 Posted: 04:44:32 01/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Thankyou new chapter soon!
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#15 Posted: 03:07:28 02/02/2012
When are you gonna make more?
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#16 Posted: 09:45:07 02/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Soon and thank the Internet for letting me down, I'll try get more in 1 hour or less
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#17 Posted: 12:00:10 02/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Chapter 4 - In which Suzume gets bored and Sunburn returns
Suzume gave up on Cynder134's reply and continued looking around the topics on DS (DarkSpyro), after a while she got bored and started watching MLP:FiM after watching ponta for an hour she walked to her bed and faceplanted onto the matress, she closed her eyes and fell asleep. ---------------------- Sorry it's 11:00 pm and I have school tomorrow I'm sleeping *mimics Suzume*
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#18 Posted: 09:27:13 05/02/2012
Lol, have you died? I don't think it's 11:00pm anymore! Only joking, but I'd love to see another chapter. No pressure or anything.
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#19 Posted: 10:28:25 06/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Urg... Stupid school's getting in the way.
Stupid homework, stupid GIMP (playing up) and stupid school. So angry! Good news, I got a merit award (they hand them out for the silliest things), I'm alive and: Chapter 4 - continued I sighed, I couldn't take a photo of Sunburn and the cave was just like a normal cave. I looked out the entrance. Perfect, outside a monster was flying (that blue flying thing) and there was the burnt wanted poster. I took 2 pictures and sent them to (username) (<= not a real user) -------------------------- Suzume yawned and streched her arms, bones popping into place. She sat up and checked DS, she had received another PM from Cynder134 Topic: You want the truth She clicked on it and thought, she was probably admitting that she li- OMFG She fell to the floor in shock, she had done it, she had actually taken pictures. It read: You can't handle the truth! [pic][pic] What do you think of that (username)! ------------------------ Part 3 tommorow
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#20 Posted: 18:46:16 06/02/2012
awsome i know this is kinda a stupid question but could i be in it please.PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
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#21 Posted: 21:23:13 06/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Okay, I didn't think it would get this popular X3
Just need to know this: Name: (not your real name) Age: Skylander form: (Name, age picture or description) Skylander: (what Skylander you meet first) Edit: Chapter 4- cont. Again Sunburn flew back to his cave, a sheep hanging from his claws. He thought about how *that dragon (lol that was the name of my first story on here) had laid her wing on him. He embraced the warmness of her wing on him in his thoughts. ----------------- I waited for Sunburn to arrive by laying on my back in the sun outside the cave. I had hidden my things in a crack in the wall where they couldn't be damaged. I spotted Sunburn a while away, since I wasn't good at flying, well like I had even tried. Paper wings, jumping off stuff and flailing my arms wildly. I tested my wings again (changed them to feathered wings), the wind flowed through the feathers. I jumped and flapped my wings, one word can describe this: EPIC FAIL I faceplanted into the ground and layed there. Sunburn seemed to be thinking about something and ended up faceplanting too, except into the cliff. "That makes two of us," I said getting up. "What… oh," he smiled and I smiled back. ------------------ What's this Cyclone/Misuto has feathered wings now and Sunburn was thinking of her.
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#22 Posted: 18:09:52 07/02/2012
ok thanks
what do you mean by name Age:13 Skylander form:can change between a living skeleton and human with elemetal powers Skylander:spyro
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#23 Posted: 08:34:43 08/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Like a name for your character and your name before transporting there
And I forgot Element: (Magic, Fire, Life ect) I'm guessing Undead for you character
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#24 Posted: 15:23:00 08/02/2012
yeah undead
Name:Skulduggery
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#25 Posted: 20:21:27 08/02/2012 | Topic Creator
I've got those books X3
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#26 Posted: 17:00:27 09/02/2012
So do i all 6 but now i have to wait a MONTH until Skullduggery Pleasant The End Of The World comes out
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#27 Posted: 23:48:05 09/02/2012
Oh yay! I want to be a skylander too
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#28 Posted: 05:32:14 10/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Okay I'm laughing my head off at the moment roflmfao
Next chapters gonna big if this keeps up XP
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#29 Posted: 11:00:47 11/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Chapter 5 soon
Sorry for the wait
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#30 Posted: 11:51:13 11/02/2012
*BLOWS UP INTO 1 MILLION COOKIES*
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#31 Posted: 12:04:05 11/02/2012 | Topic Creator
COOKIES!!!
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#32 Posted: 12:09:53 11/02/2012
COOKIES!!!
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#33 Posted: 12:14:17 11/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Chapter tommorow yayz
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#34 Posted: 12:18:45 11/02/2012
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO THATS LIKE 12 HOURS AWAY
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#35 Posted: 12:49:58 11/02/2012 | Topic Creator
10 minutes for me
It'll be up sometime soon
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#36 Posted: 17:34:32 11/02/2012
LOLIGE
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#37 Posted: 19:32:07 11/02/2012
Wow, you two are talkative...
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#38 Posted: 20:07:55 11/02/2012
YOU KNOW WHAT ELSE IS TALKITIVE... MY MOM
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#39 Posted: 21:49:40 11/02/2012 | Topic Creator
I was bored and no one was online so…
RaNdOm pAiRiNgS
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#40 Posted: 23:05:13 11/02/2012
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#41 Posted: 23:07:46 11/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Lol, I'm more like my dad
Warrior Dash. Mud. Sweat. Beer. Lol
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#42 Posted: 00:40:53 12/02/2012
I want to be in it 2!
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#43 Posted: 01:14:47 12/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Lol hang on a minute.
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#44 Posted: 08:19:17 12/02/2012
*mumbeling* I wasnt being serious about the my mom thing
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#45 Posted: 09:45:12 12/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Oh lol
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#46 Posted: 11:45:15 12/02/2012
when next chapter
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#47 Posted: 20:19:35 12/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Later I have to ho to school
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#48 Posted: 10:19:09 13/02/2012
Me likey!
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#49 Posted: 20:33:07 13/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Yay
Stupid school keeps getting in the way, atleast I don't have to write anything today.
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#50 Posted: 23:11:40 14/02/2012
i wouldn't be suprisised if u had forgotten the plot by now! Been so long since the last chapter and u say you've had a lot of schoolwork, my brain would've exploded by now! lol.
woohoo! no. 50 comment. Lol just noticed: dark spyro1 called mom an 'it' (you know WHAT else is talkative, MY MOM) XDXD
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