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Does this look good? [CLOSED]
VexusTD Green Sparx Gems: 464
#1 Posted: 16:50:25 24/12/2011 | Topic Creator
So I'm continuing my story and before I put the next chapter out there I would like some opinions on this character description


His scales were a darkened shade of yellow, almost a gold color with no luster. Two rows of curved, midnight black spikes connected together on his skull and continued down his back to the tip of his tail. Four lightning ivory horns crowned his head, two beside the beginning of the spikes and two behind his cheek bones. Both of his wing membranes were black, the bones holding them together were a light shade of gray. He turned around to see his tail. The spikes ended where the blade began. Two daggers expanded at opposite sides of the tail blade. Where they connected together at the beginning was a hooked scythe. The teeth on the inside of the scythe were curved down and inward, good for keeping prey from escaping. There was a faint green substance on the end of each hooked tooth. It was faint, but it sounded like acid burning and replacing the material that made up his blade.

Tell me what you think and how you picture it, and if I can add more detail, tell me how smilie
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"If you are man enough to make a child, you should be man enough to raise one." ~Kellin Quinn
daimondcynder21 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1218
#2 Posted: 08:43:39 26/12/2011
Well I think your description is in very good detail, suprising that no one really comments on stories/Art by people new to dS.
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#3 Posted: 03:25:23 02/01/2012
This is GOOD!
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