darkSpyro

So, I decided to make one of these fanfiction thingies for the fun of it. I spellchecked this to death to ensure it was proper, since I want it to look nice and spiffy. So, without further ado, here it is.

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Düstere Nächte - Dark Nights

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Führer Flammelwolf's Zeitschriften - General's Log, for the recordings of the advents of Captain Flammenwolf

Start date - 1st March, 2017
End date - 29th August, 2025

Briefing: Flammenwolf, Cynder, Nachtdrachen, and Koloss are in the central compounds of Old Dortmund, where severe riots have led to a small faction war between the Archen and the Widerstandskräfte over territorial sovereignty. Agent Nachtdrachen has been exhibiting suspicious activity up to his current MIA status, and Flammenwolf and the remaining agents of the Verordnung are currently searching for Agent Nachtdrachen.

Flammenwolf came out of a slum alley, breathing heavily. "Schießen! There's bullets flyin' everywhere! You okay, Cynder?" said Flammenwolf over his VN issue radio. Cynder radioed in, bullets spraying in the background, "Yeah, not for long, though! Find Nachtdrachen and get out!". An explosion went off next to Flammenwolf and he said, "Schießen! Get out now! We need to get to higher ground!" Cynder leapt from the rooftop before sticking a tail barb in the head of a kamikaze heading for Flammenwolf. Cynder said, "Where is Koloss, meine süß?"

Koloss radioed in, "I'm fine and out of sight. Now, quit speakin' that dead ol' language!" Flammenwolf said, "I don't get it, where is Nacht?" Nachtdrachen said behind Flammenwolf and Cynder, "Here..." as he stabbed them in the gut, sending them to the ground. Nachtdrachen lit up a cigarette and took a fine, long drag on it, and said, "Pfft. Worthless. Least I got revenge." At that point, a sniper rifle resounded in fire, and a bullet knocked him out by lodging in his sternum. "Radio was on, dipwad..." said Koloss, biting on a toothpick as he was positioned over the balcony of the town belltower. Koloss said, "Time to get those two fools out." He leapt down, and turned to a flying swath of shadow as he swooped down to pick up Flammenwolf and Cynder, unconscious, and he got them back to base.

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NEXT MORNING 7:15

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Flammenwolf woke to see Cynder staring him into the eyes, gleaming emerald color, with a warm smile on her face. Cynder said, as he tail gracefully swished back and forth, "Wie hast du geschlafen, heißen sachen?" Flammenwolf responded with a smile, "Besser, wenn es bei euch war, Cynthia..." Cynder swatted him on the nose with the flat of her tail blade, and said, "I told you not to call me Cynthia, you know I hate it." Flammenwolf smiled wide and said with a laugh, "Erzählte mir, in bettgeflüster, liebe!" Cynder said, laughing, "Why, you little...", as she pawed at him playfully. Koloss came in the barracks, and said, "Hey, you guys alright?", as Flammenwolf said, "Yeah, what happened?"

Koloss said, "Nachtdrachen is what happened. He's a traitor. I got some info from moles he defected to the Leistungsschalter party." Flammenwolf said, puzzled, "Why would he do that?" Koloss said, "Maybe because you proved his feats at Nuremberg that qualified him for a medal of honor were all complete lies. He never lived that down, and it humiliated him." Flammenwolf said, "Schießen! I forgot about that! Anything else he did you get wind of, Koloss?" Koloss said, "The piece of scum killed them all. Old Dortmund is devoid of life." Flammenwolf, shocked, said, "That's impossible! There were 500,000 people in that city!"

Koloss said, "He morphed into his dragon form. He killed EVERYTHING." Flammenwolf got up and said, "We've got to stop him before he becomes a weapon of death for the Leistungsschalter!" At that moment, Flammenwolf felt a twinge of pain, and Koloss said, "Both you and your little lover need rest. You are very seriously wounded." Flammenwolf said in Koloss' ear, "She's not my mate yet, I still haven't done her." Koloss said, "She is STILL holding out?" Cynder said to the boys, "You know, guys, I can hear you..."

Flammenwolf said, "Well, Koloss, I'm going to get some rest, hopefully with Cynder.", earning a scowl from the dragoness at his remark. Koloss said, "Good. I have to tell you, we are all left of the VN troope. We have to rely on each other." Flammen went to his bed and said, "We do well as a team, so I think we'll do just fine." Koloss flipped the lights, and said, "We are leaving for Nuremberg tomorrow. My moles tell me it's an area where we can get stronger defenses built. We have allies there. After we stockpile enough, we march on Old Munich, where the Leistungsschalter HQ is." Flammenwolf, yawning, said, "Uh-huh, good night."

After Koloss closed the door and left, Cynder said, "I'm scared, Michael." Flammenwolf said, "It's okay Cynder. Du hast mich um Sie zu schützen." Cynder said, "Ich liebe dich, Flamme...", as she gently kissed Flammenwolf on the lips and unfurled her tongue into his mouth, before retracting it a few seconds later and breaking off the kiss. Flammenwolf said, happily, to Cynder, "Ich liebe dich auch, Cynder...", as he kissed Cynder goodnight and the two fell asleep in each others' embrace.

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End of General's Log, Entry One

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So tell me, what do you think so far? I do my plot buildup good? Leave enough a mystery?

So, comments, anyone?

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Oh, sorry... Well... comments anyway?

Well...

Schießen = Shoot.
meine süß = My sweet
Wie hast du geschlafen, heißen sachen = You sleep well, hot stuff?
Besser, wenn es bei euch war, Cynthia = Better, if it was with you, Cynthia (Cynder's proper name)
Erzählte mir, in bettgeflüster, liebe! = Told me in pillow talk, dear!
Du hast mich um Sie zu schützen = You have me to protect you
Ich liebe dich, Flamme... = I love you, Flamme...
Ich liebe dich auch, Cynder... = I love you too, Cynder...

Did I make the relationship belivable? I'm uneasy on that one...

Awesome! Love the way you wrote it! I should probably update mine...

Thanks. Suck at english, good at litrature.

I am changing the format of how I do end of sentence speaking. I will put the appropriate punctuation, to signify a separation of sentences better.

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General's Log Entry Two

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Briefing: Flammenwolf, Cynder, and Koloss arrive in Nuremberg, to find it near devoid of life and in ruins. The inhabitants tell it is yet another display of destruction by the new Leistungsschalter death weapon, none other than Nachtdrachen the Traitor. The party of three encounters significant Leistungsschalter resistance, led by none other than Nachtdrachen himself.

Cynder coughed on smoke as the three looked on a ruined Nuremberg, destroyed and in flames of dark fire. Cynder said, "Ach du lieber! I can't see anything in this mess!" . Koloss said, "I can't believe it, he killed off another city!", as he punched a large dent in the steel scrap ruin of a building next to him. Flammenwolf said, "Be prepared, something might be up." . Quite unfortunately, he was right, as the sounds of hundreds of guns cocking around the trio was heard. Atop a pile of rubble came a man in a suit of leather armor and a jet black coat. It was the traitor, Nachtdrachen.

Nachtdrachen said, "I see you found me. Like what I've done to the place?" . Flammenwolf said, "Like hell!", as he pulled out a gun and fired several rounds off at Nachtdragon, who avoided them easily. Nachtdragon said, "Hehe... Kill them." . The guns around them rang off, and Koloss turned into his Death form, flying about as a shadow, and rotting the bodies of Leistungsschalter soliders as he passed through them. Flammenwolf took to his Fire Wolf form, where he stood as a long wolf, with a snow white underbelly and flesh and fur of fine fiery strands.

Flammenwolf had the ability in this form to elongate his body, and did so as he leapt as a flame in a bouncing wave from place to place. Flammenwolf was flying through the air gently, shooting his basically elastic fiery self at soldiers, squeezing them to death, and erupting the flames on his back to burn them alive. Flammen and Koloss easily could travel in their forms, and so they decimated all their opposition, save a few they had not known about. But those few overpowered Cynder and kidnapped her, to bring back to the base of the Leistungsschalter.

Flammenwolf looked at what was happening, and said, "NO!", as he flung his form's fore feet and front to where the kidnapping was occurring, a massive elastic firebend. Koloss said, "Leave her!", but Flammenwolf said as he transformed back to normal, "I can't! I love her too much!" . Koloss saw Nachtdrachen above, dagger in hand, and shouted, "Flammen, look up!" . Flammenwolf looked up too late, and Nachtdrachen had jumped down and sliced Flammenwolf in the belly, as Flammenwolf fell, and Flammenwolf said weakly, "Nachtschatten..." . Nachtdrachen said to the unconscious Flammenwolf, "Nachtschatten." .

Koloss tried to fire at Nachtdrachen, but Nachtdragon transformed and took to flight. Koloss said, "Kacke, can you do anything right, Flammenwolf?" . Koloss said, "I'm getting back. Need to get something worked out that can help those fools. Pfft, my job, the cleaner." .

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LATER 3:15 PM

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Flammenwolf awoke from his daze, to see Nachtdrachen standing in front of him. Nachtdrachen said, "Wie hast du geschlafen? Hehehe..." . Flammenwolf snarled and said, "Fahr zur hölle, du sohn einer hure!" . Nachtdrachen punched Flammenwolf in the face and said, "I want this to hurt as much as you hurt me." . Flammenwolf said spitefully, "If I recall correctly, I saved your sorry hide at Nuremberg!" . Nachtdrachen stabbed a syringe in Flammenwolf, and injected him with Hg-210. Nachtdrachen said, "Mercury, feel it burn as you see Cynder get tortured." .

Nachtdrachen left, as a door opened in a interrogation chamber across from Flammenwolf, and Cynder was thrown in. All Flammenwolf could do was watch in horror as Leistungsschalter soldiers came in, and proceed to beat and rape Cynder horrifically without a shred of mercy. Flammenwolf, consumed by rage, turned to his Fire Wolf form and screamed out as he flared his flames as powerfully as his incredible rage could. As he flared his flames, the very iron walls around Flammenwolf melted, and soon the entire compound was melting.

The soldiers torturing Cynder fled in pure terror, as Flammenwolf morphed, went to grab Cynder, and ran through fire and flames carrying the unconscious dragoness, saying to the horribly wounded dragoness, "Ich bin für dich da, Cynder! Stirb tun nicht auf mich! (I'm here for you Cynder! Don't die on me!)" . Flammenwolf ran and morphed into his Fire Wolf form to get Cynder back to Koloss. Flammenwolf smashed through the top of the base when he had arrived, and shouted in a resounding cry after he transformed back to normal, "MEDIC!" .

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End of General's Log, Entry Two

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Comments on how it's going? I really want to know if I am doing well.

Yeah, sory, my english would be very bad if I didnt spellcheck.

I wonder what to do next though... fightwise.

Ich denke, es ist ziemlich gut.

Glad you think so.

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General's Log Entry Three

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Briefing: Flammenwolf has arrived at base, carrying Cynder, in critical condition. The outcome looks very bleak.

Flammenwolf ran into the medic station where Koloss was, and dropped the still, limp Cynder onto the cot in the station. Koloss said, "What condition is she in?" . Flammenwolf said urgently, "She's dying, that is her condition!" . Koloss pushed Flammenwolf aside, and tied a nitrile tourniquet around Cynder's arm, holding a syringe with his teeth as he tied the tourniquet tight. He held the tourniquet with one hand, and took in the other hand the syringe, a hypodermic needle, really, as he stabbed it into Cynder's now prominent veins. As Koloss extracted the blood, all that entered the syringe was a silver liquid, and very much of it.

Koloss shouted across the station, "Code 69! I repeat, Code 69!" . Flammenwolf said, "What's wrong?" . Koloss said, "Nachtdrachen gave her very severe mercury poisoning." . As a RN rushed in with a special blade, Koloss took it and bled the mercury from Cynder, while injecting her with a large supply of plasma to be converted to blood. Cynder awoke with a sharp cough, and gasped heavily as she coughed hard, and she said, "Koloss? Michael?" . Koloss said, "Easy, you need to rest. We just drained you of a lot of poison." . Cynder said, "Michael isn't leaving, is he?" .

Before Koloss could speak, Flammenwolf said, "No, I won't. I'm not leaving your side." . Koloss rolled his eyes and scoffed as the two caught up. Slowly, Cynder went to sleep, and Flammenwolf only stare with faith, devotion, and love as he watched Cynder rest so peacefully, like an angel. Flammenwolf gently stroked Cynder's face as he said, "I will remain here, don't worry, Cynder." .

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4 HOURS LATER

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Cynder awoke, Flammenwolf smiling beside her. Cynder looked with a feigned innocence and said, "Come here, big boy." . Flammenwolf, knowing her intent, leapt on top of her. Cynder said, "I'd like to do something right now..." . Flammenwolf said, "Anything." . Cynder said, "Make love." .

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As much as I originally planned to put in the original scene, I felt it was too mature for the young audiences that might scope the forum. So as a respectful gesture toward others' kids, I have decided to censor the scene where Flammenwolf loses his virginity with Cynder. It is available on request, and I will be more than happy to PM it to anyone wishing to see the beautiful, yet explicit, love scene.

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Cynder and Flammenwolf lay in the cot, stark as nature intended, and Cynder said, "Michael, that was incredible. Pretty amazing for someone with no practice." . Flammenwolf said, "Im gegensatz zu ihnen, mein lieber, sie hatte andere!" . Cynder laughed, and said as she squealed playfully, "Michael!" . The two started kissing each other on the lips, tongues wrapped around each other like a corkscrew, as Koloss said, "Am I interrupting something, agaporniden?" . The two awkwardly broke off and said in unison, "No..." . Koloss said, "In a serious manner, I've located Nachtdrachen." .

Flammenwolf said, "What is the plan?" Koloss scoffed and said, "As long as we've been friends, comrades, and allies, you still don't know me well." . Koloss shoved eighty Il-145 shells into a Frinesi shotgun, modified to go full auto with a long ammo clip in it's hollowed out pump. Koloss said, "Kill him." .

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End of General's Log Entry Three

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Cool story! I like the different format. Your layout of the story is interesting, and I like how it's almost like a journal.

Thats what I intended

You like the plot, charecters, romance, n stuff?

Yep!!

Cool beans.

Next chappy is going to be about the trio meeting a new member, Löwin. Armer clad chick with big weapons, happy triger finger, and bigger breasts.

Nice...

Hmmm, you know, if that was Prysom, he was in DEEEEEEEP cover, those kind of grammatical mistakes would piss him off to no end.