darkSpyro

Yup, i decided to turn it into a comic. this decision was made a while ago, but i finally decided to follow through with it. I learned that after countless failed attempts, that i if had people nagging at me (no offense) to get the next page out, I'd actually pour some effort into it, and would not slack so much.

Now, this all starts before the fanfic itself actually started. i want to put a bit more emphasis on some things.

Now please note, I'm not a masterful artist. So tips on that would help a great deal.

(PS: If i should post this somewhere else, let me know)

Alright, without further delay, here is the first page.

Thanks. ill look at them later. a little busy right now.

kewl!

thanks. Ill hopefully have the next page done in a few days. (school gets in the way quite a bit. >.>)

School! Ahhh, don't SWEAR!

I try not to. (as long as we're thinking of the same thing.)

That is very good.

Thank you! Glad you like it.



To real quickly describe it, In the first panel, They barely got off of the collapsing stone plataue/pillar thingy. In frame 2, they spot a way out. And in frame 3, the roof of the place is collapsing.

EDIT: Page 3 is one panel, so its done already. Tell me what you think, please.

The comic's really good so far!

thank you.

Indeed? ill try to fix that in later pages.

EDIT: Page 4! I dunno about this one. I'm not good at exteriors. Either way, this one picks up... a few minutes after page 3?



The reason Cynder is so banged up in panel 3, is because she had just flown up through the still reshaping planets crust. she was bound to get some burns and slices.