darkSpyro

Here's part 1:

It was the year 2013, and a lot of people were celebrating the 15 anniversary for all three Spyro series. Developers were creating new games and remaking older ones, fans were rushing for Gamestop for more spyro games, even the Spyro characters were celebrating... with a birthday party! The two s decided to make the cake for it. They needed time though. and were working on decorations. The decor was extraordinary! Everyone had a job for the party: the location for it, the food, characters helped for everything! The peaceful work was fine, until two specific people weren't getting along very nicely. "Hey little kid," teased Hew Hunter, "how did saving that useless world go? Hmm?"
"Good," New Hunter teased back , "how was you being played by to save the horrible dragon realms? Huh?" The two Hunters snotted angrily. "I'm better then you," yelled . "No I am,"screamed New Hunter.
"I am!"
"I am!"
"I am!"
"I am!"
"I am!"
"I am!"
"I am!"
"I am!"
noticed the terrible argument. "Uh-Oh," she feared, "the party is ruined. Either that or at least something terrible."

Kool, like it so far!

WHOA! This is great fic

Please, continue

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...to be honest I have no clue whats going on.. I mean you mention the characters celebrating the games yet you never mention were they real actors or whether they otherwise knew about hte games, you know? Kinda confusing. Also the plot seems very laid back and doesn't seem like there will be much to expect.

Just honest views..

yes, Cynder_fan, it is short of confusing. sadly, you can't edit a comment. But people who might have knew the games and actors. but for now, even for me, it's confusing. thanks for mentioning that cynder_fan. What does laid back mean? P.S. Thanks for being honest, too.

Unless you mean my comment, you can edit the post. And by laid back, I mean it's not going more than "Shall we make a cake" "Sure" *cake is made* if you get me. There's not real interaction and the story plot progresses to quickly. I've done it before in RPs to get more of the story across, but for a fanfiction it's not really a good idea. If you see my one, you'll see how I drawn out one section where as I could sum it up in one sentence, but it gives it length and description.

I've edited my first part. Also, for the laid back thing, I'll try to do the opposite of that. now here's Part 2:

"Prove your better," yelled at New Hunter. "Okay then, I will," New Hunter answered, "I challenge you into a 'short' contest: me and you!"
"Deal!" the two Hunters shook their hands in agreement, but stared at each other competitively. "Guys," warned the others, "I think we will have a humongous problem."
Everyone heard her warning, but they just simply ignored her. Instead, they were setting up for the contest instead of the party. A short half an hour later, the contest was ready. The events were set up, the competitors back stage ready to show who's better on a lot of things. Now the contest is about to begin!

P.S. Cynder_fan, please edit your comment.

Looking a lot better now

I wonder what the other people are thinking? Awesome? Great?

Better now I think. I wish I knew whether people other than the ones I know are reading mine XP

You should do one with the Skylanders Spyro, DoTD Spyro and the original Spyro.

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You should do one with the Skylanders Spyro, DoTD Spyro and the original Spyro.

Very confusing comment. What is the "one" you said in your comment?
Part three is coming soon!

Quote: awesomespyros10

Quote: DarkMalefor1

You should do one with the Skylanders Spyro, DoTD Spyro and the original Spyro.

Very confusing comment. What is the "one" you said in your comment?
Part three is coming soon!

By "one" I meant a fan fiction or whatever you call it. One in witch the Skylanders Spyro,DotD Spyro and the original Spyro are competing to see who is the best!

@DarkMalefor1

The three Spyros compete? The two hunters I see aren't friends, but in my eyes, the three Spyros are friends (and do not kill each other).
Since it's my birthday, I'm planning to try to start and finish part three in December.

I hope the next chapter come soon.

It is now! I'm using smiles from now on (in my fan fiction).
Here's Part three:

While part 2 and 1 were happening, , , and were hanging out at target. "We don't have much time," randomly commented, "we have to stop the dark-" "Dude, that's the past, this is now," interrupted. "Oh, good point." So they were browsing for a new video game, specifically Skylanders for the 3DS. It was going to be a Christmas Present. "Should we get home," asked politely. "No, not yet," replied, still searching for the electronics section, "I think they still need some time."

yo awesome tingiy

@sparky87 Sorry, i don't understand that quote. What does that mean?

It's good. Does it end there or are it gonna be a part four?

@Dragonlover00
There will certainly be a part four. It may be a while before my fan fiction is finished.

Then it means you don't have any ideas get and need to think what will happend next, right?
It is calm for me. Take the time you need.

Yeah, your correct Dragonlover00. I'm glad it is calm for you. Extremely close to Christmas, so the next part will unfortunately probably be started and finished before febuary 2012. There's a busy schedule this time of year. So until the next part is done, please give me at least some ideas (btw, I have an idea of what the ending will be like). See you soon!

i hate my habit of double posting. Anyways, finally, here is part 4 of my story:

Back at the almost-canceled party, was trying to calm things down. She was trying to get everyone back to work, but, because of the cake making contest (yes, both of the s were doing a cake making contest) and the crowds yelling the two on, she unfortunately failed. We all need details in our stories, so the only people who didn't cheer and helped try to calm things down were the 31 skylanders. Sadly, the were out numbered by over 9000- "What!? Over 9000!?" Um, Dragon ball Z charater, your not in this. "Oh, sorry." Anyways, sadly, they were out numbered by over 9000 other characters. "Darn it," complained loudly, "what do we do now?" "BLOW IT UP," screamingly answered .

I just love to add a little glimpse of humor in everything. Also, 2013 is next year! (So I did a lot of planning ahead to celebrate the anniversary of Spyro.)

Yay, part 4!

I write for your entertainment. Here's even more of the entertaining action! ladies and Geltlemen, Part 5:

The completely useless contest zoomed through 3 hours. "Now," Hugo, the announcer, said, "for the final ultimate event, we need the eternal fighting-" "JUST SHUT UP ALREADY," everyone yelled angrily. "Okay, okay, wants it, so I'll do the death battle." "What?" Bam! Blood was ready to be ripped out, barrels prepared to be thrown, claws in fighting position, it was over, or that's what and the Skylanders thought. Because out of nowhere, all three of the s appeared to save the day again. "Shoot," murmured .

This year, 2012, is the year of the dragon in Chinese Zodiac! Yeah!

Good.

great

Man, thanks for the positive comments! Right now, I am running out of ideas for my fiction. So, may you please help me?

That the Spyros stop the fight and all Spyros enemys (Like Malefor and Red) apper. That's a idea you can use.

Oh, thank you, friend! It's time for another part. here is Part 6:

"," said, "something is wrong here."
"I'd have to agree with you," noted. Each spyro was examining the place, completely ruined. All because of two freaking Hunters. "Guys, we need to fix this," suggested. was joyfully pleased that the "hunter contest" was over. The purple dragons decided to pick up the place, and have the Cheetahs learn their lesson. Every single barrel thrown, the stage for the contest, the wounds, all of the things that was either in or caused by the contest. Everything was back to normal. One life lesson and a few quotes later, a few unexpected and uninvited guests arrived. Boringly, they were the villains. "Of course!" Dude, you're not in this, either. "But I am here to make a fourth wall joke!" Sigh, anyways, , a.k.a., shorty, ambled to the front, to make the first line of the villains: "Well, well purple drago-errr-dragons, we meet again."

To be continued...
P.S. If you find any thing wrong with this, please be honest.

Continue, please.

this is the third weirdist thing ve ever seen (I think)

Finally, the final part:

Each and every gathered around the villains, and almost attacked! It suddenly went cloudy that time.
"Is this Kaos again," impolitely asked all of the skylanders symotaniously.
"Is it ," questioned all of the TLoS characters.
"Another villain," all of the classic characters asked. Nope. Just a thunderstorm. All of a sudden, BOOM! A lightning bolt hit the location of the party. In a flash, the electricity repaired each and every atom that was destroyed from the argument. All by... the triforce!? Anyways, after the 3-second rebuilt, the party begun! This party had the tastiest cake ever, other video game stars, and even this fan fiction! (I was kidding about the fan fiction being there.) It was awesome!
"When your series turns 20," said to , "there'll be another party better then this." She kissed in the cheek, and the other Spyros got some entertainment, too.
A few days after that, :shela: showed all of the Spyro universes this video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4AFgfxATsM4 on youtube.
"Congratz," everyone said to all the Spyros, "your invited to the next Super Smash Bothers game."

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Well, this is the end of my very first fan fiction. Do you like it? Do you like my references? I had a lot of fun making this! Btw, there is now a bigger chance of Spyro being in a Super Smash Bros. game. (Dragonlover's going to get REAL excited.)

Great.

Good.

Funny fic ever!!!

Thank you. I have to admit; it is funny.

I enjoyed it, very comical!

Make More!!

@Waaksian Challenge accepted! Oh, and even though the fan fic is over with, it'll still be open until 2014... if I'm here that time. So, time to write (and read) some Spyro fan fics!

if only all the spyro fans would get on and celebrate but they are at constant war i've been playing spyro since it first came out love them all Skylanders is awesome but it would be nice for Spyro to get his own game again