darkSpyro

Many maybe know that People have make own dragons and then make a story of it. Here is my story about my own dragons.

The start
Three familys of dragons got an egg, but one of the family got two eggs. They was very happy. Later, shadowsclaws and demonsnakes come to take and kill the eggs.
One of the family did scare the shadowclaws and demonsnakes away and the others family did scare them away too. Right in that second did the egg hatched and the baby dragons did come out of the eggs.

Good start!

@Purple n Spyro
Thank you. Here is the continue on the story.

Chapther 1
Now some years later the dragon named Leafy are out and walks. Leafy is really happy that moment. It's a nice day. He walks with a smile on hes face and thinks about why hes sister would not be on the walk. He see a grey dragon who just lay down on the mark and is not moving. He runs to the dragon and see it breath. Lucky that it is alive he thinks.
"Dragon, wake up" Leafy says. The dragon opens it eyes and slowly looks on Leafy and gets up.
"Who are you?" the dragon asks scarde.
"I am Leafy" Leafy says. "And who are you, then?"
"I am Froga" the grey dragon answers. In the second later it comes shadowclaws and a demonsnake. It was just two shadowclaws and one demonsnake.
"What the...!?" the demonsnake screams out. "Is not the grey dragon dead?"
"We should kill them both becuse it is two of the four chosen dragons" one shadowclaw says. What did they mean with two of the four chosen dragons Leafy thinks. But more don't he gets to about that becuse now the demonsnake and the shadowclaws atacks Laefy and Froga, but Leafy and Froga breaths they elements on them and the demonsnake and the shadowclaws gets defeat and run away.
"What did they mean with two of the four chosen dragons?" Froga asks.
I don't know" Leafy answers. "But we maybe we must find the two others and I think my sister can be one of them." Leafy and Froga goes home to Leafy.

AWESOME!

@daimondcynder21
Thank you. Now for everyone who want hear the continue, here it comes.

Chapter 2
When Leafy and Froga is in Leafys cave it's empty in the cave. It's quiet and it does not sounds enything. Froga and Leafy stands and watchs into the cave and couldn't see Leafys parents or Spikys sister, but they hears a big sighs from the cave. Leafy goes into the cave and screams after hes sister and parents.
"Paprika!?" Leafy screams. "Mom and dad!?"
"I am here!" He hears a voice answer back. Leafy walks in deeper in the cave and see Paprika.
"Were are mom and dad?" Leafy asks and looks on her with big eyes.
"They are here too" Paprika answers.
"But why did you be so deep in this cave?" Froga asks while she walks into the cave.
"I am often deep into caves" Paprika says. "Who are you?"
"I am Froga" Froga answers. "And you must be Paprika." In that momentm Leafys and Paprikas mom and dad comes. Leafy and Froga tells about what has happend.
"Then you need to find the last one" Leafys and Paprikas mom says. Leafy, Froga and Paprika walks to find the last of the chosens, but when they are on they way to the forest many shadowclaws and demonsnakes jumps on them.

Awesome!! Write more!

It makes it sound like a legend to me.

@Purple n Spyro
You making good storys too. Now the other chapter.

Chapter 3
This is the end Leafy thinks. Leafy just closes his eyes and couldn't breath out his element becuse the shadowclaws holds his mouth close. The shadowclaws holds Frogas and Paprikas mouth too. Leafy feels a tear runing down of hes face. Froga hits with her tail on one shadowclaw and it's just that one who holds her mouth. She breaths her element on the others shadowclaws and demonsnakes. She releses Leafy and Paprika. They defeats all shadowclaws and demonsnakes who are there.
"Now we need to find the last chosen" Paprika says.
"Yes, we need to it and that's fast" Spiky says. The dragons begins to fly and seacrhs for the last of the chosen.

Chapter 4
The dragons are tired and sleppy. They takes a rest and begins to eat the friutes they has with them.
"D-did you hear?" Froga asks. Leafy listens and heard some wings. He see a shadow on the mark.
"Yeah" Leafy says without to take of hes gaze of the shadow. "I hears something and see a shadow." In that moment a orange dragon comes.
"I am Morgan" the dragon says wihle he land. "I can be one of the four chosen dragons, have you seen the three others?"
"Yes" Leafy says. "We are three of the four chosen and now we must search for what we are chosen for." They begins to walk and searchs for what they are chosen for.

Sorry by double post, but here comes the second chapter, but I have bad news: I will stop making this story on the forum becuse none have been here for some few days now. Anyway, here comes the chapter.

Chapter 5
"What are we actully going?" Morgan asks. "I mean we are the four chosen, but what are we chosen for?"
"I don't know" Froga answers. None knows what they was chosen for. Leafy just turns around and looks around. He see that they are deep in the forest and he don't knows were they're. Froga just thinks and don't knows were they're eihter. None of them knows were they are or what they are chosen for. Everyone just sit down and sighs becuse they don't knows what they are chosen for or were they are. They are also lost.

you should continue, you make much more sense than gary.

Yeah, please contnue!
My trilogy i ended up closing, i was getting to the really good part, but no one was interested.
So what was the point of writing something that wouldn't get read?
But PLEASE CONTINUE!

Allrihgt I continue, then.

Chapter 6
Spiky sits on a rock and feels one drop tear come to hes cheek. He thougt that everything they had done and everything they walktrough was for nothing. He sighs and stands up.
"What are we gonna do now?" Froga asks. "We maybe are on the right way."
"Then, why do we siting here for? Come on!" Paprika says.
"Wait!" Leafy says. "Should we not tell Frogas and Morgans parents that we must go?"
"No, we did tell them that we would go out on a juorney" Froga and Morgan says at the same time.
"But how did you know it?" Leafy asks.
"I did tell them when they sayed that I was chosen" Morgan says. "They did just know it."
"I did say it will you search after your sister" Froga says. "I live in a cave in the side of yours."
They begins to walk, even if they are lost.

Suspense....
*Dun dun duns!*

@shorty
I will write like that you write. Now here comes the continue.

Chapter 7
They walks and hears something behind them. Paprika turns around and see some demonsnakes and shadowclaws.
"Hey guys" she says qiuet. "It is does things agin"
"Ok" Froga answer. "I don't want have a fight. We must run from them." They runs away from them and begiun to fly when they was far away from the shadowclaws and demonsnakes. Leafy feel hes little heart donk fast, but after ten seconds it had slow down. They land on a place there it's water and taste friut. It's so late that the stars shows in the sky.
"We must rest" Leafy yawns. "It's late and the day has been long today." Leafy hears that the others yawns.
"Yeah, but someone must gardiun so not that things does come agin and that one who can awake us if it comes" Morgan says scarde.
"I can gard this night" Paprika says. "I am not so very tired, but first we must eat food." In the same time did Frogas belly sounds: *knorck*.
"Yeah, that do I hear" Froga laugh.
Leafy takes some fruits from some tree and lay downs it when hes done. He takes some fruit and begiun to eat. He takes the first chomp of it. Not the best fruit I been eating Leafy thinks. He takes another chomp and watchs on the stars. Later, he goes and drinks from the water. Then he goes and sleep.

Getting better..

@daimondcynder21
Thank you. Now everyone, here comes the second one.

Chapter 8
Paprika stand and feels the air thuch here cheek. She looks on the others and look at an eaten fruit. It looks like it was destroy by an big rock. It is very peaceful here... Paprika thinks. She looks up to the moon and watchs on it. She lay down and listens after sounds of something while she watch on the moon, but does not here anything without the wind who slowly pass her ear. She listen if she hears somethings else, but the night is just calm and quiet. She feels her hungry and take a fruiet and chomp on it. Her takes the first chomp while she turn away from the moon and looks down on the ground. She hears someone coming. She lay down the fruiet slowly and turn around. She doesn't see someone, but hear some steep coming closer and closer.
"Guys, wake up!" Paprika says quiet. Morgan open hes eyes and stands up, but he is tired. The others stands up too.
"What is it?" Froga yawns while she asks.
"Does someone else hear feets geting closer?" Paprika says.
"Yes" Morgan says. Then many demonsnakes and shadowclaws comes and Paprika jumps on one of them and scratch on it and jump on the other one. She gets hit by one demonsnake and feels weak. She looks on the demonsnake who hit her. W-what a power she thinks while look at the demonsnake. The demonsnake goes to her and will hit her agin, but then Leafy comes and hit the demonsnake and they fight. Leafy does breath on one and on one other.
"They are to many and we are to weak to fight" Morgan says. "We must fly away and give up and battle them another time". Leafy turns to Morgan.
"You're right" Leafy says. They flies away from the war and land somewere else to rest, becuse it was in the night and they needs to rest.

nice one DL

@daimondcynder21
Thank you. Now everyone, here comes the other chapter.

Chapter 9
Leafy opens hes eyes and see the others sleeping. He sits down and wait until the others wake up. He hears the wind when it blows on a tree and some leaf falling. He look on the sky and see the sunrise. It was buterful and the sky was red and orange. That's nice he thinks. He hears Froga yawns and he gets afried first so hes heart jumps over some heartbeats. Leafy turns around slowly and see Froga get up.
"You scared me" Leafy says.
"Sorry, then" Froga says while rolled her eyes. Spiky see in her face that she has wrinkles under the eyes. Then the others walk up and yawns. Paprika see a cave who looks strange out and looks to be over one hundred years old. She walks to it and looks closer. It looks strange... she thinks. The other did not see her going to the cave.
"Were is Paprika?" Leafy asks. Morgan looks around and see Paprika who looks into the cave.
"Paprika!" Morgan says. "What are you doing?"
"I think I found a cave we should go into!" Paprika answer. The others go to her and goes into the cave. Leafy looks on a wall were it shows four eggs and two dragons with there tail who looks like it garudian them. Leafy thinks that the four eggs is them. Then they are in some kind of big room with much draws of dragons.

kewl!

@daimondcynder21
I don't know what that means, but all who wants to hear the continue, here it comes.

Chapter 10
The cave was beautiful and calm. Leafy takes one of hes paws on the wall. The wall is hard, as it should be. He see a wall with a draw of three dragons. They looks like they fights some shadowclaws and demonsnakes. Paprika looks around and listining. She hears footsteps and voices.
"We must hide" she whispers to the others. "Does you too hear footsteps and voices?"
"Yeah, but we can just go depper in the cave" Morgan answer. They goes qiuet depper in the cave. Leafy don't want to turn around and see who it's, but don't need to think about it long becuse he feels something takes hes tail and lags him back to the room.
"Help!" he screams. He feels some claws that come into hes skin. Froga and the two others follow Leafys voice and see him be scratch of one claw of one demonsnake.
"I thought this would be easy, but it seems that we need to fight" one shadowclaw says. The demonsnake that holds Leafy looks on Paprika and Paprika hit the demonsnake with her tail.
"What are we waiting for?" the demonsnakes ask and looks on Paprika. "Atack them!" Froga takes her mace and hit with it on one shadowclaw. Leafy take and blow hes element on the demonsnake who hold him.
"They to many" Morgan says. He cries a little tear, but take it away. It's not over yet he thinks. In the same second one dragon comes and defeat the shadowclaws and demonsnakes and they runs away. Leafy looks on the dragon who has silver scale. The dragon looks familiar. He looks on the wall and see that it's on of them.
"You're one of the dragons on the wall here" Leafy says. The silver dragon looks on him. She's buterful Spiky thinks.
"I am Anne" The dragon says calm with close eyes. "And you four is Leafy, Paprika, Morgan and Froga, the chosen dragons, right?"
"H-how could you know our name" Paprika strains.
"Don't worry" Anne answer calm and opens her eyes. "I want help you and I did know your names becuse it stands in a prophesy. Follow me!" Leafy and the others follows her. They know that they could trust her.

Kewl: Cool
nice chapter

@daimondcynder21
You are so polite. Thanks a lot, but I hope some more read. . Anyway, next chapter.

Chapter 11
Leafy looks on Anne with big eyes. She's so pretty he thinks. It feels like everything around him diseapper and is just he and Anne. Leafy looks closer and see hes reflect in her scale.
"Leafy!" He hears a voice and everything comes back.
"Um... What?" He says and looks cunfused around. Froga stands foward him and Leafy looks deep in her green eyes.
"What are you doing?" Froga asks.
"I saw my reflect in her silver scale" he answer. Froga doesn't care and continue to follow Anne. Wonder where we going Froga thinks. She looks around and see that they goes deeper in the cave. She looks and see a sceleton of a demonsnake. Leafy doesn't care about that, he goes like a dog in a couple after Anne. He knows that he can trust her. They stopps when they are in the end of the cave.
"Here it's" Anne says with her calm voice.
"It's a trap!" Morgan screams and turns around to run away, but Anne acts fast and stopp him.
"It'sn't" she says. "It's a secret cave here, in this wall" She takes one of her paws on a wall. She takes and press on a rock and the wall open. It's a stair that Anne goes down in. Leafy goes down carefully after Anne. He takes step for step down and looks behind. He see hes sister Paprika who looks on him. Paprika looks on a wall were it shows a demonsnake, but it looks different then others demonsnakes. It is bigger then a normal and has a fin on its back. It looks like it will kill something, but Paprika can't see what.
"Come on, let's continue" Morgan says behind Paprika. She continue to go down to the stair.

nice! C:

I been changes my chapters a little just so you readers know. I going to make more later.

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha that is the most horrific story line i've ever heard(or read)

You have your oppinon and I have my or you just say that to be mean.

Quote: Hunter9199

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha that is the most horrific story line i've ever heard(or read)

How could you say that? Insulting other people is like throwing a boomerang, Its gonna come back and kick you up the ass one day. D:{

Allright then, the chapter was late.

Chapter 12
When they finally got down the stairs, they are in a big cave where two others dragons is. The first one was one of the dragons on the wall painting. The other dragon comes slowly and Leafy see that it's one of them on the painting.
"I have found the four chosen dragons" Anne says and walks to the first dragon.
"Good, now we just need to train them so they can save the world from the demonsnakes and the shadowclaws" the first dragon say and looks in Annes eyes while speak. Leafy hears that he is pretty ancinet. Hes vocie is hoars.
"Shadowclaws and demonsnakes?" Paprika says while looks on Annes silverful scale.
"You don't know?" the first dragon says slowly and shoked. "They are creaturs by shadow and darkness."
"Those who atacked you" Anne says.
"My name is Morkos" the first dragon says.
"Mine's June" the second says. "I see that a demonsnake has take and meet you"
Leafy gasps and see June goes closer to him and looks on him like he will kill him. Leafy is so scared that he tries to look on Froga insted. June lifts on Leafys tail and watch on hes scratch.
Paprika and the others goes in depper and looks around. What a place Froga thinks. She looks on the elder ones and goes there. The others follow her. Morkos looks on them.
"Let's begin to train" he says serius.

Does someone reading?

good i love it

@cynder dark
Thanks. Now the next one.

Chapter 13
June takes with Leafy, Froga, Paprika and Morgan a bit depper in the cave there they will train.
"Allright, what is our first lession?" Paprika asks.
"As you know, it's eight kind of elements. A dragon can have one of them, but there still musterys about them we don't know" June says. "There are strong all." Leafy looks on what Anne and Morkos talks about. Anne stands with the old dragon and Leafy can't get and understand how she can be old.
"Are you ready for training?" He asks.
Leafy hears that words and turns around fast and hes heart beats jump over some beats.
"Yes" They answer.
Some hours later, they have traind and are all tired. Froga gasps after air. June goes to her and her gaze goes slowly upward so she watch in hes eyes.
"That was just the warmup, you need to have more endurance if you need to be in a big battle" June says. "Come forward, you all. The key you need to do in a battle is to teamwork, but sometime you may not even have your friends on your side." Froga gasping while geting up on her legs.
"This will be a teambattle. You'll need to battle each others as a team with your teammate, defeat the other team. Best of three" June says. "Leafy and Froga is a team and Paprika and Morgan is a other team." They goes to a big coner in the cave where they will fight. Leafy looks around and see Froga. He goes closer to her. She is maybe a bit norvius, so it's better to go close to her he thinks.
"Now, get ready to fight" Anne says. She and Morkos has go there to watch how good they fight to see.
"Now, let the battle begin!" Anne says.

Nice chapter

@daimondcynder21
Thanks. Now the next one.

Chapter 14
Leafy rushes forward to Paprika to hit her, but Paprika dudge easy and qiuckly. She flies behind Leafy to hit him. Leafy doesn't see her. He looks where Paprika did stand. That was very fast he thinks and has almost forget that he is in a fight. Paprika blows her pepper breath on him. He feels how it hurts in hes skin. The power from the pepper breath is so strong that he falls to the floor. He takes and stands up on hes legs. Froga flies over Paprika and stop wing flapping and plunge controlful to Paprika. She makes Paprika first lay on the floor and then she begin to scratch on her while holding her on the floor. Paprika take of Froga with her pepper breath and throw away her. Froga controlls so she not land on the floor with the head first. She flapps powerful with her wings so she can easy and calm land on her paws. Morgan charges forward to Leafy. Leafy dudge fast, but Morgan stops so he's not hurt hes head in the wall. Morgan breath fire on Leafy. Leafy can't dudge it and get on him, but Froga takes her air atack agin on Moragn and breaths her cristal breath on him. Leafy focus on to take out Paprika so much, that he forget that he is in a cave. He jumps on Paprika and breath he's sworld breath on her, but before he even get to open hes mouth, Paprika bites him. He feels how the jaws is in he's skin. It does really hurt and all comes back.
"Leafy, you are defeated and out" Morkos says. "Paprika, stop biting him, he's out." Paprika reales Leafy from her mouth and she continue to jump on Froga while Leafy goes to the elder dragons. Froga takes out Paprika and Morgan at the same time. Also, Leafy and Froga is victory.
"Well, your training is end, you are ready to go out and face the demonsnakes and shadowclaws master" Anne says. Leafy looks confiusd in Annes eyes. What does she mean? Leafy thinks.
"The chosen dragons just need to train one time and after that, they are ready to face their destiny" Anne says like she reads Leafys mind.
"But there is somethings you need to know before you go and face him" June says. Leafy and the others lays down and looks on the three older dragons to listen what they have to say.
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Well, here I decided to say what Leafys, Frogas, Paprikas and Morgans element was. The eight element is: Fire, Cristal, Papper, Sworld, Lucky, Unlucky, Fly and Mystery.

Nice one, you are starting to get very good with your grammar

^ Thanks. Now for all who want read the next, here it comes.

Chapter 15
Leafy listens and watch on Anne and wait suspense for what she has to say.
"Ok, I will tell about things you must know before you go out" Anne says. "For some years ago, the demonsnakes and shadowclaws did kill a family with a egg they didn't kill..." Leafy could image how it looked like. Much blod must been spilled that day he thinks and continue to listen.
"Instead, they took care about it" Anne continues. "The egg hatched and a lime-green dragon did come out. They named him to Lime and he was trained to help them take over the world. Lime doesn't know hes parents. He thinks that the shadowclaws and demonsnakes are. He only knows about darkness, he has been grown up with it. He doesn't know something else then to help them. Lime has grey horns, black spikes, grey and lime-green wings with spikes on, black belly, black thing on hes head, hes element is mystery, nothing on hes tail and brown eyes. And... we need to tell another thing. June can tell it."
"Ok" June says. "When we was youngers, like you, we was out and flied and didn't note what did wait us. We flied and right in that second, a hole was oppend and we saw many gems making the big hole. The moon was full and did light on the gems. They did shine so much that I needed to cover my eyes. Then, a voice said that a dragon needed to be destroyed to stop it. Anne did fly to be destroyed, but when she just next could feel she fly and feel the hole with her cheek, it explode and she went flying bakward. We saw how many demonsnakes and shadowclaws come out and we did ran away to this cave. We couldn't stop them to live." Leafy knows that they are done. Froga can image the lime green dragon in her head and can't realese it from her mind.

nice, you're writing is getting much better

^ Thanks agin.

Chapter 16
"You did also next stop them for even born, but faild and what about your parents?" Leafy says.
"They did die by the demonsnakes and the shadowclaws. After that, we wanted to find the chosen and don't let you make the same mistake as we did. They want to make all dragons to slaves and let them work and just eat if the work so much as fivehundred dragons thogheter and if not they kill it and eat it, but they save some dragons so they can eat them later." Anne says and looks on Froga. Froga gets cold inside when Anne looks on her. Froga doesn't want to see all dragons on the planet be slaves. She can image how it is like. They need to work to them and if not, a shadowclaw or demonsnake will kill them. She can next see how much blod it comes when they eat of the dragon.
"But why should they make all dragons to slaves? Have we done something so they don't like us or what?" Leafy asks. "I begin to be counfuse. Shines yesturday I have meet new friends and know that I'm chosen. I want know more before I leave"
"Demonsnakes and shadowclaws eats dragon and they want have controll over them" June says. Froga stands and breath very fast and her heart beats fast. She can hear footsteps and turns around, but don't see anything. She feels claws into her skin and screams. She feels how little blod drop and she feels a tear come down to her paw. She hears when the blod drop and lands on the floor. The others turns around and see her. They runs to her.
"Qiuet, little dragon!" a shadowclaw says to Froga while many shadowclaws and demonsnakes comes.

cool, keep up the good work!

Ok, next chapter.

Chapter 17
Paprika was fast and jumps on a demonsnake and defeat it fast. Morgan runs to Froga and save her. Froga breath deep and blow out her element on the shadowclaw. She later breath after air. Leafy defeat a shadowclaw and flies to another. It feels like he can't feel pain, it feels like he's unstoppable. He comes closer and closer the last demonsnake and defeat it and the enymes runs for life. Leafy turns and runs after them, but he feels a paw that takes on him. He follow the paw with hes gaze and see that it's Morkos.
"Let them go" Morkos says. "They don't deserve it, you have complete the training and are ready to go to the demonsnakes and shadowclaws cave and kill theres master. Theres master is a demonsnake with a fen and are bigger. We wish you good luck." Leafy understands and begin to walk with Paprika, Froga, Morgan, Anne, June and Morkos to the exit. When they are there everything close and there are no light in and shadowclaws and demonsnakes comes. A demonsnake holds in a cristall and goes and place it on the floor.
"It's a bomb-cristall!" Paprika gasps.
"How can you know it?" Froga asks.
"My mom did told it when Leafy was gone" Paprika says while looks on the cristall. "She did say that it didn't find something like that anymore, but it does. It's gonna explode in one or two minutes, so we must get out of here." Leafy defeat one and hears Anne talk to them.
"Leafy, Froga, Paprika and Morgan" She begins. Leafy and the other chosen goes near her to listen what she has to say.
"We older can't get out of here, but if I breath my fly breath on you and make you through the wall by make you invisable, you may be able to get out of here" Anne whispers to them. "Does with fly breath can do that. We older stays here and die now, but you gonna continue to breath. This is our last farwell we ever say."
"What!? No please Anne. If you die, I will die with you" Leafy says.
"You can't Leafy, you should save the world with your friends" Anne whispers. Leafy begins to cry.
"No, Anne!" Leafy cries.

AWESOME!! \'O'/

Chapter 18
Leafy sighs and hear hes tears lands on the ground.
"No, Anne..." He says, but Anne blow the element on Leafy, Froga, Paprika and Morgan. He see how they battle before he's out of the cave. He flies to the cave and tries to find where he can come in to Anne, June and Morkos. He feels someone grabs him and flies away with him. It's Froga. Leafy tries to break free from Frogas paws.
"What are you doing? Do you want them to die?" He says.
"No, Leafy. I wont" Froga replys and cries. "But we can't do anything to help them. We must go and furfill our destiny. We can't rescue them." Leafy breaks free from her paws and flies back to the cave. He is the half way there, but then Froga comes and stop him.
"Leafy, we can't do something else then fly away from here" Froga says qiuet. Leafy is with to follow with Froga. He flies to Paprika and Morgan with haning head and turns around. He see the explode and turns back forward and hangs with hes head.
"I know why you are sad" Morgan says while look forward. "But we need to keep moving on." Paprika looks where the cave was and gasps when she see that it has explode. She turns around slowly and hangs with her head. Anne, June and Morkos... we will miss you she thinks while she feels her tears. Morgan looks in the sky and see that it's dark.
"We will continue tomorrow. We must rest now" Morgan says and lands left of a cave. The others lands after him and they walk in the cave. All are so tierd that they does goes in lay down and falls asleep.

Dramatic...
Good emotion

^ Yeah, that was pretty thouching, but next chapter.

Chapter 19
Leafy has hard to sleep. He goes outside the cave and looks on the stars. He cries and can't stop. Hes heart has broken and it feels like it explode with the explode. It can't be hole agin. Froga in the cave open her eyes and see that Leafy is gone. She looks around and see him outside and cry. She walks slow and careful to him and sits left on him.
"Why didn't I save them?" Leafy cries with the tears in hes eyes.
"Leafy, it isn't your fault" Froga replays. "It was theres fault. It was them who offred there life for us. It's to late to go back now." She takes her paw on Leafys back and he begins to feel warm inside. He begins to listen and hears something coming there and it comes closer and he see that it's a shadowclaw with two dragons. One lime-green and one in chains and where orange.
"Froga" Leafy says. "We must wake the others." Froga listen to him and they goes into the cave. They wake Morgan and Paprika up. Paprika is of course angry on to be awaked in the night. She begins to scratch on Leafy and Leafy calms her down and she listen what they have to say. Morgan begins to bite on Froga and she holds on to scream. That does Leafy see. They calms Morgan down and he begins to listen what they have to say.
"We're under atack of a army of shadowclaws and demonsnakes with Lime and they have captured a dragon." Froga explanies.
"Well, well" A vocie behind them says. They turns around and see that it's Lime with the shadowclaw.
"Looks like we get five dragons for dinners tonight" Lime says.
"Lime, we know about your past. They killed your family" Morgan says. "You are filled with lies. You family are dead."
"YOU LIE! The shadowclaws and demonsnakes is my family" Lime replays. He wont listen Paprika thinks.
"Ok, we will defeat you and your army" Paprika says.
"That we can" Lime says. The shadowclaw begins to claw on him.
"Be careful, Lime. Is the four chosen. You remeber?" The shadowclaw says.
"I can take them" Lime says. "I'm much better and stronger than the four chosen." When Lime doesn't note it he's already defeated by Morgan when he breath fire on him. Lime feels the fire be inside hes skin. He and the shadowclaw runs away and forget the orange dragon. Morgan goes to the dragon.
"You're ok?" He asks. The dragon stands up and looks in Morgans eyes.
"Yes" the dragon answer. "I'm Jenny and you're the chosen dragons Leafy, Froga, Paprika and Morgan." It is morning Froga thinks while looks in the light sky. Paprika looks in the ground and see five fruiets and gives them to the others and save a fruiet to herself. They eats the fruiet.

nice chapter!

^ Thanks. I want to thanks shorty because she helped me how I should write. Anyway, next one.

Chapter 20
Leafy looks on Jenny and looks around. He notes that they are lost agin. No, not agin Leafy thinks. He looks on Jenny and she eats her fruiet and swallow. I may ask her if she know the way when she is done he thinks. He swallow and feels the fruiet slowly goes down to the belly and he waits until the others are done. After one minute, all are done and Leafy goes to Jenny and ask her.
"Jenny, do you know the way to the demonsnakes and shadowclaws cave?" He asks.
"They are somewhere behind that cave where you did sleep" Jenny says and points on the cave. "I would like to follow you, but my family maybe are worride about me, so I can only wish you good luck." Jenny begins to fly and looks after her and wave one of her paws. The other wave back. Jenny turns around and flies home. Leafy takes and begin to fly and the others follow him. After they have fly over the cave, they lands behind it. Froga begins to walk and hear whispers. She listen carfully and hears someone whispers: There they are. Fast kill them! In that second, there are many shadowclaws and demonsnakes that jumps forward and begins to fight. Paprika takes and bite a shadowclaw in the neck and see blod sprouts out of it and she realese it and begins to scraths on it. Paprika feels the blod in her mouth and see the blod in her paws. She can smeel it and she stops think about it and continue to fights. Leafy snaps with hes tail and he notes that the shadowclaws and demonsnakes runs away. Morgan thinks it pretty strange that the shadow claws and demonsnakes did just leave. He stops to care about it and looks in the sky. Leafy and the others continues to walk to seek after the demonsnakes and shadowclaws cave.

Anybody reading?

Nice story. I'll admi, i haven't finished reading what you've done so far, but what I have read is pretty awesome! *continues reading* Oh, and if i were you, don't stop writing! It may not be that people aren't reading, it may be they haven't had a chance to. Bad internet, holidays (vacations) and lots of other things could stop people from reading and commenting. It's not always coz they've gotten bored.