☆Prolouge☆
“Prepare for battle!” Tremorus's voice called at the army of Warfangs freedom fighters. His voice made me quiver. “And if we die, we die with honour.” His voice yelled. I could swear I could feel the air been ripped out of me as our leaders words ran laps through my head. “Are you ready for this Aura?” Phinex stared at me with firey red eyes. I chocked back the fear, and hid my scared expression under the helmet armour. “Yes,” I said seriously. “I'm here for my family, for Warfang. I'm here to make them pay for what they did to me.” Phinex nodded. “Your family was fill of much honour, and they were the most honoured family in Warfang. If it wasn't for your parents, parents, and so on. The freedom fighters of Warfang wouldn't exist.”
“Are, they are.” I corrected him. I stared at the shadows getting closer to us, Tremorus stood proudly, ready to sound the call. “ATTACK!” His voice boomed and a riot of yelling started as we charged our way at the shadows.
I locked claws with a shadow, the impact knocking off my bracers. A swipe with my wing knocked the shadow onto the ground, the shadow ripping my helmet off and three deep claw marks on the side of my face. They didn't take long to bleed and the chilling air made the cuts sting. I fought through the pain only to see the shadow smiling. I watched stunned to see the shadow cackle horribly. I caught a glance of a strip of black, then I felt jagged pain as I could feel a shadow grasp his gaws around my exposed neck. His sharp teeth piercing into my neck.
Now before I go any further, you're probably a bit lost and confused. To get you on track, I'm going to go back almost two years to when my life was turned upside down...
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#1 Posted: 05:19:06 12/10/2011 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 10:11:22 12/10/2011 | Topic Creator
◇Chapter one◇
I sat on the ledge and watched my family and the rest of the freedom fighters of Warfang take to the air. Tears welted up in my eyes. Ever since I was little I have dreamed of joining them. And in a year and a half, that dream would come true when I finally turn eighteen and beome a freedom fighter. I don't know how many times over my life I've seen them come and go. I always loved it when they came back, they'd always bring me something, and my brother would sometimes bring back gemstones from caves they camped in. I remember when I was six, I attempted to follow them, but my short wings gave out and my friends managed to come to my aid. My mother looked back at me with those mother-like eyes, you know, the eyes that read your thoughts. She could see tears beginning to roll down my face. She knew what I was thinking. “Just another year and a half.” She called out. “See ya Aura!” My brother had never really called me by my real name. But he just really wanted to prove I was a wuss. So like all good sisters, I proved him wrong. “Goodbye!” I heard some dragons call to their families. They all looked proud of their loved ones. Which made the tears stop as I stood up and proudly watched my family fly off into the night. |
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#3 Posted: 11:46:34 12/10/2011
good story
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#4 Posted: 18:26:57 12/10/2011
Yeah, I like this.
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#5 Posted: 21:07:52 12/10/2011 | Topic Creator
thanks, i was thinking of drawing cutscenes to go along with it. should i ?
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#6 Posted: 07:24:16 13/10/2011 | Topic Creator
◇Chapter two◇
It wasn't very long until they had vanished into the dark. I must've stood there for hours thinking about the sites they'd see and the battles they'd fight in. By the time I Ieft, it was coming dawn and Warfang started to teem with life. I flew to the east side of the city where I'd be staying with Boomer, a friend of my parents, I'm glad I'll have company from my friend Vexcity, his neise. She knows what her uncle's like and knows he'd bore me to the point of no return if I stayed there on my own. I arrived there just after sunrise, Vexcity was outside, making little orbs of light. “Aura! I thought you'd bailed out and gone to stay in Avalar this time?” “I changed my mind at the last minute, and I thought you might need the company.” “Well by tonight, if you were in Avalar, I'd probably be with you.” Vexcity chuckled. “Come in, we've got freash meat caught earlier this morning. --- The inside of the clay house was badly cracked, chipping away with time. I studied the house carefully and paused at the window. “Look at the wall!” I said, swallowing my last bite. “Tis' been there for some time,” Boomer said, dropping another deer thigh onto the table. “Them shadows did it when they invaided two months ago. Them devils!” He slammed another leg on the table. “There must've been tonns of them to cause that much damage.” Boomer laughed, or well I think he was laughing. “Nup, there was five of em' with tonns they'd bring the city down in a heart beat.” I looked at the gaping hole in the wall. “They sound so fascinating.” I said. Boomer chocke on his mouthful of meat. “There an't nothing interesting bout some'n that wants ya for brekie.” “Well, I didn't really mean that, I'd just like to know more about them. I mean, I will be fighting them one day.” “Ye' really want to know more about em'?” I nodded my head. “Do you know anything about them?” “Nup, but there's an elder who lives close to twilight falls, he knows all there is to know about shadows.” “Thank you.” I said and began eating again. “Well?” Boomer said looking at me and Vexcity sideways. “What?” Vexcity mumbled with her mouth full. “Well are you two going or not?” “Well yeah b-” Vexcity was cut off. “Well then, go, vamoose, otherwise you'll never get round to it.” Me and Vexcity finished our last mouthfuls, ran out of the house and took off, bursting with laughter. |
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#7 Posted: 22:14:21 14/10/2011 | Topic Creator
anyone reading?
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#8 Posted: 23:26:40 14/10/2011
I'm reading. Nice story!
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#9 Posted: 23:42:37 14/10/2011 | Topic Creator
thanks
i was gonna stop it cause no one was reading it. im sketching cutscenes to go with it too |
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#10 Posted: 23:59:16 14/10/2011
that awsome
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#11 Posted: 00:54:41 15/10/2011 | Topic Creator
thanks, now another
◇Chapter three◇ The journey felt shorter than usal, I was glad we landed when we did, as we watched Warfang patrolies fly over. “Upstucks.” Vexcity mumbled quitely as we watched them fly over. After the recent attack by the shadows, Warfang declared a state of emergency; no one was to leave Warfang unless they were a freedom fighter, or if you were Spyro, who this time went along to fight with Cynder, who'd gone almost everytime. “We need to get a move on, if they're patrolling the sky, they'll most likely have patrolies on the ground by now too.” The twilight falls forest was beginning to recover from the bush fires that engulfed it a couple of years ago. There were many caves from where we were standing, and we had no time to waste. “There! Over there!” Vexcity was facing a cave mouth lined with candles and littered with bones. “How can you be so sure?” I questioned, staring at the cave. “Well, only elders have the entrance of their homes lined with candles, and its the only area with no patrolies around it. Its our best chance.” --- The waterfall ran over the cave entrance and smashed against the rocks viloently. Behind the falling water and wet rocks, carved out of the stone bank was a poorly carved flight of steps. “Its not red carpet quality, but at least we won't be seen or heard.” Our claws clicked as they tapped each watered step. Climbing higher and higher. Looking through the waterfall was like looking at a moving painting. The different color textures, shapes, with that glassy finishing coat by the water. We clambered up the last lot of stairs and arrived at the cave entrace. It was carpeted with bones, and reeked of rotting meat. “Ugh, lets just find this elder and learn about the shadows before I loose all senses of smell.” Vexcity wasn't wrong. The smell was over powering, it lessend the further we went in the cave, but it seemed to stick to our noses like glue. There was no sign of the elder in the cave, and by the smell of the rotting meat, he hadn't been here for a while. “Lets get out of here Aura, we can come back some other time.” I wasn't really listening to what Vexcity was saying, I was looking at his pile of books. “Vexcity, the books,” I ran over and blew the dust of the leather covers. “One of these books will have to have something about shadows.” Vexcity opened a book next to me, flick through the pages with her wing tip. “What are you doing in my home!” A voice boomed at the cave entrace. My heart jumped out of my mouth as I spun around... |
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#12 Posted: 03:57:22 15/10/2011
Good job. Keep up the good work.
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#13 Posted: 05:08:01 15/10/2011 | Topic Creator
thanks, i've posted the first cutscene in my art, and a sketch of a shadow, the shadow still needs to be improved a bit more though
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#14 Posted: 08:38:55 16/10/2011 | Topic Creator
◇Chapter four◇
I don't know weather it was the fright that left me and Vexcity gaping, or the fact that the elder wasn't a he.... But a she. “Well,” She moved into the cave more, crinkling her nose up at the smell of the meat. “Are you going to answer my question.. Or do I have to bring it out of you.” “No!” Vexcity blurted out then stared at me. “Tell her.” Vexcity whispered at me, keeping close watch on the so-called elder. “Why me?” I argued. “You're the one with the big mouth Vexcity.” “You're the better public speaker.” Vexcity responded. Vexcity took her gaze off the elder who was growing impaitent. “Well y-” I was cut of but the screeching sound of claws down the rock. “So, now that I have your attention, why are you here?” Vexcity looked at me nervously. “We heard you know all there is to know about shadows,” The elder looked at us. “Yes, why?” “Well we want to know more about them.” I responded. “And why should I tell you?” She said rudly. “Because, we'll be fighting them in a year and a half, and we want to be ready.” The elder looked down at her paws and sighed. “Alright, I will tell you all there is to know.” |
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#15 Posted: 10:19:48 16/10/2011
when you finish your art.good
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#16 Posted: 10:22:04 16/10/2011 | Topic Creator
Thanks, i posted some more art, but t.hey're animated
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#17 Posted: 05:35:40 17/10/2011
how long to see cutscene?
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#18 Posted: 05:52:19 17/10/2011 | Topic Creator
hopefully sometime tomorrow
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#19 Posted: 17:31:25 17/10/2011
Your a really good writer! Keep it up!
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#20 Posted: 20:39:25 17/10/2011 | Topic Creator
thanks, more soon
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#21 Posted: 11:45:46 18/10/2011 | Topic Creator
◇Chapter Five◇
The elder walked over towards us. We moved out of her way as she chanted something in dragonic. Something merged out of the wall, and fell itself onto a book stand. "This is the book, now, what do you wish to know?" Vexcity looked at me and spoke. "I've heard rumors that theres more than one spiceis of shadows?" "That is correct." The book flicked to a blank page, words and pictures merged out of nowhere. "The first kind is the thin as death Skeleous. Their small light body allows them to move with ease, getting through tight gaps, giving them the advantage of fast movement. But their long claws can make it hard for them to move without slight errors." I remembered that, I knew it'd come in handy.... And it did. "The next kind is the Skeleton wing shadow. It has the wing skeleton, but no membrane, so It gives them a deformed look. Any unlike the Skeleous, its not thin, its mostly muscle, which makes it stronger, but it also slows it down a lot more. And the third kind..." She paused for moment. "And the third kind?" I repeated. "Well, I gave it to the Warfang museum, you'll have to find it and read it yourself." "Great, just great." Vexcity sighed with fustration. "Come on Vexcity, we need to know all we can. We'll go find it thenk you-" I didn't know her name. "Nexla." She said. I nodded and me and Vexcity left the cave, flew off through the waterfall and into the sky... I guess you could say we forgot about the Warfang patrolies. "What do you two think you're doing!" We paused in mid-air as Warfang patrolies formed a circle around us..... |
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#22 Posted: 19:48:00 19/10/2011
Cool! Nice stuff!
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#23 Posted: 21:50:09 19/10/2011 | Topic Creator
thanx!
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#24 Posted: 09:38:20 20/10/2011
really awsome
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#25 Posted: 21:45:09 20/10/2011
MAN this story is AWESOME!!!!!
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#26 Posted: 00:52:41 21/10/2011 | Topic Creator
thanks!
◇Chapter six◇ Vexcity froze like a still life painting, I could swear she went from a rusty red color to white in a matter of seconds. "You know the rules!" One of them flew closer. "So can you explain why you're out here?" Vexcity tuned back in and replied, although it didn't come out clearly. "Elder fall, water explain books from shadow.....U-oh." She suddenly noticed what she jumbled out as the circle of patrolies bursted with laughter. "You two clowns are coming with us." One struggled out. I could see Vexcity blush, weather it was with embarrisment or anger, I don't know. But I wasn't to sure if I wanted to ask either. ~~~ We followed two of the patrolies back into Warfang, and into a place I never thought I'd go..... Warfang's dungeons. "Ere we are," One of them opened a cell door. "You'll be ere' for the night," They pushed us into the cellar using their wings and shut the cell door. "An just so you don' try to escape, we've got a charmed chain in there for ya. Good day 'n' night!" They both walked away chuckling and flew back out of Warfang. ~~~ Vexcity sat by the wall, knocking her head against the hard clay. "Vexcity, you're not helping anyone." I said, chipping at the clay ground with one of my claws. We would've got out, but the charmed chain held us at the back of the bone stricken cellar. Who'd of thought that the Warfang dugeon guardians would allow them to use the same tecquine Malefor used to tether Spyro and Cynder together. We were going into our fifth our of been stuck in there, I knew from watching the sun dial on the wall. Vexcity had only just stopped knocking her head against the wall and watched the charmed chain wrapped around her neck. "Have - to - ESCAPE." She mumbled out. "There isn't a way." I sighed looking round the room. "Not if I have a say in it!" Vexcity locked her gaws on the chain, putting a paw on it to apply extra pressure while stretching it. "Today's you twos lucky day." A dungeon guard walked over and stared sideways as Vexcity took her paw off the chain, still having a firm grip around the chain between her teeth. "Right," He said staring at Vexcity. "Someones payed for your release." He explained opening the cell door. Who'd pay for our realese? Certainly not Boomer... I thought to myself as I could hear someone walking closer to our cell. He finally stopped outside our cell and me and Vexcity smiled... |
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#27 Posted: 12:32:55 22/10/2011
This is REALLY good, keep it up.
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#28 Posted: 21:09:40 22/10/2011 | Topic Creator
thanks!
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#29 Posted: 07:27:23 25/10/2011 | Topic Creator
more later...
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#30 Posted: 08:57:06 28/10/2011
well,your story really good
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#31 Posted: 21:41:23 28/10/2011 | Topic Creator
thanks gary
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#32 Posted: 08:55:54 31/10/2011 | Topic Creator
soz, not in the mood at the moment
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#33 Posted: 22:30:54 01/11/2011
cool story. you should draw some cutsceans. i just know i spelled that wrong.
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"Man! will you ever run out of muffins?" "No. Because I work at ze muffin factory." |
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#34 Posted: 02:17:59 02/11/2011 | Topic Creator
..... I am, they're in my art topic BTW
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#35 Posted: 03:24:01 03/11/2011 | Topic Creator
◇Chapter seven◇
"Phinex!" We both said in sync. "H-how did you know?" I said standing up. Phinex walked in with the dungeon guard. " Well, it wasn't hard, I saw you leave when I was helping rebuild the wall. Basically, I knew you'd get yourself in this mess. "Right..." Vexcity murmured; Chain still in her mouth, smiling at the guard shaking his head. "Rightey 'en, yous better be off, otherwise you'll be 'ack in 'ere no time at all." ~~~ The sun set over Warfang, and the city began to quiet down again. "So why did you guys leave Warfang anyways?" "We wanted to know more about the Shadows," I replied. "But we didn't quite find out all there's to know..." "Why not?" "She, the Elder, gave the last piece to the Warfang Museum. That's where we need to go next." "Well too late to try now you troublesome twosome." "Why?" "Uh, they'll be closed now Vexcity." "You think that'll stop us." "Well-" "We've got our ways Phinex..." I said. "Where are you going with this Aura?" Phinex said as a smile crossed me and Vexcity's face... |
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#36 Posted: 01:14:44 04/11/2011
that good
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#37 Posted: 07:22:52 04/11/2011 | Topic Creator
Thanx
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#38 Posted: 00:55:59 06/11/2011 | Topic Creator
◇Chapter eight◇
"Are you CRAZY! Its bad enough you got yourself in the dungeons earlier on today, now you want back in there?" "No, and besides, the last bit of information is in there and I want to see it!" "So you two can't wait until morning?" Me and Vexcity looked at eachother. We wanted to know why it was so important for that one Shadow species information to be in the Warfang museum. And we couldn't wait. "Flame, the patrolie is about to go on a fifteen minute break. Thats all the time we need. We need you to stand watch, distract him if he comes back early." Vexcity made it sound so easy, but really, it'd be as tough as eating a fish and not managing to choke on any bones. "Well I don't know- are you sure you can pull it off?" "No, but its worth a shot." I winked at Phinex and Vexcity smiled. "Alright, I'll help. But if it goes wrong, I'm not part of it." ~~~ We waited quietly around the back of the museum, once the patrolie would leave, we'd head in. We waited for about ten minutes before he flew off back to the dungeons, blowing out the torches with the air pressure of his wings as he flew past. "Ok, you have about fifteen minutes until he comes back from his break. It should give you enough time to find it and have a descent look at it." I nodded and took off into the air after Vexcity, who was already on the roof waiting. When I alighted on the roof, she was scanning the tiles for something. "Now by the way these tiles have been layed, there should be a weak spot right- about.....Here." She pressed her foot down onto the bricks and pushed them out through the ceiling, obliterating as they hit the floor below. Vexcity placed a few more bricks to the side before she jumped through and glided down to the museum floor, hitting the ground as light as a feather. ~~~ The museum was dark, but i knew my way around. Shelves and stands stacked with fossils, gems, and bones of extinct creatures sat upon them. The Warfang museum also held some of the greatest books written by dragons and others. Such as the Chroniclers book someone found on a island. Another was the book of the dragon language, a book of translations for the dragonic speakers. "It has to be in this part of the museum. Where else would they put it?" Vexcity said, rummaging through papers on a shelf. "There! There it is!" I pointed at a crinkled, dust covered bit of paper. Vexcity had no time to see what I was pointing at, as I was already charging toward it.... Well until we heard more footsteps entering the room. "Aurilla. We need to speak to you." I stopped dead in my tracks. No one had called me by my full name in years. And I reconized the voice. It was Tremorous, but why was he here? He must've come back from the fight. They might not have needed him. I knew how he would've known me to be in here..... Phinex.... I spun around, anger filled me for Phinex telling them we were in here..... That was of course, before I saw the expression on his face. His eyes were watered, and he looked at me as if to say. "I'm sorry." But not for telling him I was in here. No, this was something else. Tremorous had an alike expression too. This made me gulp and shiver. "Whats going on?" I said looking at all the dragons around me, sharing similar expressions. Tremorous sighed. "Its about your family.....Something happened.....Something, terrible." |
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#39 Posted: 00:10:57 08/11/2011
your story really great
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#40 Posted: 05:00:20 08/11/2011 | Topic Creator
thanks gary
i'll have more up later again, not really in the mood |
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#41 Posted: 07:06:02 08/11/2011
Cool this is awesome.
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#42 Posted: 07:36:14 08/11/2011 | Topic Creator
thanks
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#43 Posted: 06:35:11 16/11/2011 | Topic Creator
◇Chapter nine◇
They're pulling a prank I told myself. They HAVE to be I looked back at the piece of crinkled paper; wondering if I should listen to Tremorous. I wasn't going to, but then I took one more look at all the faces; Phinex whispered something to Vexcity, soon sharing the same look as everybody else. Then, It dawned on me, I recognized their expression, It was the 'I'm sorry for your loss' look. Then I remembered what Tremorous had said;" Something happened to your family....Something terrible." I attempted to make sense of it, eventually answering. "What are you talking about?" I asked. "It was late," Tremorous began. "No one saw it coming, - no one," "What do you mean, get to it." I answered impatiently. " The Shadows attacked our camp late last night," "But you only left a couple of nights ago!" I exclaimed. " I know, let me continue. There were so many, all of the Shadowous species were there. They came in so fast, we merely escaped....If it wasn't for your family." He paused. "-For my family?"I echoed. " Your family is dead; they didn't make it out alive." " You-" I paused ; I thought it was a joke, but Freedom Fighters don't joke about leaders dying to scare people. "-No, there must be a mistake..... They can't be-" Vexcity stopped me. "-I'm sorry Aura." My eyes welted with tears; I gasped for air as my head became dizzy. I could no longer handle the fact that everybody was looking at me. " Stop staring at me!" I yelled at the top of my voice; speeding through the air for the nearest exit. ~~~ The wind was blood chilling cold; but I didn't care. I was flying as fast as I could out of Warfang. I didn't care if the patrolies came after me, I wouldn't let them stop me. I looked behind and saw nothing but the fading walls of Warfang. And I was going to keep going until I collapsed. I sped over Avalar, seeing a small fire begin to burn out and reignite from nothing. "You're family is dead." The words ran laps through my head, jumping over the hurdles I planted in the way to get the thought out of my mind. I can't stop; I have to keep them ALIVE. I said to myself. Looking forward was hard; my vision blurred from the tears spouting from my eyes. I never saw the tree coming until a searing pain ran through me as I knocked every bit of air out of me on a branch. I fell like a rock to the ground below; my chest in pain, me gaping for air. But I didn't stop. I couldn't. I ran through the forest, tripping over rocks, cutting myself on branches and thorn bushes I could not see. The rain fell through the valley; straight into my face; causing me to put my head to the side. I broke through the last shrub and came out into an opening; but before I could bring myself to a halt; I found myself falling down a cliff-face, with ground below. I flapped my wings as hard as I could; but they were numb from the freezing rain. I closed my eyes as the ground neared; I hit the ground hearing numerous pops and cracks before I felt light as everything turned dark..... |
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#44 Posted: 08:05:35 16/11/2011
Nice! I love this story so far!
And the pictures to go with it will be awesome-sauce! :3 Sorry I found it late (like your art thread) I didn't know you were writing a story! |
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#45 Posted: 08:48:07 16/11/2011 | Topic Creator
Aww thanks bolt!
yeah, sorry I didn't tell you earlier I've got some pics up of the cutscenes, but if you didn't see them, here they are Yeah, they're pretty hoary, but I was sorta getting used to this type of drawing (cutscene's are in random orders) Cutscene No.1-Taking away Cutscene No.2-In the Elder's cave Cutscene No.3- Stuck in the Dugeons |
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#46 Posted: 08:55:47 16/11/2011
I think the drawings are really good! :3
Great job on both parts! |
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#47 Posted: 08:57:59 16/11/2011 | Topic Creator
Thanks
Yeah, I'm improving my skills day by day X3 |
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#48 Posted: 08:59:38 16/11/2011
Yup, lots of people are. :3
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#49 Posted: 09:05:38 16/11/2011 | Topic Creator
gotta try or ya wont know :U
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#50 Posted: 09:16:55 16/11/2011
lol, yup. If you keep on going at what you're doing, 9 in 10 you will get much better.
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