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#1 Posted: 17:08:48 28/08/2011 | Topic Creator
I can remember it so well, the time where my life was but a faint dream. am I still in that dream...?

~The small forgotten town~
In the small room of the small house at the end of Lily Street awoke a small fragile girl, her long messy brown hair falling into her faces as she slowly sat up. She stretched, brushing her bangs that needed to be cut out of her slender framed face. This girl had large blue eyes and a small pointed nose, with a smile that never seemed to fade. This girl looked around her small bedroom, filled with boxes unpacked and fragrant candles, and slowly and carefully, she slid her legs over, placing her feet gingerly and the hard wood floor. And with another slow moment she stood walking to her out her room door, which was plastered with stickers and photographs of animals. Opening the door slowly she timidly continues down the hall, and down the wooden stairs, holding onto the rail for dear life.
Once down stairs she walks through another door way, "Teira, you're up early." Said the woman setting breakfast on the table, three plates and all. This woman had Dark brown hair, which was almost black, and eyes to match. "Aunt Hanna, I didn't think any one would be up." The girl replied, blowing her bangs out of her faces as she proceeds barefoot to the large glass doors on the other side of the quaint little dinning room.
"You start school today, don't you?" Her aunt asked, eying her as she slid the door open to let in the cold winter air. "Yes, Ma'am..." Teira replied, stepping out side, ignoring the fact she was still in her nightgown. "This town hasn't changed at all... It's all the same as when i was little." She added, and smiled. Her aunt sighed, "And neither have you, so get back inside and eat your breakfast before you catch cold." She said, motioning to the table. So, Teira turned back inside, closing the door behind her.
After quickly eating her break fast she proceeded back up stairs to quickly change into her uniform for school, which looked like a old timey dress of sorts with it's frilled long sleeves and puffed out skirt. Teira slipped on her shoes, grabbing her crammed bag, and proceeding down stairs again to hurry outside, "Take care now, I don't want to get a call saying you fainted on you're first day of school!" Her aunt called after her as she opened the front door, running down the nearly vacant street. She slowed to barely a walk after going a block out of sight from her house, heading west towards her middle school. It'd still be about another fours blocks before she was there, not to mention she'd have to cross the busiest street in town. And at that moment, she noticed the person walking next to her. This person had tomboyish black hair that was cut she short it looked just like a boy's, and Teira would have though it was a boy if this person wasn't wearing the same uniform she was. The person looked up at Teria, so short and thin she looked just like an elementary school student, with eyes that were like bright green suns. "Hello there. I'm new in town, would you mind telling my where Milton Middle School is?" She this voice that could rival a mega phone without trying, the girl using a pointed grin that made her look like the Cheshire Cat. "Well, are you going to answer me or not? If we don't hurry we wont be able to say we were the first one's there!"
Teira stared for a minute, replying quietly, "It's down this way, I'm on my way now." And to this the girl whistled, "Wow, you talk way too quietly, i almost couldn't hear you over my own thoughts!" "Excuse me?" "I'm Mikia Mionta, a seventh grader."

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I hope you all enjoy my story, i decided to start writing again. smilie
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
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#2 Posted: 04:40:39 31/08/2011
Nice job Nighty! smilie School's back, so I'll by atypin' too. smilie
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#3 Posted: 02:53:47 02/09/2011 | Topic Creator
why thank you, i plan to put more up by the weekend. smilie
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
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#4 Posted: 06:07:47 04/09/2011
...Reeeaaaally? smilie
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#5 Posted: 13:45:22 04/09/2011 | Topic Creator
I plan to at least... I gotta put the pictures in my head into words!
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
Goldenfire Gold Sparx Gems: 2416
#6 Posted: 17:00:36 13/09/2011
NOW do you see why it takes me so long to type my stories, sometimes? smilie
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#7 Posted: 21:09:00 16/09/2011
Looks good....
Im failing at writing my stories.....
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I just realised that I might not know what the hell is going on
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#8 Posted: 22:42:46 16/09/2011 | Topic Creator
... I might just make a comic. smilie
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
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#9 Posted: 06:10:10 18/09/2011
Please doo... xD
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#10 Posted: 01:35:47 19/09/2011 | Topic Creator
in that case the first page will be up by after school tomorrow... smilie
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
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#11 Posted: 06:42:23 19/09/2011
Goodie! smilie
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#12 Posted: 01:00:18 20/09/2011 | Topic Creator
or later... as i have no pencils... hmm... I'd make it on gimp, but that's a pain in the butt for me... hmm... ok, maybe tomorrow... smilie
though i'm sick and my sister is nice enough to bring me my math homework... *glares at Shorty*
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
Goldenfire Gold Sparx Gems: 2416
#13 Posted: 16:25:37 21/09/2011
RAWWWWWRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!
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#14 Posted: 22:31:26 26/09/2011
I'm still waaaaiiiitiiiiiiiing...
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#15 Posted: 11:27:05 27/09/2011 | Topic Creator
... *depressed* I can't get Mikia to look right.... i keep screwing up her eyes.... urg, forget this! I'm just drawing it and scanning it. screw computer graphics!
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
Goldenfire Gold Sparx Gems: 2416
#16 Posted: 17:05:26 27/09/2011
THANK YOU!!! Jeez! I don't kno why yuo use CG for everything! *just doesn't understand why you WOULD*
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#17 Posted: 21:38:39 27/09/2011 | Topic Creator
becuase it looks cool, i'll be done by later tonight, i just gotta go in and make sure i got proportions right.
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
Goldenfire Gold Sparx Gems: 2416
#18 Posted: 21:40:51 27/09/2011
Proportions are a b-tch. smilie
If you wanna PM it to me, I can tell you what you did right and or wrong...
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#19 Posted: 21:53:57 27/09/2011 | Topic Creator
ooc: nah, I'm good, i can do it my self.
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#20 Posted: 02:07:18 28/09/2011 | Topic Creator
... I'm pissed off right now, i finished the comic, went to get a drink, come back, and my dogs shred it. smilie URG!
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
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#21 Posted: 03:54:15 28/09/2011
GRRRRRRR bad dog!
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I just realised that I might not know what the hell is going on
Goldenfire Gold Sparx Gems: 2416
#22 Posted: 04:05:38 28/09/2011
ARRRRRRRRGGHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! And this is why you put it on TOP of the desk...
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#23 Posted: 11:31:52 28/09/2011 | Topic Creator
it was infront of my computer. IN THE COMPUTER ROOM. and no one else in the room bothered to go' Oh hey, the dog's getting something off of Meaghan's key board!' URG! *kicks MeiLing* DAM IT! urg... Now i got redo it...
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
Goldenfire Gold Sparx Gems: 2416
#24 Posted: 17:14:49 28/09/2011
*blinks* Don't kick MeiLing to take yur anger out! Take yuor anger out on this MeiLing punching bag! Limited time offer only! smilie *holds out a MeiLing punching bag*
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#25 Posted: 21:09:48 28/09/2011 | Topic Creator
*turns into mokou* *this*
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
Goldenfire Gold Sparx Gems: 2416
#26 Posted: 14:03:03 29/09/2011
And this is why you don't play sports with the Gensokyo girls! smilie
Hey... I've noticed... There are 0 guys in Gensokyo, aren't there..?
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#27 Posted: 21:39:32 29/09/2011 | Topic Creator
well, there are guys, but the story faces on the girls. (becuase ZUN is a perv...) JK, it's becuase in his made up world, guys can't use danmaku. there are like three guys we know of... like Rinnosuke... And i will upload the comic... as soon as i double check proportions on the crappy remake. smilie
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#28 Posted: 23:09:23 29/09/2011 | Topic Creator
and... comic! (completely done by number 2 pencil!)

http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs7...nda-d4bb5e3.jpg
and encase you can't read it...
Teira: ...
Mikia: I'm mikia Mionta! A seventh grader!
Green Eyes
Teira: *thinking* Mikia? Why does that name sound so familiar?
Mikia: Are you going to answer me or not? (off in the corner: Mikia is unamused!)
Teira: huh...? Oh Sorry! I'm Teira, Teira Tackanichi.
Mikia: I guess that name will do.
Teira: excuse me?
To be continued! (in small print: out of laziness!)
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
Goldenfire Gold Sparx Gems: 2416
#29 Posted: 03:29:19 30/09/2011
Interesting....
Okay, just a few drawing tips... Sorry, I can't help it. These are tips I got from MY artist friend, so, yeah. smilie
"Don't forget the hair that's behind their shoulders."
"Clothes have FOLDS, Goldenfire."
"The head actually blends into the neck. It's not a snowman, Goldenfire, it's a person."
"People usually look directly at the person who's talking. Heads can TURN, too, you know."
I seriously heard all this, but with my actual name in there... T-T I still hear it occasionally, mostly on proportion...
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#30 Posted: 11:26:31 30/09/2011 | Topic Creator
they do have hair behind the shoulders, it didn't show very well do to the scanner.(well, Mikia's is too short... )
I know, realize this but i was rushing a copy of a much better origanal.
I know, dam it, but i draw in an anime style, that I'm still working on, so no. I'll just draw how i want to.
I realize this to but since this is a rushed copy, you can't tell that they're walking down a side walk and sort of need to tell what's INFRONT of them.
i don't give a dam about critics because i beat my self up when my art looks off. But thanks for the 'tips'.
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
Goldenfire Gold Sparx Gems: 2416
#31 Posted: 17:10:59 30/09/2011
Hey, I had to hear it, you have to hear it. smilie I suffered, and so you shall suffer as well. End of story. v-v
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#32 Posted: 19:30:13 30/09/2011 | Topic Creator
yea, i beat my self up enough for this. so shushes.
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
Riolu-Blue-247 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8843
#33 Posted: 19:51:03 30/09/2011
It looked good to me....
Better than what I can do right now...
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I just realised that I might not know what the hell is going on
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#34 Posted: 20:11:50 30/09/2011 | Topic Creator
thank you.
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
Goldenfire Gold Sparx Gems: 2416
#35 Posted: 20:29:57 30/09/2011
Guyses, if you want tips, I can have my friend use her tablet to draw over it as what it should look like... Maybe. She doesn't usually tutor people unless they're paying her. smilie
Riolu-Blue-247 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8843
#36 Posted: 20:51:33 30/09/2011
Meh,I beat myself up enough....
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I just realised that I might not know what the hell is going on
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#37 Posted: 21:24:30 30/09/2011 | Topic Creator
nah, i'm good! I prefer to work at it myself.
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
Riolu-Blue-247 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8843
#38 Posted: 21:25:19 30/09/2011
indeed....
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I just realised that I might not know what the hell is going on
Goldenfire Gold Sparx Gems: 2416
#39 Posted: 03:00:02 01/10/2011
MMkay! smilie
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#40 Posted: 01:11:59 11/10/2011
EHEM... -.-
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#41 Posted: 01:29:46 11/10/2011 | Topic Creator
... yea... sorry... *sweat drop* I should really just make a random story/comic topic....
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
Goldenfire Gold Sparx Gems: 2416
#42 Posted: 10:21:56 11/10/2011
Yup.....-.-'
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