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A warm smell wafted through the house, and I pushed back the covers. Blinking sleep out of my eyes, I got dressed in my good skinny jeans and my favorite sweatshirt. My mom had finally washed the bloodstains out...long story. I walked into the kitchen to see my mom making pancakes. Every time I saw my mother, it made me smile. Not knowing who gave birth to you for most of your life has that affect on people. Another long story, I'll explain later.
"Morning, sunshine." She grinned. "Ella is in her room, getting dressed. The others are in the living room, still sleeping."
"Okay. I'll be outside." I said.
"Be back soon! Don't go too far." She told me. I nodded.
Two minutes later, I was flying high above the ground. Yes, flying. Oh yeah, I forgot a minor detail. I have wings...

A maximum ride fanfic, i'm guessing?

Yeah. I am completely worried about the ending of Fang! I can't wait to read Angel...

I've already read Angel. It's good, although there's one thing i don't really like about it...

dont spoil it... this was before i read fang, anyway. so fang is in it. I was a little worried when I read the part where he supposedly

i will have more soon!

Wonderful story! I want to read more!

Thanks. Alright, more now!

Flying is freeedom. Unless, you know, you're being chased by crazed scientists. But now, with nobody chasing me, no bullets whizzing past me, it was amazing. It's even better with Fang, alone. Well, as long as I knew the rest of my family was safe with my mom. My mom...the nicest person I've ever met. I smiled as I remebered when I first met my mom. I didn't even know she was my mom. Anyway, back to the point...
Flying was definately way better than anything. But in the distance, I saw something with my raptor vision. And that something made my blood run cold. That something was a person, looking straight at me. And that person had a gun pointed straight at me.

NUUUU! STUPID CLIFFHANGERS! DX

haha. yep. why does max always get shot?

i dunno. she just has really bad luck.

Growing up in a lab might have that effect on people...

This story is sounding really good! Write more!

okay, more...NOT
sorry, out of insperation...
NEED...
MORE...
INSPERATION...

*hands over a box* it's got inspiration in it. :3 (lol )

*opens box* wheres the inspiration? this box is empty...

uh...*looks at giant pile of boxes* it should be in one of these...*sweatdrop*

*looks at giant pile of boxes* Now that's inspiration...Okay! Thought of something, don't hate me if you dun like it.

I dropped closer to the ground, but got scared to look down and see how high I was off the ground, still. That's weird...I have never been afraid of the height before... I thought. I tried to swerve around to make it a hard target, but I don't think it helped much. When I no longer saw the man or his gun, I turned and tried to race home. But suddenly, I was aware that I was falling, and everything went black. I had been shot.

yay! You found the right box!

haha. it was a guess. and maybe the big INSPIRATION label on the outside.

yeah, that could be it...although i used up most of those boxes for my stories...now i need to get more money so i can buy more, I think that was the last one...

Yeah. WAIT-HERE'S ONE!

*random angels singing*
WE FOUND ANOTHER BOX!!!

Well,after reading it,I HAD TO POST!I love love LOOOOVE Maximum Ride! I never knew this was a Maximum Ride fanfic,so I didn't bother to look at it.Then,I finally did!Maybe you should change the title,y'know?I think it would help.

@cynder2000h, yeah. that would help. I love max ride too! Its my fav book series. I'll change it later. Too lazy now.
@pinkdesi101: Where did the angels come from?? Oh, and I have a secret stash of boxes...hahaha *evil smile*
@everyone who bothered to read this: More coming later today!

Oh,yay!It's my fav book series too!Warriors got too stupid and sad.I can't wait for the last one of MR!It's comin' Febuary next year!

um...it already came out...february THIS year...

Great story!!

thanks

What?But in Angel,it said that it's coming Febuary next year...Oh,what liers!

this year...

i have no clue where they came from.
yes! we will not run out of inspiration for a long time!
i'm confused now. *goes on amazon to check*

haha...MOREZ NOW!

I woke up in a strange place. It was pitch black and there was no noise that I was aware of. A sharp pain in my wing made me realize that I had been captured. It seemed like there were people surrounding me, but like I said, it was pitch black, so even I couldn't see me. I thought about my mom, and my family, and Dylan. Dylan had been with us since Fang had left us. I still couldn't trust him completely, but I had a feeling he wasn't out to hurt us. I thought about Angel, who had been the whole reason Fang left. She had told us that Fang would be the first to die, but we couldn't believe it. I thought about Gazzy, who was brave, yet smelly, and Angel's blood-related brother. I thought about Nudge, who was a fashion expert. And lastly I thought about Iggy, who was blind, but has the best hearing. What would I do if I never saw them again? I have been captured for the, let's see, millionth time? What if I never made it out of here? What would my flock do without me?

yay!

aww. i feel sorry for Max.

why? She isn't dead yet...

Cool..

thanks!

i dunno. she's freaked out that she won't see the flock again?

Oh,you said "yet"!That sounds scary!And great job!

Yeah. Thanks, more coming soon.

YAAAAAYZ!

*happy dance*

"Where's Max?" Gazzy said, rubbing his eyes as he came into the kitchen.
"She went out for some flight practice before breakfast. She'll be back soon." Dr.Martinez replyed, handing him a plate full of waffles.
Fang silently snuck up on Gazzy, waited for the right moment, then yelled, "BOO!" The waffle that Gazzy was eating flew up and hit the ceiling.
"Guys, quit playing. Fang, will you go and get Max for me?"
"Sure, I'll be right back." Fang went into the front yard and took off...

***
"Who are you?" I said, struggling from the ropes that held me in place. The girl with the black hair spun around. My eyes widened in complete horror.I couldn't believe this... "D-Dr. Martinez? Mom?" Her lips curled into a nasty smile.
"Yes?"
***
"I couldn't find her anywhere. Do you think she's hurt?" Fang said as he came in from his search.
"Oh, no...what will happen if we can't find her? Who captured her? Can we go find her? Why-" Nudge was interrupted by Angel.
" Can we go and find her, now? We can't wait."
Dr. Martinez shrugged. "I don't know. But first, finish your breakfast."

CLIFFHANGER! NOOOO!
That was awesome,though!

thanks. more coming later. you know, it seems that only a certain variety of people read my stories. if SOMEBODY could get other people to post on it...maybe i would write more sooner...

I don't much care who posts on my stories.They motivate me and it's fun to write.

yeah, but it's nice to know that more than a few people like your stories, or other people say what i can fix and what they don't like about it...

That's true...

now that we're talking about it, is there anything that you want me to fix or that you don't like?

Ummmm...Well,maybe you shouldn't leave the story hanging.But that makes it more suspenseful,sooo...Ummmmm...Er....

Yeah...so, i shall write more! later