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spyrolove14 Green Sparx Gems: 136
#1 Posted: 02:30:48 11/06/2011 | Topic Creator
This is my first story sorry if it lame or confusing


prolouge

It was a hot summer day and Cynder and Spyro were training there hatchlings outside. One hatchling went by the name of Frost. Frost was a vision dragoness. A vision dragon/dragoness is a dragon who has visions of the future and can send those messages telapathically, They can also breathe ice. She was mostly white but had Black on her chest. The other hatchling was named Zip. Zip was an electric dragon. Zip was black with a yellow chest.

Zip and Frost were good at thier powers but still had more to learn. "You gotta do better than that" said Spyro to Zip. after a while of training it started to get dark and Cynder put the hatchlings to bed. Soon after Spyro and Cynder went to bed. That night Frost had a vision.

Chapter 1

Frost was in a dark room surrounded with bars. She was alone. Frost heard footsteps coming her way. "How is my prisoner today"Said the voice. The figure stepped out of the darkness. It was a green dragon with a black and red belly.The dragons eyes were glowing white Frost couldn,t make out the tail but it seemed to be black with a pointy tip.

"I see you are still healthy after yesterdays battle". I hope you do better in the next one you mangy white dragon. "Tommorow you are facing an electric dragon by the name of zip". Frost tried to say she wouldn't but the dragon interupted her in mid sentence. "You know very well not to speak to me!" The dragon left Frost alone. Frost decided to look around her cell but when she looked to her left she saw a black image with glowing yellow eyes jump out at her.

Frost jolted up from her bed and screamed. she realized it was just a nightmare. Spyro and cynder who where woken up by this ran to Frost and asked what happened. After Frost sent the image and explained Frost had tears streaming down her face. Spyro and Cynder looked at each other with nervous glances. Zip woke up and asked what the commotion was all about. after explaing zip got a nervous look on his face. "We should probably go to sleep"Cynder said.

After that people had trouble sleeping that night especially Frost. Before sunrise everyone went outside. they were waiting for the sun to rise. But that morning and a lot more mornings the sun wasn,t going to rise. Instead clouds came, in dark clouds. That morning There life would change.

To be continued....

Sorry it was so short but its geting late here and i cant think right now. please tell me if it is good or not. I wont be afended if you say it needs more to it.
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Edited 3 times - Last edited at 21:35:02 16/06/2011 by spyrolove14
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#2 Posted: 05:04:45 11/06/2011
This is a good start to a story!
But maybe you could paragraph the story. It's a bit hard to read when it's all scrunched together.
spyrolove14 Green Sparx Gems: 136
#3 Posted: 15:28:26 11/06/2011 | Topic Creator
sorry about that I'll edit it right now

Chapter 2

Frost knew the clouds were no good. "Dad i,m scared."said Frost. "It,s okay Frost but we better get away fast" said Spyro. The family ran away fast but not fast enough. energy beams were coming from the clouds and got Spyro. Spyro cried in pain. Then the clouds got Cynder. Frost soon realized it wasn't the clouds but the creatures near the clouds. They appeared to be blue dragons with glowing white eyes. But Frost only got a glance when a beam hit zip.

Frost was the only one left. the dragons had already taken her parents and zip. For some reason though they retreaded without Frost. What frost didn't know was that they were planning something special for her.
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The dragons put Spyro, Cynder and Zip in a cell. "what are you doing to us." Asked an enraged Cynder. "You will see when the time is right." All the blue dragons said at once. "right now you shall meat the master." The dragon from Frosts vision appeared. "So I see my dragons have finally caught you."said the master.
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Meanwhile Frost was running. Looking for someone to help anyone. She didn't know her way around like her father so she stopped and started crying. During her crying she had a vision.
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Frost saw a golden dragon with silver wings. She started talking to someone. Frost couldn't see who it was but seemed familiar. "look Cynder I know you are my grandmother but That doesn't mean I can trust you."said the golden dragon. Frost realized the other dragon was her mother. "Alice just listen..." "No i'm tired of talking to you." The golden dragon (now known as Destiny) ran off. "when will she learn"Said Cynder." Frost realized that Alice must be her child.
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Frost shook herself out of crying and trudged on, hoping to find someone who is not evil. After awhile of walking Frost stumbled apon a village. The village was bright and had not come upon any Blue dragons with glowing eyes,yet.
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Meanwhile Spyro and Cynder decided to look around thier cage while Zip was napping. There were other dragons in the cell next to them. They could tell the others have been here for awhile. One dragon was just like with torn wings and a chipped horn. The other was a dragonnes that was Black with a green chest. "What are they going to do with us." Asked Spyro. "we are not sure they do something different with everyone." said The Dragoness.


Hope you like it smilie
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Edited 3 times - Last edited at 18:43:49 11/06/2011 by spyrolove14
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#4 Posted: 16:08:57 12/06/2011
Great! Can't wait 4 next chapter smilie
spyrolove14 Green Sparx Gems: 136
#5 Posted: 19:41:23 15/06/2011 | Topic Creator
sorry for the wait.

chapter 3

Frost entered the town.Frost could see many dragons and hatchlings her age. A hatchling came up to Frost. "Hi my name is Zayne. whats yours." "I'm Frost."
"Do you guys have a leader or something I can talk to." Asked Frost. "no. But you can talk to my father Cyril. He is pretty well known."answered Zayne why is that name so familiar. Thought Frost
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Spyro and Cynder didn't know what to do. None of there powers worked at all to break the cage. "you guys should stop trying it's useless." said the dragonnes in the cell next to theres. "only a vision dragon can get it open." "I wish Frost was here" said Zip. "Thats probably why they didn't capture her."Said Cynder "whos Frost?" asked the dragonness.
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Zayne led Frost to his father. "Zayne, I see you have brought a guest" Said Cyril " yah she wants to speak with you" "very well" Zayne walked away to his friends. "what troubles you" asked Cyril. "Well its my parents. They have been captured by these blue dragons." "Oh yes the Tiddles henchman. I had a feeling that someone would come to me." Said Cyrill. "what" asked Frost. "well i saw it in a dream. so who are youre parents young one." "Spyro and Cynder" said Frost. Cyril said " Our village can help if you want." "yes please". "let's... " Frost past out before she could finish her sentence.
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Frost could see her parents. they were sitting in a cell simialr to the one in her first vision. The dragon from her first vision appeared. "Each of you will have a different task. Zip will fight with other dragons. Spyro will have to clean up all the blood after the fight and Cynder will have to fight with other dragoness. Zip tommorow you will fight a vision dragon named Frost." said the dragon. You cant make us do this" said Spyro. Spyro hit him with a blast of electricity. The dragon hit Spyro with light and ran off.
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Frost woke up to the sound of Cyrils voice. "How are you doing young Hatchling" said Cyril. "uggh" said Frost. "what did you see" asked Cyril. "What" asked Frost "well arn't you a vision dragon." "How did you know." "after a vision dragon falls over It's eyes start to glow. "I didn't know that" said Frost. "anyways when do you want to help your parents." asked Cyril. "Now" said Frost. "very well. Do you know were they took your parents." "i have no idea"
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