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A Hole in the Pole (A Poem by Fireball) [CLOSED]
Fireball Emerald Sparx Gems: 3163
#1 Posted: 19:25:14 06/05/2011 | Topic Creator
Okay, so I made this poem in Language class for a town, poem-writing contest. I've just turned it in and am awaiting to see if I won the contest. Anyways, this poem is about the effects of global warming in the North. Enjoy.

A Hole in the Pole


There is a gigantic hole
Destroying the North Pole.
The ice is disappearing;
The Arctic is clearing.
A hole fills within my soul.

Pollution started all of this,
It is destroying this icy abyss!
It's caused by poisonous gas
Which is destroying this beautiful landmass.
This is going out of control!

Just think about the Arctic's creatures
And its physical features.
Think of the endangered polar bear.
Their deaths aren't at all very fair.
They are very near to extinction.

The ozone layer is crumbling,
The planet's ice is tumbling.
So now I write a series of books
To express what mankind took.
Just look at this mess...

Now do you understand
The significance of this icy land?
We must stop this horrid chaos fast,
Or this once beautiful Arctic will never last...


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Fill free to comment.
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
Edited 2 times - Last edited at 19:26:42 06/05/2011 by Fireball
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6135
#2 Posted: 01:29:49 14/05/2011
This is really good. You are a good poet, unlike me. smilie
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
Fireball Emerald Sparx Gems: 3163
#3 Posted: 01:30:24 14/05/2011 | Topic Creator
smilie Thanks.
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6135
#4 Posted: 01:32:37 14/05/2011
That's fine.
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
Fireball Emerald Sparx Gems: 3163
#5 Posted: 01:33:17 14/05/2011 | Topic Creator
Why is it fine? I don't get it! smilie
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#6 Posted: 01:34:03 14/05/2011
Awesome. You should put this on dA.

And yes, you are a poet. smilie
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6135
#7 Posted: 10:29:22 17/05/2011
Yeah, you should put it on dA! smilie
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
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