darkSpyro

Im making this for my friend Skyqueen,she was interested in it so me thoughts me would type it up...
Me hopes you like it...

Characters:

Saturn: a young boy who has a heart of cold bitter hatred and evil(supposedly).He has a large crush on Becky and it tears him apart everytime he sees her.He is the middle child in his family

Becky:A beatutiful girl who has fallen in love with Saturn(and Kevin).Her heart is full of truth and light.She doesnt understand what is wrong with Saturn and puts herself in danger eveytime they meet.

Kevin:An innocent young boy who is caught in the middle.He doesnt really know his father,but he went to live with him.Thats when Saturn appeared.

Nora: Saturn's little sister,she is a tad less insane than Becky.Cyrus found her on the streets and took her in.Now she is out ooking for trouble and trying to stop Saturn from being with Becky.She can control her darkside,unlike Saturn.Becky trusts her deeply.

Darkrai:Saturn's annoying first pokemon.He helped Saturn find his darkside and(accidentally) Beck.Darkrai is thought to like Cresselia but denies it.

Cresselia:Becky's insanity came from this pokemon.Cressealia has basically the same personality as Becky.She hates Darkrai for changing Kevin into Saturn.She says she will never forgive him but she knows deep down she would be nothing without him.

Giratina:Nora's first pokemon,they are the only level headed people left in their family.The others always count on them if they screw up.Giratina wants to get rid of Darkrai and Cressealia but doesnt have the courage to face up to the humans if she did.

Cyrus:Saturn,Nora,Jupiter and Mars' father.He wishes Nora to get rid of Becky so that Saturn could return to normal.He wants to control his own universe.

Mars:She is one of Saturns older sisters.She utterly hates Becky.

Jupiter:She is the oldest of the four.She considers Becky her best friend and would do anything for her.

Zephr:He is in Nora's class.He has a crush on Nora.

Dusknoir:Zephr's pokemon,he is rarely seen.

Orchania:Saturn's ex-girlfriend,she has just met the others and everyone (apart from saturn) hates her.

Spiritomb:Jupiter's pokemon.He keeps to himself and gets very angry very easily.

Heatran:Mars's pokemon.He is always complaining about something and never shuts up.

Story 1: The first meeting

Kevin ran along.It was his first day at school in this new town.He wore a bright red capwith his blue hair sticking out from underneath it.He wore a black shirt,blackshorts,a red scarf and a pair of blue trainers.His green eyes took in everything as he made his way through the crowds an to his class.
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He was starting halfway through the year so he was nervous,a lot more than he normally was...He fingered the custon Pokeball on his belt.It was black and grey with a blue symbol on top.His father,of whom her had just gone to live with,made it for him.Inside was an incredibly special pokemon.
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Kevin walked into his form class and smiled nervously.Evryone turned and looked at him.They began to mutter amongst themselves.The teacher stood up and smiled at him.

nice.

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"Hi you must be Kevin" she said,"Im Mrs Dorme"
Kevin looked at her blankly
"Your seat is over there..."Mrs Dorme said,motioning to a seat next to a girl who was looking out the window next to her.Kevin slowly walked over and sat down.He looked at the teacher.She had green hair tied in a loose bun.Wisps were already escaping.She wore a white blouse and a long grey skirt.She looked around 25.
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The girl next to him had long black hair.She wore a white hat and had crystal blue eyes.Shewore a black shirt,a pair of black tights and a yellow miniskirt.She looked at him and smiled,which made him blush.
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Kevin ended up having the same classes as the girl.
"Hi...Im Becky...." she said as they walked towards their first class.
"I-Im Kevin..." he said nervously
"I know...." Becky said with a small giggle.Kevin smiled as they walked through the classroom door.They sat next to eachother again and halfway through the lesson Becky began passing him notes.
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You must be So nervous.....
Yeah...I am
Aww....you still print....Thats SO cute!
Huh?
You still print your writing!
Oh...yes I do...
So hows your first day going?
Its barely started but its...alright...
Whats wrong?
Your the only person I know and...
And?
Your a girl...
Is that a problem?
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Before Kevin could reply the bell rang.They got up and began to walk to their next class.
"You didnt answer me...." Becky said playfully.
"No..." Kevin replied before he ran ahead.
"Heey!Wait up!!" Becky called after him

After school the two walked home together.Becky was happt to have a new friend."Are you moving here permanently?" she asked as they got closer to her house.
"I dunno....but I hope so!"Kevin answered.Becky walked down her driveway and waved goodbye to Kevin,then walked into her house.What she didnt see was Kevin walking into the nearby Team Galactic building.
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"Good afternoon Master Kevin!How was your first day at school?" the receptionist asked cheerfully.
"Nyeh....meh.....is Dad ready to see me?" Kevin queried
"Yes...he is waiting for you in room 17Exb" the receptionist hesitated
Kevin ignored the hesitation and nodded his thanks before he walked towards the elevator.The receptionist sighed,"We are loosing another good soul....And its the last one we have...."
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Kevin walked towards room 17Exb.He knewthe inevitable was going to happen,so he was facing it now.
"Master Kevin....once you go through with Master Cyrus's plan...you cannot go back..."a grunt said,there was concern in her voice
"I know...."Kevin replied,he had taken his hat off,which revealed his blue hair that almost went down to his shoulders.
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"Greetings Father...I am ready..." Kevin stated as he walked into room 17Exb
"Welcome son,I am very glad to hear this!" Cyrus said,turning to face Kevin.Beside him was a giant glass capsule-pod.Kevin walked into the next room and changed into a white shirt and a pair of white pants.
"Step inside..." Cyrus said with a smirk.Kevin nodded and stepped into the capsule-pod.Cyrus slowly pressed a red button.The capsule began to fill with a slime-like substance.It was purple tinted but mainly see-through and occasionally a dark purple or black spark would pulse through it.
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Becky sat in her room and played with her hair.She was thinking about kevin.
"Whatch thinkin bout?" a voice said from her closet.The door opened to reveal Cresseliastanding there wearing a silly hat.
"A guy..." Becky answered,her voice sounded distant.
"Ooh!Who is it??Anyone I know!?!?!?!?!" Cresselia asked,jumping up and down
"No...its a new kid...." Becky replied
"Oh...Is he cute??" Cresselia asked
"NONE OF YOUR BUSINESS!!!"Becky yelled

Wow...thanks for writing this! <3 This is awesome.

All goods....if you want I can add a charrie for you!!I have the space....lol

Hmm...I once wrote my own pokemon fantasy, but it got deleted. I might start it back up...anyway, very interesting so far...

Thankyou...I made this with a friend but we stopped when her pearl got stuffed.But she got a new one recently so i decided to re-create it..but differently

Your welcome. oh btw...take your time continuing this. Don't rush. The best things come from time and patience.

Edit: ugh...I might as well post my story...

Indeed....I already have some written down..thats why i posted it alot...
Anyways heres the end to this part:
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Cyrus smiled as the capsule emptied.Kevin's outfit had gone from white to black.
"How do you feel?" Cyrus asked
There was no answer.Kevin opened his eyes,they had changed from their placid green to a lifeless black.Cyrus smiled again,but it turned into more of an evil sneer.
"I am fine.....But please....call me Saturn..."

Eeeeeh!!! Our story!!!

I thought you'd be happy to see it....

Oh I am!!!

Awesome!Do you like my charrie descriptions??

YUS!!! TOTALY!!

that makes me happy....Oh and just so you know...i hurt my wrist again...

*Facepalm* How now brown cow??

I dunno.....*ashamed*

My wrist is sore too, actually. And can you maybe add Kayla into it as well please?

Hoaki!Ill add Kayla in!It might take a while...

who kayla?

Queenie's charrie (random add it!!^w^)

you mean Sky's charrie right?

Yaah....soz...barin not properly wkoing

Heh same here buddy

i just realise i spelt Brain wrong....lol

Heh LOL

indeed....Barin and wkoing....

lol! Whoa...I just realized that both of you have like some asian character as ur avi's crapp....what really sucks is I'm asian and i can't read it...

Really?Oh...its the Air (Mikatinks) and the Fire (ME!!*laughs evily*) symbol....lowl....
Flamo & Aira <3

chuuuu~ super duper love, love fun!!

I have not had any sugar!! >.>

No...i know this is the way you get when you talk too much to me....lol JK

MOAR!!!

caant right now!!be patient my friend

Very good. I can't wait to see what happens!

Awesome!Im kinda in the middle of writing a murder mystery for English so its kinda hard to get this done aswell...

Need moar!!

I know!ill try and find the book! *searches*
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Saturn Appears

Kevin wasnt at school for the rest of the week.His older sister collected his homework.Her name was Mars and she had short red hair and a peircing stare.Her eyes were an orangey colour and she always wore grey.
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On the weekend Becky was walking around the streets she thought kevin lived on.She passed a bar in a dark corner and she thought she heard kevin's voice.She looked inside and gasped.
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Inside was gloomy,it had a stage at one end and on it stood Kevin,except his hair was down.On his right was Mars,on his left was his oldest sister jupiter.They all wore black clothes with the team galactic symbol on the front on their shirts.Directly infront of the stage was a young girl with long black hair and mesmerising purple eyes.
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"We're Galactic Death and we will be singin 10,000 Days....lets rock!" Mars said
"ROCK!" the purple eyed girl yelled
"Before we start...Im Saturn...the lead singer....these two are Mars and Jupiter...yeah..." Saturn said before he started singing
"Listen to the tales and romanticize,
How we follow the path of the hero.
Boast about the day when the rivers overrun.
How we rise to the height of our halo.
Listen to the tales as we all rationalize
Our way into the arms of the savior,
Feigning all the trials and the tribulations;
None of us have actually been there.
Not like you.
Ignorant fibbers in the congregation
Gather around spewing sympathy,
Spare me.
None of them can even hold a candle up to you.
Blinded by choices, hypocrites won't see.
But, enough about the collective Judas.
Who could deny you were the one who illuminated
You'll have a piece of the divine.
And this little light of mine, the gift you passed on to me;
I'll let it shine to guide you safely on your way,
Your way home ...
Oh, what are they going to do when the lights go down
Without you to guide them all to Zion?
What are they going to do when the rivers overrun
Other than tremble and fear for the?
High as a wave, but our eyes are upon the ground.
You were the light and the way, they'll only read about.
I only pray, Heaven knows when to lift you out.
Ten thousand days in the fire is long enough, you're going home.
You're the only one who can hold your head up high,
Shake your fists at the gates saying:
"I have come home now!
Fetch me the spirit, the son, and the father.
Tell them their pillar of faith has ascended.
It's time now!
My time now!
Give me my, give me my wings!"
Give me my wings!
You are the light and way, that they will only read about.
Set as I am in my ways and my arrogance,
Burden of proof tossed upon the believers.
You were my witness, my eyes, my evidence,
Judith Marie, unconditional one.
Daylight dims leaving cold fluorescence.
Difficult to see you in this light.
Please forgive this bold suggestion:
Should you see your Maker's face tonight,
Look Him in the eye, look Him in the eye, and tell Him:
I never lived a lie, never took a life, but surely saved one.
Hallelujah, it's time for you to bring me home."

mooooooooooooooooooooooar!!!

Becky stood,transfixed on Saturn's eyes.
"Hes amazing isnt he?" the girl with the purple eyes said as she walked over
"Oh...yeah...who are you exactly?" Becky asked nervously
"Im Nora...His little sister...." she said
"N-nice to meet you..." Becky said,smiling abit
"C'mon sis!We need to see Charon...he said he had some big Important news for us..." Saturn said as he flipped off the stage.Becky looked at him and blushed.
"Alright bro...but Zeph aint gunna be pleased..." Nora said,she sounded as if she was being cheeky.
Saturn smiled like he had heard a joke,"I dont really care...whos ya friend?" he asked
Beck gasped,"We met on Monday!"
Saturn raised an eyebrow,"I am afraid I have not gone to school...Now...lets go Nor..."he walked off with an air of agitation.Mars,Jupiter and Nora followed him snickering.
"But...I didnt mention school...." Becky muttered
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"You got another..." Mars said
"Indeed 'e does!" Nora agreed
Jupiter remained silent
"You two better take Jupiters tone..." Saturn warned
"And why is that exactly?I am older than you..." Mars stated
"Shes got you there..." Nora added
"Because...Cyrus likes me better..." Saturn said calmly
"Trust you to bring father into this!" Mars said,she rushed ahead annoyedly.
Saturn laughed
"Niiice...." Nora said
They could hear Mars swearing up ahead
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Becky followed them at a distance
"Its Sunday...If he is who I think he is then he will be at school tomorrow..." she muttered.She turned and walked away,once again missing them walk into the Galactic building