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Bolt Hunter Gems: 6158
#1 Posted: 07:45:44 14/02/2011 | Topic Creator
I've decided to make a new fan-fic that hopefully I won't bail on. I really want to make this so I doubt I will, unless I don't want to later on like most of my stories.
I am still writing my others stories, though I have more ideas for this so that is why I am writing it. I really think this will turn out great, so I hope you like it.

I cooked up a little sneak-peak for you to read. If this was a book, this would most likely be the blurb, though a quite long one at that, compared to the others I've seen. :3

This is in the future of dragon times and the dragons have mastered "Sonic Powers" and can create simple objects and sound weapons with the power of sound. There has also been discovery of new elements, including Star and the re-appearance of the Aurora which is the most powerful and darkest element known to dragon kind and only one dragon has been known to wield it. There has also been mention of a power called the Sight that has appeared and was thought to be long lost (last seen way before the time of Spyro).
A dark army is also rising to try and destroy dragon kind from an unknown place, long lost since the time of Cyclonis, the first, evil Purple Dragon known who had the Aurora. It is thought they are coming from the Dragon eye Temple in the far reaches of the Hazov Valley in the area of the Mountain of Malefor.
A group of three courageous young dragons have stepped up from a great Dragon City who have amazing Sonic Powers and great elements. One is known to even wield the Aurora, and another the Sight, while the other has a great, unknown new power. Also a little young dragon joins them in times to help, though he is quite the scared creature. He is a Lava Dragon that wields the Lava Claw, seen in only some Lava Dragons.
As this small group of dragons battles their way to this Hazov Valley, they will encounter unlikely allies, new enemies and great loses. And this army of dark creatures has a secret weapon and a great, dark spirit on their side.
Who will succeed?


But if this is made into a real book (I highly, highly doubt), I'll take away the Spyro parts and replace it with different places and all.

I hope you enjoy my story! smilie

EDIT: I got some ideas from other things so you may see things that are from something you've seen before. smilie
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 07:46:50 14/02/2011 by Bolt
Cynder134 Gold Sparx Gems: 2061
#2 Posted: 09:32:54 14/02/2011
awesome
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Why am I back
BEST FAN EVER Gold Sparx Gems: 2194
#3 Posted: 02:47:31 15/02/2011
I look forward to reading smilie
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Bolt Hunter Gems: 6158
#4 Posted: 04:19:31 16/02/2011 | Topic Creator
Thank you both, first chapter should be up soon.
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
Aura Dragon Yellow Sparx Gems: 1353
#5 Posted: 17:30:15 17/02/2011
This sounds very interesting. I like the plot so farsmilie
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Story status- Skylanders: The Forgotten Elements- Chapter 11 is up ~ End of all Hope- Done

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daimondcynder21 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1218
#6 Posted: 09:20:43 18/02/2011
Can't wait to read it smilie
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6158
#7 Posted: 11:47:06 18/02/2011 | Topic Creator
Thank you, Aura Dragon and you too daimond. smilie

New chapter is up, I was going to post it yesterday but I didn't have the time.

Chapter 1
The Story Begins


A dragoness stepped through a lonely, dark forest. Her pale blue scales, almost white, shone with the glow of the fireflies circling around the nearby trees. The shadows of the trees looked like dark creatures trying to grab the dragoness from the ground, but she was old enough to know that it was just her imagination. The ground was damp and it wet her paws, but she didn't care.
The atmosphere was eerie, too quite in the dragoness' opinion. Something wasn't right here. She saw the fireflies leave and hide in the safety of the trees, trying to block out their light. The dragoness looked around and saw rustling in a shrub near her. Was it from the breeze or was something in there?
The dragoness walked up to it and broke a branch off to see nothing inside it. She felt a breeze pass her, that must have caused the rustling. But she didn't feel it where she was standing. It was a trap!
She got up in a battle pose and looked back but it was too late. Something came running and sprang up at the pale blue dragoness. She only saw a glimpse of it, it was a green dragon. She must have missed him because he had the colour of the leaves, along with some oranges and yellows, reds and blues.
The dragon was smaller than the dragoness but still managed to knock her over. He left a small scratch on her left arm and knocked her wings down with his tail.
"Oh, Zero, I got you good!" he started laughing like crazy.
Zero got up from the ground and looked at the green dragon with annoyance and awe. She wondered how he had been able to knock her down, and trick her both at once.
"You can be so annoying, you know, Mo...?" Zero sighed and started walking off. "If you're here, Freeze can't be far..."
"Well, last I saw him, he was over there," Mo pointed over to a small pond.
Zero turned and started to walk over to the pond. She could hear a trickle of water from a small waterfall in the distance and saw one flowing from a rock at the top of the pond.
As they got nearer to the pond, they saw a brown, with a touch of blue, dragon at the top of the waterfall. He also had green, yellow, red and orange on him. There were two things that glinted on him and the two saw they were rings. There was a silver one on his left horn and a goldish-bronze one on his nose.
"There he is," muttered Zero as she took off with only three flaps of her azure blue wings. She flew up onto the rock Freeze was on and settled down, Mo following close behind.
Freeze was lying down, looking into the water. He was looking closely at something, concentrating very hard, but Zero didn't know what.
"You got her, I see," he said, getting up from the ground and shook a paw, it was wet.
Zero studied him carefully, "What were you doing Freeze?" she asked as she hit an end to her thoughts.
"Just listening to the sonic sound of the water," he replied.
Dragons, 1300 years ago, have mastered the powers of sound. But only some dragons can use it, but it wasn't even thought of in the time of Spyro, 4100 years ago. The dragons use Sonic Powers for lots of things, and can even shape objects with it. There are some phenomenons with Sonic Powers too, very rare.
"So, what are we going to do now?" Mo butted in, blanked.
"Well, I guess we just head back to Sora Bacra," Freeze replied. Sora Bacra is a large dragon city, home to the three dragons.
Some leaves fell down from overhead branches and landed on top of Zero. They all looked up and saw an orange tail hanging from a branch. Then a young, orange dragon fell down, almost landing on Zero. The dragon had small wings and spikes on his head, nothing else besides a sword-like tail blade.
"Neutron!" Zero said in anger. "What were you trying to do, squash me?"
The orange dragon looked at her nervously, "Uh, nothing, I just, er, fell."
Zero sighed and took flight with two flaps of her wings. Freeze got airborne too, followed by Mo and Neutron.
"Where are you three going?" Neutron asked.
"Back to the city, right?" Mo answered, but asking a question too.
"Yep," Freeze answered him and flew on ahead.
The other got up to him and got to the clearance to the forest. They saw the great city on ahead, a river flowing through the middle of it. Home.
"We're back," sighed Mo and dropped to the ground. He walked on and got to the river, he was tired of flying and his wings hurt from scratching them earlier in the bush.
He then had an idea. A light, sky blue aura formed around him and he made a sound and a Sonic Bubble formed under his feet. He used his sonic abilities to make a platform to ride on, without wasting energy except having to continue making the noise of the bubble will disappear.
The other three flew on, but couldn't catch up with the green dragon. His orange hair was flying like crazy everywhere.

More coming soon.
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
daimondcynder21 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1218
#8 Posted: 22:15:46 18/02/2011
Whoa! This is awesome! Well done! smilie
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6158
#9 Posted: 22:16:32 18/02/2011 | Topic Creator
Thank you, the second part of it should be up today I hope.
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
daimondcynder21 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1218
#10 Posted: 22:17:59 18/02/2011
kool! can't wait to read it!
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6158
#11 Posted: 22:22:25 18/02/2011 | Topic Creator
Thank you, again. I'm really into this story at the moment.
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
Fireball Emerald Sparx Gems: 3163
#12 Posted: 17:15:49 01/06/2011
Nice story!
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
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