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gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426	#1 Posted: 07:44:37 25/11/2010 \| Topic Creator chapter 1(part 1) there two side,one light and one darkness.before then two hatching play each other,untill flame capture malefor and cyril.year ago,strange voice in dream. --- "let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. ( are my collecting skylander)
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spyro super fan Emerald Sparx Gems: 3096	#2 Posted: 09:34:47 25/11/2010 long time no see gary, and no offense but it seems a bit jumbled up what you just said --- Kiyoteru Hiyama - "You're engulfed in a sorrowful melody, come and sleep now. Hereafter, the beginning of a tragedy must be burned into your eyes."

gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426	#3 Posted: 04:12:24 26/11/2010 \| Topic Creator no time to see you too.thanks,I might continue chapter 2(part2) coming soon. --- "let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. ( are my collecting skylander)

gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426	#4 Posted: 07:45:10 26/11/2010 \| Topic Creator chapter 2(part 2) two hatching named ice golem the yellow dragoness and gary the purple dragon.In training room elements,gary and ice golem training. --- "let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. ( are my collecting skylander)
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torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123	#5 Posted: 12:35:45 26/11/2010 You need to make your chapters longer... WAY longer.

matesds Emerald Sparx Gems: 3504	#6 Posted: 12:54:16 26/11/2010 Quote: torok You need to make your chapters longer... WAY longer. And you to hate "demons" less... WAY less. --- Keep smile

torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123	#7 Posted: 13:04:32 26/11/2010 Quote: matesds Quote: torok You need to make your chapters longer... WAY longer. And you to hate "demons" less... WAY less. I will not.

matesds Emerald Sparx Gems: 3504	#8 Posted: 14:11:02 26/11/2010 Quote: torok Quote: matesds Quote: torok You need to make your chapters longer... WAY longer. And you to hate "demons" less... WAY less. I will not. Demons wan't to be loved too, deal with it. --- Keep smile

gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426	#9 Posted: 06:02:28 29/11/2010 \| Topic Creator Quote: torok You need to make your chapters longer... WAY longer. alright,I write story longer. --- "let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. ( are my collecting skylander)

matesds Emerald Sparx Gems: 3504	#10 Posted: 18:03:44 29/11/2010 Sorry gary, sorry our quarrel, please? --- Keep smile

gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426	#11 Posted: 08:48:14 30/11/2010 \| Topic Creator not to worry,I wrote more story chapter 3 (part 3) coming soon. --- "let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. ( are my collecting skylander)
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gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426	#12 Posted: 04:09:30 02/12/2010 \| Topic Creator chapter 3(part 3) in while,malefor fly to dragon city.he want to gary and ice golem. --- "let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. ( are my collecting skylander)

gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426	#13 Posted: 17:55:20 17/12/2010 \| Topic Creator chapter 4(part 4) "ice golem,cyril been waiting for you and gary come with me"malefor said.gary follow malefor. --- "let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. ( are my collecting skylander)

gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426	#14 Posted: 17:34:09 01/01/2011 \| Topic Creator chapter 5(part5) one day,flame bring his shadow band to capture malefor before cyril wouldn't use his ice element untill then malefor disappear without unotice and it up to ice golem and gary has join darkness ally to defeat flame and shadow band. --- "let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. ( are my collecting skylander)

gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426	#15 Posted: 11:28:38 03/02/2011 \| Topic Creator chapter 6(part 6) In while,gary and ice golem fly."I surely to turn dark form and you turn dark form too,ice golem"gary said. --- "let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. ( are my collecting skylander)

Cynder134 Gold Sparx Gems: 2061	#16 Posted: 08:15:54 04/02/2011 i'm confused --- Why am I back

gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426	#17 Posted: 08:55:02 15/03/2011 \| Topic Creator chapter 7(part 7) while gary turn dark form and ice golem also turn dark form too.he follow ice golem. --- "let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. ( are my collecting skylander)

gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426	#18 Posted: 07:27:21 04/06/2011 \| Topic Creator chapter 8(part 8) flame has appear to hurt me and I turn dark form when I really use earth poison at flame."ha,you can't hurt me,gary"flame said evil laugh. --- "let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. ( are my collecting skylander)

arceustheprime Ripto Gems: 5362	#19 Posted: 07:53:18 04/06/2011 What is this?....I don't even....

gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426	#20 Posted: 08:13:34 04/06/2011 \| Topic Creator you haven't read this story. --- "let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. ( are my collecting skylander)

Angel220200 Emerald Sparx Gems: 4401	#21 Posted: 08:31:42 04/06/2011 arceus has actually. --- Judge not, and you will not be judged; condemn not, and you will not be condemned; forgive, and you will be forgiven; give, and it will be given to you.

gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426	#22 Posted: 10:42:45 22/07/2011 \| Topic Creator I know that chapter of my story --- "let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. ( are my collecting skylander)

lemmingluv Ripto Gems: 907	#23 Posted: 21:48:56 28/07/2011 i..am confused

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#24 Posted: 05:19:39 12/10/2011 | Topic Creator

chapter 9(part 9)
while ice golem and gary with hunter took long flight throught strange to catacombs.In where catacombs,gary take his sword drew flame back and he save spyro and cynder."*sigh*let go,cyril is waiting to twlight falls of dragon city"gary and hunter said."who is?"cynder said.

---
"let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. (

are my collecting skylander)

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Purple n Spyro Ripto Gems: 1096	#25 Posted: 05:24:41 12/10/2011 Great! And gary, they just dont understand, but i do

daimondcynder21 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1218	#26 Posted: 05:43:49 12/10/2011 hmm, different with your own style, good on ya gary!

gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426	#27 Posted: 06:32:19 12/10/2011 \| Topic Creator thanks alot --- "let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. ( are my collecting skylander)

daimondcynder21 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1218	#28 Posted: 07:04:22 12/10/2011 ur welcome just wish people would read mine

gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426	#29 Posted: 11:45:55 12/10/2011 \| Topic Creator ok,I would read for you. chapter 10(part 10) "let fly to escape from catacombs before flame gets here"gary said to ice golem.while ice golem follow hunter during flight strange."after we land in twlight falls of dragon city"hunter said. --- "let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. ( are my collecting skylander)

daimondcynder21 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1218	#30 Posted: 22:10:38 14/10/2011 nice! thanks for reading mine, i'm thinking of doing cutscence sketches to go along

gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426	#31 Posted: 01:20:24 15/10/2011 \| Topic Creator no problem chapter 11:escape from catacombs in beginning(part 11) gary and ice golem are both fly to escape from catacombs."we getting there"he said to ice golem."well,it takes time long flight"she said to gary. --- "let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. ( are my collecting skylander)

gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426	#32 Posted: 04:04:26 16/10/2011 \| Topic Creator chapter 12:land from twlight falls of dragon city(part 12) "here we are"hunter said.ice golem and gary walk in in front twlight falls's gate. --- "let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. ( are my collecting skylander)

gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426	#33 Posted: 06:09:31 17/10/2011 \| Topic Creator chapter 13:getting reach to middle dragon city's town "shh,quiet....I just heard....let go!"hunter and ice golem said."go to other side west,if you can't go throught right way"hunter said continue."ok then,let move"gary said. --- "let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. ( are my collecting skylander)

daimondcynder21 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1218	#34 Posted: 07:07:09 17/10/2011 maybe just make the story a bit more discriptive?

gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426	#35 Posted: 12:49:30 17/10/2011 \| Topic Creator Quote: daimondcynder21 nice! thanks for reading mine, i'm thinking of doing cutscence sketches to go along I can't wait see your artwork --- "let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. ( are my collecting skylander)

daimondcynder21 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1218	#36 Posted: 20:40:41 17/10/2011 thankiees

gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426	#37 Posted: 10:11:12 18/10/2011 \| Topic Creator your welcome. chapter 14:cyril's guards(part 14) "In coming,follow me"cyril's guards said."ok,we follow you"gary said.cyril's guard leads them to follow."to where,no place for hide anywhere"ice golem said. --- "let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. ( are my collecting skylander)

daimondcynder21 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1218	#38 Posted: 05:00:56 19/10/2011 getting better...

gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426	#39 Posted: 05:22:53 19/10/2011 \| Topic Creator chapter 15:there be trap corner(part 15) "don't go there or you be trap here"cyril's guards said."what it is?" gary said.ice golem almost press button and cage drop down near ice golem."that close one"ice golem said --- "let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. ( are my collecting skylander)

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#40 Posted: 05:13:25 20/10/2011 | Topic Creator

chapter 16:gary's dark form(part 16)

after malefor disappear and gary turn dark form."No.I won't let this happen and ignitus left spyro before malefor left me"gary growl."just let malefor go"ice golem said."I can't let malefor disappear"gary said."let him go"ice golem said.gary turn normal form."I sure cyril already safe now"gary said.

---
"let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. (

are my collecting skylander)

daimondcynder21 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1218	#41 Posted: 07:24:30 20/10/2011 good one

gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426	#42 Posted: 09:40:25 20/10/2011 \| Topic Creator thanks,I write story later. --- "let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. ( are my collecting skylander)

gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426	#43 Posted: 04:49:24 21/10/2011 \| Topic Creator chapter 17:flame's first elements(part 17) ice golem and gary went to valley of avalar."at last,we already there"gary said.flame already land beside ice golem. --- "let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. ( are my collecting skylander)
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daimondcynder21 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1218	#44 Posted: 06:59:43 21/10/2011 getting there, better

gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426	#45 Posted: 12:48:06 22/10/2011 \| Topic Creator chapter 18:gary and ice golem gets new helmet along armor(part 18) "we finally did capture flame after I let him turn light form and cyril give us reward for your armor,helmet and my armor,helmet"gary said smile. --- "let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. ( are my collecting skylander)

Prysom Ripto Gems: 131	#46 Posted: 12:59:02 22/10/2011 So I assume this would end around Chapter 1,152?

daimondcynder21 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1218	#47 Posted: 21:11:09 22/10/2011 tink so

gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426	#48 Posted: 07:07:37 23/10/2011 \| Topic Creator well ,that chapter of story doesn't end. --- "let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. ( are my collecting skylander)

torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123	#49 Posted: 12:17:29 23/10/2011 One sentence is not a chapter, I mean yes I know with your bad English you can't be expected to write something like Shakespeare. But at the very least make the chapters a few paragraphs (1 paragraph=4 sentences.)

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