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The Twilight Master [CLOSED]
ShayminSky Ripto Gems: 943
#1 Posted: 06:44:14 25/11/2010 | Topic Creator
One Dragon. One Destiny. Can Auron overcome difficulties, to defeat the Twilight King? Can she save her family? Only one stands in the way between her and the Twilight King. Who though? Who?

~Prolouge~
It was midnight. On a large plain atop a plateau, with a lake in its centre, many dragons slept. The Boulder Opal Dragons. It was a peaceful night, and the moon hung overhead. Auron awoke to a huge crash. Her mother and father jerked awake, as well as Northa, her foster sister.
"Mother! Father!" Auron cried, dashing around blindly in the dust and smoke.
"Auron! Get close!" she heard her father yell, and he appeared through the haze. Northa ran to Auron's mother. A great shadow passed overhead, and a large, black dragon swooped down at her mother.
"ALECTO!" her father cried, and he ran to his wife.
"So... You're pretty for a Boulder Opal..." the Black Dragon hissed, circling around Auron's mother.
"STAY AWAY FROM HER!" her father called, gaining speed.
"I have no need for you." the dragon hissed, and he flicked his tail at Auron's father.
"Amycus!" Alecto cried, and she tryed to run foreward. The dragon stopped her, by tethering her by her tail. By then, Auron realised that Northa was cowering between Alecto's legs. She ran foreward, but she stopped as three large, metal plated Quetzalcoatls swooped in front of her.
"Northa! Take the stone, and run!" Amycus yelled, throwing a white, egg-shaped crystal at Auron. She caught it, and continued to stare at her family.
"RUN!" Amycus yelled, and reluctantly, she ran like she ha never ran before.
"AFTER HER!" the dragon ordered, and the three Quetzalcoatls gave chase. They were faster then regular Quetzalcoatls, and were more air resistant. Auron took off, into the sky, and the Quetzalcoatls followed.

Suddenly, a blast of Shadow hit Auron, as the black dragon shot a huge beam. She screamed, but managed to stay airborne. She flew for ages, she didn't know how long. Suddenly, a storm of metal feathers. Auron managed to dodge them, and the Quetzalcoatl zoomed past. It made impact with the ground, and in a terrible crack, the Quetzalcoatl's spine was severed. Another Quetzalcoatl repeated the attack, sword-like feathers zooming by. Auron caught as many as she could. As the beast zoomed past, she latched onto the monster's head, and pulled off the forehead and cheek plates, before flying off. It shrieked in pain, and crashed into the ground, suffering the same fate as the first Quetzalcoatl. Only one remained.

Auron couldn't take it anymore. Her wings were in agony. She swooped down, and fell between a crack in the rock. She hit the side, being knocked uncontious. She landed at the bottom, in a shallow river. The quetzalcoatl shrieked, and tried to wedge its snout in the crevece, though failing.

Chapter 1 coming soon.
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 06:44:31 25/11/2010 by ShayminSky
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#2 Posted: 12:16:48 25/11/2010
That was pretty good, but what's a quetzalcoatl, and how does a Boulder Opal dragon look like?
ShayminSky Ripto Gems: 943
#3 Posted: 20:32:27 25/11/2010 | Topic Creator
Quetzalcoatl: [User Posted Image]

Boulder Opal: Moulted brown with tiny speckles and stripes of opal. Their underbellys' are plain, and so is the back of their wings. The wings at the front are almost full of the opal speckles. They generally have 2-3 pairs of long, black horns.
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#4 Posted: 00:14:10 26/11/2010
A Quetzalcoatl looks cool.
Dark_Spyro999 Emerald Sparx Gems: 4713
#5 Posted: 04:18:58 26/11/2010
Eh, no offense, but Auron and Quetzalcoatls? Sounds like AuRon and some Griffaran to me.....
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ShayminSky Ripto Gems: 943
#6 Posted: 04:57:18 26/11/2010 | Topic Creator
Who's AuRon and Griffaran?
Dark_Spyro999 Emerald Sparx Gems: 4713
#7 Posted: 05:02:05 26/11/2010
You've never read the Age of Fire?
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ShayminSky Ripto Gems: 943
#8 Posted: 09:06:50 26/11/2010 | Topic Creator
Nope, never heard of it.
ShayminSky Ripto Gems: 943
#9 Posted: 08:15:33 27/11/2010 | Topic Creator
~Chapter 1: Rhunon~

Auron soon awoke, and climbed out of the stream. She looked around, her eyes adjusting to her surroundings. Everything was dark, but there were many pinpoints of light. The lights were drifting around, seemingly alive. One of them drifted towards Auron, and as it came closer, it's body became visible.
"Who are you?" Auron asked, using her wings to bloke out the bright light.
"I guess you haven't heard the tales." the creature said. "Or have you merely forgotten?" Auron peered from the side of her wing.
"I think... I remember..." Auron muttered. "Are you... Are you a Twilight F-Fairy...?"
"Yep, indeed you're right." the fairy smiled. "I am Rhunon, and I am a blacksmith."
"I thought fairies were only useful in magic." Auron said, uncovering her face. Anger flared in Rhunon's eyes.
"We may be an all female species, but we are not useless." she hissed, drawing a sword. "We are the guardians of the chasm, and we have no intentions of leaving. We would have expelled you to the beast above, had you been contious."
"Oh... I didn't know..." Auron said. "I'm a bit confused, and stressed, I don't know what I'm saying."
"I forgive you. You are only a dragon hatchling, right?" Rhunon said. "Hmm, it seems you have some metal. I know how to make armour, if you would like."
"That would be cool." Auron said. "They're Quetzalcoatl feathers, and head plates." Rhunon seemed to freeze.
"Quetzalcoatl... How many?" she asked in a cautious tone.
"Three, I think." Auron answered. "Why?"
"You are very lucky to be alive. Few creatures escape Razor Quetzalcoatls, and no known hatchlings have ever escaped them, or lived." Rhunon said. "Razor Quetzalcoatls are the most powerful and vicious. They are rare, but that doesn't stop them from carrying out their master's plans." She set off to work, using magic.

An hours later, the armour was done. Rhunon didn't need any help from Auron, apart from being a mold for the armor, making it large enough to fit.
"I'll just link the armor with the chains... And done!" Rhunon said. She ran her sword over the armour's length, and magical sparks came out of the tip. "I made it so that it will fit you for your lifetime. And also, you may not want to have it on for the rest of your life. Just say Firika while touching it, and it will turn into a small scale, and say Akirif to turn it back into armour. Understand?"
"Yep." Auron said. "Thank-You Rhunon, may I be on my way?"
"Of course. Make sure you arn't seen on the way out of the chasm. And I bid you farewell." Rhunon vanished into a puff of mist.
"Farewell, Rhunon." Auron said quietly. "Firika." The armour transformed into a scale, and she flew out of the chasm with it.

Chapter 2 coming soon.
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#10 Posted: 14:25:44 27/11/2010
Very good. I like this story.
Cynder134 Gold Sparx Gems: 2061
#11 Posted: 07:13:48 28/11/2010
me to good chapter
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Fireball Emerald Sparx Gems: 3163
#12 Posted: 19:25:05 28/11/2010
Very good.
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