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The tale of Bluespark: The freedom fighters. [CLOSED]
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#1 Posted: 17:16:24 21/11/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 1,

It was a very cold morning at Mount Malefor. It was snowing like it almost always is. Deep within the great mountain Bluespark was laying in a cell. He had a shackle around his neck and the shackle was attached to the wall by a chain, the chain wasn't long but it did allow Bluespark to move about his cell a bit. Bluespark was a ten year old light blue lightning dragon, he had a fringe on the back of his neck and on his back and all of his tail as well, he also had a fringe attached to his horns that went down near the side of his head. The membrane of the fringes were slightly purple, his two horns were a darker blue than his body. He had a vertical fin-like tail blade, it was blue and dark purple in the middle of it. His wings were blue. His pupils and underbelly were yellow. He had yellow stripes that looked like lightning bolts running down from the back of his neck to the end of his tail.
Bluespark also had other stripes on him, but these stripes were red and they weren't natural. They were signs of a recent whipping. Bluespark had been punished by his slave master named Ritur Coldbone. Ritur hadn't fed Bluespark for days so Bluespark had no choice but to kill one of Ritur's healthy Death Hounds and ate most of it. When Ritur found Bluespark he also found the carcass of a healthy Death Hound, and that's how Bluespark ended up being beat and left chained in this cold cell for the night. Bluespark wrapped his tail around himself and covered his back and sides with his wings to try and keep warm. One barred window was in his cell and some cold air blew in snow from the outside. The small bit of snow fell on Bluespark making him shiver greatly. His back still hurt from the lashing last night and the cold weather wasn't making it better. He shook the snow off of him and shivered to try to warm himself up. He wondered when his slave master would let him out of the cell, but Bluespark didn't count on it being too soon, since he did kill and eat one of Ritur's healthy Death Hounds. Bluespark had been a slave since he was a hatchling, he didn't know who his parents were or even if they were still alive. The only other dragons he ever came in contact with were the other slaves, who were a little older than he was but they all suffered the same fate, being slaves to the apes who were for some reason more dominant than the dragons were.
Bluespark picked up his head as he heard footsteps. The sound of the footsteps were increasing in volume. Then a white ape with a black face, hands and feet, and with rusty looking armor came in front of Bluespark's cell. The ape was Ritur. He was twice Bluespark's size.
"So, Spark are you going to apologize to me for killing one of my healthy Hounds and gorging yourself to satisfy your glutinous nature?" The ape's voice was very dark and gruff sounding. Ritur stared at Bluespark with his deep red eyes.
Bluespark slowly got up into a sitting position and looked at him "You haven't fed me all day yesterday... What was I supposed to do? I had to eat one of your pigs." He spoke in a slightly rude tone, which he knew he wasn't supposed to do.
Ritur growls darkly at the little dragon "How dare you speak to your master like that!?... You disrespectful little reptile!"
Bluespark flinched at Ritur's yelling and crouched down on the floor in fear.
"Do you want to get another whipping!?" Ritur said in great anger.
"N-... No..." Bluespark said in fear.
"Then I suggest you keep that mouth of yours shut!... Do you understand me, you stupid waste of scales?!" Ritur said with a low growl.
Bluespark looked at him and quickly nods.
Ritur growled "Good..." He opened the cell door and came in. He took a key out of the pouch of his belt and unlocks the shackle from Bluespark's neck.
The heavy shackle drops onto Bluespark's paw. He jumps up "OW!" He yells and shakes his paw back and forth rapidly, in pain.
Ritur looks at him "Oh shut up, you whelpling!" He snaps at Bluespark.
Bluespark puts his paw down, a tear forms in his eye, that shackle hit him pretty good.
Ritur growled in disgust "I swear, you'd cry even if a flea were to bite you!" He looked away from Bluespark.
Bluespark blinked a few times and the tear was cleared. He looked up at Ritur wondering as well as fearing of what his slave master would do next.
Ritur sighs heavily and looks at Bluespark while narrowing his eyes "I have some work I got to do for King Gaul. You can go into the dragon chamber for a while. Follow me!" He walked out of the cell and down the corridor lined with cells.
Bluespark followed him.


Next chapter coming soon.

A pic of Bluespark: [User Posted Image]
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#2 Posted: 18:10:48 21/11/2010
Cool story.
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#3 Posted: 18:14:44 21/11/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks, you can tell that it was inspired by the Dragons living among apes RP.
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#4 Posted: 18:26:43 21/11/2010
^Yea.
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#5 Posted: 19:33:55 21/11/2010
Nice story! smilie
I feel sorry for Bluespark and the other slaves.
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#6 Posted: 20:04:48 21/11/2010
Good start smilie
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#7 Posted: 12:19:23 22/11/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 2,

Ritur walked out of the corridor of cells and stared to walk up a flight of stone steps. Bluespark followed, he was walking at a slow pace because of his back and his newly bruised paw. Ritur walked down a hallway that was lined with clumps of red and green gems.
Bluespark knew that red gems had the power to heal any dragon of any physical injury. All he needed to do was to break off a few small gems and his wounds would be healed.
Ritur continued walking, while Bluespark stopped at a large red gem cluster. He raised his uninjured paw and was prepared to strike it.
Ritur stops and turns around "BLUESPARK!"
The young dragon jumps at Ritur's voice. He lowers himself to the ground as he sees the ape's raging look.
Ritur walks towards the frightened dragon and stops a few inches away from him. Bluespark looks up at the angry ape, still low to the floor.
"That beating I gave you was a punishment!... And its wounds is part of the punishment! I decide whether or not you get healed, can you get that through your thick dragon skull!?" He poked Bluespark on the forehead when he asked his question and then he stopped, waiting for an answer from the trembling dragon.
"Y-... Yes Master Ritur... I understand..... Please don't hit me..." Bluespark covers his head with his wings, as if he knew Ritur would hit him. Bluespark then fell on his side as Ritur gave him a sharp kick in the side.
"That ought to teach you to try to order me around! Now stand up and follow me!" Ritur continued walking.
Bluespark slowly stood up, shook off the dust from his body, put his wings to his sides and followed the ape.
Bluespark's side was now bruised, he limped along as he followed Ritur.
Ritur stops by a round door with a stone carving of a dragon's head on it, the door opened. Ritur turns and looks at Bluespark "Go inside and stay there until I come back." He said in a stern voice.
Bluespark walked inside the room and the heavy stone door closed behind him.
There were three other dragons in the room as well. One was a fire dragoness named Sulphur, one was an ice dragoness named Icewind and one was an earth dragon named Earthquake. They were a few years older than Bluespark. Sulphur was fourteen, Icewind was twelve and Earthquake was thirteen.
The three dragons were asleep in their simple hay nests that were at the very back of the round room. Magic torches were the only thing lighting the room. Bluespark saw that the other dragons were asleep, he tried to walk quietly over to his own nest. As he walked past Sulphur she woke up. Sulphur picked her head up "Spark?"
Bluespark stopped walking, he turned his head to look at the red dragoness "Yes Sulphur?"
Sulphur got up "What happen to you?" She asked as she saw the wounds on his body.
Bluespark turned around "Mast-... I mean, that dumb, ugly ape Ritur had to beat me because I had to kill and eat one of his healthy pigs to save myself from starving." He sounded very irritated.
"Ritur didn't feed you?" Sulphur asked.
"Yeah... He didn't feed me for a day, and I was really hungry. I searched around for a sick or injured Death Hound to eat, but I just couldn't find one. So I had to kill and eat a healthy one." Bluespark looked down, sighed deeply and shook his head. He looked at Sulphur "When Ritur found out he put me in a cell, whipped me and left me there for the night." He spoke in a very angry tone.
Sulphur turned to her nest and started rummaging through it.
Bluespark watched her "What are you doing?" He asked.
"I keep a big red gem under some hay in my nest, just in case I have need of it." Sulphur spoke without looking at Bluespark and continued to rummage through the nest. She then grabbed a red gem with her jaws and turned to Bluespark, she put the large hunk of crystal at his feet.
Bluespark looked down at it "Sulphur are you sure you want me to have it?"
"Sure, you need it more than I do, and I can always get and stash more red gems." Sulphur said and smiled at the young dragon, then fixed up her nest as she laid down in it and fell asleep.
The red gem magically went into Bluespark and it was strong enough to heal his wounds. He sighed with relief as the pain in his body stopped and all his wounds disappeared. Bluespark started quietly walking to his own nest, when he got to it he laid down in it and tried to go to sleep.


Next Chapter coming today.


Sulphur: [User Posted Image]


Icewind: [User Posted Image]


Earthquake: [User Posted Image]
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#8 Posted: 14:17:34 23/11/2010
seems good
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Hereafter, the beginning of a tragedy must be burned into your eyes."
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#9 Posted: 21:38:06 23/11/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks,


Chapter 3,

Bluespark only got a few minutes of sleep when the stone door of the room opened, Ritur walked in "Wake up, you lazy creatures!" He yelled.
All four dragons woke up in shock, when they saw Ritur they all got up out of their nests.
"Let's go to the training room!" Ritur commanded.
The four dragons walked in a single file line out of the room. They walked down another hallway, Ritur following right behind them.
They all walked up a large flight of stairs and went through a doorway. They ended up near the top of the mountain, although they were still inside the mountain. They walked up to the edge of a large pit. There was a small crater in the middle of the pit, there were round green torches around the edge of the pit. There was a gaping hole in the ceiling.
Suddenly three more apes came towards them. The apes were the same size as Ritur, but one ape was orange, one was red and one was light brown. The three ape's faces had white on the side, blue near the middle of their face and a red strip right in the middle of their face.
The orange ape's name was Zedox Skyfire, he was Sulphur's slave master.
The light brown ape's name was Avodu Icetwister, he was Icewind's slave master.
The red ape's name was Tore Earthshooter, he was Earthquake's slave master.
Ritur greeted the apes with a military salute. They saluted back.
"So, Ritur how are we going to have these dragons train?" Asked Zedox.
"I was thinking to have them go into the pit and all fight one another." Ritur replied.
"All four of them at once?" Asked Avodu.
Ritur nodded.
"With or without their magic?" Asked Tore with a smirk.
"Hmmm... With... But not too much magic, we don't want to kill the filthy little dragons." Replied Ritur as he looked at the four dragons standing behind him, narrowing his eyes at them "What are you stupid dragons waiting for!? Get in that pit and spar!" Ritur growled at them "And make sure you use some of your magic, but not enough to kill!" He commanded.
All four dragons flew into the large pit, they landed in it. Two dragons stood on opposite side of the pit. Bluespark and Earthquake were facing each other, Icewind and Sulphur faced each other. They got into a fighting stance, crouching down and spreading out their wings and even barring their teeth a bit.


Next chapter coming soon.
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 03:15:42 18/06/2011 by torok
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#10 Posted: 22:08:49 23/11/2010
Good part smilie
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#11 Posted: 01:24:20 24/11/2010
Nice chapters.
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#12 Posted: 12:21:17 24/11/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks,

Chapter 4,

Icewind leaped at Sulphur and they began clawing and biting each other.
Earthquake rammed Bluespark with his horns, knocking him down. Bluespark stood and shook himself off. He saw that Earthquake was charging at him again. Bluespark jumped up right before Earthquake could ram him, Bluespark hit Earthquake in the back with his tail as the earth dragon charged past him.
Icewind was busy dodging small fire blasts that Sulphur was firing at her from a distance.
With his horns magically coated in solid rock Earthquake jumped up and rammed into Bluespark, knocking into the ground. Bluespark laid on the ground, not moving. Earthquake lands beside Bluespark and looks at him in shock "Oh no!... I... I killed him!" Earthquake yells, panicked.
Icewind and Sulphur run to Earthquake and the unconscious Bluespark.
"Earthquake, what happen?" Asked Icewind as she looked at Bluespark.
"I... I don't know!... I rammed into him while my horns were coated with earth, and now he's not moving!" Earthquake yelled panicking, with tears in his eyes.
Ritur jumps into the pit and walks over to the dragons "Are you idiots waiting for an invitation!? Continue sparring, I didn't say you can stop!" Ritur yells at them, he obviously knew that his slave was unconscious, but he didn't care.
Sulphur and Icewind run to the other side of the pit and continued sparring.
Earthquake, still thinking that he was a murderer, just stood where he was and looked down at Bluespark, his eyes were full of tears.
Suddenly Tore jumped down into the pit and walked over to Earthquake. He looked down at the weeping dragon with no sympathy "Why are you standing around there for!?" He snapped at Earthquake.
Earthquake looked up at Tore with tears in his eyes "I... I... I killed Bluespark, Master Tore..." He sobbed, looking down at Bluespark.
Ritur crouched down and put his finger on Bluespark's neck, feeling a strong pulse. He stood and looked down at Earthquake "Spark is fine, he's alive. You didn't kill him, you idiot." He spoke with his usual harsh and unsympathetic tone.
Tore looked at Earthquake with his eyes narrowed in anger "Yeah, you're not a murderer... Now get over there and fight those two dragonessess before I lash every inch on your body with a whip!!!" Tore shouted in anger.
Earthquake quickly ran over to Sulphur and Icewind, who were biting and clawing each other. Earthquake joined in on their sparring.


Next chapter coming soon.
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#13 Posted: 16:02:40 24/11/2010
Good part smilie
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Medic: NO!
smilie
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#14 Posted: 00:15:49 25/11/2010
Very good.
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#15 Posted: 06:29:28 02/12/2010
Nice chapters, sorry I haven't been on to reply lately.
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#16 Posted: 22:39:06 05/12/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 5,

Bluespark woke up, he was laying face down in some hay. He quickly picked up his head and shook some hay off of him. He blinked hard a few times to clear his blurry vision. He looked around, he was in the dragon chamber. Sulphur, Icewind and Earthquake were in the room as well, they ran over to him and stood around him.
"Are you ok?" Asked Earthquake.
"Yeah... I'm fine." Bluespark sat up in his nest. He looked at his friends "But something happen while I was knocked out..."
"What?" Asked Icewind.
"I saw a vision... Of the future, or maybe it was the present and future... I don't really know what it was about." Said Bluespark.
"Well Spark, what was it that you saw?" Asked Sulphur.
"Well, I saw an image of myself, but I was an adult. I was in the pit that the apes usually make us spar in, there was a beam of purple light coming down from the sky and hitting the middle of the room. I was standing on my hind legs and there were four dead apes around me. Those apes were our slave masters... You guys were there too, but you were still young, just like you are now, and you stood on the other side of the pit watching." Said Bluespark.
"Wow, weird vision." Said Icewind.
"Yeah, not really... I sometimes have dreams where I kill Tore." Said Earthquake.
Everyone looked at Earthquake, as if they couldn't believe what he just said.
Earthquake looked at his friends "Well don't we all?"
Everyone slowly nods.
Sulphur looks at Bluespark "Well that vision was maybe just your desire to be a threat to the apes and to get revenge."
Bluespark slowly nods "Yeah... Yeah you're right."
Suddenly the stone door opened and a large black ape came inside the room holding a dead Death Hound in its hand "Here's lunch and supper." He tossed the pig into the middle of the room, and the ape walked out of the room closing the door behind him.
The four dragons walked up to the carcass of the Death Hound, it was a small one.
Sulphur sighed "They're cutting back on our food rations again..."
"We should save this meat and eat it when we're mostly hungry." Said Icewind.
"Good idea. We should make this last until tomorrow at breakfast or lunch. Who knows when they'll feed us again?" Bluespark said.
His friends nodded in agreement.


Thanks for waiting, next chapter coming soon.
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#17 Posted: 02:07:35 06/12/2010
Nice job.
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#18 Posted: 05:08:02 06/12/2010
Yes, nice chapter.
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#19 Posted: 02:22:48 12/12/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 6,

The next day the four dragons woke up. The carcass of the small Death Hound was half eaten by the four dragons last night.
"Good morning guys. How did you sleep?" Asked Sulphur with a yawn.
"Not too good, it was a little colder last night and I was sleeping right below the window." Said Earthquake.
"We can trade nests, I don't mind the cold weather." Replied Icewind.
"Thanks." Said Earthquake as he smiled gratefully at her.
"Well I had a dream that was kind of like that vision I had when I was knocked out yesterday." Said Bluespark as he looked to his friends.
"Yeah, I don't blame you Spark. I dreamed that Tore was beating me and then I kill him... I wonder if it's really just a dream or a foretelling of the future." Earthquake pondered.
"I guess it's just a dream, because we can't go against our masters. They're more powerful than us." Replied Icewind.
"Yeah, but what if we could somehow take control?" Asked Earthquake.
"If we do we'll not only have to fight our masters, we'll have to fight the whole army of apes." Said Sulphur.
"Oh yeah..." Said Earthquake as he got out of his nest and shook some water that used to be snow off of him "I almost forgot that there was an army up here."
Bluespark didn't want to admit it to the others, but he somewhat believed his dream to be true, or rather he wished it would come true.
Suddenly the stone door to the room opened and Ritur was standing in the doorway "All of you follow me to the training room!" He ordered.
The four dragons all walked out of the room and walked through the hallway and up the steps leading to the training room. Ritur was following them "King Gaul and Master Malefor will be present in that training room today. They need you heaps of scales for some reason... Now if any of you show disrespect to either of them I will personally see to it that you are locked in a cell and tortured mercilessly for twenty four hours!" The ape threatened.
The dragons knew he was serious, so they'd better be respectful.
They all arrived at the same pit that they trained in yesterday.
"All of you get in!" Ritur commands.
The dragons all glided down into the pit. Ritur jumps into the pit with them. Zedox, Avodu and Tore came through a different doorway and they jumped into the pit as well. They walked over to Ritur and greeted him with a salute. Ritur saluted back.
"So, when's King Gaul supposed to get here?" Asked Ritur.
"We saw him on his golden Dreadwing accompanied by two guards also on Dreadwings. They flew right over us and are heading here. So we shouldn't have to wait for much longer." Said Avodu.
"Of course we don't know when Master Malefor will be among us. He comes when he pleases." Replied Zedox.


Next chapter coming next week. I'm going to be posting one chapter per week, I've gotten kinda lazy smilie
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#20 Posted: 03:06:04 12/12/2010
Good chapter.
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#21 Posted: 23:40:02 17/12/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks for waiting guys.


Chapter 7,

Suddenly three Dreadwings came hovering down. Two of them were black and the one in the middle was black and gold. The giant bats landed on the raised area around the pit. The apes on the black Dreadwings were large white apes, they looked like Ritur, but they were much larger. The apes had armor on them and they carried a large staff with a mace ball on it. The ball had purple electricity coming off of it. The larger ape on the golden Dreadwing was Gaul, he was dark yellow with green spots on his shoulders and back, he had large tufts of gray fur on his neck, chest, at the bottom on his shoulders and down the middle of his back. He had dark purple armor around his waist, covering his arms, covering his shoulders and a large helmet with huge hors on it. He had two huge swords on his back. His eyes were a dark brown color, his face was white, he had a little bit of blue on the sides of his upper jaw and a red strip going from his nose to almost in between his eyes, he had a large under bite, a few of his sharp teeth was protruding out of his mouth. He carried a staff with a glowing green gem on it.
Gaul got off of his Dreadwing and stepped to the edge of the pit, he looked down at the four apes and the four dragons.
The apes bowed in respect. The dragons did the same, because they didn't want to be punished for disrespecting the highest ape.
The four apes rose and so did the dragons.
Gaul leaps into the pit and walks over to the smaller apes. He looks down at them "So, these are the whelplings you've been training for all these years?" He glances over to the young dragons "Huh, they don't look like much, but surely our Master can find a use for them." He looked back at the apes.
"King Gaul, what exactly does The Master plan to do with these dragons?" Asked Ritur.
"I don't know, he didn't reveal his intentions. We'll just have to wait and see." Replied Gaul.
Suddenly a large beam of purple light came down from the sky and landed in the middle of the pit inside the crater. Gaul, the apes and the dragons looked at the beam. Suddenly the face of a dragon was seen in the beam, it was the face of Malefor.
Gaul bowed before this beam, and so did the apes. The dragons did the same.
Everyone stood. Then a dark voice came from the beam "Apes, bring the young dragons over in front of the beam so that I can see them for myself."
Gaul looks behind him at the four young dragons "You heard The Master, get up here!" He yells.
The four dragons step towards the beam and stand beside each other in front of the beam, they stare up at Malefor's face. Malefor's eyes peered down at them.
"Hmmm... The small blue lightning dragon is perfect..." Said Malefor as he smiled evilly at Bluespark.


Next chapter coming either next week, or sometime in early January... I'm sorry about the wait...
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#22 Posted: 01:28:31 18/12/2010
Great chapter! smilie

That's okay.
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#23 Posted: 15:23:50 18/12/2010
Amazing torok
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#24 Posted: 17:39:31 18/12/2010
Good chapters smilie
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#25 Posted: 01:49:03 13/01/2011
Awesome fanfic!
Can't wait till the next part comes out.
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#26 Posted: 04:37:11 14/01/2011
Very good.
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#27 Posted: 21:51:02 14/01/2011
When will you post the next chapter?
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#28 Posted: 22:18:14 14/01/2011 | Topic Creator
Soon enough.
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#29 Posted: 22:20:58 14/01/2011
Okay, can't wait.
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#30 Posted: 17:38:53 17/01/2011 | Topic Creator
Chapter 8,

"Him?" Ritur asked in shock as he stepped up to the beam "Please forgive me for saying so Master, but Bluespark is the weakest and the youngest. Surely you'll have a much better use for the red dragoness or the green dragon..." He looked up at the face of his master.
"His weakness is precisely why I want to use him. Chain him up and drop him into the small crater, and then I shall put my plan into action." Said Malefor as the purple beam shot back up into the sky and disappeared.
One of the large apes came up to Bluespark.
Bluespark backed away a bit as he saw the large ape. The ape was holding chains in his hand. He grabbed Bluespark and chained him, then Bluespark was dropped into the crater in the middle of the pit. Sulphur, Icewind and Earthquake stood where they were, watching helplessly.
Suddenly the purple beam of light came down onto Bluespark, the light was darker. The light caused Bluespark pain throughout his body. Bluespark screams in pain and struggles to get free of his chains. Suddenly Bluespark started to grow larger, as he grew the chains broke. His child voice turned into a deeper adult voice and his body was the size of a fully grown dragon. Bluespark suddenly jumps out of the beam, landing on the ground. His friends and the apes looked at him. Bluespark's body was slim and slightly muscular, he opened his eyes and groaned a bit letting out a low growling sound. He moved his wings a bit and stood up, he then realized that he wasn't the same. He then looked down at the apes and his friends. Bluespark couldn't believe his eyes, he was taller than them. The only ape that was almost as tall as Bluespark was Gaul. Bluespark looked at himself "I... I'm an adult..." He said in his new deeper tone.
Malefor's face appears in the beam "Correction, you're just in an adult's body and you have been given some common knowledge from me. But your transformation is not complete."
"What do you mean?" Bluespark asked as he looked at Malefor.
"You jumped out of the beam before I had a chance to change your heart and soul." Replied Malefor.
Ritur walked up to Bluespark and looked up at him "You heard The Master! Back into the beam!" Ritur commanded Bluespark, who was now six feet taller than him.
Bluespark looked down at the ape "Malefor's magic is evil, and it hurts me. I'm not going back in." Bluespark said with no fear.
"GET BACK IN THE BEAM!" Ritur claws Bluespark's paw.
Bluespark lifts his paw and clenches his teeth in pain.
Ritur laughs "You're still that weak little whelpling, aren't you?... Now, get back under that beam or I'll whip you!" Ritur ordered.


Next chapter coming whenever.
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#31 Posted: 18:34:08 17/01/2011
Uh oh..........................This looks bad.

Good chapter.
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#32 Posted: 19:37:15 17/01/2011
Oh eck
Good chapter
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#33 Posted: 21:16:28 17/01/2011
Nice chapter. And Bluespark has what happened to Cynder, right?
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#34 Posted: 21:30:26 17/01/2011 | Topic Creator
Yeah.
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#35 Posted: 21:54:32 17/01/2011
This story is very good. smilie
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#36 Posted: 00:24:51 31/01/2011 | Topic Creator
Sorry it's been so long since the last chapter. I've kinda been getting bored with this FanFic, I just can't commit to Fanfics anymore...

Chapter 9,

Bluespark looked at Ritur with fear at first, but then his fear turned to anger. A loud growl escaped his jaws as he opened them revealing large, sharp teeth. He slammed his paw down on Ritur. Only the ape's head was poking out from under Bluespark's large paw. Bluespark bent his neck to be face to face with the ape, he opened his jaws wider and a ferocious roar came out of his mouth. Bluespark barred his teeth at the ape and continued growling. He could feel Ritur's body trembling from under his paw. Bluespark narrowed his eyes "You don't control me any longer!!!" The bottom of Bluespark's paw shot a massive amount of lightning through Ritur's body. Ritur screams in pain and then he dies.
Shocked gasps come from both dragons and apes.
Bluespark stands up on his hind legs and lets out a roar of victory.
The apes back away from Bluespark.
The dragons stand where they are, gazing up at Bluespark amazed at what he had done.
"What are you cowards waiting for!? Get him!" Gaul yells at the apes.
Zedox, Adodu and Tore ran at Bluespark. The dragon turns his head towards them and fires lightning all over them. The three apes fall to the ground dead.
Gaul growls "Guards! Get him!"
The two large apes run at Bluespark and shot him with the purple electricity that came out of their staffs.
Bluespark falls on his side, but he gets back up. The apes try to pin him down. Bluespark's body became engulfed with lightning, bolts of lightning came off of his body. The apes screamed as they were electrocuted to death, and they fell off of Bluespark.
"Six down... And one to go..." Bluespark said as he looked at Gaul with a smirk on his face.
"So confident of yourself, aren't you dragon?" Said Gaul with one of his large swords in one hand and his staff in the other. He pointed his staff at Bluespark, a green beam of energy came out of the green gem on the staff. The energy hits Bluespark, he glows green for a second and then collapses on the ground. Gaul laughs "Stupid dragon was no match." He put his sword away and walks over to Bluespark.
Bluespark was knocked out.
Gaul looked at the three dragons "What are you dragons waiting for!? Drag this heap of scales back into the beam so that The Master can finish what he started!"
"No." Sulphur said with no fear as she narrows her eyes at Gaul "I'm not going to let Malefor do anything more to Spark." She spoke with a bold voice.
"Neither will I." Said Icewind.
"Nor will I." Said Earthquake.


Next chapter coming Lord knows when...
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#37 Posted: 21:43:07 27/03/2011
Good chapter
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#38 Posted: 22:37:20 27/03/2011 | Topic Creator
Chapter 10,

Gaul growls in extreme anger of the young dragons disobedience, he points his staff at them and the green beam shoots out. The three dragons dodge. Earthquake flies at Gaul and shoots an earth boulder at him. The boulder hits Gaul's staff, breaking it. The ape steps back and takes out both of his swords. Sulphur and Icewind take to the skies, both dragonesses fly at Gaul. Icewind shot several ice shards at Gaul. Gaul used his swords as shields to protect his face, even when the shards hit Gaul they did no damage because of his heavily armored body.
Sulphur flew at the apes back, which had no armor, she breathed a blast of fire on it.
Gaul screams in pain and shakes the flames off. Sulphur, Icewind and Earthquake fly above the ape.
"Earthquake, you try and disarm him of his swords. Icewind, you and I are attacking his exposed back." Said Sulphur.
Earthquake flies down at Gaul and shoots earth boulders at him. Gaul jumps back and dodges most of them, but his swords break at the impact of two earth boulders. He roars in frustration and throws his broken swords on the ground "Come on dragons! Is that all you've got!?" Gaul says in a mocking tone.
Earthquake lands on the ground and magically encases himself in a ball that was made out of solid rock. The large ball rolls forward and slams into Gaul with great force. The ape tries to push the ball back, but the ball slowly pushes him back. Gaul's claws were scraping against the ground as he tries to overpower the boulder.
Suddenly Sulphur and Icewind flew at his back. Sulphur shot fire at Gaul, and Icewind shot ice shards.
The fire burned his back while the ice shards pierced his flesh.
Gaul yells out in pain and throws the boulder aside. He leaps into the air and lands on his Dread Wing "This isn't over, dragons!" The Dread Wing jumps into the air and flies out of the mountain.
Sulphur and Icewind land in the pit and Earthquake's magic boulder disappears.
"Let the ape run. We've got bigger things to worry about." Sulphur said as she looked at Bluespark, who was still knocked out.
The three dragons walked over to Bluespark. They saw he was breathing.
"Earthquake, you go and get some green gems for Bluespark. Icewind, you get some red gems for him." Said Sulphur.
Icewind flew out of the large room.
"Why do I have to bring green gems?" Asked Earthquake.
"When the beam from Gaul's staff hit Bluespark it took away his magic." Replied Sulphur.
"How do you know that?" Said Earthquake.
"Zedox told me." Said Sulphur.
"Oh, alright, I'll go get the green gems." Earthquake flew out of the room.
Moments later, Icewind returned to the room, she had a large chunk of red crystal in her jaws. She held the Crystal up to Bluespark. The crystal went into Bluespark and healed him of the wounds from when the electricity hit him.
Then Earthquake came back and landed beside Bluespark, he had a cunck of green crystal in his jaws. Earthquake held the crystal up to Bluespark. The crystal went into Bluespark.
A minute passed and Bluespark did not wake up. Sulphur looked at Icewind "Can you lightly breathe ice on his face?"
"Yes." Icewind walked over to Bluespark's head and lightly breathed ice on his face. The ice melted and Bluespark opened his eyes, a groan came from him as he picked up his head and shook the water off. He looked at his friends "What happen?"
"Gaul blasted you with the magic from his staff, and you were knocked out." Replied Sulphur.
"We fought him and he had to retreat." Said Earthquake.
"Are you ok?" Asked Icewind.
"Yeah." Bluespark got up "We have to leave, Malefor was planning to use me for something evil and we can't stay here."


Next chapter coming, Lord knows when...
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#39 Posted: 06:38:01 28/03/2011
Good chapter
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#40 Posted: 07:19:52 29/03/2011
Nice, can't wait to read more! smilie
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#41 Posted: 14:05:54 10/04/2011 | Topic Creator
Chapter 11,


"Not just yet! You four aren't going anywhere!" Said the voice of Malefor from the beam of purple light that was still glowing brightly in the middle of the room.
Apes came into the room out of the many doorways leading into the room. They jumped into the pit and surrounded the four dragons.
The dragons took a battle stance. They heard the flapping of many wings above them. There were Dreadwings flying above them trying to block off escape routes. Bluespark looked up "Follow my lead!" His body was suddenly engulfed in blue lightning. He launched himself into the air and rammed into some Dreadwings, electrocuting them to death. Bluespark flew out of the mountain through the large hole at the mountain's peek.
The other three dragons were quick to follow. It was snowing heavily and the wind was picking up as the dragons were flying against it.
"We have to get away from this mountain as quickly as possible!" Bluespark had to yell to the others because of the howl of the chilled air.
The other three dragons were flying beside him, Earthquake looked at him "Yeah, but we got to make sure they don't catch us!" Earthquake yelled as he looked behind him to see Dreadwings with fully armored ape riders following them.
Bluespark looked back and saw the Dreadwings "We have to take care of them!" He yelled as he turned around in mid air and flew at the Dreadwings.
Sulphur, Earthquake and Icewind followed Bluespark.
They all shot their elements at the Dreadwings from a distance.
The Dreadwings were either badly injured or killed in one shot.
The Dreadwings retreated, some without their ape riders.
"Don't let them go back to the mountain or they might get backup!" Yelled Bluespark as he flew towards the Dreadwings. The other dragons followed him. Icewind shoots several ice spikes at the Dreadwings, hitting a few with the spikes. One of the Dreadwings plummeted to the ground. The others were wounded.
Sulphur shot fireballs at the Dreadwings, the fireballs burned two Dreadwings to death.
The two remaining Dreadwings kept flying away, they were severely wounded.
Earthquake shot several earth boulders at them, the Dreadwings plummeted to the ground, dead.
"Ok, they're all dead. Let's go..." Said Bluespark as he turned in mid air and flew in the opposite direction of the mountain.
Sulphur, Icewind and Earthquake followed beside Bluespark.
"So, where are we to go?" Asked Sulphur.
Bluespark looked at her "I don't know... We'll see..."
The snow and the cold wind began to die down as they flew farther away from the mountain. They flew through a thick mass of clouds and fog, they flew downwards. It was warmer as they flew down. They saw a large forest of nothing but dead trees, the path that went through the forest was rocky and dusty, no grass or vegetation was present.
"Whoa, look at all those dead trees." Said Earthquake as he looked down at the forest.
"Malefor did this." Said Bluespark as he looked down at the forest.
"How?" Asked Earthquake as he looked at Bluespark.
"There is darkness on and around the mountain, and its affected this forest." Replied Bluespark.
"Wait, how do you know?" Asked Earthquake questionably.
"Malefor said that he's given me some of his knowledge. Apparently the effects of dark magic is part of the knowledge he's given me." Replied Bluespark.


Next chapter coming Lord knows when.
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#42 Posted: 18:20:11 13/04/2011
looks good
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#43 Posted: 20:23:45 13/04/2011
Cool! Awesome!
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#44 Posted: 17:10:11 14/04/2011
Good chapter
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#45 Posted: 21:21:52 14/04/2011 | Topic Creator
Thanks,


Chapter 12,

They kept flying for one hour straight. Bluespark was at the front and the others were flying behind him, they were chatting about what they were going to do now that they were free and possibly what they'll find. Bluespark just kept silent and was focused on the rocky, dry, canyon-like landscape they had been flying above for almost an hour now. Bluespark was getting tiered from the flying and he was thirsty from the dry climate they were now in "Guys, I think we should rest for a while." Without waiting for the approval of his friends Bluespark flew downwards towards a large gorge. His friends followed him. Bluespark landed in the middle of the gorge, he heard his friends land behind him. He looked around, the gorge was desolate, there was just rocky ground with a layer of sand over it. There were steep, jagged cliffs around them. The sun was bright and it shown on the four dragons. It seemed like they'll have to get used to the heat now, since they were forced to live in that dark, snowy mountain for most of their lives, nevertheless the change in temperature was a positive one. Bluespark turned his head and looked at the others "We must find a suitable place to rest, because staying out in this scalding heat won't help us." He told them as he started walking. They followed him through the canyon. It was high noon now and the heat of the sun was baring down on them. Earthquake looked at Icewind, who was walking behind him "Hey Ice, can can you breathe some ice on my back and wings? I think I'm cooking in this heat."
"Oh, first you complain about it being too cold and now it's too hot?" Icewind said.
"Uh, yeah... Please... I'm not used to this type of heat." Earthquake said.
Icewind breathed a stream of ice on Earthquake's back.
Earthquake breathed a sigh of relief as the ice hit him and melted into cool water "Oh... That feels nice... Thank you..." Earthquake said.
"You're welcome." Icewind replied. She looked at Sulphur who was walking beside Bluespark. Being smart Sulphur was walking under Bluespark's wing as his large wings were creating a small bit of shade. Earthquake and Icewind decided to copy Sulphur and sought refuge under the lightning dragon's wings.
Bluespark realized what they were doing and extended his wings a bit to create a bit more shade "Better?" He asked.
"Yes." Replied his friends.
After five minutes of walking along the dry, sandy, hot gorge they came to a lagre cliff. They stopped as they heard noise. "Wait here." Said Bluespark as he went towards the edge of the cliff. He looked down and gasped at what he saw, down in a deeper just as wide gorge he saw dragons of all different colors. All of them adults and elders. Most of them males. What really shocked Bluespark was what they were doing. They were digging up dark gems, putting them into large metal containers and a Dread Wing would carry the container away from the gorge. The dragon's legs were shackled to allow limited movement, their wings were pinned together at the base by strong shackles.
Apes, one hundred of them were overseeing about fifty dragons, they beat any dragon that wasn't working efficiently enough with a whip.
Bluespark looked back at his friends "Come here, look down there." He whispered.
The three dragons walked over and peered down, they all gasped at what they saw.


Next chapter coming Lord knows when.
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#46 Posted: 02:11:34 15/04/2011
*gasp*
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#47 Posted: 08:38:07 15/04/2011
Good chapter
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#48 Posted: 05:49:52 18/04/2011
This is getting very good. smilie
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#49 Posted: 19:04:12 18/04/2011 | Topic Creator
Thanks, the next chapter is coming after I finish making a video for the Lord. He said I can't work on my story until after I finish the video.
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#50 Posted: 21:02:02 18/04/2011
Okay, what's the vid about?
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