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Malefor's Lament [CLOSED]
Dark_Spyro999 Emerald Sparx Gems: 4713
#1 Posted: 01:46:26 12/11/2010 | Topic Creator
I posted this some where else, but it didn't get much traffic, so I hope more people will notice it here.

I am the silent force. I am the motive of the darkness.
I dwell in silence. I am timeless and eternal. I rend the light.
To cease great sorrow and unjustifiable conviction
To seek the truth of greater power
Unfair in perception are the powers that be
A force that shall deliver reckoning
I dwell in a Soul's Despair
Seeking peace everlasting
Stay in sorrow, loneliness, and grief
Wondering how to piece the shattered shards back to one
In deeds unspoken
Made pacts with the silence
To recieve my justice
And hallow the ground so uncaring....


I wrote this thinking about Malefor and his view of everything. It's kind of a poem...thing. I might add more later.
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I is ded
Darby Platinum Sparx Gems: 5738
#2 Posted: 01:48:39 12/11/2010
That's really good, it really sounds.. Malefor-ish smilie
You've got talent smilie
Dark_Spyro999 Emerald Sparx Gems: 4713
#3 Posted: 02:04:06 12/11/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks! I tried to make it sound...Malefor-ish....smiliesmiliesmilie
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I is ded
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878
#4 Posted: 02:15:15 12/11/2010
that's very good. i like it. it makes Malefor sound better than he actually was in Dotd.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
Paplok Yellow Sparx Gems: 1754
#5 Posted: 13:51:15 12/11/2010
If you want to make it Maleforish, change it to:
MHhmhmhmhmhmiasdcmhmhmhmhmhmhhmmbuahahhahahahmmmgmmhmhmhmhmwrrrrgrrrrrmhmhmhmhm!! Buahahhahaha!
That is even more Maleforish smilie
Omikron Dragon Gold Sparx Gems: 2227
#6 Posted: 16:03:15 12/11/2010
Quote: Paplok
If you want to make it Maleforish, change it to:
MHhmhmhmhmhmiasdcmhmhmhmhmhmhhmmbuahahhahahahmmmgmmhmhmhmhmwrrrrgrrrrrmhmhmhmhm!! Buahahhahaha!
That is even more Maleforish smilie


Well he will sound something like this then


I'm sory... I couldn't resist myself.
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"Life is one long process of getting tired."- Samuel Butler
ignitusforever Ripto Gems: 1788
#7 Posted: 16:57:32 12/11/2010
It's really good. If that were the beggining of a novel, it would certainly have the best amount of suspence. smilie
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878
#8 Posted: 01:42:46 13/11/2010
yeah, that does sound like a great beginning for a novel about Malefor.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
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