Well i was bored one sunday evining when i came up with this tale of a dazzling dragon Sytenia and now we start Sytenias story because shes ot just an apprentice hope you enjoy reading this little fan-fic of mine.
Sincerly the miss-spelling Rayquaz : )
Chapter One : Lost In The Dead Of War
Sytenia a teenager or a teen as they call it nowdays flew home with a grim look on her triangular shaped face.Rain pelted down on her small wings making it uncomtable to fly,her eyes stung wich made it hard to see with her purple-ish eyes She finally was home
Tangetta her mother stared at her as a gash on Sytenia's side bled violently.
'Sytenia you need to stop getting into fights with other dragons of your age'
Tangettas eyes where filled with worry Sytenia was always getting into fights ever since that day of grief when her father and her best friend had died in war against the beastly wyverns that were small but powerful inside and they had proved that with there teeth and claws.
Profiles:
Name: Sytenia
Age: 16 in human years
Description: a dark grey dragon black marking on snout and neck
Midnight Sytena: blue markings instead of black pics will be uploaded later : ).
darkSpyro - Spyro and Skylanders Forum > Fandom > Fan Fiction > Sytenia Not Just An Apprentice (Read it for heavans sake)
Page 1 of 1
arceustheprime Ripto Gems: 5362 |
#1 Posted: 06:53:53 07/11/2010 | Topic Creator
|
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 07:51:45 08/11/2010 by arceustheprime
|
arceustheprime Ripto Gems: 5362 |
#2 Posted: 06:59:23 07/11/2010 | Topic Creator
Sorry for double posting but should i post chapter 2 now?.
|
Cynder134 Gold Sparx Gems: 2061 |
#3 Posted: 07:15:11 10/11/2010
yes!!!
---
Why am I back |
arceustheprime Ripto Gems: 5362 |
#4 Posted: 08:37:09 10/11/2010 | Topic Creator
ok i will post soon
|
cynder2000 Gold Sparx Gems: 2277 |
#5 Posted: 23:24:53 13/11/2010
Pretty good! <3
---
(Avatar made by CinderLover!) "In a dog-eat-dog world, we lose part of our humanity." I'm still here, but I'm mainly invisible... |
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6158 |
#6 Posted: 20:19:41 17/11/2010
Nice.
|
arceustheprime Ripto Gems: 5362 |
#7 Posted: 08:04:52 29/11/2010 | Topic Creator
Ok finally can be bothered to post chapter 2
Chapter 2: The Death it was a normal day but Sytenia felt something was going to happen something that would change her inside. The young dragoness could smell blood in alarm she darted out of her cave and saw to her horror her mother lying on her side a gash in her side Sytenia's vision blurred as tears dazzed her eyes.Sytenia stepped back she had never cried before even as a hatchling she had always been a cold hearted freak to anyone around her. Wywing felt alone. Her only friend Sytenia was not with her Wywing was getting worried she shook her cream coloured wings and leaped.She battered the air around her with powerful strokes of her wings she flew down with thud and looked at Sytenia then looked at the ground 'yo you you killed her!' Sytenia glanced at Wywing. Was it possible did she kill her own mother......no i couldn't have....no. 'YOU KILLED HER YOU FREAK!!!' Wywing screached she didn't come any closer Wywing was frozen in horror. Sytenia stared at her mother and waited for Wywing to call on the guardians of histrof city. |
arceustheprime Ripto Gems: 5362 |
#8 Posted: 01:50:19 05/12/2010 | Topic Creator
I really couldn't think of a name for the city also i was kind rushed so the grammer and some the story is a bit...wierd anyway........so hopefully chapter three will be better there will also be a VERY BIG twist so big i will post two chapters today!.
Chapter 3:Leaf 'You will be executed on the afternoon of friday 6AM tommorow' the guardian called out. Sytenia yelled out in protest but realised nothing would save her now. Leaf looked at Wywing with a cold gaze. 'THIS IS YOUR FAULT!!! SHE DOSN"T DESERVE TO DIE!!' 'SHE MURDED HER OWN MOTHER!!' 'NO SHE WOULDN"T YOU LIER'. Wywing looked up at the sky the stares shone brightly with regret Wywing folded her wings and walked away. Leaf stared at her in disbelief and flew up in the night sky but has he lifted a shrill scream sounded. 'Wywing?' . He crept to the spot he had been before and there was Wywing. Dead. |
Cynder134 Gold Sparx Gems: 2061 |
#9 Posted: 07:50:14 09/12/2010
ZOMFG she's dead
---
Why am I back |
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6158 |
#10 Posted: 08:22:02 09/12/2010
Nice story.
|
Page 1 of 1
Please login or register a forum account to post a message.