ok, this is going to be the one fan fic that I've ever made that I actual Plan to keep alive, for those of you who know about my fan charictor Ice shard, you know she's a slightly purple dragonness, who only knows Ice powers. But, she wasn't born that way, so now, I tell the untold story of Ice Shard, a dragoness born to destroy.....
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Chapter 1, It begins:
Dragons from all around the worlds and beyond gathered to dragon city, for the anual feistival.They all gathered there for one purpuse: to find their mate and gather their eggs with the other dragons eggs, so that more dragons could be born.
Eliza walked beside her mate Zap, their tails intwined and their eyes sparkled with joy." oh, I can't wait for our lil' babies to be born! how many eggs do you think we'll have?" Eliza asked, her soft voice filled with joy.
"not shure dear, I guess we'll find out when the time comes." Zap replied with a chuckle.
Later that evening, Zap set off to get some food, while Eliza joined the other dragoness' in the egg room. five minites later, there was an ear splitting scream. Frantic, Zap rushed to the scream, reconizing it as his beloved mate Eliza's voice. when he got to the room, he saw her. In her nest, were 6 eggs. but there was something wrong. The final egg, was black as the night sky. The elders rushed to the sene, staring at the egg in shock.
" my egg, my poor lil' egg.... its dark!" Eliza said, her voice weak, and her body trembled in fear.
the elders talked to eachother for a moment, then Volteer spoke up.
"the fate of the egg is undecided. for all we know, it could just be a normal egg. for now we must wait. but if it becomes a hatchling, and is evil, I'm afraid we'll have to use a seal, and send it away" he said, his voice firm yet understanding.
Eliza sobbed, huddling her eggs. "its going to be ok" Zap whispered softly. "its going to be ok"
5 months later...
slowly, the eggs ave all the dragons started hatching one by one, little hatchling taking their first steps into the world. Elize waited, first, her blue egg hatched, and a small blue dragon came out. next, came a light pink egg, from which a pink dragoness egerly came out. a few minites later, her green egg hatched, and a forest green dragon came out. next was a yellow egg, and a yellow with blue lighting bolts dragon came out. then came the 5th egg, and an orange dragoness poped up from the shell of her egg. Then finaly, all that was left was the black egg. Slowly, it wiggled. The family was hushed. slowly, the egg cracked, and up from it came a small dragoness. The who room, including the elders gasped. The dragoness was magenta colored, but her eyes were red, her horns and tail spikes blood red. her claws shined white, her belly & wing flaps were dark orange. part of her wing was made of bone, that clearly showed. The lil' dragon looked up at Volteer, and sensed his shock and fear of her. Instinctivly, she hissed at him, causing him to jump back.
"quick, the seal!" Volteer shouted to Terrador. Terrador tossed him the book, And Volteer read off the ancient words. The dragoness hatchling screached, the red horn on her forehead dissapering, and instead a white dimond shape took its place. Her scales turned slightly purple, ehr red horns turned white, her red eyes became blue, her red tail spikes became small and white. the bones on her wings dissapered, her belly and wing flaps turned violet. the flame mark on her cheek turned into small, yellow diamond shapes. Exausted, she collapesd, fading unconciousness.
Zap looked to Eliza, who was crying. "my poor baby! she's hurt!"
Zap nuzzled her. "Its ok" he said softly. He turned, seeing volteer suddenly pick up the hatchling. "wait, where are you taking her!?!" he demanded.
Volteer turned to him, breathing in a sigh. "I'm sorry, but being here puts both her, you, and all the rest of us in danger. She shall be taken to a small dragon family that has wanted a hatchling of their own anyway. I can't tell you where they live. I'm sorry, but I'm afrain you cannot see you hatchling ever again". and with that, he and the rest of the elders flew off, to the Vally of avalar, but Zap and the others didn't know that. A few hours later, he arrived, where a adult, pink dragoness was waiting. He droped the hatchling gently in front of her.
"remember, she is not to have contact with anyone in dragon city, nor go there, Dardra"
"yes I understand" Dardra nodded, looking at the little hatchling that layed there. she bent down to the hatchling's head, and softly whispered, "I think I'll call you Ice Shard". As the elders flew back to dragon city, Dardra picked Ice Shard up, and carried her into the cave, where her family was waiting...
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how does it sound so far?
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#2 Posted: 01:53:26 18/10/2010
i like it!
just wondering, is this going to have sad parts in it? x.x
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#3 Posted: 01:53:46 18/10/2010 | Topic Creator
maby........
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#4 Posted: 01:55:13 18/10/2010
okay, just wondering.
(i'm wierd)
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#5 Posted: 01:56:51 18/10/2010 | Topic Creator
lolz.... hmm, should I post the next chapter now or later?
looking back at chapter one, i realize: I realy need a spell check
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#6 Posted: 01:58:47 18/10/2010 | Topic Creator
thanks ^-^
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#7 Posted: 01:58:47 18/10/2010
now!
and, is this Ice Shard's official story? (since the last one was pretty much Star's story in ice shard's point of view)
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#8 Posted: 01:59:24 18/10/2010 | Topic Creator
yes, this will include every detail of her that not even you know
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#9 Posted: 02:00:22 18/10/2010
yay! official story! :3
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#10 Posted: 02:12:40 18/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 2: normal!?!
6 years later..... Ice shard yawned, she was now practly allmost a teen. her claws, horns, and wings had grown longer/bigger, and she was much different that the little evil hatchling she originaly was. of corse, she had no Idea of that past, for it was long forgoten. Ice Shard stretched her wings. Suddenly, she was tackled from behind. "got you!" Star laughed, standing up. Ice Shard laughed along. She remembered meeting Star for the first time, when she'd been first learning to fly. They were friends ever since. suddenly Zeus, Ice Shard's brother padded up to them. "mom says its time to eat" He said dully, turning around and walking off. Ice Shard waved goodbye to Star, running back to her cave home. she sat at her nest, right beside her dad, mom, brother, and one sister. Ice Shard yawned, eating her fish. everything seemed normal. Till of corse, a lightning bolt struck the cave. Imediatly, the family stood up, everyone rushed out of the cave. Zeus was about to get out, but his large tail got caught beneath a falling rock. Ice Shard rushed to him, trying to figure out what to do. The cave ceiling shook, completly breaking. Ice Shard closed her eyes tight, expecting impact. She felt nothing. Slowly, she opened her eyes, and gasped. Just above her and her brother, was a thick sheild of Ice. "woa" Ice Shard whispered, shaking her head. Quickly, she smashed the rock with her tail, and Zeus ran out. Ice Shard followed, turning back to look at the sheild of Ice.
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#11 Posted: 02:29:33 18/10/2010
^dangit, you stole what i was going to say!
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#12 Posted: 03:00:20 18/10/2010
awesome!!!
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#13 Posted: 19:31:30 18/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 3: A Case ocwardness, and I become trainer!?!
Ice Shard yawned, standing up. She looked around, and realized with a jolt that Star wasn't around. She searched everywhere, but found nothing. quickly, she rushed to different lands, til' she reached one called dragon city. Her eyes went wide, there were so many dragons!! Several dragons turned to look at her, then returned to what ever they were doing. Slowly as she walked, She noticed a purple dragon, a Black dragoness, and a yellow dragonfly sitting be eachother. She thought it was odd, that there was olny one purple dragon she had seen so far. Shaking off the thought, she headed the main point, where there were some old dragons. Quickly she ran to them. They turned, staring at her with confusion, not reconizing the dragoness standing before them. Politly, she diped her head. "excuse me, have you seen my friend? She's a blue dragoness, and um her name is Star, she's a little taller than me. have you seen her?" Ice Shard asked. The dragon elders shook their heads. "sorry, we do not know of any blue dragoness' named Star" "oh, I'm sorry to bother you then, I'll be on my way" Ice Shard replied, turning to exit. But suddenly, a gremblin swooped down and tackled her. The dragons in the clearing turned their heads, seeing gremblins rush down from the sky. The purple dragon and his friend stood up to fight, but Suddenly something happened. Ice Shard closed her eyes, being lifted in the air. She let out an Ice fury. When the mist cleared, the elders gasped in shock. Every single one of the gremblins were frozen in ice, and the ice reached so high into the sky you couldn't see the top. A yellow elder steped forward. "I am volteer, electricity gaurdian. We the elders have decided, we would like you to stay at the temple, to train other dragons the power of ice. do you except?" Ice Shard thought for a moment. if I'm ever going to find her, I'll have to master my skills, that way I can keep her from harms way... "I except" She declared. "very well" Volteer said with a chuckle. "oh by the way, young dragoness, tell us your name" "Ice Shard" She replied with a smile. later that day, the whole city held a celibration, for the welcoming of the new ice trainer. The ice tower had been safly removed, and the gremblins inside destroyed. Ice Shard sat by herself looking at the sky. suddenly, Ice Shard saw a dragoness walk by. She stoped, looking at Ice Shard. Her eyes were cold, filled with unimaginalble hatred. The dragoness moved on, as if the stare down had never happened. Ice Shard blinked. "what was that about?" she wondered
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#14 Posted: 22:04:40 18/10/2010
very intresting. great story. please continue.
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#15 Posted: 18:07:16 19/10/2010
nice.
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#16 Posted: 01:28:34 03/11/2010 | Topic Creator
hmm *thinks up next chapter*
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#17 Posted: 18:59:40 03/11/2010
i like it.
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#18 Posted: 02:30:32 05/11/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 4: stress!?
Ice Shard yawned. she had been training dragons for hours! moaning, from an exausting,painful headache, she decided to walk through the woods, to catch up on some peice and quiet. the sky was dimmed, light and dark all at once. the trees glowed in the rays of the sunlight. grass blew in the gentle breese, all was perfect. Ice Shard sighed in relief, stretching her wings in the last remaining rays of the sun. Suddenly, she heard rustling in the bushes behind her, snapping her head twards the noise, she saw a young blue ice dragon, about her age. "hey!"the dragonsaid casualy, causing Ice shard to narrow her eyes in suspicion. unfaised, he went on. "I'm Chill, who are you?" "Ice Shard" she replied, still suspicious. "ok" He replied, running off. "idiot" she mumbled, heading back to dragon city. when she reached the gates, she saw the dragoness she had seen the other day, and she looked angry. suddenly, without warning, she dragoness struck Ice Shard across the face, but with her claws in. unknown to both dragonesses, Chill was watching in the bushes, seeing what would happen. Ice Shard stumbled back, her head snapped backwards twards her wings, as if in a silent wail. Her head snapped back up, and the other dragoness gasped in shock. Ice shard's seel had slightly broke. the red horn sprouted from her forehead, her horns grew a bit,her eyes turned red, and the marking on her cheeks grew larger. She let her claws out and slamed her paw across the other dragoness's face. In the distance, Chill gasped in shock. "got to report this to master" he whispered, taking off away from the city. The fight was over in less that five seconds. the dragoness layed sprawled on the dirt, allmost dead. Ice Shard grasped her within' her powerful jaws, and flung her far away from dragon city. She cleaned up the blood, then with out warning, passed out. Ice Shard opened her eyes, back to normal. There in front of her, was an elder. "looks like you passed out!" he chuckled, unaware of the crime that had just been commited. "oh no" Ice Shard muddered, running to her room within' dragon city.
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#19 Posted: 02:48:35 05/11/2010
remember the picture?
Ice shard: chill: O.O'
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yes lol, in fact, I'll post the pictures later
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#21 Posted: 02:49:44 05/11/2010
YES! *punches the air*
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#22 Posted: 02:50:51 05/11/2010 | Topic Creator
lol!!!!
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#23 Posted: 02:51:33 05/11/2010
but you better hurry, my mom might make me get off at 8:00 today.
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#24 Posted: 02:52:59 05/11/2010 | Topic Creator
why????
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#25 Posted: 02:55:11 05/11/2010
i have to get up early tommarow.
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#26 Posted: 03:20:12 05/11/2010 | Topic Creator
why????
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#27 Posted: 03:20:54 05/11/2010
my parents have to go to work early
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#28 Posted: 03:21:31 05/11/2010 | Topic Creator
I see......
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#29 Posted: 20:15:59 21/11/2010 | Topic Creator
srry for double post but ANNOUNSMENT:
-next chapter coming soon -Q: do you guys want me to post some pics i made for this story?
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#30 Posted: 01:39:46 22/11/2010
yay
and YES! (especially post that one where Chill is staring O.O' )
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#31 Posted: 01:41:49 22/11/2010 | Topic Creator
ok (lol) *goes to find pic's*
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#32 Posted: 02:02:21 22/11/2010
yay! can't wait!
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#33 Posted: 02:03:58 22/11/2010 | Topic Creator
*curses* i cant find it! i'll have to look again later
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#34 Posted: 02:05:32 22/11/2010
i have a stupid song stuck in my head. >.<
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#35 Posted: 03:20:42 27/11/2010 | Topic Creator
ah i got glorious inspiration!!!
Chapter 5: Chill's point of view. Chill flew home, thoughts of the fight buzzing in his head. He landed in a high up cave, and started walking. Grubblins stared at him from all sides, but he was used to it. He aproached the throne int he center and nelt down. "forgive me for my sudden intrudion master, but I had to tell you. theres a dragoness, who not only apperes to have a seal, but has a dark, evil side!" "hmm? and who might this by? what does this dragoness look like?" a dark voice asked. "It's hard to explain...." Chill replied, his voice trailed off and he got a far away look in his eyes. the darkleader took note of this, a small, devious grin on his face. "very well, I shall look in the magic crystal" He replied, calling for his gremblen mage. the mage sprinked dust around the crystal, and tapped it with a small stick with a emerald handle. slowly the crystal began to glow. the Leader thought long and hard then finaly said "show me the cursed dragoness!" For a moment, the crystal did nothing. Then a light burned from the crystal, and a picture of Ice Shard curled up in sleep showed in the crystal's glow. Then suddenly, the crystal flashed, and the Picture of Ice Shard sleeping turned to a picture of Dark Ice Shard sleeping. The leader smiled, an evil look in his eyes. but there was somthing else there too, Chill just couldn't figure it out. "Chill!" his master prompted, shaking Chill out of his thoughts. "I want you to go back to Dragon City, and keep an eye on this Dragoness. Also, look for weaknesses in the city!" He boomed then stomped off. Chill stood his ground for a second longer, then did as he was told. He jumped up in the air and flew off to Dragon City.
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#36 Posted: 06:16:59 27/11/2010 | Topic Creator
ZOMG! look, chibi fan fiction charictors! :
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#37 Posted: 01:51:26 30/11/2010
gah! why is Chill working for a creepy dragon?! Dx
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#38 Posted: 02:01:29 30/11/2010 | Topic Creator
OOC: cuz he rocks like dat!
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#39 Posted: 02:24:38 30/11/2010
i'm going to make a funny picture with Dane in it
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#40 Posted: 02:25:16 30/11/2010 | Topic Creator
OOC: awesome!
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#41 Posted: 02:26:21 30/11/2010
it's going to be funny. Star and Ice Shard are going to be staring at him O.O'
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#42 Posted: 02:30:42 30/11/2010 | Topic Creator
OOC: lol i will post next chap soon
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#43 Posted: 02:32:44 30/11/2010
yayz!
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#44 Posted: 02:39:36 30/11/2010 | Topic Creator
OOC:yayz!
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