darkSpyro

ok guys a while ago i wrote a story called the Dynasty of warfang, anway it was poorly written and looking at it i knew i could do waaaay better. so i have decided to re write it, it will contain the same basic plotline but i will make changes, dont bother reading the old version, it was written that badly.

I will soon write the first section to the story. it has some elements from my other story in it but they will be explained into this one so i wouldnt bother reading the Luna fanfics.

I looked over the city. Excuse me, my city, my kingdom. Warfang, the center of the dragon kingdom stood beautifully around a landscape troubled by war. the wall currently is strong enough to keep the rebels out. But by looking at it you wouldnt know the terrible history it has faced. I shudder to think what it would be to be a dragon during Warfang's lowest moments. currently the sun is slowly rising up behind the tallest spire of the center of the town, a memorial to those who have died during wars past and present, constructed almost 500 years ago. I stand from the balcony of my palace, i have just been named queen of the dragons, and i pray to the angels that i make the right choices, the rebels have been growing in strength. funny, the greatest wars and battles have been caused by other dragons and no other creatures. I focus my eyes back to the rising sun, it has come to symbolize new life and i allow the sun's rays to fill me with strength, i know i will need it for the next few months of my reign. I notice the merchants coming threw the the center of town by the spire, showing off their goods they have recieved all around the world. I also know that the great library probaly has scholars that are searching its halls now, either looking up the history of my dynasty or the greatest achievements of dragon kind. A subtle feeling of tranquilty came into my heart as a realized that today would be another normal day, perhaps i will make today the strategy meeting, and finally Warfang can go on the offensive.The sun finally went into my eyes and started to blind me so i turned around and went back into the royal palace. I looked into my mirror, my orange eyes started back. I didn't look like a queen. I still looked like a kid. A kid way over her head.

oh, cool. your re-writing this.

Quote: Cynder09

oh, cool. your re-writing this.

yeash, cause it utterly sucked before, now im making it slightly better

ok then. xD

Quote: Cynder09

ok then. xD

wait whts your fanfics called again? not fireflight, the spin offs.

As i started to prepare for today's events i looked at myself in the mirror. I was a dark orange color, almost like the twilight but my eyes were purple, something people were very envious of. My horns looked as though they were made of gold and my claws like diamonds. I was considered to be very beautiful among my kingdom. But i didnt think so, i always hated my horns and my skin, i always wanted to be a more common color for dragons. To fit in. I remeber telling my mother a year ago that i wanted to have maybe red or green skin since then dragons would think i was more like them. But my mother shook her head. " Dragons love you because you a beautiful and special, they know you are different, which is always a good thing. As long as you repect yourself then they will respect you Twilight." I hold that close to my heart even today. " oh mother, why did you have to leave us....i need you so badly.....Warfang needs you so badly.." i said under my breath. I looked away from the mirror that was adorned in precious minerals and went to get some clothes on. I put a golden cape on over my shoulders that like myself, glimmered in the sunlight. It was actual covered in a layer of gold dust. After i put that on i went over to a box that was sitting on a table nearby. it was made of dark obsidean and was cold to the touch, on each sides of it diamond dragons stood gaurd. Slowly i opened its silver lock and peered inside. There was a beautiful amulet which half was dark and half was light. It symbolized Yin and Yang, the eclipse. I knew the history of it well, what a tragedy. I put that over my neck and felt power zip threw my body. I heard someone call for my name " Queen twilight! queen twiligh! you are needed in the court!" Damn it.

soon guys, or rather to the people not reading this, ive been spending too much time on my poetry.