Forum

Poll

12 Years of Skylanders, Have You Played Any?
View Results
darkSpyro - Spyro and Skylanders Forum > Fandom > Non-Spyro > Warriors: The Next Three- The Darkest Prophecy [Spoliers?O.o]
Page 1 of 3 | Next | Last
1 2 3
Warriors: The Next Three- The Darkest Prophecy [Spoliers?O.o] [CLOSED]
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#1 Posted: 04:38:03 13/10/2010 | Topic Creator
[NOTE: Warriors fans who have NOT read Sunrise may be facing a lot of spoilers ahead...]

Yup, another Warriors fan-fic. X3 I started this quite some time ago, earlier this year I think...:/ I'm not really sure, but it was sometime after I read Warriors Power Of Three Sunrise. Okay, yes, I do know that Hollyleaf died, but I made it that she survied- which you shall find out if you read it. :3 Yeah, I know that Lionblaze, Jayfeather and Dovepaw are the Three, but I wanted to make it that there is another Three, even more powerful that Lionblaze, Jayfeather and Dovepaw, which StarClan hasn't told them about. O.o
Please enjoy!~ 8D

PROLOGUE
Hollyleaf sighed, her belly swelled and ready to have kits. She had left ThunderClan for good now, knowing that her mother was a medicine cat and her father was from a different Clan, and that she had killed her fellow Clanmate, Ashfur. She wondered how her brothers, Lionblaze and Jayfeather were doing now. She knew that she would never see them again, because she and her mate, Razon, had moved far away from the forest. Razon had saved Hollyleaf's life when she almost drowned, when she was running away into the tunnels, and when they collapsed on top of her. But Razon saved her just in time. Hollyleaf had loved him ever since.
Razon was a reddish tabby tom, with amber eyes and dark maroon stripes. He had been very protective around Hollyleaf, now that she was ready to have kits. In a moons time, my kits will be here. Hollyleaf thought happily, as she licked her belly. Razon padded over to her, and gave her some fresh-kill. "Here, its for you." Razon purred, nudging the fresh-kill over to Hollyleaf's paws. Hollyleaf purred, and licked his forehead. "Thanks," She purred, and tucked into the fresh-kill.

Hollyleaf pricked her ears. It had been four weeks now, and she was finally ready to have her kits. Razon lay beside her, sharing tongues with her. "Tell me if you feel anything, OK?" Razon mewed. Hollyleaf nodded, and licked his forehead. "I don't know where I would be without you, Razon." Hollyleaf confessed. Razon smiled at her. "Neither would I," Razon meowed.
Suddenly, Hollyleaf felt a stab of pain in her stomach. "My kits are coming!" Hollyleaf yowled.
Razon had fear in his eyes, but also happiness.
"It's OK, Hollyleaf, everything’s going to be alright. Just keep on breathing," Razon tried to calm her. Hollyleaf felt another stab of pain, as blood poured out and a small kit tumbled out. Hollyleaf yowled in pain as two more came out. Razon licked all three of the kits to get them breathing. My kits, I finally have kits! Hollyleaf thought happily. She then helped Razon lick her kits. Even though she did feel weak after giving birth to three kits. "Hollyleaf? Are you alright? You don't seem that good. Here, let me lick them." Razon offered. Hollyleaf shook her head. "Of course I don't seem good, you stupid furball! I've just had kits." Hollyleaf laughed. Razon smiled as a purr rumbled deep in his throat as he continued to wash the kits. Hollyleaf sighed with relief that her kits came out alright.
---
N/A
Levi Ripto Gems: 1136
#2 Posted: 04:42:49 13/10/2010
Thats awesome! smilie
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#3 Posted: 04:44:31 13/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks. :3
---
N/A
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#4 Posted: 02:22:54 14/10/2010
i like it :3
---
...is this supposed to be my signature?
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#5 Posted: 15:04:05 14/10/2010
Aww, this is completely epic! 8D
---
Back from hibernation.
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#6 Posted: 22:34:02 15/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks so much! :3

"What should we call them?" Razon asked soon after they had finished washing the kits. Hollyleaf looked down at the three suckling kits. "One boy and two girls," Hollyleaf meowed. "Hmm, the boy has amber eyes and is black, so it can be called Shadow, and the girl that looks like you can be Blaze." Hollyleaf mewed. Razon thought for a bit then meowed; "The girl that looks like you can be called Fern, because she has green eyes like you," Razon meowed. Hollyleaf smiled at him. Shadow, Blaze and Fern. Hollyleaf thought.
Hollyleaf was bursting with pride. But also with depression. She had disobeyed the warrior code so many times now. She had disobeyed the warrior code to leave ThunderClan and start a new life beyond the forest. She wished to go back to her Clan, and take her kits too. But she couldn't leave Razon, she loved him with all her heart. What would Lionblaze and Jayfeather think about her now? And Firestar? He would never let her back into the Clan. But I am Firestar's kin. . .but still, he would never allow me back into ThunderClan. Hollyleaf thought. Shadow, Blaze and Fern were still to small to go outside the den, it only had been a few hours since they were born.
Hollyleaf sighed. Now she had left ThunderClan for good, she would never be able to fulfill her dream, to be ThunderClans leader.
No, I can never go back to ThunderClan, as long as I'm with Razon and I still have my kits. Hollyleaf thought.
---
N/A
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#7 Posted: 15:54:37 16/10/2010
poor Hollyleaf D:
---
...is this supposed to be my signature?
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#8 Posted: 18:56:21 16/10/2010
The awsomeness. It's killing me. D:

I love this little tale. x3 Do you mind, when it's a bit further into the storyline, if I could animate a trailer for it? xD I may not be able to, but I would like to. smilie;
---
Back from hibernation.
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#9 Posted: 23:51:55 16/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Thank you! ^,^

Omg, yes, Night Owl! That would be awesome! 8D I'd love that!

Here's some more. :3


CHAPTER 1
"Hey! Let go of my tail!" Fern yelped as Shadow tugged on her tail. "Not until you say that I'm the strongest cat in the world!" Shadow growled, spitting tiny scraps of his sister's fur out of his mouth. "No, I'm the strongest!" Blaze yowled from behind Fern, and lunged towards Shadow. Blaze's flame coloured fur blazed as the sun streaked across her fur. Blaze looks like she's on fire! Fern thought as she watched her sister tackle her brother.
Fern giggled as Blaze easily pinned Shadow down, proving that she was the strongest out of the three. "I have the power of the stars in my paws!" Blaze boosted. Shadow rolled his eyes. "Yeah right! I know your just making that up, Blaze." Shadow mewed. Hollyleaf suddenly trotted over to them, Fern could see fear and shock in her mother's eyes. "Blaze, what did you say?" Hollyleaf meowed, suddenly scared. Blaze narrowed her eyes. "What does it matter? I was just making it up." Blaze mewed. Hollyleaf narrowed her eyes. "Tell me!" She hissed. Blaze looked taken aback. "and get off your brother." Hollyleaf added. Blaze leapt off Shadow, staring at her mother. Shadow scrambled to his paws, and glared at Blaze.
Fern was shocked about how her mother spoke to Blaze so fiercely, it was like what her sister had said was important. "Tell me," Hollyleaf repeated. Blaze swallowed hard. "I said that I had the power of the stars in my paws. It just felt like it, that's all, when I tackled Shadow and I won. I felt unstoppable." Blaze meowed. A growl rumbled in Shadow's throat, but he said nothing. Hollyleaf stared at her daughter in shock and fear. "Mother, what is it? Is everything alright?" Fern asked. Hollyleaf shook her head. "It's nothing, don't worry. You'll know when your older." Hollyleaf replied, as she padded over to where Razon was sleeping. "But I want to know now!" Blaze whined. Hollyleaf flashed her daughter a warning look, and Blaze didn't say anything. Why is Mother so shocked? It isn't like what Blaze said meant anything. Fern thought. She tried to reach her mother's mind, but it was clouded with darkness.
---
N/A
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 23:54:37 16/10/2010 by Skyqueen
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#10 Posted: 18:57:57 18/10/2010
No problem. smilie

smilie Yay! :3

I love this chapter. smilie
---
Back from hibernation.
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#11 Posted: 00:24:25 19/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks. ^,^

Here's the next part. :3


Fern was still trying to reach her mother's mind when Blaze flicked her tail across her face. "Hello? Fern?" Blaze meowed. Fern stepped back and narrowed her eyes at her sister. "What?" Blaze snapped stubbornly. She sighed. Blaze would never be as sensible as herself, and neither would Shadow.
"Hey, Father, Mother, can we go outside now? I'm bored." Shadow moaned as he tugged his father's ear. Razon stifled awake, and yawned, showing his fangs. "Wha'z?" Razon mumbled. Shadow rolled his eyes. "Can we go outside?" Shadow mewed. Razon blinked. "Sure, as long as it's alright with your mother." Razon replied as he flicked his tail towards where Hollyleaf was sitting. "Mother, can we please go outside?" Shadow asked. "Yeah! I'm bored," Blaze added. Hollyleaf paused, but then mewed; "Yes, alright. But stay out of trouble." She warned to her kits, but they had already left. "Hey! Wait for me!" Fern yelped as she stumbled after her siblings. Razon rolled his eyes. "Kits, what are you going to do with them?" Hollyleaf smiled, but she still had fear in her eyes as she watched her kits tumble outside the den. "And stay close to the den, please!" She yelled.
Fern stumbled after her brother and sister. They were always faster and stronger than her. But someday, I'll be as big as them! Or maybe even bigger! Fern thought, purring. But she didn't realize Shadow and Blaze were staring at her. "What are you doing?" Blaze mewed. Fern blinked, and whipped her head around to face her sister. "Erm. . .nothing important," Fern replied. Blaze rolled her eyes. "Come on! Let's play!" Blaze yowled as she lunged towards Fern. Fern yelped back in surprise as she barely missed her sister's paws. Blaze grunted in disappointment, then lunged again. But this time Shadow lunged towards Blaze before she could reach Fern. "Ha! I've got you now!" Shadow yowled as he pinned his sister onto the ground. Blaze grinned. "It's not over yet!" Blaze yelled as she kicked her brother with her hind legs. Shadow yelped as he was thrown back; luckily, Blaze had her claws sheathed so Shadow was unharmed. Fern giggled to herself. Shadow would never be as strong as Blaze, and Fern herself wouldn't either. Fern gazed out to the sky; she wondered what lay beyond the fields that seemed to stretch out forever. She wondered if there were any other cats out there. “Fern! Why are you doing that strange thing again?” Blaze mewed. Fern shook her head. “I. . .was. . .admiring the sunshine,” Fern mumbled. Shadow rolled his eyes. “You sure are weird, Fern.” Her brother meowed. “Are you goanna play or not?” Blaze asked. Do we have to play? We do it everyday. . .why can’t we do something different? Like explore the fields? And maybe see what lays beyond there? Or maybe find out what those clouds are doing on the ground. . .Fern gazed at the bleating white balls of fluff that grazed the fields. She always wondered what they were. “Fern!” Blaze yowled. Fern almost jumped out of her fur. “do you want to play or not?” Blaze hissed. Fern sighed. “Why can’t we do something. . .different? Like maybe discover what those fluffy white balls are,” Fern replied, pointing to the grazing white balls of fluff. “Who cares? Their just clouds with legs.” Shadow snapped. But we don’t know what they really are! Fern clawed at the soft earth with her claws. “Well, I’m going and you can’t stop me,” Fern hissed as she pelted away. “Hey! Wait for me!” Blaze yowled as she charged after her sister. “I’m coming too!” Shadow yelped as he bolted after his sisters.
“Kits!” Razon yowled, soon after Blaze, Fern and Shadow had left. “Kits! Blaze! Shadow! Fern! Come on out, this is no game!” Razon was starting to panic. “Fern? Blaze? Shadow?. . .” Razon tasted the air and soon picked up his kits scents. His blood turned to ice. They had ran away! “Hollyleaf! The kits are missing!” Razon cried. “What!?” Hollyleaf shrieked as she pelted down towards Razon. “Shadow! Blaze! Fern!” Hollyleaf called. No reply. “We have to find them; come on! I can smell their scent, they went this way!” Hollyleaf yowled as she charged away. “Hey! Wait for me!” Razon cried as he raced after his mate.

Whoa...O.o That was a massive paragraph.
---
N/A
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#12 Posted: 01:54:12 19/10/2010
Oh no D:
---
...is this supposed to be my signature?
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#13 Posted: 21:55:59 19/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Fern kept on running, she had ignored her father’s calls. At least the three of them were doing something different, instead of wrestling all the time. Blaze soon caught up with her sister. “So we’re going to see those clouds with legs, right?” Blaze yelled as she pelted after Fern. Fern nodded. “Yeah!” she replied. Shadow charged up to his sisters. “Umm. . . shouldn’t we of told Mum and Dad first?” he yelled. All three kittens halted. “Mouse dung! They’ll be worried sick.” Fern hissed. Blaze moaned. “Great, now we have to run all the way back.” Shadow grunted. “So we came all this way for nothing? Well, I don’t know about you sissies, but I’m going to find out what those fluffy white things are.” And before his sister’s could argue, Shadow charged off. “Hey, wait!” Blaze yowled and raced after her brother. Fern yelped. “Wait for me!” She cried and ran after them. Suddenly, Fern crashed into what seemed to be a furry, dark brown tree. She looked up, and to Fern’s horror, she saw a dark brown tabby tom with flashing amber eyes.
---
N/A
Goldenfire Gold Sparx Gems: 2416
#14 Posted: 22:20:56 19/10/2010
Is this basically just the book, all over again?
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#15 Posted: 02:55:40 20/10/2010
well, these kits have MOAR POWA! (:< xD
---
...is this supposed to be my signature?
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#16 Posted: 18:43:45 20/10/2010
8D I love this. smilie xD
---
Back from hibernation.
Queen MikaTinks Gold Sparx Gems: 2292
#17 Posted: 01:09:29 23/10/2010
No Goldenfire it has a twist in it gooosh
---
xBlu Skiesx my new account
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#18 Posted: 06:03:23 24/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks guys. ^,^ Trust me, Goldenfire, this is different. You'll see when we get into more of the story.

Fern yelped back with terror, her fur bristling. Blaze and Shadow quickly came to their sister’s side, hissing with their fur all fluffed up. The dark brown tabby tom narrowed his eyes. “What are you kits doing on ThunderClan territory?” the tabby tom meowed. Fern was puzzled. What the heck is ThunderClan? As if Blaze could read her mind, Blaze spoke Fern’s thoughts. “What the heck is ThunderClan?” Her sister mewed.
Suddenly, a tortoiseshell-and-white she-cat with amber eyes padded up next to the tom’s side. “What are these kits doing here, Brambleclaw?” the she-cat mewed. The dark brown tabby tom, whose name was Brambleclaw, shrugged. “I don’t know, Sorreltail. One of them just crashed right into my right front paw.” he replied. Sorreltail bended down to the three trembling kits. “It’s alright, little kits, we won’t hurt you.” the she-cat meowed gently. Fern and her littermates relaxed a little, but Fern was still scared. A long-haired gray tom shoved his way through. “Where are your parents, kits?” the gray tom asked.
“Back at our den,” Shadow replied. “We were just going back. . .I swear! My sisters and I just wanted to see what those fluffy white things were.” Brambleclaw chuckled. “Don’t worry, there’s nothing interesting in sheep. Their-…” the dark, brown tabby tom stopped, and gazed down upon Fern and her littermates. Why was Brambleclaw staring at them like that? “Um, we were just going back, like my brother said.” Blaze quickly meowed. “No,” Brambleclaw replied silently. “It can’t be. . .” Sorreltail gave Brambleclaw a puzzled look. “What’s wrong, Brambleclaw?” She mewed. “Yeah, why can’t we just let these kits go? Their no threat.” the gray tom added. “No, Sorreltail, Graystripe, you don’t understand. . .these kits. . .I recognize them from somewhere.” Brambleclaw mewed. Graystripe snorted. “Yeah, and hedgehogs will fly!” “Have you got bees in your brain, Brambleclaw? We’ve never seen these kits before.” Sorreltail added. What is that brown tom going on about? Fern wondered, trying to read the dark tabby tom’s thoughts. “Well, we’ve never seen you before,” Blaze snapped. “What are your names?” Brambleclaw asked, ignoring Blaze. “My name’s Fern, this is my brother Shadow and my sister Blaze.” Fern blabbered. Shadow gave his sister a why-did-you-tell-these-random-cats-our-names!?-look.
“Yes, I remember now,” Brambleclaw mewed. “I saw you. . .all three of you. . .in my dream. . .” “Okay, Brambleclaw, your starting to freak my out here.” Graystripe hissed. “What in StarClan’s name is going on here?” meowed a voice. Brambleclaw, Sorreltail and Graystripe quickly moved aside as a orange tom with a pelt that looked like fire came through. The orange tom’s green eyes flickered to Fern and her littermates. “What are these kits doing here?” The tom meowed softly. “One of these kits crashed into my front leg, Firestar, while we were re-newing our borders,” Brambleclaw quickly explained to the orange tom. “Yeah, and Brambleclaw says he’s seen these kits before.” Graystripe added. Firestar narrowed his eyes. “Brambleclaw, what are you talking about?” the ThunderClan leader meowed. Brambleclaw leaned over to Firestar’s ear and whispered something that Fern couldn’t hear. The orange tom’s eyes widened. “Quickly, we must take these kits back to the camp.” Firestar mewed. “What!?” Blaze, Fern, Shadow, Graystripe and Sorreltail screeched at the same time.
“Surely Firestar, what are these kits to us? Their parents must be wondering where they are.” Sorreltail mewed. Firestar’s neck fur bristled slightly. “A Clan leader’s order is the warrior code, Sorreltail. Now please escort these kits back to the camp. I promise I’ll explain afterwards.” he meowed. Fern fluffed up with anger and fear. What do these wild cats want with us?! Why are we so special? she thought. “Why do you need us?” her brother’s words spoke Fern’s thoughts. Brambleclaw leaned down to Shadow. “We promise that we’ll explain everything to you kits when we get back to camp.” Brambleclaw meowed gently. Shadow bristled slightly, but nodded and followed the Clan cats. Blaze shrugged and trotted after her brother. Fern squeaked and raced after her sister and brother.
---
N/A
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#19 Posted: 07:21:34 25/10/2010
smilie This is the best chapter so far. smilie I like the twist, knowing that their 'dead' sister was living a field away from camp. smilie
---
Back from hibernation.
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#20 Posted: 05:44:07 27/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Thank you. smilie

CHAPTER 2
Hollyleaf was scared out of her wits. Her kits were missing and she had no idea where they were. They weren’t even supposed to exist anyway, she thought sadly. I, Lionblaze and Jayfeather weren’t supposed to exist either. Hollyleaf yowled into the sky. Razon jumped, his fur fluffed up. “H-Hollyleaf! What’s wrong?” he mewed shakily. She had completely forgotten that her mate was beside her. “S-sorry, Razon,” She meowed. “I. . .I just want to find my-our-kits.” Razon pressed his flank to Hollyleaf’s. “We’ll find them,” he mewed. But Hollyleaf could see doubt and fear in his eyes. He was clearly as worried as she was. Hollyleaf suddenly stopped. “Razon, there’s something I need to tell you.” She rasped. Razon’s ears flicked. “Before I met you, I used to live in a Clan. A clan of wild cats. My Clan was called ThunderClan. But. . .I’m not a full ThunderClan cat.” Hollyleaf explained. Razon was confused. “What are you on about Hollyleaf? I don’t understand.” he mewed. Gees. . .Razon doesn’t know anything about the Clans or StarClan. . .I’ve got a lot of explaining to do. She thought, lashing her tail.
“I was born in a forest beside a lake, and by that lake there were four Clans,” Hollyleaf explained. “There was RiverClan, WindClan, ShadowClan and ThunderClan-my Clan-and there are our warrior ancestors, who live in a Clan called StarClan. StarClan live up in Silverpelt, a river of stars. When a cat dies he or she goes to join StarClan,” Razon blinked, amazed. “Really? So all those stars are dead cats?” he meowed. She nodded. “Yes, and some day I will join them.” Hollyleaf said quietly. I was supposed to die in the Dark River anyway, and besides, all my Clanmates think I’m dead. She thought with a shudder. “You okay?” Razon asked. Hollyleaf gave one last glance at the red-tabby tom. She knew what she had to do- even if it meant breaking Razon’s heart. I wasn’t even one of the Three! I’m not supposed to exist, and neither are my kits!
“Goodbye,” she whispered and charged off the cliff that lead into crashing waves below. “No!”’ Razon yowled, and charged after her and sank his teeth into her scruff. Hollyleaf’s feet and tail dangled over the cliff’s edge as Razon hauled her back up. “Let go of me!” She hissed in fury, failing about. “No! I’m not going to let you die!” he spat, dragging her onto the grass.
“Let me be, Razon,” Hollyleaf growled. “I wasn’t supposed to exist by the warrior code-” “I don’t care about the warrior code!” Razon snarled. “I don’t understand! Why didn’t you tell me about this before?” Hollyleaf sighed. “Because. . .it hurts to think about my Clan and my brothers. And knowing that I’m half-Clan, and a medicine cat’s daughter. . .I don’t have a purpose in life.”
“B-b-but. . .I love you, Hollyleaf. And we need to find our kits.” he pleaded. Hollyleaf hissed. “I don’t care about our kits! Their dead! All of them! They weren’t supposed to exist by StarClan and the warrior code! And look at me, how could I fall in love with a rouge!?” Razon’s claws raked the soft earth. “How can you say that? I saved your life!” he screeched, and pushed Hollyleaf off the edge of the cliff. Hollyleaf gave a blood-curling screech as she fell into the crashing waves below, closely followed by Razon. . .

Note: Hollyleaf does not die. :3
---
N/A
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#21 Posted: 01:55:31 29/10/2010
wait, did Razon just try to commit murder and suicide at the same time?...wierd...xD
---
...is this supposed to be my signature?
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#22 Posted: 03:47:14 29/10/2010 | Topic Creator
No, he just slipped when he shoved Hollyleaf off. O.o
---
N/A
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#23 Posted: 09:44:02 29/10/2010
Oh my. smilie That was described brilliantly. :3 And adds to the overall EPICNESS. smilie
---
Back from hibernation.
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#24 Posted: 22:52:33 29/10/2010
oh. okay, that makes more sense.
and, jeez, Hollyleaf goes crazy whenever she thinks of the warrior code O.o someone needs to find a memory eraser, and quick.
---
...is this supposed to be my signature?
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#25 Posted: 22:33:48 30/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Thank you, Night Owl. :3
Yeah, Hollyleaf is really crazy about the warrior code, that's why she tried to commit suicide. O.o

Blaze had never been more afraid in her whole life. She could tell that her brother and sister were terrified as well.
What do these wild cats want? Why are we so special!? I don’t understand! Blaze wailed inside. “Who are you, and what do you want?” Blaze spat, trying to be brave, but really she was completely terrified. The wild cats didn’t reply. Blaze stiffened, What’s going to happen!?
She glanced at her brother and sister. Shadow’s fur was all puffed up and Fern had her tail between her legs and her ears flattened. Blaze wasn’t going to show that she was scared, but deep down she really was. . .
They followed the wild cats into their camp. Blaze saw other wild cats emerge from dens, their ears flattened, and their tails lashing.
“What are these kits doing here!?” hissed a dark brown tabby.
“Firestar, what are you doing with these kits?” meowed a sand-coloured she-cat. Firestar padded over to the sand-colour cat and whispered something in her ear. The she-cat’s eyes widened, and she lay there on the spot, frozen. “Yes, I know, Sandstorm, I will tell the Clan now.” Firestar meowed. The sand-coloured she-cat, who’s name was Sandstorm shook her head. “No!. . .that can’t be right! Hollyleaf is dead, and we all know it.” Blaze’s eyes widened. How do these wild cats know my mother’s name!?. . .and she isn’t dead, she’s safe at home with Razon! She glanced at Fern and Shadow, who also had the same terrified expression as her. “How do this cats know our mother’s name!?” Shadow hissed to her. “Because our mother was part of this wild cat’s clan.” Fern mewed quietly. Blaze and Shadow both whipped around to stare in shock at their sister. “What?!” Blaze screeched quietly. “How do you know that!?” Shadow spat. Before Fern could reply, Firestar yowled; “Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather below the Highledge for a Clan meeting!” instantly, wild cats emerged from dens and from other places. “Hey, why is there kits in the camp?” meowed a young cat that was just a little bit older than Blaze and her siblings. "Don't worry, Ivypaw, Firestar will explain why these kits are here now." Sandstorm meowed to the young cat.
“Cats of ThunderClan,” Firestar mewed. “You may have been wondering why there are three stray kits in our camp. . .but believe me or not, these kits are Hollyleaf’s.” the whole camp erupted with yowls of disbelief and shock. “But that’s impossible!” shouted a young orange tom, who reminded Blaze of herself. “We saw her disappear in the tunnels. She couldn’t of possibly of survived!” A gray tabby tom with ice-blue eyes sitting next to the orange tom nodded. “Then where is she?” yowled a white fluffy tom.
“Yeah, where is Hollyleaf?”
“Why did she leave her kits here?”
“Who is the father of her kits?”
“Enough!” Firestar yowled. The Clan turned silent. Firestar sighed. “I know this sounds impossible, but Hollyleaf is alive, and these are her kits.” he nodded towards Blaze, Shadow and Fern. Burning gazes fell upon Blaze and her siblings. She looked down at the ground, feeling all the cats’ gazes burn her fur. “But how do you know that Hollyleaf is still alive? And how do you know that these are her kits?” cried a white and orange patched she-cat, with a horrifying scar across where should have been her eye. Firestar stayed frozen for a moment. “I. . .it’s difficult to explain,” he finally meowed. The brown tabby tom snorted. “Yeah, right! Are you sure, Firestar?” Firestar narrowed his eyes. “Are you saying that you don’t believe me, or Brambleclaw, Dustpelt?” Firestar meowed. Dustpelt looked down at his paws. “N-no, Firestar, of course not.” he mewed.
---
N/A
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#26 Posted: 00:13:28 31/10/2010
good chapter smilie
---
...is this supposed to be my signature?
kitty kat299 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1078
#27 Posted: 22:03:52 31/10/2010
amazing... series.... must.... read.... more......
---
PASTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA~!
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#28 Posted: 03:38:48 10/11/2010 | Topic Creator
Thank you so much! More is coming soon. :3
---
N/A
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#29 Posted: 09:20:36 03/12/2010 | Topic Creator
*cough* Um, I'm sorry I haven't been writing much, but I promise more will come!
---
N/A
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#30 Posted: 05:41:17 04/12/2010 | Topic Creator
So sorry for the triple post! >.< I'm such an egg...

Firestar nodded. “Seeing as these are Hollyleaf’s kits, then she must still be alive. . .and we have to find her,” Firestar meowed sternly. The Clan cats whispered among themselves.
“What? How are we supposed to find her?”
“I dunno, but after all, Hollyleaf is part of ThunderClan, plus Lionblaze and Jayfeather will be happy, too.” meowed two cats not far away from Blaze and her siblings. “How can they talk about our mother like that? She was never part of a. . .what is it? A ‘Clan’?” Shadow mewed to his sisters. Blaze nodded. “Yeah, she would of told us, right?” Fern shook her head and shrugged. “Anyways, Fern, you still haven’t answered our question.” Shadow mewed. “How do you know that our mother was part of this wild cat Clan?” Fern blinked, and licked her ruffled chest fur. “Ah, um. . .well, you see. . .I. . .um. . .” Fern stammered, struggling for words. “Silence!” Firestar yowled. “As I was saying, we have to find Hollyleaf. She is still part of ThunderClan, and she will always be. Now, Lionblaze, Jayfeather- you told the Clan that Hollyleaf disappeared into the tunnels while chasing a squirrel, and the tunnels collapsed, correct?” Firestar mewed. A golden-orange tabby tom with bright amber eyes nodded. “Yes, Firestar.” Lionblaze replied. “Hold up, hold up,” meowed a cat. Blaze could see Firestar’s fur rising. “Who-”
A fluffy white tom stepped up. Blaze saw Firestar’s and Brambleclaw’s eyes widen. “Cloudtail! How could-” Cloudtail nodded. “I apologize deeply, Firestar, but I don’t think that these kits are Hollyleaf’s. I mean, how can you just assume that? Look at them! Their terrified out of their lives! Their parents must be worried sick.” Cloudtail mewed. Firestar exchanged glances with Brambleclaw. “How about we ask the kits who their parents are?” Brambleclaw suggested. The Clan rose up with meows of agreement. “It would be hilarious if they weren’t!” mewed two apprentices quietly. “Yeah, Firestar and Brambleclaw would be embarrassed for life!” giggled the other apprentice.
“So, kits, what are your parents called?” Firestar asked.
---
N/A
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#31 Posted: 22:27:17 04/12/2010
i wanna know what they'll say!i hate cliffhangers! >.< smilie
---
...is this supposed to be my signature?
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#32 Posted: 05:04:57 05/12/2010 | Topic Creator
smilie

Here's the next chapter! :3

CHAPTER 3

Hollyleaf blinked open her eyes to nothing but darkness; she had no idea where she was.
Am I in StarClan?. . .or the Dark Forest? She wondered, stumbling to her paws. “Razon? Are you here?” Hollyleaf called, her voice echoed for miles. She gulped; Isn’t anyone here? Hollyleaf suddenly froze, and her fur fluffed up. She could see a pair of amber eyes glowing in the darkness, staring at her. “W-who are you? What d-d-do you want?” Hollyleaf squeaked, her voice shaking. The pair of amber eyes crept closer to her, and revealed to be a dark brown tabby tom, with a scar across his nose, and one of his ears was cut into a V shape. “Why, hello there, Hollyleaf.” smiled the dark brown tabby tom. Hollyleaf gave a shriek and jumped back. I can’t believe it! It’s Tigerstar!
“T-T-Tigerstar!” Hollyleaf cried. Tigerstar grinned, revealing sharp, yellow-pointed teeth. “Welcome to the Dark Forest, Hollyleaf. After since you killed Ashfur, your true place has always been here.”
Hollyleaf’s stomach twisted. “No! I’m nothing like you! I only killed one cat, and that was to keep the whole Clans from knowing our secret!” Hollyleaf hissed bravely. Tigerstar’s eye’s widened. “Well, would one of your brothers done it? Hmm? Lionblaze, would he kill another cat? Or Jayfeather?” Tigerstar meowed. Hollyleaf swallowed hard. “You don’t understand, I had too! What would the other Clans think of me and my brothers?” she mewed. “Well, you told them anyway, in the end, didn’t you? It wouldn’t of made a difference if Ashfur told the Clans.” Tigerstar meowed. “And you can’t escape from the Dark Forest anyway, Hollyleaf, this is where you’ll spend for what’s left of your time being here.” Tigerstar added with a grin. Suddenly, a dark brown tabby tom with ice-blue eyes emerged from the shadows. “Well, who do we have here?” The dark brown tabby tom mewed. Hollyleaf stiffened. He looks just like Tigerstar, only he has blue eyes! she thought. “Hmm, I don’t believe you’ve met, have you, Hollyleaf? This is my other son, Hawkfrost. Hawkfrost, this is Hollyleaf. She’s going to be staying with us.” Tigerstar said. Hawkfrost’s eyes widened. “Huh, she’s the first she-cat to join the Dark Forest!. . .wait, your Hollyleaf? The cat who’s nuts on the warrior code?” Hawkfrost meowed. Hollyleaf’s fur bristled. “The warrior code is not something to laugh about! It’s what keeps the Clans together!” Hollyleaf hissed. Hawkfrost rolled his eyes. “Well, you’ve broken it quite a few times, haven’t you? You killed your own Clanmate, and fell in love with a rouge!” Hawkfrost scoffed. Hollyleaf stared at him in dismay.
No! I can’t spend the rest of my life here! I can’t! she wailed inside.
No!” Hollyleaf screeched, and closed her eyes.
---
N/A
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#33 Posted: 02:27:20 06/12/2010
Poor Hollyleaf x.x
---
...is this supposed to be my signature?
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#34 Posted: 20:49:31 07/12/2010
I love this more and more. >D Epic chapters! 833
---
Back from hibernation.
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#35 Posted: 21:32:30 13/12/2010 | Topic Creator
Thank you! ^.^ Sorry for the delay.

Hollyleaf slowly opened her eyes. She blinked, and gradually made her way onto her paws. Hollyleaf could smell sea salt, and she could hear waves crashing below her.
Where am I?. . .aren’t I supposed to be dead? she thought, and turned around, felling pain jab in every part of her body. Hollyleaf gasped, and saw hissing waves of the ocean before her- she had landed onto a ledge in the cliff! Wow, and I thought I was supposed to be dead. . .she suddenly felt her throat clog up. Where was Razon? She looked back down at the sea, and saw nothing. Hollyleaf felt her heart swelling up.
No! Hollyleaf shrieked inside. He can’t be gone! He just can’t!. . .Hollyleaf curled up into a ball and wept. Razon’s dead. . .because of me. . .how am I supposed to tell the kits? Hollyleaf wailed. But their probably dead too! NO! she started to scratch the rocky wall in front of her, leaving claw marks everywhere. “No!” Hollyleaf screeched. “Razon can’t be gone! He just can’t!” she then yowled at the sky. “Why, StarClan, why? Why did you have to take him and my kits away from me? Why!?” Hollyleaf stopped, then looked down at her paws. “Yes, I know why. . .because I wasn’t supposed to exist in the first place! The warrior code forbids me and my brothers existence! I don’t care about the stupid prophecy! It hasn’t even come true yet!. . .and I wasn’t even part of the prophecy!” Hollyleaf screamed, and collapsed into a heap, moaning.
---
N/A
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#36 Posted: 00:09:13 14/12/2010
awwww, poor Hollyleaf DX
---
...is this supposed to be my signature?
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#37 Posted: 20:51:14 26/12/2010
Aww, D= Epic chapter again. ^-^

BTW, I AM working on that animation, but I have a lot to do. smilie
---
Back from hibernation.
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#38 Posted: 08:25:15 28/12/2010 | Topic Creator
Thank you so much! I know it'll be worth the wait. ^w^
---
N/A
cynder2000 Gold Sparx Gems: 2277
#39 Posted: 16:35:00 28/12/2010
Oh,this is good!smilie
---
(Avatar made by CinderLover!smilie)
"In a dog-eat-dog world, we lose part of our humanity."
I'm still here, but I'm mainly invisible...
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#40 Posted: 03:15:16 30/12/2010 | Topic Creator
Thank you. smilie

Sorry for the long wait.

For the first time in a long time, Shadow was shaking with fear. He tried his best not to show it to his sisters, though, he didn’t want them to think he was scared. But he couldn’t help it- Fern and Blaze looked terrified just as much as he was. Shadow gulped. Should I really tell them my parent’s names? he thought. “Yes, our mother is called Hollyleaf.” Fern meowed. Shadow and Blaze whipped around to face their sister. “Fern! What are you doing!?” Blaze hissed. Fern blinked. “We had to tell them!” she snapped. “Yeah, but we could of just lied!” Shadow spat. The whole Clan gasped in amazement. “Wow, those really are Hollyleaf’s kits!” meowed a cat. “Yeah! I can’t believe it!. . .although, that ginger kit looks an awful lot like Firestar, and Lionblaze too.” whispered another cat. “And Squirrelflight, too!” added another cat.
“Cats of ThunderClan!” Firestar yowled. The Clan fell silent. “I’m sure that’s enough proof for you to believe me and Brambleclaw. . .we will search for Hollyleaf tomorrow at sun-high.” Firestar meowed. Shadow stiffened. These wild cats really are going to look for my mother! “But Firestar,” Brambleclaw meowed. Firestar looked at the ThunderClan deputy. “Yes, Brambleclaw?” he asked. “But where do we even start to look for Hollyleaf?” Brambleclaw asked. “Yes, Firestar,” yowled Dustpelt. “How are we even supposed to start looking for Hollyleaf when we don’t even know where to look?” he mewed. “You see, this is where the kits come in,” Firestar explained. The whole Clan’s gaze fell upon Shadow and his sisters, and he felt his fur burn with their gazes.
“B-but w-w-why do you want to find our mother?” Fern squeaked. Firestar’s gaze fell upon Fern, his eyes wise and kind. “You see, your mother was part of this Clan- ThunderClan- and she was a great warrior to ThunderClan, and she would protect the warrior code with her life. She was also my granddaughter.” Firestar explained.
---
N/A
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#41 Posted: 03:22:01 30/12/2010
Why, Fern?! WHY?!?!?!...okay, i'm good. smilie
---
...is this supposed to be my signature?
ToxicShadow Green Sparx Gems: 429
#42 Posted: 20:40:56 02/01/2011
This is a brilliant fan-fic! Great work and I can't wait for more. :D
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#43 Posted: 21:54:51 10/01/2011 | Topic Creator
Thank you so much! ^.^

Night Owl I shall give you descriptions on what Fern, Blaze and Shadow look like, to help you out for the animation. Okay, Fern is black and she looks excatly like Hollyleaf, she has green eyes, and her front paw is white, and the end of her tail tip is white as well. Blaze is ginger looks just like Firestar and Lionblaze, and she also has green eyes. Shadow is black as well and has amber eyes.
---
N/A
CinderLover Emerald Sparx Gems: 3924
#44 Posted: 23:47:02 10/01/2011
Too . . . Much . . . Epicness!! *explodes*
cynder2000 Gold Sparx Gems: 2277
#45 Posted: 00:06:43 12/01/2011
Awesome!I luv warriors!Moarrrrrrr!!!!
---
(Avatar made by CinderLover!smilie)
"In a dog-eat-dog world, we lose part of our humanity."
I'm still here, but I'm mainly invisible...
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#46 Posted: 21:08:29 15/01/2011
Quote: Skyqueen
Thank you so much! ^.^

Night Owl I shall give you descriptions on what Fern, Blaze and Shadow look like, to help you out for the animation. Okay, Fern is black and she looks excatly like Hollyleaf, she has green eyes, and her front paw is white, and the end of her tail tip is white as well. Blaze is ginger looks just like Firestar and Lionblaze, and she also has green eyes. Shadow is black as well and has amber eyes.


Okay, sure. =3 I've done the sketches. smilie
---
Back from hibernation.
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#47 Posted: 22:10:03 16/01/2011 | Topic Creator
Cool! ^-^ I can't wait! 83
---
N/A
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#48 Posted: 21:02:48 17/01/2011 | Topic Creator
(Sorry for the double post)

Here's some more!

Shadow’s mouth gaped open. Wait. . .so that means. . .this ginger cat is my great grandfather!? “That makes us your kin!” Fern mewed. Firestar nodded. “Yes, it does. . .” he meowed. “I. . .I have grandchildren.” Shadow heard a voice from behind him. He turned around and saw a brown tabby she-cat, with white front paws and chest and glowing amber eyes. “Who are you?” Shadow asked. “I am Leafpool,” the she-cat answered. “I am your mother’s mother.” Leafpool added. “Wow, so your our grandmother?” Blaze mewed. Leafpool nodded. “Yes.” Shadow stared into his grandmother’s eyes- they were clouded with sadness and loss. Shadow wondered why. “I can’t believe it! Hollyleaf. . .she really is. . . . .” a ginger she-cat burst out, and rushed up to Leafpool and Shadow and the others. “This is my sister, Squirrelflight,” Leafpool mewed, gesturing to the ginger she-cat. Squirrelflight nodded. For some reason, Squirrelflight also seemed sad. Shadow was confused. “Is something troubling you?” he meowed. Leafpool blinked. “What makes you say that?” she asked, confused. “Ah. . .you just seem. . .” Shadow mumbled.
“What my brother is trying to say is, you seem upset.” Fern interrupted. Shadow blinked at his sister gratefully. “Well, I assure you, we’re not.” Squirrelflight mewed. “A-hem,” Firestar coughed. The Clan switched gazes to their Clan leader. “Shadow, Blaze, Fern. . .I have an offer to ask of you.” he meowed. Shadow glanced at his sisters. They both shrugged. “Yes, Firestar?” Fern squeaked. “I would like to ask you if you would like to join ThunderClan.”
---
N/A
cynder2000 Gold Sparx Gems: 2277
#49 Posted: 21:05:51 17/01/2011
Omg!That is so awesome!What will they say?I can't wait!
---
(Avatar made by CinderLover!smilie)
"In a dog-eat-dog world, we lose part of our humanity."
I'm still here, but I'm mainly invisible...
TheFlyingSeal Diamond Sparx Gems: 8523
#50 Posted: 22:31:55 17/01/2011
MUST READ MORE! Oh, and your theroy is right Skyqueen. Hollyleaf is acually alive. I did research~
---
#CynderIsAFireDragon
Page 1 of 3 | Next | Last
1 2 3

Please login or register a forum account to post a message.

Username Password Remember Me