I got a great idea for Cynder the other week when I drew a picture of a green Cynder in art class. I think it would make a great video game, but for now I'll just tell it here. Here it is...
Let's say by the end of the Legend trilogy Cynder is still feeling out of place. One day she is taking a walk alone, and a big gray dragon who looks remarkably like her(as an adult) swoops down and tells her that he's her older brother, Oparin. (Why I named him after a scientist who hypothesized about Earth's early atmosphere, I don't know.) Oparin tells Cynder that she is a missing egg from an isolated dragon race called Arthropod Clans located on a faraway island. There are eight clans total, and they all have fancy Latin-root names but I can't remember them right now. They are 1) Scarab, or Beetle(which is Cynder's telling by the scarab symbol on her head), 2)Bee, 3)Moth, 4)Wasp, 5)Butterfly, 6)Spider, 7)Mosquito, and 8)Ant(that's Oparin).
Oparin explains to Cynder that he was the first Dragon on the island ever to be born with his clan's symbol on his head. Even as a baby, his parents could tell he was special. But when he grew older, his mother died of illness, and his father mysteriously disappeared and hever came back. But the day after that seven eggs came down from the heavens and into Oparin's care. They each had one of the other 7 clan symbols on their shell, and when they hatched, out came one hatchling from each of the other clans, and each was decorated with their clan's symbol, just like Oparin. He named each of them and took them under his wing.
But one egg never had a chance to hatch. On this island along with the Dragons was a Bird race who wanted domination of the island for themselves, and to do that, they had to steal it from the dragons. One day as Oparin was sleeping by his nest, a lone bird flew down and stole the black Scarab egg. The noise was enough to wake Oparin and he charged into the sky after the bird. The feathery menace flew out over the ocean with the special egg. Oparin got it back, but the bird had called reinforcements. They pecked and scratched at Oparin until he dropped the egg. He searched long and hard for it, but the ocean's currents had taken it away, and it was not to be found.
Now, Oparin has had a dream telling him where Cynder is. He has come to find her because the evil Birds have taken over the island and everything is in ruin. They have even abducted the other special dragons and imprisoned them each deep within their own region of the island. Cynder must now come back and help her brother rescue their sisters and reclaim their island from the Birds.
Please tell me what you think!
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#1 Posted: 22:31:35 16/02/2008 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 23:13:44 16/02/2008
Awesome!
Vixen is cool! |
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#3 Posted: 23:29:43 16/02/2008
Great pistures and kool story/ies, I soughta like that idea.
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#4 Posted: 00:22:39 17/02/2008
sounds cool! and the char's look cool too!
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#5 Posted: 01:18:45 17/02/2008
I'd probably be in the Wasp or Spider clan.
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#6 Posted: 01:38:35 17/02/2008
They are awesome drawings!!
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#7 Posted: 05:49:33 17/02/2008
Wonderful drawings!
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#8 Posted: 11:24:59 17/02/2008
This is really a great story! I like Oparin, Vyxen and Cynder!(Of course the
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#9 Posted: 01:18:12 22/02/2008
I absolutely LOOOVE them, SD... I'd probably more like the "Moth" clan, but I like the way Vyxen looks. I like her scale colour and her eye colour.... I should make some of my own, but with some other dragon...
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#10 Posted: 20:49:53 24/02/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanks for the enthusiasm everyone! Yeah, I'd prob'ly be a Moth, too. If not, somewhere IN-BETWEEN Moth and Wasp, if that's possible. I'm going to think of each clan's special abilities pretty soon here, just need some more time...
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#11 Posted: 03:24:38 24/03/2008
what I be in ?
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#12 Posted: 10:10:02 24/03/2008
i LOVE those drawings!! i think ide be in Wasp or Spider..but i could also be in Scarab...
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#13 Posted: 00:23:10 01/04/2008
do you have a DA? *hopes she does*
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#14 Posted: 20:22:28 01/04/2008
i would either be scarab moth or spider....or mabey wasp!
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#15 Posted: 11:23:42 02/04/2008
They all look amazing ! I guess I like moth and butterflies best. I'm absolutely addicted to moths. I read everything I can about them and try to memorize their scientific names. Anyway, as I said, totally awesome work.
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#16 Posted: 17:20:16 10/04/2008
Awesome!!
I like Sorin, Torpeda and Vyxen!! These look like they've been done on computer.... |
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#17 Posted: 00:57:42 29/04/2008 | Topic Creator
I just learned something that works so perfectly for this... in Dawn of the Dragon, Cynder will supposedly have powers of Poison, Fear and Shadow... it's like I was MEANT to conceive the Scarab clan. I'm excited!
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#18 Posted: 16:04:08 11/06/2008
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sweet tribes!
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#19 Posted: 20:29:47 11/06/2008 | Topic Creator
WOW, I never thought i'd see this old topic again! Anyways, thanks sapphire!
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#20 Posted: 19:18:12 24/06/2008
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!
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#21 Posted: 18:44:01 25/06/2008
very good
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#22 Posted: 23:01:43 25/06/2008
I like those characters
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#23 Posted: 02:53:37 26/06/2008
Celcius is really cute! So are all those characters friends?
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#24 Posted: 22:50:42 26/06/2008 | Topic Creator
Hey what happened? the page shrunk! Makes it hard to read...
Spyro LUVA, what do you mean by "friends"? If you mean if they are friendly, then yes.
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#25 Posted: 17:42:03 04/07/2008
off Topic: The dragon on your avi is sooo cute and poor little thing!
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#26 Posted: 17:55:41 04/07/2008
I mean are they friends with each other?
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#27 Posted: 16:05:56 06/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Yes Spyro LUVA, they are friends.
To Night Owl: Thanks, he is rather cute for an undead eyeless creature isn't he? But he's not a dragon...
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#28 Posted: 15:47:52 13/07/2008
Oh, what it he then?
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#29 Posted: 15:14:41 14/07/2008
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thats what i wanna know even though its changed... |
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#30 Posted: 17:43:57 14/07/2008
they are all very beuatiful... very inspiring, could i possibly be allowed to use some of these ideas in my book? i understand if i cannot.
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#31 Posted: 05:03:38 15/07/2008 | Topic Creator
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Well, it's not the same any more as you've noticed, but my previus avatar was an undead creature who does not fit in with the rest of them because he's good-hearted... therefore he is a lost soul in the wrong world. That's basically it in a nutshell. To Spyrosflame, I did let Night Owl use the characters in her story... what book are you writing?
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#32 Posted: 13:28:46 15/07/2008
You forgot Spyro!!!! How can you forget Spyro?!?!?!?! Now you must die!!!!
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#33 Posted: 14:33:18 15/07/2008 | Topic Creator
I'm not dying until I've completed my mission on this planet, and/or I'm very old. What are you talking about, Robo-Spyro?
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#34 Posted: 15:07:23 15/07/2008
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She did! Thanx!
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#35 Posted: 15:10:35 15/07/2008
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ok! thats what he is... |
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#36 Posted: 21:04:10 15/07/2008
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a very long one lol, so far 492 done and still looking for a publisher, but it is illegal to use the charecters in a published instalment i was talking more about the ideas.
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#37 Posted: 01:50:04 25/07/2008
Awesome!
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#38 Posted: 14:20:14 25/07/2008
PLEASE WRTE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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#39 Posted: 10:12:25 26/07/2008
PLZ!
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#40 Posted: 19:27:29 26/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Write... more?** What do you mean, it's not really a whole fanfic, just a basic idea.
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#41 Posted: 19:29:59 26/07/2008
Could you make it a story? PLZ!!
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#42 Posted: 19:48:53 26/07/2008
just a teeny weeny one?
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#43 Posted: 00:56:40 27/07/2008 | Topic Creator
Hmm... perhaps.... maybe even a comic book... I'd have to think a while, though. Glad you guys are so enthused!
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#44 Posted: 01:33:28 27/07/2008
Yeah!
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#45 Posted: 10:07:40 27/07/2008
NP!
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#46 Posted: 18:36:16 27/07/2008
Yeah!
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#47 Posted: 09:29:26 11/08/2008
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#48 Posted: 02:56:45 24/07/2009
Hmmm very creative
do you mind if I use your dragons? I need to think of some art but that is really neat! I will creidt you if you allow me to draw them on my DA page. http://thericadragoness.deviantart.com I would have never thought of that!
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#49 Posted: 04:05:01 24/07/2009 | Topic Creator
^Sure, you can draw them! I think it would be interesting to see! Please show me when you've done them.
PS, you never would have thought of what?
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#50 Posted: 14:02:17 24/07/2009
OK I am glad to hear!
Oh as for that I never would have thought of makeing dragons like that they are cool!!!!!!! WARNING: I draw adult and teen dragons so expect that
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