This is a story that... well... If I tell you, it will ruin the story. This has no connection to my other stories, it was just an idea that came to mind. Please tell me what you think.
Prolouge
I was flying. Racing, really. The sleek-bodied, dark amythist dragoness behind me was laughing as blasting wind from her mouth, hoping to slow me down. On the contrary, I was winning this round. Flapping my red wings, I sped through the trees and skimmed a crystal lake. Drops of glimmering water on my purple scales, I kept flying.
The dragoness behind me cackled in a playful manner. "You won't win this, purple dragon!"
"Heh heh, ya wanna bet?" I called back. Turning around, I breath ice, freezing her left wing.
The dragoness hissed. Frantically beating her wings so they would not freeze over completely. Her teeth chattered as the ice ran through the rest of her body. I laughed aloud, deciding this was hilarious. I kept flying, and turning to look at the dragoness all the while.
"Spyro! Look out!" she called.
I thought she was kidding, or trying to throw me off. Turning back to look at her, I rolled my eyes. "That's cheating, Cynder." I laughed. I looked forward again, and didn't even have time to yell in suprise as I hit a large rock. My wing bent in a way I knew it shouldn't have, and my eyelids turned heavy.
"Spyro!" was the last thing I heard before my eyes closed and darkness consumed me.
XXX
"Wake up! Please be okay!" a strange voice murmured. I opened my eyes and looked into the emerald eyes of a strange creature. Tears where streaming down her scaley cheeks. She hugged me and pulled me up.
"Oh, you're okay!" she nuzzled me.
I jumped backwards. My eyes wide, I had no clue who - or what - this creature was. "Wh- Who are you?"
She raised an eyebrow. "Um... You're joking, right?"
I just starred at her. After blinking twice, the creature's eyes widened so wide I thought they would fall right out of her head. "No... Oh, please no!"
"You never answered my question." I mumbled. "Who are you?" I repeated.
"No," she shook her head in disbelief. "Spyro, you have amnesia!"
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It's a sort of long prolouge, I know, but please Read&Review!
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#1 Posted: 03:09:16 27/09/2010 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 03:24:24 27/09/2010
oh yea, here we go again! awesomenessss
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#3 Posted: 03:27:44 27/09/2010
Awesome, write more soon!
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#4 Posted: 03:48:52 27/09/2010 | Topic Creator
Lol, I'll write more now, because I'm in a writing mood
Chapter 1 "Who are you?" I asked once more. She took a deep breath, obviously trying to process everything. She then looked at me softly. "Spyro, you have amnesia." she repeated. I didn't know what that meant, or what 'Spyro' was. I just turned my head and raised an eyebrow. "My name is Cynder," the creature said slowly. I nodded to show her that I understood. "I am a dragoness... You are a dragon." "I'm a what? I've never heard of a dr- dra- whatever before." I told the dragoness. I tried to stand up, but my head hurt terribly. Wincing, I wondered how I had gotten injured. Cynder swallowed. "Spyro, listen to me: I-" "What's a Spyro?" I asked, interrupting her. Cynder shook her head. "Quite interrupting me! You are Spyro... A dragon. I'll get you back to the cave, where we can get this whole mess sorted out." "What's a cave?" I asked. Cynder shook her head. She clicked her tongue and said. "Here, stretch out your wings." I tried to move my red wings, but a throbbing pain ran through my left one and I cried out in pain. "I can't," I gasped, shocked from the pain I had just felt. Cynder touched it very gently, and swallowed fearfully. "Your wing's broken... You can't fly... And we're hundreds of miles away from the cave... And you have amnesia... It can't get worst than this." I had amnesia, but I knew perfectly well she had messed everything up by saying that. Immediatly, thunder crashed and ran poured from the heavens. Cynder used her wings to protect shield herself, but mine was broken so I just got drenched. "We'll camp out here tonight... This is too much to process right now." Cynder sighed. She padded a bit closer to me and lay down. Yawning, she closed her eyes was sighed. I didn't know what to do. As far as I was concerned, I had just met this dragoness (whatever that was) a few seconds ago, and now she was laying in the rain sleeping next to me. And what was going on with this talk about amnesia? And who was I? My head hurt just thinking about all of these questions, so I closed my eyes and lay down. Soon, sleep took me and I was able to forget my troubles... For now. XXX I was walking in darkness. I looked exactly like how I always did. I suddenly heard screaming. Looking over, I saw myself - Only younger. He was screaming in pain, tears running down his cheeks as he struggled to stay alive. He looked up at me and said between gasps, "Don't forget me," "I won't," I shook my head, confused. I wanted to get out of here... This was too much for me. I looked and saw Cynder. Smiling, I ran over. "Who are you?" she asked. "It's me, Spyro! Don't you recognise me?" I asked, bounding towards her joyfully. "You're not Spyro... You're nobody... You don't even know who you are, how should I?" she asked, taking a step backwards. I padded towards her again. I smiled, looking at her hopefully. "Prove it then: Fly," she hissed. I flapped my wings and leaped into the air, but I never left the ground for more than a second. I tried again, but nothing came. Biting my lip, I tried once more, and failed. "You're not Spyro," Cynder hissed. She turned and faded into darkness. I turned around and saw her again, but she was different... She was dark. I ran over for help anyway. "Get me out of here, save me." I told her. She grabbed my wings in her mouth and bit and clawed at them. I tried to pull away, but couldn't. My wings were torn and bleeding badly. Soon they weren't even wings at all, but motionless, broken things. I backed away, but she clawed at me again. Her eyes narrowed, no mercy showing. She tore at my wings again. "SPYRO!" I opened my eyes, and was in the forest. It was still raining, and Cynder was sitting up nudging me. "You had a bad dream, go back to sleep." Cynder yawned and closed her eyes. ---------------------------------------- I think this is my best chapter ever, enjoy!
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#5 Posted: 04:06:01 27/09/2010
this chapter was so epic love the story!!!!!
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#6 Posted: 04:21:09 27/09/2010
*subscribes*
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#7 Posted: 04:28:03 27/09/2010 | Topic Creator
Lol, thanks... Now I've got subscribers? And the next chapter will be coming soon, I promise.
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#8 Posted: 04:49:10 27/09/2010
yay cant wait
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#9 Posted: 04:53:51 27/09/2010 | Topic Creator
Lol, I guess I can start some of it now.
Chapter 2 When I awoke, I was filled with fear - That dream just wouldn't come off my mind. I decided to ask Cynder about it. "Hey, dragoness, do you ever have wierd dreams?" Cynder shrugged. "All the time... And my name's not 'dragoness', it's Cynder. Okay?" I nodded, though ignored her. I didn't need to hear her correct me with her name, when I barely knew my own. Instead I decided to try to decypher the strange dream. What did it mean? Why where there two Cynders? Why was young me in pain? It was just a dream... It meant nothing. ---------------------------------- Okay, so here's the beginning of the chapter. Enjoy! And I'll be writing 'R&R' at the end of each chapter... That means 'Read and Review', okay?
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#10 Posted: 05:00:31 27/09/2010
poor Spyro life just /\-\/ so quickly
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#11 Posted: 23:39:20 28/09/2010 | Topic Creator
Yes, it does. And I'll add more soon
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#12 Posted: 03:29:15 29/09/2010 | Topic Creator
Okay, next chapter (sorry for double-post)
Chapter 2 (cont.) I padded up behind Cynder, who was sitting up and apperantly sitting. "Cy- Cynder? Who am I?" I asked. Cynder turned and raised her eyebrow. "I told you: You're Spyro the dragon," I shook my head. I assumed she just didn't understand the question. "No... Who am I... Where do I belong?" Cynder smiled. Tilting her head a bit, she seemed to scan me... Judging me. Finally, after what felt like an eternity of silence, she murmured, "You're a legend." "A what?" "You are a rare type of dragon with powers beyong anyone's belief. You are a hero, and an amazing fighter. Without you, the world would cease to exsist." Cynder sighed. I just stared at her, awestruck. How was I supposed to reply to that? She had just told me I was some sort of prodigy! "Wow," I sighed, speachless. My dream came back to me in a strange flash and I remebered the young dragon who looked like me. Tears were streaming down his face as he struggled to stay alive. Don't forget me, he had murmured. I winced at the memory of the strange dream. Cynder padded next to me and nuzzled me. "You okay?" she asked me. I nodded, shaking my thoughts off. "Yeah, sure, I'm fine." Cynder nodded. "Good. How's your wing?" I very slowly tried to flex my wing. Before I could even move it an inch, my wing had a horrible pain - though not as bad as last time - and I fell over, writhing in pain and shock. I lifted my head up. "I'm not flying anytime soon." I told her honestly. Cynder bit her lip, her expression turning into one or worry. "Then we're stuck out here for a while, huh?" I nodded, a grim expression on my face. --------------------------------------------------------------- Enjoy!
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#13 Posted: 03:53:22 29/09/2010
I love it!!!
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#14 Posted: 04:24:37 29/09/2010 | Topic Creator
Lol, thanks
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#15 Posted: 09:48:09 29/09/2010
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Good chapter, but this line doesn't make sense. Did you mean something else with the other "sitting" or was this intentional?
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#16 Posted: 01:31:50 30/09/2010
Awesome chapter!
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#17 Posted: 23:32:47 30/09/2010 | Topic Creator
@Cynder_Fan: My bad!!!! I guess I was a bit tired
And thanks, LTU Spyro
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#18 Posted: 01:39:53 01/10/2010
You're welcome!
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#19 Posted: 11:40:10 01/10/2010
There's an admertisment topic in Stuff and Nonesense. Don't use other topics for advertising your story.
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#20 Posted: 23:18:32 01/10/2010 | Topic Creator
@Cynder_Fan: If you're talking about the 'Legend of Cynder' topic, this isn't the fic I was even talking about. And I wasn't trying to advertise, really, but just tell people that I had written my idea of 'Legend of Cynder', in case anyone was interested... Sorry.
Chapter 3 That night, I was scared to go to sleep. I remebered that dream I had, and I was scared I would have it again. I guess Cynder could feel my restlesness, because she murmured, "Go to sleep, Spyro, everything'll be fine." I nodded, but I knew she did not see me because her eyes were closed - If I hadn't known better I would have thought she were asleep. I closed my eyes too and sighed. Darkness consumed me as I fell asleep. The last thing I can remeber from that night was water starting to pour down on me. XXX I awoke when the sun was just rising, the world calm and quiet. Rain was pouring onto my scales. Thunder was crashing in the distance as pure electricity shot out of the heavens. I winced... What were those bright-colored lights? "Cy- Cynder? What's going on?" I turned to look at her, but I saw that she was gone. "CYNDER?!" I called out, worried. Was I just dreaming again? Why wasn't I waking up? "Spyro? Come over here," I heard her voice call. I padded a few feet away, and saw Cynder, standing at the edge of a cliff looking out into the sky. "It's called Lightning," she said in a hushed voice. I nodded. Suprised, I said nothing but stared at the sky too. Her voice was quiet and peaceful, a complete contrast to what she said next. "I'm scared," My eyes widened. Cynder was never supposed to be scared! She was supposed to be, well, not scared. "Why?" I asked fearfully. Her voice still quiet, she replied, "This isn't a normal storm. I'm worried something's going to happen... Something bad." I swallowed, as the words from my dream echoed in my head once more. Don't forget me. ---------------------------------------------------------------- There ya go! Enjoy!
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#21 Posted: 23:24:32 01/10/2010
Yay, that was truly amazing!!!!!!
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#22 Posted: 23:28:07 01/10/2010 | Topic Creator
lol, thanks
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#23 Posted: 23:49:43 01/10/2010
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Interesting... And no, i was talking to another user who's post has since gone AWOL.
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#24 Posted: 00:06:35 02/10/2010
Cool chapter!
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#25 Posted: 03:34:09 02/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks!
@Cynder_Fan: Oh, I see. Okay. And thanks!
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#26 Posted: 04:06:01 02/10/2010
Great chapter.
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#27 Posted: 06:54:09 02/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Lolness, thanks
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#28 Posted: 18:31:58 02/10/2010
Great Story.
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#29 Posted: 04:38:01 04/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks
Chapter 4 (part 1) I wondered what Cynder had meant when she said something bad was going to happen. Was it even possible to have something worse happen than breaking your wing, getting stranded in the forest, and losing your memory? I could tell Cynder was just as worried, for she spent all day pacing back and fourth, mumbling things about someone named Malefor and some elders and having to escape the forest. I was worried for her. I hated seeing her so worried all the time. That night, Cynder made a fire and we sat around it. The ground was still stained from the rain from that morning, so the heat of the flames was comforting. I padded close to the dragoness. "Cy- Cynder?" I whispered. "What happens if this bad thing happens and we can't do anything about it?" Cynder gave a soft chuckle. "Even with amnesia you're trying to be heroic. Typical purple dragon." ----------------------------------------- Okay, I can't do any more... But I'll add more to this chapter. Enjoy what I've got so far
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#30 Posted: 12:22:46 04/10/2010
Awesome!
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#31 Posted: 19:48:47 04/10/2010
Im luvvin da storray!!!!!!
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Cynder fan not gunna be pleased lol
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#32 Posted: 21:03:46 04/10/2010
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Thank you for pointing that out "I padded closer to the..." [/grammernazi]
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#33 Posted: 01:55:32 05/10/2010
^haha grammernazi
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#34 Posted: 02:04:24 05/10/2010
Hmm... actually, they are both right, depends on what you meant though..
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#35 Posted: 05:48:40 05/10/2010
Awesome. I can't wait to read more of the chapter.
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#36 Posted: 22:38:35 05/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Lol, thanks. I have a minor case of writer's block, but I'll get the chapter up soon enough.
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#37 Posted: 23:39:32 05/10/2010
Good chapter. I hope your writer's block goes away.
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#38 Posted: 00:36:27 06/10/2010
oh yea i had a huge writers block on my story i hate those d*mn things! hope it clears up
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#39 Posted: 03:58:30 06/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Well, it's going a way a bit I'll try to write:
Chapter 4 (cont) That night, Cynder was restless. I fell asleep immediatly. Everything around me seemed calm. Crickets were chirping, there was a pleasant breeze over the trees, making them blow a bit. The puddles of the rain were almost completely dried up. I was completely asleep, dreaming of gems raining from the sky. Suddenly, I heard screaming. "It's too late! I can't control myself! I'm sorry! Stop it, please!" there were tears streaming down the dragoness as she cried in her sleep. I padded over as quickly as I could. Shaking her awake with my paw, she opened her emerald eyes and gasped, sitting upwright immediatly. "Huh?" she sighed in relief when she saw me. "Oh, it's just you," she gasped. I looked at her worriedly. "What were dreaming about?" I asked her. "Nothing," she snapped with a suddenly bitter tone. I was taken back by this manner, but tried to ignore it. I cleared my throat. "Well let's get to bed," I suggested. She nodded and lay down again. Soon we were both sleeping peacefully. XXX When I awoke, Cynder was back to her normal self. For some reason, there was another storm. This time, the lightning was brighter, and in a strange pattern. I asked Cynder quietly, "What is it?" "Read it," she whispered. I followed the pattern in the lightning, and was able to make out, Beware purple dragon in the lightning. I gasped and looked at the dragoness worriedly. "Is... Is it talking about me?" Cynder swallowed and nodded. She obviously was too scared to say anything. --------------------------------------------------------- There ya go!!! Enjoy!!!
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#40 Posted: 04:27:57 06/10/2010
I am amazed at these writing skills truly amazed!
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#41 Posted: 07:13:56 06/10/2010
""What were dreaming about?" I asked her." Needs a "you" after were XP
Interesting...
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#42 Posted: 11:37:25 06/10/2010
^hahaha I like how your picking upon her flaws these are little things that I really don't mind
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#43 Posted: 19:39:45 06/10/2010
Awesome!
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#44 Posted: 19:54:56 06/10/2010
Very good.
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#45 Posted: 18:08:23 07/10/2010
Queen_Cynder, thou had prove thourself to be factory of great Spyro fanfics yet again!
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#46 Posted: 22:00:42 07/10/2010
^ ahahaha truth
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#47 Posted: 01:16:25 08/10/2010
sweet fic! i wish i was this good at writing...
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#48 Posted: 05:10:25 08/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Aw, thanks! I wish I could write more, but it's 10:11 here and I am SOOO TIRED
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#49 Posted: 12:41:34 14/10/2010
*topicrevive*
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#50 Posted: 20:20:35 14/10/2010
^hahaha
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