A young boy around 8 is lying on a bed coughing and barley breathing, no one including himself knows what is wrong with him. Meanwhile, in another room Martha talks with a doctor who says the same as all the others"his body seems to be fine he doesn't have any illnesses, or any conditions, he should be fine"."Thanks". Martha says to the doctor. Back in the boys room there is another child about 13 or 14 and is crying "Brevin why does this have to happen to you"."Its ok John,i'll be alright" Brevin said for what must of been the billionth time. John then leaves still crying."I remember the good old days".
Flashback:
Brevin:4000
John:4000
"My turn" Brevin says,"and I summon Warrior of Zera in attack mode" ATK:1600."I play two face downs and end my turn".
"My move" John says "and I summon Shadowknight Archfiend in attack ATK his warrior with evil stab".
"I activate Sakurestu Armor to destroy your monster" Brevin said dramatically.
"Nice try But when Shadowknight Archfiend is targeted by an effect I can roll a dice and if its 3 the effect is negated" John said dramatically as well.
A big dice rolls and lands on a 5 "darn" John said as his monster was ripped to shreds."I play two face-down and I end my turn".
"I draw and activate The Sanctuary in the Sky then tribute Warrior of Zera to summon Archlord Zerato in attack mode" ATK 2800 "attack John directly Angel Slash".
Brevin:4000
John:1200
"OK. I better turn this around" john thought. "I activate Pandemoium then Call of the Haunted,to summon Warrior of tribute it to summon Mazera Devile In attack mode" ATK:2800 then I equip him with Mist Body". As John said that,half of his monsters body disappeared and was replaced by a ominous fog. Since I equipped Mazera Devile with Mist Body he cant be destroyed by I activate Double Attack so by the name you could probably guess my monster can attack twice. So I have him attack you Zerato and you directly. I end my turn.
Brevin:1200
John:1200
OK. Nice comeback but beat this I summon Marauding Captain. Then use his effect to summon Tune Warrior. I Tune Tune Warrior With Marauding Captain. The powers of those who search for meaning! The strength of those who search for truth! The very earth itself... rumble and shake! Awaken and reveal yourself! Synchro Summon! Gaia Knight, the Force of Earth! As Brevin said that Tune Warrior disappeared and was replaced by three loops then Marauding Captain jumped into them, a big light flashed and a robotical Gaia the Fierce Night replaced the two. ATK:2600. Then I activate Heavy Storm to destroy your mist body and face-down card.
Why would you do that your monster id still weaker than mine. John asked.
Because, I activate Axe of Despair so gaia gains 1000 attack, Now attack his Mazera Devile. I end my turn.
Brevin:1200
John:400
I draw and set a monster,and a 2 's it.
Now this is the last turn Brevin thought. I equip Gaia with Fairy Meteor Crush so Gaia gets a piercing damage effect. Now end this duel attack his face down. As Brevin said that Gaia charged at the face down monster and shattered. What! Brevin screamed oh you have Sakuretsu Armor. Don't you. Nope actually there's two Mirage Tube and Chaos Burst. So you lose.
Brevin:0000
John:400
I almost won that time.
Yea but you didn't. John said laughing as Brevin joined in.
End flash back.
Yeah those were good times.
After John left Brevin herd a voice.:Brevin, I need Your help".
pretty well writen pal! but you need to add a few things that should make it better no, the chapter is cool, just the way its written. go to help files and see what you can do.
*blink* Help file? And nice. And we all know you don't own Yugioh 5Ds. I have one of the games, so yeah. Pretty good though. I like it. Read mine yet? \/
"That's not important yet the mysterious figure said. Then what do you want?Like I said I need your help .But What do you mean by that Brevin says while the colors around him distort to a purple vortex.
Duel me!The figure said.
That's something I can do Brevin says as a duel disk appears on their arms.
DUEL
Brevin:4000
?:4000
Me first Brevin says as he draws a card. And I activate Zera Ritual and by discarding Warrior of Zera Level Eater and Tune Warrior and summon Zera the Mant as Brevin said this three cards from his hand flew into pillar looking objects then after a giant flash a huge blue hunched-back fiend appeared behind Brevin,ATK 2800 I summon Warrior Dai Grepher . Now a muscular warrior appeared next to the fiend. ATK 1700. Then I equip synchro boost on my warrior so he gains 500 attack and 1 level.I end my turn with two face downs.
My turn the figure said and I summon Breaker the Magical Warrior in defense mode . A blue warrior with a huge shield now stood next to the figure DEF 2000.I activate Magical Dimension so by tributing my Breaker to summon Endymion the Master Magician in attack mode his giant shielded warrior was sealed in a sarcophagus and when it opened a much stronger looking magician levitated on to the field. ATK 2700 then I can destroy any monster on the field and I choose Zera the said as the blue giant disappeared I have Endymion attack.
Nice try but I activate Revival gift then Urgent Tuning. So first up I play the Tune Warrior while he has talking a machine with a plug on the end of his arm Then I can synchro summon during my battle phase so I tune level 3 Tune Warrior with level 5 Warrior Dai Grepher. The brute force of a warrior with unstoppable power reawakens. Are combined power can win this duel. Synchro summon Colossal Fighter. ATK:2800 Of course because I used Revival Gift you get two Fiend Gift Tokens. But Colossal Fighter gains 100 attack for every warrior in the graveyard ATK:3100. Now attack his first Fiend Gift Token. I end my turn.
Brevin:4000
?:4000
I end my turn.
I draw then I special summon The Tricky then a summon Arcane Apprentice. The feared and respected magical deity shall grace the field with his presence. Synchro summon. The true master,Arcanite Magician. As he finishes I realize that he is disappearing then reappearing on the field. Your Arcanite Magician? Brevin asked. Yes I'm the spirit of Arcanite Magician and I know whats wrong with you, and I can help!
You do? Brevin said in astonishment. Yes now on with the duel. Arcanite answered.
Brevin: 3000
Arcanite: 3900
Now I activate my effect I gain 2 spell counters and for each one I gain 1000 attack. Arcanite Magician 2400. Now I can remove one spell counter from myself to destroy one monster on the field and I chose Archlord Zerato Arcanite said as Zerato shattered. Now I can attack you directly. I activate Negate Attack I interrupted. Fine then I end my turn.
Brevin:3000
Arcanite:3900
O.k. then I activate polymerization to fuse Warrior Die Grepher with Spirit Ryu to summon Ryu Senshi then I summon Marauding Captain then use his effect to summon Gagagigo . Senshi attack Arcanite. Arcanite shields himself from the blow but disappears and reappears on behind the field. Nice attack Arcanite admits. That's nothing. Marauding Captian and Gagagigo attack Arcanite directly. Then I play a facedown and end my turn.
Brevin: 3000
Arcanite Magician: 900
I draw. And I set a monster then I end my turn with a facedown.
That's it? My turn I draw the attack your face down with Ryu Senshi. And I counter with Magical Cylinder. Arcanite said. And I play Ring of Destruction. Brevin Said.
But that means…yep you lose Brevin finished. As Marauding Captain blew up and took some of Brevin's and all of Arcanite's life points with it.
Brevin:1800
Arcanite:0000
Arcanite fell back. Amd as I helped him up I asked now how can you help.
First off I would like thank my reviewers and everyone else who read but didn't review. Now to the story
Now do you really know why I'm always so sick? Brevin asked. Yes I saw it as soon as I met you. Arcanite answered. What have you been spying on me Brevin screamed as a sweat drop appeared on Arcanite's face. Anyway Arcanite began hoping to change the subject your body is fine which you must already know. Yes that's what all the doctors say. Brevin answered where are you going with this. Well the reason why you're always sick is because you have an incomplete spirit. What Brevin answered surprised. An incomplete spirit. Brevin repeated quietly to himself.
And as a duel spirit Arcanite continued I am only part of my respective owner. By some mean of fate my spirit is the same size of the part your missing. So what do you say? If I become part of you you'll be fine? Wait so you just come out of nowhere face me in a children's card game then ask me to be your host? Brevin asked. Yes pretty much Arcanite responds. O.k. Brevin said. Now when you wake up you will think this a dream but its not. Arcanite said as he changes into a pure white steam and flies into Brevin's body.
Immediately he wakes up in the room of Martha's orphanage. As soon as he gets up he looks at his deck and on the bottom he sees Arcanite Magician it was real! Brevin said. Of course it was I told it was didn't I? Brevin hears as he turns to see a certain spirit doing a signature leaning pose with his arms crossed. Excuse me but I need to tell Martha and John I'm alright. Brevin says right before he runs down the hallways while screaming Martha John I'm O.k.! After Brevin left Arcanite told himself I just made a very important child very happy.
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