darkSpyro

Please tell me if this is good and i will keep going

Prologue The egg was sitting all alone in the corner. No one noticed the egg after they left it in the forest, because they thought that the egg was never going to hatch. So the hatchling from that egg grew up with no family or friends.

Hmmm good but what kind of dragon is it?

ooo i like the set up here I SAY keep going

you'll see
almost done chapter one here's the first part
Chapter 1 It’s a beautiful day I thought as I wondered though the forest. Suddenly I stumbled across the ruins of what looked like an old temple. Soon I heard someone coming so hid in a bush, there I found some armor. I put the armor on and came out of the bush. I walked it to the temple and saw dummys that looked like the strange creatures in the forest that I had seen once and all of a sudden a jet of flame came out and the dummy was no more. I looked further through the gap and saw another dragon standing there he was red and looked older than me. I saw him talking to another dragon and then another dummy appeared out of nowhere. I decided to keep looking around. When I got to another room I saw a younger dragon sitting near the wall. I decided to go over and talk to him. “Hi” I said to him, he looked up “Hi” he said, “what’s your name, mines Spike” “I don’t know” I said. “Wait here I’ll just go get the elders, I’ll be right back” He said while running somewhere else to get the elders.

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While I was waiting I looked around and saw a green pool in the middle of the room I looked into the pool and saw a dragon put an egg onto the ground in the forest. When the dragon left the egg started to hatch, that’s when she realized that it was her that hatched from the egg. She had been dumped in the forest when she was still an egg and forced to live by herself. Just then one of the elders walked in and saw her looking into the pool; he watched her thinking that this might just be the dragon from the egg he had thought would never hatch.

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great so far i love it

Chapter 2- Two dragons flew in through the window; they had just come back from their morning flight. I ran and hid behind a shield that was lying in one corner of the room. I saw two small dragons run up to them. The elder went to the shield I was hiding behind and told me to come out when they were gone “That’s Spyro and Cynder, they saved the world from exploding” He said before going over to the green pool, I followed him. “I saw you looking into the pool before, tell me what you were looking at” he said. I was stunned at how he knew about that “I…… I was l…looking at how I was d…dumped in the forest and about how I had to fend for myself” I stammered. “Ahh… I thought it was you” he said “you see this is the pool of visions and that was a vision you saw. But if you grew up alone you mustn’t have a name, so your name can be Mist, now there’s no need to wear all that armor so take it all off.” I took off the armor and asked “who were those dragons that ran up to them?” “They were Icicle and Dawn Spyro and Cynder’s children” he replied “well I still don’t know your name” I said “you can call me Terridor” he said. ”OK” I said. “Come” Terridor said. And I followed him into another room; there were three other elders plus Spyro and Cynder. “I think it’s about time to find out what your element is.” Spyro said to me. A dummy appeared in the center of the room. “Go ahead just try breath on it” Cynder said. I went to the dummy and tried to breathe my element but I couldn’t, I looked at the dragons looking through the same gap I was looking through before they were laughing at me. I tried again and again and again but I couldn’t do it “come on you can do it“Cynder said trying to encourage me I had one more go and that’s when I discovered my element was wind. “Cool” I said. Then a dragon rushed in, it was Spike, “The temple is under attack” he said. We all rushed to the window…

sorry haven't been on becase we went camping
next chapter won't been coming soon

ok i love it though i cant wait when there is more . hope the camping is fun

OK had a brain storm last night writing the next chapter right now
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Chapter 3-We immediately flew down and started to fight them off. I was fighting a tall, orange dude, he jumped up I looked up only to be hit in the head I fell to the ground, I was knocked out.
When I recovered and woke up, I was in a dark room, I got up and went to the door and heard voices.
“Go and take the female to the corruption room. We’ll use her just like Cynder and release the Dark Master. We will rule the land just as we planned. Now go.” A deep voice said.
“Yes master” another voice said.
The door swung open. “Hello again. Mist.”
I sneered at him. “Sleepy time” he said when he knocked me out again.
I woke up in another room I felt power flowing through my body, I felt stronger, and I started to turn black that’s when I realized I was being corrupted. I looked at the screen to my left, 15% full. Good. I did my tornado spin and broke the tube I was in. The glass hit the guard in the chest and killed him. I found a map in a chest near the door and flew out a smashed window. I eventually found my way back to the temple, when I walked into the room with the pool of visions Terridor asked “What happened to you”
“They captured me and tried to corrupt me” I replied
“Go to the chronicler and get rid of the darkness” Terridor said.
“OK” I said.
“You should find the Chronicler on Spooky Moon Island…” he said.
I started to fly off. “May the ancestors look after you… May they look after us all.”
And with that I flew off to Spooky Moon Island.

About half way there I heard a voice.
“Hey” yelled the voice.
I stopped and turned around to see a yellow dragonfly flying towards me.
“What are you doing out here,” the dragonfly asked.
“Who are you,” I asked.
“Who are you,” the dragonfly asked.
“Mist” I said
“Sparx, what are you doing out here?” Sparx asked again.
“I’m going to Spooky Moon Island” I said to him.
“Hey I know that place. Follow me.” Sparx said turning sharply to the right.
“Your going the wrong way genius” I said.
“And how do you know I’m going the wrong way, huh, huh, huh” said Sparx
“Because I’ve got a map” I said.
There was silence for a while.
“You look bigger and darker than last time I saw you” Sparx said.
“Were you that dragonfly flying around Spyro’s head?”I asked.
“Yeah, but back to the question, why are you bigger and darker”
“Because I’m partly corrupted” I said.
“So that’s why you’re going to the chronicler” he said.
“Because I’ve been there before,” he said “but right now its question time, me first. How did you get corrupted? How did you escape? How did you even get there? How did you—“
I sighed this was going to be a long trip.
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yay gettin the hang of it

I luvz it! cant wait for more

Chapter 4- it was night time when we got to Spooky Moon Island.
“I’m tired,” Sparx complained.
“We’ll camp over near those rocks,” I said
“Fine,” said Sparx.
I started to make a bed with sticks. (What I learned to do when I was in the forest)
I lay down and thought for a while, then I when to sleep.
I got up early and caught a few birds me to eat, then for Sparx I caught some butterflies. When Sparx finally woke up I had already eaten. I let the butterflies out of the clear container I had found, and Sparx ate some of them, (I kept the rest) then I went over to what looked like a pillar on a rock. I looked and saw that there were more platforms ahead. I worked my way though the platforms and came to a big door.
Meanwhile in another world.
Two teenage dragons, one black with white eyes the other white with black eyes, were planning to break in to a girls house. Day peaked through the window.
“She’s not asleep yet,” said Day impatiently.
“She will sleep eventually,” said Night.
“But we should take her now,” whined Day.
“Shh… something’s coming,” whispered Night.
Day and Night hid in the bushes under Cynder134’s window.
In Cynder134’s house.
*Distracted by playing Dotd* “Finally, I got there”
*Hears bushes rustling outside* “What the…”she said pausing the game to look out the window, “Meh” She said not really caring because her pet bird, Bella had passed away recently. A tear rolled down her cheek as she remembered everything as if it was yesterday. She lifted her head when she heard the bushes rustling again but unlike last time she saw a black stick or something that resembled a tail lying out of the bush.
“Wow. What is that?”She said. Turning everything off she ran outside to see what it was.
With Day and Night.
“She’s coming now’s our chance.”Said Day.
Cynder134 hearing this ran faster and quickly parted the bushes seeing two dragon shapes before she was knocked out and dragged through a portal to another world.

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