darkSpyro

WARNING! May Be Sad!

Revenge
Chapter Zero

Sophia stood at the edge of the rock, her eyes red and puffy. "I'm Sorry!" She screamed, unable to see, her tears like poison. Her whole body was shivering as she stared at the blade equipped in the Man's Hand.
"What Did I do to deserve this?" She yelled at him.
"You're time is up." These were the only words the man had said for the past 2 hours, chasing her up the mountain. His voice was already like a wound from a knife on her delicate ears. His face was covered by a thick skiing mask and is eyes were pitch black. He took a step closer as she took a step back, her hair blowing wildly in the wind. Her foot crumbled some rock and she stumbled forward. She tripped into his hands and he he held the knife to her neck. Anthony ran from behind. "Let her go!" He screamed in terror. The Man, not known he was there, stumbled and cut Sophia's neck. A deep red drip of blood trickled down her neck. She knew what was going on, and she tried to stand, but her legs buckled beneath her, and she collapsed.The man smiled evilly and sprinted off. Anthony ran to Sophia and crouched next to her. Tears were forming in his eyes. Her skin had gone pale, and her neck, red and covered with blood. If only she did not suffer from Haemophilia! Anthony thought, weeping in sorrow. Her life flashed before his eyes. All the times they were together, all the fond memories, burnt from the man to dare lay a hand on her. He lay his hands on a bone near her neck, his fingers being covered with blood. No pulse. Gripping her in his arms he rose. "Nooooooooo!" He screamed.

She died.....yikes......

SHE WAS SO YOUNG! I will add more l8r

I don't even know what the heck is happening. I just stated that she died.

Okay???

Whoa......AWESOME!

People dying isn't awesome pg. It's bad. But it does make for a great storyline.

Revenge
Chapter 1

Anthony walked through the dusty streets, wielding a knife. It was Midnight, but his sources had spied The Man in a nearby Pub. He continued walking over shattered glass, barefoot. There weren't many late night strollers, but if there were, they would all dodge to one side of him, noticing his knife. He spied the pub. 'The Crown And Badger.' The sign was torn and broken down, but over the internet, it looked the same. He walked in to see a man sitting at a table, sipping some frothy liquid. Anthony recognized his eyes, piercing black. That's him! Anthony thought, shocked. He dropped his knife and as it clinked to the ground, everyone stared at him. The Man smiled evilly and as the pub manager came over To Anthony to ask why he had a knife, The Man slipped away. But Anthony was determined, He pushed the manager to the ground and ran to the table. Gone.

He looked behind him and smiled, nervously. Standing there, was a manger covered with food from the floor, and to smartly dressed Policemen. "You are going to have to come with us to the station." One of the policemen snapped, cuffing Anthony.

HAha! He just got arested! wow. He needs to focus a bit more on not getting throw in jail if he's going to get his revenge.

Revenge
Chapter 1 Continuance

Sitting in a cell, the shadow of the bars sat on his face. He heard clinking as another Policemen in blue unlocked his prison cell. "You've been bailed out!" He said, looking at a clipboard. "Cell 7291." Anthony was confused. He didn't know anyone. "Who is it?" He asked, standing.
"Go see for yourself." The policeman said smiling. "Its a beautiful young lady!"
Anthony was shocked. He ran to the door to see Sophia standing in a beautiful sun dress. "How?" He said, feeling a little faint.
"Hey honey!" Sophia laughed, running up and kissing him on the cheek. "Now what happened this time?" She asked.
"I-I-I-I!" He said scared. He fainted.

Hahahah! Wow. A guy fainted. Wiat, didn't she die? *does a double take* Whaaaaaa?

Quote: Goldenfire

People dying isn't awesome pg. It's bad. But it does make for a great storyline.

Quote: pony_girl24

Whoa......AWESOME!

Proof that PG dosen't read the storys.

I do too.

No you don't pg. Then what's this about?

Ummmm.............

Revenge
Chapter 2

Anthony awoke, startled. "Oh, I had a horrible dre..." He stopped. "A nightmare!" He looked around him, hoping he was still in his torn down prison cell. Incorrect. He was at home, in his bed."I can't believe I am saying this, but i wish i was still in prison!" he whimpered, curling up in the blankets. This has to be a dream, This has to be a dream! He thought, repetitively. Then he noticed a yellow sticky note, curled up an Sophia's pillow. With a shaky arm, he reached over and received it. Carefully he unravelled the note, to read in Sophia's Perfect writing:

If you are reading this

How are you?
Are you okay darling?
Very well then, I will
Explain. I am at the Casino.

So Why, you may ask. Trying to win back
OUR fortune, I had to
Pretend to have when I bailed you out of that
Horrible Prison.
I didn't want to gamble. I had to.
All of my love, Sophia.

He didn't understand. The casino had been torn down years ago, but he wondered why Sophia had written this. But if he looked at it closely, he saw every letter was perfect, almost forged.

He stood up instantly, then he realised the code in the note. Sophia isn't dead? He thought, Looking down the first letter of each sentence. "I need to go get Sophia!"

Nice. Very good code too.

Good job!

Revenge
Chapter 3

Anthony jogged through the streets. This man was leading him on a chase, and he wanted to know when it would end. Not only did his message had a code in it, but he knew what the man was angling for. Ransom. From around his house, he had managed to gather up two thousand dollars. He had even checked between the dusty cushions and even in his safe. Just to make him seem valuable, he even painted a dollar sign onto the ragged bag. He turned another corner, and there he was. Though he only saw a glimpse, he knew it was him. He sprinted to the torn down casino, and he saw Sophia, wearing a orange jumpsuit. She was sitting on the ground next to a man in a thick black skiing mask. Anthony gripped the bag tighter. Slowly, he opened it and stuck his hand in.
"I'm not an idiot." The man shouted, grumpily. "Don't try to fool me, making believe there is money in there."
Crap Anthony cursed. He curled his fingers around the pistol in the money bag. Foiled by a kidnapper, not my finest work.
"Hand it over!" He snapped, cutting into Anthony's thoughts.
"What?" he replied, trying to throw the man off scent.
"The bloody gun in the bag!" He snapped, grabbing a blade out of his pocket and holding it to Sophia's neck.
"What are you going to do to save your precious Sophia!" He hissed.

wow. This is, no offense inteneded, slowly turning into a classic kidnapping scene. No offense inteneded. I'm sure it was meant to be either scary or funny, but I don't fine it either. Just......... Same old, same old.

Oh, okay then. That wasn't my intentions because it is going to change soon. You just wait.

Alright. As long as things get interesting soon, most of us will continue to read it. Check mine out.\/

Your saying people will read it? Thank you! Tear!

*blinkblink* Uh.....Okay? But that's really only if you advertise it. Like I do mine. \/ Indicate the title in your signature.

I did advertise it for a bit. But now I am advertising a bunny and my anniversary to darkspyro.

Ah. Nice bunny by the way.

Thanks.

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