darkSpyro

credit for the idea of the Dark Realm goes to AngelicBeast and however else created the Dark Realm. the first chapter is coming soon.

Lolness, I always use a dark realm in RP's. I'd like to read this

thanks for posting

Chapter 1,

in Heaven it was a bright and sunny morning as always. the golden streets of the city of Heaven were filled with activity. humans and angels were busy with the daily chores and tasks that Jesus assigned to them. in the middle of the city stood the largest building, the temple. as with every building in Heaven the temple was made out of pure gold. the floor of the temple was white linoleum. there was a large room in the temple that had all the sacred holy relics in it, the room was guarded by 2 angels. along the walls of the inside of the temple were white columns that went up to the ceiling, they were evenly spaced 3 feet away from each other. at the back of the temple was the throne of Jesus. Jesus sat in his throne, he was dressed in an elegant white robe. lying sleep at his feet was a small 10 year old purple dragon named Dragsooth. Dragsooth was created by Jesus, he loved Jesus with all of his heart. he wanted to spend every moment he could with Jesus. Dragsooth had been given the ability to breathe the elements of fire, electricity, ice, earth and light. he used these elements to protect himself if he was ever in danger.
Dragsooth smiled in his sleep, he had his tail curled around himself and his wings were tucked near his sides.

suddenly an angel wearing armor came running into the temple, he then dropped to his knees in front of Jesus. Dragsooth suddenly woke up after hearing the angel come in.

the angel looked up at Jesus "Master, the demons are attacking! there are thousands of them! we don't know if we can hold them off from the city much longer!"

Jesus stood up and looked at the angel "you go back and join the battle."

the angel quickly stood up "yes Master." he ran out of the temple.

Dragsooth quickly stood up and looked at Jesus "what should i do Master?"

Jesus looked down at him "you stay here."

Dragsooth: "but Master-..."

Jesus: "stay here." he then disappeared in a flash of light.


the streets of the city were empty. they were silent. there was a battle going on away from the city in an open field. on one side there were angels and on the other side were demons. they were fighting a battle to the death. the angels were holding the demons away from the city as best they could and their efforts were paying off because no demon made it to the city. no demon except for one, a large red dragon was flying above the city, it was Lucifer. he was wearing rusty armor on almost every part of his body. he flew down and landed inside the temple. suddenly 2 angels came at him with their swords in hand. they slashed at him, Lucifer dodges and takes out his own sword. he kills one angel with a single slash of his sword. the other angel tries to stab Lucifer, he side stepped the angel and stabbed him in the back killing him. Lucifer walked through the temple with his blood stained sword clutched in his hand, he walked towards the throne and he saw Dragsooth staying in a defensive position in front of the throne. Lucifer smirked when he saw the little dragon "is this who Jesus left to protect his throne?... a little dragon?... why don't you make it easier for me and step aside so that i can take my rightful spot in that throne?"

Dragsooth was crouched down in an attack position, he had his wings spread out "you can have this throne over my dead body!" he growled at Lucifer.

Lucifer growled at him, and he lunges at him and swings his sword at him. Dragsooth jumps backwards and dodges the attack. Dragsooth breathes fire at Lucifer. Lucifer blocks with his wings. his wings get burned, he then uncovers himself and strikes Dragsooth with his tail. Dragsooth hits a wall and falls to the floor. Lucifer then walks over to the throne and sits in it. he feels great power overwhelm him.

Lucifer: "...yes... i can feel ultimate power coursing through me!!!"

Dragsooth stood up weakly and saw Lucifer on the throne. Dragsooth ran towards him and jumped at him. with lightning speed Lucifer grabbed Dragsooth by the throat. Dragsooth struggled to get free. Lucifer looked at him menacingly "i... am... god!!!" Lucifer threw Dragsooth against the wall knocking him unconscious. Lucifer raised both arms up in the air. dark energy came from his hands. the dark energy spread all over Heaven. the Heavenly land began to change. the sky got darker, the sparkling grass turned a dark brown, the crystal clear river turned muddy, the golden city and streets turned to stone, the temple turned to stone as well, a big statue of Lucifer appeared on top of the temple. inside the temple the white linoleum floors turned to cobbled stone, the space in between the columns in the walls turned into small cells. humans and angels appeared in these hundreds of cells. the angels had no armor on and their weapons were gone. Dragsooth was in a cell unconscious right next to Lucifer's throne. the demons that survived the battle came marching into the temple victoriously. they came in front of Lucifer and fell to their knees in front of him, they worshiped him. Lucifer had finally won this war that had been going on for thousands of years. he looked around towards the cells of trapped angels and humans. he was going to have his revenge on them all.


next chapter coming soon.

Interesting...I actually take a personal interest in this. I look forward to more.

I see mistakes from first sentence:
Angels and humans simply can't live next to each other. Simply because humans are food for angels. The eaten always fall to eternal void, but not before pain from being feed at... Vampires are just angels who fell from the heaven, as punishmen from gods for rebelion and trying to fulfil the goal of destroying heaven and themselves to save humans... Vampires feeds on humans for sake of their own survival, to retry the rebelion...

Hell is completelly different plane, it's place we all have piece of it inside. The moments we unwisely regret, our "that kind of" fantasies, the things we utterly most want to keep secret turning widely public...

matesds what the heck are you talking about. if you don't have anything smart to say don't say anything at all...

Tibs thank you.

Chapter 2,

Dragsooth woke up a few minutes later. he saw that he was in a small cell. he looked outside the cell and saw Lucifer sitting in the throne that belonged to Jesus. Dragsooth ran up to the door of his cell "no... no! you-... you've taken over Heaven?"

Lucifer glanced over at Dragsooth and smirked evilly "yes... yes i have..." a crystal ball appeared in his hand and he put it up near the bars of Dragsooth's cell "you like what i've done with this place?" the Crystal ball showed an image of what Heaven was like now.

Dragsooth looked at the image and saw what Heaven looked like. the grass had lost it's shine and was now a dirty brown color. the sky was now red and black and was filled with dark clouds. the golden streets and buildings were now stone and rock. Dragsooth looked up at Lucifer "what you've done to Heaven is horrible!"

the crystal ball disappeared and Lucifer laid his arm on the armrest of his throne. "i think Heaven looks much better. a big improvement from how Jesus made it look." Lucifer looked away from Dragsooth.

Dragsooth growled and breathed fire at Lucifer. he was hit by the flames but he didn't react and nothing seemed to get burned. Lucifer got up from the throne and faced the cell. the cell door opened and Lucifer reached inside and grabbed Dragsooth by the throat. Lucifer picked him up by the throat and looked into his eyes. Dragsooth struggled a bit to get free. Lucifer's hand emitted dark energy. Dragsooth screamed in pain for the darkness was hurting him. Lucifer smiled as he heard his screams. Lucifer then let go of Dragsooth dropping him on the stone floor. Dragsooth stood up weakly, he felt something around his neck. he then saw a black collar with a red pentagram hanging down from the collar. Dragsooth looked up at Lucifer "what is this for?"

Lucifer looked down at Dragsooth smiling evilly. "you'll see soon enough!" he snapped his fingers and the pentagram on the collar glowed with black energy.

Dragsooth fell to the ground as pain overwhelmed him "wha-... what's happening to me?..." he sounded like he was in pain.

Lucifer looked down at him "the collar is draining your magic... and it's also a very effective way of torture. wouldn't you agree?" he smiled evilly.

Dragsooth flinched a lot because of the pain "i... hate... you... satan!!" his pain increased twice as much and Dragsooth screamed in pain.

Lucifer smiled at his screams "good... suffer for your insults!" after a few more minutes Lucifer got tired of hearing Dragsooth's screams of pain.

the pentagram stopped emitting dark magic and Dragsooth just laid on the floor breathing heavily "...thank... God... it's over..."

Lucifer: "finally! you give me the thanks i deserve!"

Dragsooth picked his head up and looked up at him ".. i wasn't talking to you!"

Lucifer growled and struck Dragsooth with his tail. Dragsooth crashed into the back wall of his cell. the cell door closed with a loud slam. Lucifer looked into the cell "you'll be regretting not giving me respect!... you'll be regretting it for a long time!" Lucifer sat back down in his throne.

Dragsooth got up weakly, he was in pain. he was also very frightened. he dreaded what Lucifer will do to him. he backed up into a corner of the cell and huddled there shaking in fear.


next chapter coming soon.

I like how you descibe Satan and what kind of character you make him out to be.

I like this.

Think about it, torok...

Also, Jesus and Dragsooth are gary stus '

Tibs and IsisStormDragon thank you.

matesds how are Jesus and Dragsooth gary stus?


Chapter 3,

2 years later,

Lucifer ruled Heaven for 2 long years. he was very harsh and strict, but he let the demons do whatever they wished as long as they worshiped him daily and do as they're told. Lucifer was very harsh to the creatures he imprisoned. he'd have anyone tortured for every little thing, perhaps a human didn't bow before him fast enough when being forced to worship, or maybe an angel talked back to Lucifer. Lucifer didn't care, he made up the worst types of torment imaginable. he created several rooms in the temple to be used specifically for torture, one room was filled with fire, one was filled with snakes and scorpions, one room had a pit of acid in it and one room had metal tables that could either heat up or have spikes come out of them. many of these rooms were almost never empty, the demons tortured angels and humans in these rooms as a form of entertainment.

Dragsooth was lying in the same cell next to Lucifer's throne. he had wounds on him from beatings he received from Lucifer because he had displeased him in some way. Dragsooth was also very skinny because the only food Lucifer gives him is his own table scraps, like a bone or an apple core. Dragsooth was asleep at the back of the cell, he smiled slightly in his sleep.

*dream*

Heaven was back to normal, Jesus was sitting on his throne in the temple, Dragsooth was lying in Jesus' arms. Jesus was gently petting him on the head. Dragsooth smiled and nuzzled his chest.

Dragsooth: "i love you Master." he looked up at him.

Jesus smiled and kissed him on his cheek, he petted him on the head "i love you too Draggy... and i want nothing bad to happen to you."

Dragsooth smiled and wagged his tail a little in happiness. he put his head on Jesus' chest and smiled.

*end dream*

Dragsooth woke up, a sad expression was on his face when he realized that moment with Jesus had all been a dream. he was still in his cell, still a prisoner, Lucifer still ruled Heaven. Dragsooth looked down and closed his eyes tightly as he began to weep. tears streamed down his cheeks and fell onto the dirty cell floor.

Lucifer heard Dragsooth crying. he looked towards him "oh what's wrong Draggy?... did you have that nightmare again?" he said that in a careless mocking tone.

Dragsooth looked at Lucifer with tear stained eyes "i was just happy for the first time in weeks!... i wish my dream would come true..." he laid his head down on the floor and sobbed heavily.

Lucifer turned his head away from Dragsooth, he called over a demon that was nearby. "take Dragsooth into one of the torture chambers and give him something worth crying about! and put him in another cell far away from me, i'm sick of hearing him cry and complain!"

the demon nodded. he opened the cell and chained Dragsooth's neck and started to drag him down the hallway towards a torture chamber.


next chapter coming soon.

The plot is neither original nor innovative and it could use more eloquence in descriptions, plus a bit of depth for the characters.

I thought that dream was sweet. ^.=.^

Sweet, but utterly unrealistic.

thanks Tibs.

and Observer i'll try my best to make this FanFic better.


Chapter 4,

Dragsooth tried to pull back on the chain but the demon was too strong for him. Dragsooth tried to grip the floor with his claws, as he was being dragged his claws were scrapping against the stone floor making a loud scrapping noise. Dragsooth barred his teeth as he tried to pull back on the chain with all of his limited strength. the demon looked toward him and growled with frustration yanking on the chain making Dragsooth fall forward.

the demon stopped walking and looked down at Dragsooth "the master wants this done! stop resisting or you'll make it worse for yourself!" he growled and continued walking dragging Dragsooth along the floor. Dragsooth managed to stand up and he ran at the demon and bit him in the ankle. the demon let go of the chain and Dragsooth took off running. the demon dove and took hold of the chain again. Dragsooth then flew up and dragged the demon across the floor for a while and then the chain broke. Dragsooth flew through the hallway of the temple. he saw the doors of the temple and crashed through them. he tumbled into the street outside the temple. he got up quickly and took a running start then flew up into the air over the stone buildings. some demons flew out of the temple and they chased after Dragsooth. Dragsooth flew as fast as he could. some demons flew above him and dove at him trying to gab him. Dragsooth dodged them, one demon managed to scratch him on the back with it's claws as it dove at him. Dragsooth barely felt it as adrenalin was kicking in, he flew faster. suddenly Dragsooth became engulfed with light and he disappeared.

the demons stopped flying forward and hovered in the air "what happen?... where did he go?..." one of them asked as they all looked around for Dragsooth. the demon at the front of the group turned to face the others "split up and look for him! i'll go and report what happen to the master." the other demons split up and flew in different directions as that one demon flew towards the temple.


Dragsooth was unconscious for a short while. he slowly opened his eyes, he saw that he was in a forest, he was lying in soft grass, there were trees filled with dark green leaves all around him. he turned his head to look up at the sky, the sky had no clouds in it, but there were twinkling stars and a bright moon hung in the sky. Dragsooth's head then dropped to the ground as he fell into unconsciousness again.


next chapter coming soon.

Jesus is ham so large that when I try to look for sun in the sky, I can't see **** because all the sh** in the way!

matesds what the heck are you trying to say!? talk normal English please!


Chapter 5,

Dragsooth opened his eyes, he realized he was somewhere different. he was lying on his back looking up at the ceiling of a tent made out of some sort of animal hide. he noticed what he was lying on a bed made out of soft furry animal skins that were sown together. some of his body was wrapped up in white bandages. his back hurt a bit and he rolled over onto his side. he noticed 2 small creatures that were standing near the bed, the 2 creatures looked like cats, but their bodies were shaped like a human's. they were looking at Dragsooth curiously with their yellow eyes. one of the creatures was white and the other one was white with light brown strips on it's body.

Dragsooth picked up his head a bit as he looked at them "... whe-... where am i?"

"you're in a tent in our village. Creslyn found you and brought you here." the white one responded with a child like voice.

"yeah, she says you were hurt badly. but she bandaged you up." the white and brown one said as it pointed to the bandages on Dragsooth with it's furry finger that had a little claw at the end of it.

"where's Creslyn now?... can you go and get her?" Dragsooth's voice was a little weak.

"we'll go get her." the white one said and started to walk out of the tent. the white and brown one followed.

while the 2 creatures were walking out of the large tent Dragsooth saw that they had 2 long tails instead of one like normal cats have. Dragsooth laid his head down on the soft bed "what are those creatures?" Dragsooth whispered to himself.

suddenly a cat creature entered the tent. this one was much taller and much older looking then the 2 Dragsooth had seen, and this one was more feminine looking. Dragsooth assumed this cat creature is Creslyn. Creslyn was white with black fur on her feet, hands and ears.

Dragsooth slowly picked up his head and looked at her "are you Creslyn?"

"yes young one." she spoke with a soft gentle voice "and i see you're awake." she walked up to the bed and crouched down so she could be down to Dragsooth's level "you had deep wounds all over your back. including a fresh wound. care to tell me what attacked you?"

"attack is not the right word for it... torture is the correct term for what happen to me..." Dragsooth shook a bit in fear as he remembered the horrible torture he was put through.

"would you tell me what happen to you?" Creslyn's voice was full of concern.

"well my entire homeland was taken over by demons. Lucifer their leader took the throne of my Master, and he took control. he enslaved all the inhabitants of my home, forcing them to worship him and brutally torturing them as well... i had the cell next to where Lucifer and the throne was... that demon tortured me anyway he could!... whether it was physical or mental he hurt me anyway he could!..." Dragsooth closed his eyes and began to sob.

Creslyn lowered her ears and looked at him sadly "oh now now don't cry, you're in safe hands here..." she slowly reached forward and petted Dragsooth's head with her furry hand.

Dragsooth tried to hold back the tears, and after a few seconds he stopped crying. he wiped away his tears with the back his paw, he sniffled a bit and looked at Creslyn "sorry about that... i-... it's just so horrible to remember..."

Creslyn continued to pet him for a few seconds then she stopped and rested her arm on the bed "no... it's alright to cry, especially after having to go through all that."

"thank you for all your kindness... do you have any food? i haven't eaten in weeks..." Dragsooth's body was skinny, his ribs were showing.

Creslyn stood up "oh of course... what do you eat?"

Dragsooth laid his head down on the bed "right now i can eat anything..."

"i'll get you some meat." Creslyn walked out of the tent quickly.


next chapter coming probably Wednesday.


oh and here's a picture of Creslyn

OH, OK, it's OK to see thou aren't purely christian anymore, torok Why would thou then play game forgiven by pope himself?

i don't care what Pope Benedict XVI views as unclean. i'm not Catholic.


Chapter 6,

Creslyn walks past other large tents and into this large wooden hut. the hut had many baskets of fruits and meat. she grabbed a few fish and went out of the hut. she walked back into her tent "i brought back a few fish. you'll have to wait a bit longer to eat because i have to cook them."

Dragsooth looked at her "alright. i'll wait."

Creslyn went over to a metal stove, she lit a fire in the stove. she found a metal rod with a pointed end and stuck all of the fish on the rod. she grabbed a piece of cloth and held the rod with the cloth, she put the rod into the stove and the fish began to cook. within a few minutes the fish were cooked, she took the rod out of the stove. the fish were perfectly cooked. she looked over in a corner of the hut and there was a large basket filled with plates. she grabbed a plate, put the fish on the plate, put the rod and the cloth down and waled over to Dragsooth. Creslyn crouched down and put the plate of fish on the bed "are you alright to stand up?"

"my body still hurts, but i think i can." Dragsooth slowly stood up, his back hurt. he stood in front of the plate of fish and began to eat quickly. this was his first meal in weeks.


next chapter coming soon.

thanks

Chapter 7,

Creslyn watched Dragsooth eat for a while, she then stood up "i'll be right back."

Dragsooth paused in his feasting and looked up at her nodding, he then continued to eat. he laid on the bed with his front paws holding down a fish as he pulled chunks of meat from it with his jaws.

Creslyn walked out of the tent, she walked past some other large tents. she headed for the center of the village when the largest tent was. all the tents in the village looked alike, but this tent in the center of the village was the largest. Creslyn slowly pushed the flap of the tent aside and looked into the tent. there were shelves with bottles on them all around the tent. the inside of the tent smelled like fresh herbs.

there was an old looking cat creature sitting in the middle of the tent. it was wearing a gray cloak, and sitting on the ground with it's legs crossed and it's 2 tails curled up near it's legs. it was a male cat creature and he was sitting in front of a small table. the table was small enough so he can look down upon it. there was a bowl and a bottle on the table. he picked up the bottle and poured some liquid into the bowl. he put down the bottle and stirred what was inside the bowl with a wooden spoon.

Creslyn watched him work for a while, she then took a step inside the tent "uh... pardon me..." she said with a quiet voice as to not startle the old cat.

the old cat creature looked up and saw Creslyn "oh... Creslyn, what are you doing here?"

Creslyn: "i just wanted to see if you got back from you journey to find the herbs you needed to make the medicine for that injured dragon."

"yes... i'm almost done with it too." he continued stirring for a while longer. and put the spoon down on the table. a walking stick was on the ground near him, he picked it up and used it to hoist himself up. he walked towards Creslyn carrying the bowl and using the walking stick for support, he had a bit of a hunchback. "i want to come to your tent so that i can see this dragon for myself." he walked past Creslyn and out of the tent.


next chapter coming soon.

Still pretty interesting..

Good story
liking it

thanks,

Chapter 8,

Creslyn followed him, and they both walked into her tent. they saw Dragsooth, he was lying in the bed. the plate had nothing left on it except fish bones. Creslyn went over in front of the bed and looked at Dragsooth "this is Darth, he is our village healer and leader." she points at the old gray cat creature and then she puts her arm down to her side "he's here to put medicine on your wounds to stop infection."

Darth slowly walks over to Dragsooth, the bowl was still in his hand. when he reached the bed he leaned his walking stick against the side of the bed. he looked at Dragsooth "you're a very lucky creature. Creslyn said that she found you in the woods unconscious and wounded." he crouched down and began to gently remove the bandages, there was dry blood on them. Darth took a close look at Dragsooth's wounds. the wounds looked like deep scars and parts of his back were burnt. Darth shook his head "who could have done this to a child?" he threw the bandages on the ground and put his hand into the bowl and scooped out what looked like crushed green plant material and water. he began to rub it into Dragsooth's wounds.

Dragsooth looked at Darth confused "what are you putting on my back?"

"it's a special healing herb. it'll help you heal a lot faster..." Darth continued to rub the medicine onto Dragsooth's wounds.

"every time i would get hurt my Master would heal me with just the touch of his hand." Dragsooth looked down at the bed a little, a sad expression came over him as he remembered Jesus.

"oh... you have a Master?... what's his name?" Dark took out some fresh bandages from the pocket of his cloak and put them all over Dragsooth's back.

Dragsooth looked up at Darth a little "my Master's name is Jesus."

Darth froze and stood up and looked at Dragsooth in shock "... Jesus?... he's your Master?"

Dragsooth sat up a little "yes... why?"

"that slave owner has a hatred for demons like nothing i've ever seen!... he keeps his followers or should i say his slaves to do his dirty work for him!... and you too are his slave, oh you poor creature... did Jesus do this to you?" Darth looked at Dragsooth with concern.

"no... my Master didn't do this to me... it was satan who did this to me... him and his demons took over Heaven and made everyone in Heaven a slave." he sat up completely and looked at Darth "and why do you speak so harshly about my Master?"

Darth grabbed his walking stick and rested both of his hands on it as he used it for support "because he plans to do away with us demons. rumor has it that he plans to throw all of us demons into a fiery place and torture us forever!"

"wait a minute... why did you say 'us demons'?" Dragsooth looked confused.

"because i am a demon, me and Creslyn. everyone that lives in this village is a demon." he lowered his ears a bit.

Dragsooth stood up "you are a demon?" he started to back up.

Creslyn looked at Dragsooth "what's a matter?"

"keep away from me you evil demoness!" Dragsooth growled a bit at her.

Creslyn flinched a bit when she heard his growl. "it's alright. we're not going to hurt you."

Creslyn tried to reach for him with the intention of petting him. suddenly Darth grabbed her hand "Creslyn don't!... you don't know what holy creatures are capable of doing."

Creslyn looked at Darth "the poor thing is just scared... and you'd expect him to act like this after all the torments he had gone through." she pulled her hand out of Darth's grasp and looked at Dragsooth.

Dragsooth was huddled up on the corner of the bed shaking in fear.


next chapter coming soon.

a picture of Darth:

Darth is cute.

Is this like a parallel universe
Good part

sorry everyone. this FanFic has to be deleted...