darkSpyro

My fanfiction is s&c beat malefor and he gets amnesia. He starts to believe he's a law abiding citizen of warfang. Meanwhile, spyro & cynder move in together and ironicly move in next to malefor. He's a good nieghbor but spyros afraid he'll remember. But cynder doesn't want to move so they have to cope with living next to :malefore: . What do you think?

GOOD IDEA!

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lol this is random. POST A CHAPTER DAMNIT.

I agree, post a chapter!!!

Alright then I'll post a chapter. Later, though. I have to go to school. See ya then!

Great! I can't wait

okay im back! ill start with prologe. give me your honest opinion.
this story is from multiple points of view.

narrater
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as most stories go, they start from the begining. this begining is malefor's. just when he had hatched. you see, most people think of malefor as a villenous, tyrannic dragon. he was eventually. but in the begining, he was weaker than most. in the begining, he had trouble hatching from his own egg.
the darkness scared him to point he didn't move. little did he know that darkness would be his ally in conquest. then, he felt pain. pain in his lungs. he couldn't breath. there was no air in the egg left. he scratched the darkness, bit it, and rammed into it. but it didn't crack. there was a commotion outside that darn shell. malefor heard it, but couldn't understand it
"it's hatching!" a lightning quick voice annouced. it continued "oooh, always such an exiting moment. why, i remember when-" "shut up! a much lower one erupted. "say, why it taking so long?" the quicker one continued. and the low one replied, " i hope it's alright" (malefore had started to like the low voice). after minutes of his strugling, something from the outside cracked the stubburn egg. malefore looked up at the scaly green face that cracked it.
it was terrador. malefore then had a moment attacking the egg pieces. when he was done, he looked at the green face. he liked that green face. and he grew up with terrador almost like a father.
years later, when terrador learned what malefor had done, he went into privacy, and cried

This is neat... Continue

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Yeah, I think it's awesome

alright then here's the next chapter.

chapter 1 malefore doesn'nt wanna

terrador
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ever since that teal scaled dragon hatched, he has been the most annoying little young'un i've ever seen. like that time he kept maruding around the the temple. he absolutly flat-out refused to do anything he didn't want to. and he wanted to TP the temple. so he did. we had everyone out after him but when we got close he would hide somplace like the cupboard or climb a pillar. hours 'n' hours later, i was so mad i roard like never before. "MALFORE!!! YOU COME HERE NOW!!!!!!
a moment of silence. i was afraid i had scared the little one. but after a couple seconds he yelled back, "I DON'T WANNA!" then you hear little clawes scratch the floor as he took off. the stress was too much. i went to spleep.

malefore (5 years old)
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i only wanted some fun. i didn't mean ta make 'im mad. i thought he was still following me so i climbed the toilet paper on da temple and i was on the roof! i saw a whole bunch from there! i waited for terrador to come so i could ran away, but he didn't. so i climbed down an' i looked for 'im but he was sleeping. an' i got bored so i played with his tail for a while. i grabbed it an' he woked up. he lifted it up high next to his face and i was still on it so i said hi.

ignitus
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malefore? oh yes i remember him. before the darkness of corse. xsighx that was a tragic day indeed. especially for poor terrador. malefore was about 14 at the time. he had left to explore the outdoors. never came back, that dragon. we didn't know where he was and looked every where. terrador was worried much more than he needed. yet he continued to worry. then we found out about the news. malefore was wreacking mayhem on warfang( not the kind of mayhem he wreacked on the temple mind you). horrible times indeed. then when spyro and cynder defeated him we celebrating justice had been restored. but not terrador, he searched for him. and found him. in the wierdest way.....

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chapter 2 my scales are teal?

malefore
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BLAM! the most light i've ever seen in my life appeared in front of my eyes. when the light disappeared, i was lying there, all alone. i couldn't remember anything. i lay the a while trying to remember somthing. where am i? how did i get here? what color are my scales?
i got up and looked at myself. what i saw was shocking. "my scales are teal?" i could have sworn they were different. i noticed something else. "wasn't i taller?" maybe this place had the answer. i started exploring. i found, gems. lots of gems. "wow, looks like some one robbbed warfang" i said to myself. i decided to, borrow some. ill buy a house in warfang, i thought.

narretor
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you see, malefore did have teal scales. before was evil. then they were purple. and some one did rob warfang: himself. and he was taller. the darkness made him taller. he had the darkness socked out him. just a clarification.

spyro
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i couldn't belive it. i was moving in with the love of my life, cynder. we were looking at a house right then after a look through, we bought it and made it our own. i was a happily ever after. then we meet our neighbors. flame: it was good to see him again. and our other neighbor....

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ill see ya next chapter!!

This is great! Keep going I love how you do the more-than-one narrator thing

Genious, I say!

Yes, I ditto matesds!

Wow, am I really this good at writing? okay, I need ideas. Got any?

Never mind, I came up with some. (Sorry for 2 posting) anyway here's the next chapter.
PS, I came up with 2 new characters: Jakon & wayo. You'll see them later on.

Chapter 3 I'm gonna kill him.

Narrator
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Malefore never was very good with people. But this was an all-time-low. He had just moved in next to spyro and cynder and went to go greet them. He started a conversation with spyro, and it went like this:
Malefore: hi, I just moved in next door and-
Spyro: do I know you?
Malefore: no, I just moved here.
Spyro: really? I've got the stangest feeling I've seen you before.
Malefore: uhhhh, no. Your probably thinking of someone else.
Spyro: hmmm, where are you from?
Malefore: .... I don't know.
Spyro: ??? You don't know where your from???
Malefore: I used to, but I don't remember.
Spyro: ...?
Malefore: wierd, huh?
Spyro: ... yeah, weird.
Malefor: where are you from?
Spyro: the temple.
Malefore: well, nice meeting you.
Malefore walked off leaving a confused spyro behind. He decided to into his room to read. Just then, he saw the one piece of the egg he hatched from he kept all these years. Seeing it, he started to remember how hard that egg was. And one thing leads to the next. He remembered terrador.he had to find him. Malefore took off, leaving every thing behind.

Malefore
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I don't think I've ever run faster in my life. I couldn't really focas either. My entire exsistance just got bent over finding terrador. It was the only thing that mattered. Like it was murder and I'm the investigater. Or this was an escavation and I'm the archeologist. Or like- THUD. I just ran into someone.
"Terrador!?" "Malefore!?" That was easy.

Narrator
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Meanwhile at spyro and cynder's house...

Cynder
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It was a pretty normal day. I was at the house waiting for spyro to come back from flame's house. I guess they hadn't seen each other in a long time and had catching up to do. When he finally came back, he asked me our nieghbor name. I told him malefore and his eyes widened like he had smoked crack. He just flipped out " holy crap!!! Our nemisis is living next door!!! Were moving!!!" That's what made the day seem weird. I told him that malefore was a common name but he decided pack up anyway. He was moving so fast I thought he was going to get whiplash. I eventually shut him up. But he's still convinced that malefore wasn't the guy he said he was.

Narrator
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Now that malefore had found terrador, they went inside and talked. Eventually, a thought popped in malefore's head. He said it out loud, " what happened to my parents?" Terrador explained that the first dark dragon ever had used the shadows to make him eternally youthful. He had always been on malefore's family for centuries. Playing pranks that result in loss of blood, limbs, air in your lungs, people you love, freedom, etc. Terrador had told him that dragon murdered them. His name, was jakon. He later found malefore in the woods and posseced him to do evil. Malefore got up headed for the door. terrador asked him where he was going. He said, " I'm gonna kill him." They both left, trying to convince him to stop. But it was too late. Terrador knew one would die. He prayed it wouldn't be malefore.

good real good

Wow, this is awesome

And I lol'd at the part with Cynder and Spyro

thanks guys, ill post a chapter soon!

YEA! I'm so happy, I knew this fic isn't dead yet!

dead? i'm not not gonna let my own fan fic die!

here i go!

chapter 4 the will

narrator
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so apperantly, malefor know's his dad is dead, right? what he doesn't know is that he left a little something in his will... so malefor's on his way out of town to find his parents murderer. on the way he meets this stange dragon who takes one look at him and shouts, "m-m-malefor! y-y-you.. you've got to get to the funeral home! go! it has to do with your father!" mom always said never talk to strangers. but malefor had to know about his parents. so he give up his search for jakon and went to town. upon getting there, he starts to dig through death records. when he found his dad, he found he had left a will. so malefor collected the papers and went home. meanwhile, spyro had a pair of binoculars, looking for malefor. cynder walks by and tells him he's paranoid. but he insists he investagete more. when he looks back, malefor's walking home with some papers. he couldn't help but go see what it was. so he went over and knocked on the door. "come in." spyro walked in and looked at the papers."what's that?" he wondered out loud. "oh these are my old man's will." they started to read. they came across a picture of a family web. next to malefor, where there would be a brother, it said, 'spyro'. spyro fainted. malefor shook it off. then he saw what they would inherit. then he fainted.
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wadda think?

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Could be funnyxD

what do you mean, could be funny?

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Could be funnyxD

what do you mean, could be funny?

She probably tried to say "Could be even funnier, and I will choke to death with laught "

OMG, WTF!? I'm dieing of laughter on this end! Fainting people are always funny, but this is great!

well thanks, guys. I'll b posting a ch. soon. but for now, PM me for ideas.
...not that I'm running out, mind you.

(sorry for 2x post) hey, you guys. do you want a sequel, or something totally different. but im making a a nother fanfic either way.

well, i guess i have time for a partial post. ( post smething guys, or i'm gonna have to 4x post, and i might get banned for that.)

ch. 5 pt. 1malefor remembers

malefor
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i remember waking up, feeling funny. i struggled upward followed by a wince of pain. man, what a headache. i look over at spyro, who's also just waking up. ignoring my headache, i ask him, "do you believe that? i mean, the will. are we actually-" i did'nt need to finish the sentence.
" we can't be. not after what you did."
"what did i do?"
"don't act like you don't know."
"know what?
"you know perfectly well."
" if i did i wouldn't be aking."
" just admit. we both know."
"okay. what am i supposed to be admiting to?"
" just admit it."
something about the way he said that, made me think. something must have been triggered in my brain. suddenly, memories rushed into my head.
" i did do it." i didn't mean to say that. it just came out.
"do what?" spyro already knew, but was trying to get me to say it.
"i was evil. i murderd innocent people. i burnt down homes of the helpless. showed no mercy to the frail. i-i tried to kill you." this wasn't supposed to come out either. "MY GOD, WHAT HAVE DONE!?!?!" this was me. i fell to the ground and cried. this wasn't: boo-hoo. i was really bailing. you would if you could remember what i do. spyro was shocked. he wasn't expecting me to actually admit. he left in a hurry. he said something about rubbing it in cynder's face.

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i'm working on a new one. it should came in a while. until then!

thats it, im throwing in the towel.

NOOOOOOO!!!!

I was waiting for next one so log!

KIDDING! im sorry i havent been on in a long time, but ill post new chapter ASAP. i promise

p.s.
to make up for that joke, the next chapter will be special.

WHEEE!

okay, 1 specail chapter coming up!

truths unveiled

narrater
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snow was starting to come down over warfang, and over a very peculair house, and some things were going done in there. spyro had retuned with cynder; she hadn't believed him. they retuned to see malefor hudlled in the corner whimpering. "what happened?" cynder was obvoiusly confused. "he admited it, i swear! he confessed!" spyro was estatic. he turned to cynder to rub it in even more. "i always said it, but you never belived me. i tried to tell you." cynder tried to get his attencian, but couldn't. "and now look at him, he's harmless now. we'll just turn him." spyro only gestured to him and didn't look at him. "um... spyro? sorry to burst your bubble, but-" spyro cut her off "no need to apologize. i was right and you were wrong." "SPYRO!" now he turned. malefor was standing right next to him, and he wasn't looking to happy. "harmless, huh? well i have something to say to you." uh oh, spyro thought. "i want to say, sorry. sorry for everything especally you cynder." cynder gaped. she wasn't expecting him to say that."and, im going to turn myself in." now both gaped.

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okay, i should be able to get on very soon. ill see you then.

GOOD! :thumbup:

I really like this story

Keep it up

Well, glad u like it. new post coming soon.

impressive, I suppose. Keep going, I want to see this.

well okay then. i gotsa good idea, i think you'll like it!

ch. 6 yet another truth unveiled

narreter
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two hours later, malefor was in jail. most of the prison guards were pretty spooked when he walked in. even more spooked to see him peacefully lieing down in his cell. it wasn't very long 'till he got a visiter. spyro had come to tell him something extremely important. he had his fathers will with him, and pointed to something neither had seen before; '...malefor and his brother Spyro (not to be confused with the purple dragon)...' "he's probably still out there, not quite sure where, but i know he's somewhere." he knew immediatly he shouldn't have told him.

XXX

"master, he'll be coming soon. i stake my life on it" a dragon, the same one who told malefor about his father, pleaded with jakon.
"you're life already was at stake. and your right, he'll be coming. now go make sure of that!" jakon barked. he didn't really care the dragon was old, he was evil, what did you expect?the dragon scampered away. he wasn't really loyal to jakon , he serverd him out fear. fear, that was what he did best. but he did even better in a fight...

XXX

the next day, the guards had to sound the alarm. malefor had escaped. not so much time after that, someone had a knock on the door. "yes?"
"are you spyro?"
"no one's called me that in years. who are you?"
"i'm here to show you this."
malefor handed him a copy of the will and pointed to an article.
"hmmm...well, it says here i have a brother named, 'malefor'. you know him?"
"yes, i am him."
malefor had just found his real brother.

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well, i am officialy out of ideas. don't worry, ill come up with som later

Hmm two Spyros? Nice, I like it.

well, glad you do. next chapter right around the corner.

Oh, 2 Spyro, I didn't get that.

Sorry for the delay, but I'm here now.

Ch.7 malefor vs. Jakon


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Spyro was very nice. He invited me in and started a conversation.
"Why haven't I seen you before?"
"Long story"
"Well?"
He made me tell the whole thing. From amnesia to now.
"Wow."
"Anyway, I need to go."
"Why?"
"Doesn't matter."
"Hold on, what's this?"
He pointed to the will.
"We inherit some kind of gem."
Malefor gazed at the document.
"The emerald of regret. Erases one event from history" he read aloud.
"I need that. That's exactly what I need."
"College?" Spyro guessed. Malefor chuckled.
"No. Worse. But I really gotta go."
After a goodbye, malefor took flight over the now waist deep snow.
When he landed, he found himself at mt. Malefor again. He found an entrance. When he came in, he was greeted by an ape.
"Reporting for duty, sir!
Apperantly, he had not heard of his downfall.
"Take me to the main chamber" he ordered.
When he and his escort arrived, jakon was there.
His scales were black. Not a dark purple, or any color. Just black.
"Well, well. I thought you weren't coming"
Malefor growled a low, threatning growl.
"Oh, no banter? Okay then."
Malefor lunged in a blind rage, only to be met with shining claws. He got up and released a large spout of fire. Jakon wasn't ready for it and was burned on the left side of his face. Jakon took off to retreat, but malefor had just started. He jumped up and knocked him out of the air. He took off again and got away.surprised at the length of the fight, malefor yelled after him, "YOU COWARD!! NEXT TIME, ITS TO THE DEATH!!" He relized how much his wound on his face hurt.he put his paw to his face, then looked at his paw. Blood.

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Later.

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