i'm not entirely sure if this is in the right place, but oh well...?
well, i was thinking. i love writing stories and would love to write something from spyro's point of view. so i thought, just as practice, should i write the cutscenes of DOTD from spyro's point of view? please give me your answers.
heres a part, for the dam.
Me and cynder hovered above the dam, hearts thudding. it had worked, and the dam was breaking apart. first the head, and then the rest of it. we surged forwards, eager to get back to where Ignitus was distracting the destroyer. if we were too late, then perhaps malefor would succeed, and that very thought made my blood feel like ice inside me. my wings beat even faster, and I heard a wave roaring behind me. i saw the others in the canyon ahead, and heard ignitus shout "take cover!" i plunged upwards, cynder close behind, where terrador was waiting for us. from our vantage point we saw wthe wave splash around the destroyer's feet, making the water steam and hiss. the destroyer struggled slightly, but it couldn't move. "now's our chance! attack the destroyer!" Terrador cried beside us. we dived downwards, towards that hulking beast.
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#1 Posted: 08:44:00 06/08/2010 | Topic Creator
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: hey once, i switched to my earth element, i found a guitar, and i ROCKED!!!, get it? : |
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#2 Posted: 09:23:57 06/08/2010
Well it's not a fan fiction, but i like it
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#3 Posted: 09:35:31 06/08/2010
Well, i'm not sure if it's going to be fanfiction but its still interesting
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#4 Posted: 14:43:45 06/08/2010
me too!
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looks like ive got some things to do... |
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#5 Posted: 16:09:23 06/08/2010 | Topic Creator
thank you!
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#6 Posted: 17:56:23 07/08/2010
Interesting.
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#7 Posted: 17:58:30 07/08/2010
You are a good writer.
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#8 Posted: 15:27:12 10/08/2010 | Topic Creator
thank you!
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: hey once, i switched to my earth element, i found a guitar, and i ROCKED!!!, get it? : |
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#9 Posted: 07:02:31 11/08/2010
So, are you going to continue?
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