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Here is one of my story ideas. I was going to mke a comic of it but that took to long so I made a story! Here is the characters:

Name: Ash
Gender: Male
Age: 12
Species: Fire dragon
Element/s: Fire, comet dash
Personality: Nice, kind, funny, serious at times, adventurous.
Appearence: He is a red dragon with ram horns. His tail end piece is an arrow but it is sideways and got it from his father. He has an orange underbelly, wing membrane and horns.
History: He one of the twin son's of the Shadow dragon Moon(father), and th Fire dragon Infern(mother). He is also the grankid of Spyro and Cynder. One day in Moonlight valley, a bunch of Posin Fluuters came and attacked his family, so him and his twin Brother Shadow stoped them all. Then everybody knew they were destined for greatness.
Other: He is the twin brother of Shadow and can sense bad vibes in the area.
Side: Good
Lives: Moonlight Valley

Name: Shadow
Gender: Male
Age: 12
Species: Shadow dragon
Element/s: Shadow
Personality: Same as Ash, smart.
Appearence: He is a Black dragon with 4 cynder like horns. His under belly is pure white as well as his wing membrane and horns. His tail end piece is a mace ball from his mother.
History: Same as Ash.
Other: He is the twin brother of Ash and can sense good vibes.
Side: Good
Lives: Moonlight Valley

Name: Melane
Gender: Female
Age: 27
Species: Time dragon
Element/s: Time, blue fire.
Personality: Mean, fiesty, innocent to bait.
Appearence: She is a pure whie dragon with mint green horns that start out strait up but then curves till it touches it self. She has cuts from what look like battle and jewlery like Cynder except it has chains on it so it looks like she was chained up but broke free. She has her whole left side cut off so all you see is bone, legamenits, and organs. Although this changes into her full form when she is happy, or luring young dragons into her domain. She has a mint green underbelly and wing membrane and her tail end piece is at firt a suare but the top corner spread longer and more droped like a pick ax.
History: Melane once fought in the war and got her whole left side torn up. Her best friend Infern tried to help but nothing worked so she advised to go to a dragon at the top of the volcano and Melane trused her,so she went. But what she didn't know is that the dragon was Malefor. She pankicked but they chained her up so she wouldn't escape. Malefor made a deal that if he fixed her, she would have to be his servant...for life. She said yes and they did fix her, but it was a curse. She would need children to keep her like her normal self. She only changes to her full self when she is happy or luring the children. She now serves Malefor at full respect and dosen't hesitate what he said.
Other: Afetr she found out Infern got married to one of Spyro and Cynder's kids, she sworn that she will killl Infern's children untill her posin flutter army got destroyed by them when they were 3. She knew that there was trouble ahead.
Side: Evil
Lives: Burned Lands.

Here is the plot line:
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In the world of dragons, all is well. Untill a war broke out agaunst the evil dragon Malefor. The good dragons won and all was well. Except a dragoness named Melane get's her whole left side torn off. She fought in the war and got seriously hurt. So her friend Infern told her to go to the to of the volcano to visit a dragon who can heal her, though she didn't know who or what this dragon was. Melane journeyed there and found out Malefor was the drgon and gave her a deal. He would fix her up if Melane would be his servant...forever. She said yes and Malefor brought a cure upon her. She can only be in full form when she is happy or luring children in her domain. She can stay full if she finds two children that has power like Spyro and Cynder's. Untill one day, two twin egg hatchlings are born; Ash and Shadow by the parents Moon and Infern. What nobody didn't know is that Moon was first son of Spyro and Cynder. Ash and Shadow has powers unkown to them when they face a whole army of Posin flutters when Melane tried to kill her friends' children. what are these unkown power? What are these twin's of the power?


Well what do you think? You like. Tell me and I shall start chapter one!

cool, It's the wonder twins!

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On a clear starry night, a dragon with clear wings and black as the sky paced around a nest filled with two eggs. One red and one black. "When, when, oh when?" The black dragon whispered. Then a red dragoness as red as the sun woke up. "Moon, they are going to hatch, don't worry." The dragoness said weakly.
"I know Infern but what will they be? What will happen? Is one going to be with 6 or..or..2 legs? What if they are girls? We only came up with boy names!" Moon said.
"Don't worry Moon, if they are girls then the red one will be Autumn and the black one to be Space. Besides, only dragons who have weak shell coloring get thoose conditions and our eggs have a very strong and bright color." Infern said. "Now go back to sleep."

"Alright dear." Moon said and layed down next to the eggs. "Alright." he said and went to sleep.



CRACK! Moon and Infern woke up with a start and looked at the eggs. A small fire dragon was crawling out of it's shell. While the black one was still struggling to get out and little cracks form around the egg. Moon and Infern smiled at each other and Moon picked up the little dragon. Then the black one came out and black smoke produced from it. "Well it looks like someody learned his powers already!" Infern said picking the black dragon up. "Lets go to the lake to wash them." Moon said and Infern nodded. They took off to the lake and put them in the shalow end in the water. "So, what shall we name them?" Moon asked as he watched the little dragons play. "Well the fire dragon Ash and the black dragon Shadow of course!" Infern said. They smiled as ash roared in play at Shadow and they splached each other, thus washing the goo off. "Ahh dragon play, a great way to learn skills." Moon said. Then Infern and Moon watched Ash and Shadow play all day.
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Kind of small but theres not that much desciption when they are born.

its cute!

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Yes, it is very cute.

Thanks! Dragon hatchlings are always adorable aren't they? The next chapter is 3 years later.

More!

Chapter 2: The Power is Shown, part 1.

*3 years later*

Ash and Shadow where chasing butterflies. "Hey, I caught a blue one!" Shadow excalimed. "Big deal! I caught a red one! Thoose are the hardest." Ash said, puncing on a red butterfly and catching it.
"See?" He said, showing Shadow his buterfly. Shadow snorted.
"You only catch thoose one's because thier you scale color!" Shadow complained.
"Not true!" Ash protested.
"Yea-ha" Shadow said.
"Nu-uh!"Ash returned.
"Yea-hu"
"Nu-hu"
"Yea-hu"
"Kids!" A rough voice called out. Ash and Shadow turned thier head to the voice and saw thier father, Moon.
"What are you doing?" He asked.
"We're chasing butterflies!" Ash said.
"And Ash won't admit that he only catches the red one because thier the same color as him!" Shadow said.
"Nu-uh!" Ash said
"Yea-hu!" Shadow reapeated.
"KIDS!" Moon shouted. Ash and Shadow quickly turned thier heads to thier father again.
"Enough." He growled.
"Sorry daddy." They both said and drooped thier heads.
"Now Ash, its time for training." Moon said.
"But daddy! Shadow never does training!" Ash complained.
"That may be true but when he was born, he already learned his shadow powers." Moon said.
"That not fair!" Ash complained.
"Hey! You haven't even learned your fire breath yet so don't complained mister!" Moon snapped.
"Yes daddy." Ash said saddly.
"Shadow, go wash yourself, you filthy." Moon said to Shadow.
"Yes daddy." Shadow said, knowin not to ague. Then he ran off to the lake.

"Come with me Ash." Moon said and walked to a building with vines all over it and it had huge mushrooms around it. It looked abandoned. It was the Temple.
"Daddy? What is this place?" Ash asked as they walked closer to it.
"This is where your grandparents and aunts and uncles lived." Moon said. He picked up Ash by the neck fat and flew up to the balcony.
He droped Ash on the stone floor when they landed. Ash looked around.

"Follow me." Moon said and walked into the training room. It had a HUGE statue of Malefor in the center. "How is this going to help me train?" Ash asked.
"You'll see." Moon said with a smiled. "Vhira!" He called out. Suddenly, the statue lowered in to the ground, laeving a whole empy room.

Ash was there mouth gapping. Moon laughed. "Lets train, shall we?" He asked. Ash nodded.