Sort of based off TLoS, though not exactly.
This is a story about Yin, a young dragoness who is far away from home, and her brother Yang, who has been corrupted by evil, thus transformed into a monster made for destruction. But, something more sinister, more angelic, then Yang has yet to return, bringing rage and destruction.
Name: Yin
Gender: Female
Age: 12
Species: Yin-Yang Dragon (Black)
Element/s: Light and Life
Personality: Fiesty and Impatient
Appearence: Pure black dragon with black head spikes, black crest that look like spines, black underbelly and wing webbing. She also has a large white spot on her forehead and ruby-red eyes.
Name: Yang
Gender: Male
Age: 12
Species: Yin-Yang Dragon (White)
Element/s: Shadow and Death
Personality: Calm and Quiet
Appearence: Same as Yin, but Pure white with a large black spot on his forehead and ocean-blue eyes.
Prolouge coming soon.
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#1 Posted: 10:51:29 21/07/2010 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 11:04:58 21/07/2010
Interesting...I like the character Yang, I prefer his personality and element to Yin.
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#3 Posted: 11:33:24 21/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Yeah, I guess so. I made these fandragons as I was inspired by the Yin-Yang and of Reshiram and Zekrom. Also, I gave Yang the 'darker' elements because of what happens to him.
Prolouge: 15 Years Ago On a dark and stormy evening, a lone dragoness flew through the shadows. She was Golden-Yellow with a Sky-Blue Underbelly and Wing Webbing. But the dragoness was weak, and was wounded. In her claws, she carried two eggs. One was White with a Black Spot in the centre, and the other was Black with a White Spot in the cenre. The dragoness glanced back in fear, and crashed through the trees in a forest. There was a crashing noise when she landed, her eyes screwed shut. When at last she opened them, a few moments later, she put the eggs aside, and began to dig a shallow hole. When she was finished, she put the black egg into the hole, and refilled it. When the hole was refilled, she placed a fallen log over it. As she moved to bury the white egg, a voice filled the air. "Stop." the voice said calmly, and a draconic head came into view. "Y-you...!" hissed the dragoness. "You will n-never get the hatchlings from these eggs, never!" "Oh, won't I?" said a different voice, in a mocking tone, and another head appeared. "N-no!" the dragoness said weakly, snarling. "Your Master's plan must not succeed, Hydra, and you know it!" "SILENCE!" roared a third and final voice, and another head and a body appeared. The body was a dragons' body, but instead of having one head and neck, the body had three long necks and three heads to go with them. The dragon had spines on every scale, and it was dark brown with a black underbelly and wing webbing. "YOU HAVE ELUDED ME FOR FAR TOO LONG, SOLAR!" Hydra's three heads all breathed Fear at Solar, who let out a small scream, and fell sideways. Hydra, who was well satisfied, went over to the hole of the white egg. He took out the egg with one of his talons, and smiled. "Wherever your counterpart shall be," said the left head. "You will hunt it down yourself," said the right head. "As you will be the Master's, and my, Apprentice." the middle head concluded, and the three heads laughed evily. His wings spread out, and he flew away. Solar moved slightly, and looked at where she buried the black egg. "In time, young dragon," she whispered. "Your sibling shall be freed, and you shall find your place in the sun..." And with that, Solar's eyes closed, and she left this world forever. |
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#4 Posted: 13:11:12 21/07/2010
Awww, you took one of my ideas. But the story is good, great job!
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#5 Posted: 13:20:23 21/07/2010
This is kind of like Eragon... Also: Is Yin Yang the dragons from yotd?
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#6 Posted: 15:00:22 21/07/2010
Awesome!
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#7 Posted: 21:29:23 21/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks!
Oh, I see what you mean Fireball, but I'm not trying to make it like Eragon. |
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#8 Posted: 00:15:40 22/07/2010
How is it like Eragon?
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#9 Posted: 05:56:50 22/07/2010 | Topic Creator
I don't know how to explain, but Solar is like the elf, though Solar dies.
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#10 Posted: 08:43:57 22/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Well, anyway...
Chapter 1: Hatchday 3 Years after the death of Solar, a small family of Griffins were walking through the forest. The father, which was the largest, was black for the eagle half of him, and slate-grey for the lion part. The mother, which was slightly smaller, was golden for the eagle half, and cream for the lion half. And the child, which was as big as a kitten, was a pure chocolate-brown. The young griffin was sniffing the air, and digging small holes around the place. "Be careful Titan." said the mother, watching the child closely. "Relax, Cloud." the father said reassuringly. "If anything threatens Titan, I will tear the attacker into pieces." "No need to go that far, Dusk." said Cloud. "And it appears he found something." And Cloud was right, as Titan was standing still, sniffing around, before running over to a log, yelping with both excitement and fear. Dusk ran over in alarm, staring at the log. He saw nothing wrong with it, but it seemed a bit out of place, since there were no holes nearby where a tree would have been. Quite curious himself, Dusk moved the log aside, and began to dig into the oddly soft ground. Cloud began to approach Dusk and Titan, and stared at the hole he was digging. She gasped as she saw a faint glow of white, and the shadows of black. Titan lifted the object out of the ground, in his mouth, and put it down next to the hole. It was shaped like an egg, and it was moving and making noises! The egg began to crack open, and holes began t appear. Titan watched quietly, curious of what was happening. The eggshell fell right apart, and a small hatchling came out, blinking in the sunlight. The hatchling was pure black, with a large white spot on it's forehead. "It's... A Dragon..." said Dusk, staring at the tiny creature with wonder. "The egg appears to have been abandoned." said Cloud. "We should just leave it here." Titan's ears perked up when he heard his mother, and let out a cry. "Noo!" he cried. "Nooo!" "Dusk..." said Cloud. "I... I think we need to adopt this hatchling, for Titan's sake." "I guess we should." said Dusk. "The little one might die." "It looks female." said Cloud, inspecting the hatchling, which was sniffing around it's eggshell. "And it reminds me of the Yin-Yang. Let's call her Yin." The little dragon looked up, then ran over to her new parents, curious. Titan calmed down, happy that Yin was here to stay. Chapter 2 coming soon. |
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#11 Posted: 09:24:26 22/07/2010
This is really nice. I like it.
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#12 Posted: 09:56:54 22/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks!
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#13 Posted: 16:49:50 22/07/2010
Very good.
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#14 Posted: 08:48:05 23/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Thank-you!
Chapter 2: Rise of Yang A few days after Yin's hatchday, a dragon known as Yang also hatched from his egg. He was in a place where there were floating platforms, and the clouds were like rippling shadows. He had chains coming from his neck, attached to an iron peg in the ground. A large, 3 headed dragon approached Yang. He was carrying a black and red crystal. "Yang." said Hydra's middle head. "Come here." Yang obeyed him, and came over, the chain clinking behind him. Hydra placed the crystal upon his neck, and a crystal growth formed around his neck, like a collar. Yang looked at the crystal, then at Hydra. "What is this?" Yang asked, eyes widened with curiosity. "The crystal will link your mind with your master." said Hydra's left head. Suddenly, a beam of Shadow came out of all three of Hydra's heads, and hit Yang. Yang tumbled back, and doubled in size. Hydra struck Yang with another three beams, and again, Yang doubled in size. Hydra kept repeating this, and soon Yang had the appearence, intelligence and power of an adult. "You will serve the master." said all three of Hydra's heads, who was now smaller then Yang. "The master shall not be disappointed." said Yang, his voice deeper and more mature. "Whoever the master is." "The master's name is Imperia." said Hydra's head. "Don not forget it. Now go, and hunt down the Elemental Serpants." "Yes, sir." said Yang, spreading out his wings and snapping the chain. The crystal came off of Yang's neck, and he flew away. ~~~ The family of Griffins, and Yin, travelled back to a cave in a swamp, some distance away. Many tiny creeks netted through the swamp, and giant mushrooms grew everywhere. Titan ran around the swamp with Yin, exploring the swamp. The two came to a large river, which was running swiftly and deeply. Titan dipped his head in, and dragged out a small fish. Yin watching closely, did the same, dragging out an eel. The eel squirmed, trying to free itself. Yin, suprised, dropped the eel back into the water. |
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#15 Posted: 06:13:05 24/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 3: Serpant's Voice
12 Years later, when Yin grew into a healthy young dragon. Titan had become her best friend, and always played together. The two were always exploring, often finding new places. One day, Yin and Titan were playing together, playing a game of Tag. Titan had run into the distance, crawling under a clump of mushrooms. Yin was a fair distance behind, looking around the mushrooms and trees. She saw the musrooms swaying slightly, and she jumped on top of a large mushroom, and looked around. She could see a tail disappearing around a clump of ferns. "I see you!" Yin said to herself, gliding towards the ferns, a grin on her face. She ran underneath, and out the other side. A river ran in front of her, and Titan was sitting on a huge rock, looking into the river's depths. "Titan!" Yin yelled. "Come down from there!" Titan stared at Yin, then glided down. "You didn't have to ye-" he started, then there was a huge splash, and a giant head of a serpant came out of the river. It was molted green and blue, and it's eyes were bright yellow. The serpant's mouth opened, and voice rang in Yin's mind, who couldn't tell if it was speaking aloud or not. Do not be afraid. "H-huh?" Yin stuttered. "D-do not be a-afraid?" Yes. The Serpant said. Come with me. |
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#16 Posted: 11:22:06 24/07/2010
Oooh it's getting interesting. Chapter 2 reminds me of my character on the Yang part.
Very good. Keep it up |
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#17 Posted: 11:23:53 24/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Rightio.
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#18 Posted: 12:43:50 24/07/2010
Very good.
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#19 Posted: 08:52:55 30/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Sorry I haven't responded in a while.
Chapter 4: Secrets Revealed The serpant's tongue flickered out of it's mouth, and then swam up the river, beconing the two to follow. Yin followed cautiously, but Titan was reluctant. After a few moments, Titan began to follow. After a few minutes of silence, they came upon a waterfall. The serpant dived down the waterfall, without hesitating at all. Yin and Titan glided down the cliff, landing on rocks in the river below. The serpant's head reappeared above the surface, water showering from its joints. Come with me. The serpant swam through the waterfall. "Should we follow?" Yin asked Titan. He shrugged in response. Yin spread out her wings, and she glided through the waterfall. Much to her response, the water wasn't freezing or powerful. She landed on the ground, and realized the waterfall veiled a cave from view. She saw the serpant on the ground, dripping wet. Titan glided through the waterfall, and walked up beside Yin. Come. There is much I need to tell you, so I can stop using this telepathy, and revert to my true form. The serpant hissed. It leaped from pool to pool, with Yin and Titan following. Soon, they came to a large area, where the roof of the cave vanished away. Grass grew all other the ground, and plants and trees that Yin and Titan had never seen before grew in the ground. Pools of clear water dotted around the area, and moss grew on the walls. The serpant was in the pool at the centre of the area, and began to glow. Its shape began to transform, and huge wings spread out. The shape came out of the pool, and the glow vanished. The serpant was now a dragon. The dragon was grey, with a black underbelly and wing webbing, banded with red. The horns and wing-claws were golden, and her eyes were red. The tailblade was shaped like a dagger, and was golden. "Well, here you go." said the dragon, in an almost feminime voice. "This is my true form." "Who... Are you...?" said Titan, confused by the sudden events. "Oh yes, I forgot that I can introduce myself now, it seems unfiting that I should in my serpant form." the dragon said. "I am Tirral, the Guardian of Anti-matter and Distortion." "Tirral..." Yin said, memerising the name. "Why were you in your serpant form, and speaking in Telepathy?" "Alas, I have crutial information that I cannot afford to spill." Tirral said. "The other guardians and I leave this place in the form as serpants, and that is why the enemy believes we are actually serpants. Now, I need you to do something for me." |
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#20 Posted: 10:47:38 30/07/2010 | Topic Creator
And, why not Chapter 5 for the heck of it?
Chapter 5: Tirral's Capture Yin looked up at Tirral, her eyes showing confusion. "What do you want me to do?" she asked eagerly. "Please note that this task isn't easy, not at all." Tirral said. "First of all, I will tell you about Yang." "Who's Yang?" Yin asked. "Do you know him, or her?" "A little too well." Tirral continued. "Yang is a monstrous dragon. He is as white as snow, with a black marking on his head." "That sounds like me!" Yin exclaimed. "Except the colours are reversed!" "I will come to that." said Tirral. "Yang has captured the rest of the guardians. Temporal, Spacial, Apocalipse and Origin are the others. Yang had located them, and learned what each of us can transform into." "So you mean, each of you can turn into a seperate animal?" Yin asked, her mind fulled to the brim with questions. "Yes." Tirral said, clearly becoming a bit impatient with the interuptions. "Temporal could transform into a hawk, representing her pride and wish for freedom. Spacial could transform into a deer, representing his grace and calm nature. Apocalipse is... different. She can transform into a vulture, representing both her quiet and violent nature, and the fact that she is undead." "Undead?" Titan cried out, breaking his silence at last. "How?" "That, she keeps to herself." Tirral said, struggling to keep her voice steady. "And of course, the last guardian, Origin, can transform into a cat, to represent his lively and playful nature. And that is all I wish to share about the other guar-" She was cut short when, all of a sudden, a huge dragon burst through the waterfall, and flew into the clearing. The dragon was white, with a black spot on his forehead. "I'm thinking that's Yang." said Titan, backing away. "You have eluded me for far too long." Yang hissed. "But I have finally cornered you, in this wretched place." "I refuse!" Tirral hissed, and a beam of strange, yellow energy came out of her mouth. Yang avoided the attack with ease. "You must hide..." Tirral whispered. "This beast will kill you if you don't..." "But... Tirral..." Yin cried. "I have to help you!" "No." she said, and she hit Yin and Tital with her tail, sending them into some thick bushes. "Aw..." Titan cried, wincing in pain. "I know... It hurts, but we must remain quiet..." Yin stuttered, and the two blacked out. There was a shriek of pain, and Tirral fell, her side bleeding. Yang, his eyes shining in triumph, grabbed Tirral, and he took off, and flew back through the waterfall, and into the distance. Next Chapter coming whenever. |
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#21 Posted: 02:34:25 01/08/2010 | Topic Creator
..... RESPOND PEOPLE .....
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#22 Posted: 11:35:16 09/08/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 6 coming soon.
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#23 Posted: 21:07:28 11/08/2010
Sorry I'm late, been busy with some stuff.
Good chapters, it's getting interesting. |
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#24 Posted: 05:23:47 14/08/2010
awsome!
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