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Looking For Angels - Book One [CLOSED]
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#1 Posted: 18:39:20 10/07/2010 | Topic Creator
In A world Of Monsters And Beast, A World Of Hunger And Frustation, A World Of Darkness, And Fear.... We Fight As The Angels Hide, they came to save our world but didn't, Angels, as in Humans with souls that could say the world, Chosen ones to fight... but they aren't just normal Angels... they really are Angels, Fighting in wars of the world, they say the end of their world is, Mettorites, or the sun crashing into the earth, but they are wrong, cause the end of the world is us, humans, we fight in times like this cause we must, We Fight, in darkness, and pain. but we dont give up, we just fight the wrong, Cause the end of the world... Is All Of Us Killing Each Other Basically... War World 3, is the end, and its happening now, we now head out into battle, Looking For Angels

Book One

^Tell Me If You Like The plot Above^
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Your messing with my Zen thing people. @Hawksider
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#2 Posted: 18:49:25 10/07/2010
I like it. *Takes out sword* WRITE CHAPTER ONE!
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#CynderIsAFireDragon
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#3 Posted: 18:58:23 10/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Ok, Ok

Chapter One,
Wars Hell Is Unleashed

My Name Is Xeron, I'm A Soldier In this War, Fighting As They Said, To Live, On My Arm Had A Tattoo, It Wasn't Really a Tattoo, But Something That Was Encrusted On both Arms, The Word 'Angel' Was On both Of Them, Today Was The 5th Year, 3rd Day Of The War, I Started Out In The Lines Of Our Camp, Witch Was Being Attacked, I Hid Behind Sandbags With My Only Friend At Camp, He Was Nice Of course, he others Were Brutal, And I Understand Why They Have to be Brutal

"Xeron, TRY TAKING OUT THAT SNIPER, WITH YOUR GUN" My Captain Yelled, I Was The best Person In The Camp Who Could, Do A Headshot With Only A Pistol, So I Shot 2 Bullet with My AK-47 to kill the dude, he kept on killing men, my friend, and only friend that i talked about before, Johnny ran over, he asked "Dude, you got any Extra Clips?" i Replyed "i Think I Have Some In That bag over There" i said, pointing at a spot, that was far away, and there were no cover sand bags, that he could run throught so he wouldnt get hit, so i instead had to potect him as he ran to get the bag
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Your messing with my Zen thing people. @Hawksider
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#4 Posted: 19:24:06 10/07/2010
*claps hands* Good job!
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#CynderIsAFireDragon
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#5 Posted: 19:29:48 10/07/2010 | Topic Creator
As He Ran To Get The Clips I Looked Around for Anyone Who Tried To Kill Him, There was a sniper who tryed, but i killed him, then silence fell, as Johnny... Died,. a sniper did 3 shots, 1 bullet missed, but there were 2 headshots, he fel to the ground with blood coming from his head, i took a snipping gun, and started killing the snipers, one by one

one bullet, for each sniper, as blood came from johnny's head, and medics ran over, we then ran into a ambulance tent, holding johnny, i thought he would survive but he ddnt, Johnny was a friend to everyone in the camp, and so, as right when he died, the enemys retreated, his death, won this battle
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Your messing with my Zen thing people. @Hawksider
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#6 Posted: 19:30:31 10/07/2010
Blood...MUH HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA *Coughs*
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#CynderIsAFireDragon
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#7 Posted: 19:37:40 10/07/2010 | Topic Creator
The Captain called Us All over For A Impotant Meeting And Said "You All Will, Be Tested" the others looked confused, and so did i then the captain said "For A special Project, Who Ever Has The Most Skills In The 10 Contest, Those people will be selected for a secret project called 'Looking For Angels'" the captain said, ferious from johnny's death

he remember the encrusted words on both arms, and closed his eyes, rubbing the words, and thinking, as the captain said "if you want to join the project, and do the test first, sign on the sheets of paper over there.. that is all troops" he said, then walked off, Xeron Thought, then chose, he went, and signed up for the test
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Your messing with my Zen thing people. @Hawksider
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#8 Posted: 01:19:26 11/07/2010
Good, go on.
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#CynderIsAFireDragon
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#9 Posted: 03:37:59 12/07/2010 | Topic Creator
ok just wait
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Your messing with my Zen thing people. @Hawksider
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#10 Posted: 16:16:31 12/07/2010
You should make this a RP
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#11 Posted: 18:40:36 12/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Really?
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Your messing with my Zen thing people. @Hawksider
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#12 Posted: 02:27:21 13/07/2010
Yes,Kw.
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#13 Posted: 02:37:30 13/07/2010
Nah,a story is better.
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#CynderIsAFireDragon
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#14 Posted: 02:49:35 13/07/2010
Rp!!!! and im arguing
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#15 Posted: 03:03:40 13/07/2010
Why do you want it to be an RP so much? It's the writter's choice for it to be an RP, not yours.
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#CynderIsAFireDragon
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#16 Posted: 14:26:23 13/07/2010
It was a suggestin
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#17 Posted: 03:08:27 14/07/2010 | Topic Creator
*stays Quiet*
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Your messing with my Zen thing people. @Hawksider
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#18 Posted: 03:10:51 14/07/2010
nooo dont turn into rp i like ur writting style
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"Forget the past because you can not erase it."
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#19 Posted: 03:12:11 14/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Stay In Writing: 2

Turn Into Rp: ....1
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Your messing with my Zen thing people. @Hawksider
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#20 Posted: 19:09:11 19/07/2010 | Topic Creator
SHALL I CONTINUE!?
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Your messing with my Zen thing people. @Hawksider
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#21 Posted: 13:46:17 20/07/2010
YES!!
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#CynderIsAFireDragon
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#22 Posted: 23:42:33 27/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 2 - Sky High

Xero Got on A Heli With Other Troops as they were sent out over the world, he thought about his friend as the plane took off, after a women got on the plane, some of the troops laughed at the women, but Xero didn't.Xero had a feeling she'd be use full, and help full

of course on the entrance to the heli there were now doors, so as the heli flew wind from the entrance blew in our faces, and we thought. the other troops talked, arm wrested, or play stupid games, all i did was get prepared by putting,Magnums,Knifes,a Walkie-talkie,Grenades,and Land ins all over me, for we were going back into war. Xero stared at the women the whole flight as she slept
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Your messing with my Zen thing people. @Hawksider
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#23 Posted: 23:47:27 27/07/2010
Oh crush. :3. this should be good. But what do you mean by full?
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#CynderIsAFireDragon
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#24 Posted: 23:58:20 27/07/2010 | Topic Creator
She'd e Able to Help and would be use for something important
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Your messing with my Zen thing people. @Hawksider
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#25 Posted: 00:02:56 28/07/2010
Cool. Keep going, this is cool.
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#CynderIsAFireDragon
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#26 Posted: 00:10:03 28/07/2010 | Topic Creator
AS The Heli Flew Night Broke Out, Alot of s were itchy cause in this area Mosquitos lived in the whole planet, except me... i bought from the tent merchant a "Off" spray. the women also had off spray so we slept peacefully with the wind still in our faces, anhd were protected by this "off" formula

Until... they came. a bunch of troops made a long 100 mile base below us, we had a stealth heli so it was kinda hard to see us butr they saw the heli. a bunch of troops with Missle launchers shot off missles from there big machines, they hit our top chopter blade so we were going down... and we crashed in the middle of there huge tent base
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Your messing with my Zen thing people. @Hawksider
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#27 Posted: 00:11:07 28/07/2010
I aprove!
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#CynderIsAFireDragon
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#28 Posted: 00:29:57 28/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Really?
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Your messing with my Zen thing people. @Hawksider
TheFlyingSeal Diamond Sparx Gems: 8530
#29 Posted: 00:31:58 28/07/2010
Yes....It's a good story.
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#CynderIsAFireDragon
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#30 Posted: 00:37:25 28/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Some Troops just stared at the Heli for 10 minutes as the 2nd top blade was still going. Xero and the others were living but the Pilot and the Pilot Assistant were dead. One Of The Enemys captains went up to the heli, and looked inside...

And Saw Nothing. Xero and the other managed to dug a tunnel through some dirt, but when the captain came over it collapsed. Xero and the other were digging from the cave collapsing behind them. they hqad to split up in order not to cramp each other, and Xero went with the Women
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Your messing with my Zen thing people. @Hawksider
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#31 Posted: 00:38:53 28/07/2010
Good go on....I feel somethings going to happen. >:3
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#CynderIsAFireDragon
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#32 Posted: 00:39:24 28/07/2010 | Topic Creator
OTHER THEN IMMEDIATE DEATH, AND 'THE END"!?
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Your messing with my Zen thing people. @Hawksider
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#33 Posted: 19:25:10 28/07/2010
OH YEA! *coolaide man crashes through wall.* Where the h*ll did he come from?
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#CynderIsAFireDragon
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#34 Posted: 09:06:49 03/08/2010 | Topic Creator
THAT SPECIAL MOVIE, CALLED: COMMERICIAL!
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Your messing with my Zen thing people. @Hawksider
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#35 Posted: 09:08:17 03/08/2010
THIS BOOK IS BROUGHT AND BOUGHT TO YOU BY:


WAFFLES!
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#36 Posted: 07:33:38 04/08/2010
This story is awesome!
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From the day of my birth I was destinend to conquer darkness with a powerful gem. This is my destiny for I am Star the green dragoness.
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#37 Posted: 07:59:34 04/08/2010 | Topic Creator
RANDOM PERSON... wait... i invited you... man you can read fast...


the women had blue eyes, one eye was dark blue, the other light blue, she had freckles on her cheeks, and black hair, she had long eye lashes, and a bit red lips, she wore a white sweat skirt, she had a gun hooked onto the back of her white skirt, and pistols on her strange green jeans, he looked at her, shoes and she had blue boots, this women weared strange clothes

i had freckles too, but Xero weared things differently, he weared a sweat shirt with the color of White, he weared also shorts with the color of black, he was sobored and tired, he said "we should stop", he said, the women said nothing as they leaned, and sat against the wall of the tunnel
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Your messing with my Zen thing people. @Hawksider
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#38 Posted: 19:02:04 04/08/2010
Good, keep going.
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#CynderIsAFireDragon
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#39 Posted: 19:16:29 04/08/2010 | Topic Creator
ok... just wait
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Your messing with my Zen thing people. @Hawksider
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#40 Posted: 20:27:31 09/10/2010 | Topic Creator
*cracks legs*
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Your messing with my Zen thing people. @Hawksider
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#41 Posted: 20:30:21 09/10/2010
Ewww....
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#CynderIsAFireDragon
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#42 Posted: 16:30:04 12/10/2010 | Topic Creator
What!?
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Your messing with my Zen thing people. @Hawksider
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#43 Posted: 18:37:59 09/11/2010
Mehe, he cracked his legs. *kinda random, though*
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"oh sweet sweet sounds of 80s synthesizers, alleviate me...."
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#44 Posted: 20:52:01 09/11/2010
HAHAH AK-47
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