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The Darkness of Spyro: Dark Revolution (Remake) [CLOSED]
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#1 Posted: 22:13:09 22/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Since the other one was closed, I will copy and paste the other chapters so I may continue.
p.s. It was originally called The Legend of Spyro: Dark Revolution.

Prologue

Spyro and Cynder flew around.
"Can't catch me, Cynder!" shouted Spyro.
"Oh yes I can!" replied Cynder, tagging Spyro.
"Oh man!" said Spyro, chasing after Cynder.
After the defeat of Malefor and the savior of the world, Spyro and Cynder were at peace.
Ignitus had died, that was sad enough.
Spyro chased Cynder into a Grove.
Cynder hid in a log.
Spyro flew past her and turned his head, spotting Cynder.
"Spyro! Watch out!" shouted Cynder.
Spyro crashed into a huge tree.
Spyro looked at it.
"Could it be....... yes it is....... it's...... the Chronicler's Ancient Tree, what I never found, so this must be..... the Ancient Grove....." said Spyro loosing conscience.
"Spyro!" shouted Cynder.

PART 1 R.E.V.E.N.G.E (Really Evil Villains Emerge Near Giant Earthquake)
Chapter 1


Spyro woke up.
Cynder was gone.
"Hello? Cynder?" Spyro asked.
Spyro looked around, he was in a dream.
"I have summoned you, young dragon." said a familiar voice.
"Your not the Chronicler!" exclaimed Spyro.
"I am afraid the Chronicler has moved on to the realm in the sky, I'm the new one." said the Chronicler.
"That is to bad." Spyro said.
"Listen to me, I have news for you." said the Chronicler.
"Wait, you sound familiar." said Spyro.
"Because I am, young dragon." replied the Chronicler.
"Ignitus? Is that you?" Spyro asked.
"It is I, Spyro." said Ignitus.
"Ignitus! I thought you died." said Spyro.
"I did, but my Spirit lived on, like what I told you at the end of the world." explained Ignitus.
"I missed you, Ignitus." said Spyro.
"My warning." reminded Ignitus.
"Oh, continue." replied Spyro.
"You defeated Malefor long ago, but you didn't kill him." said Ignitus.
"The Ancestors took him underground." replied Spyro.
"Right, but they didn't kill him, Malefor will return." said Ignitus.
"No..... He can't escape, they trapped him there!" worried Spyro.
"He will," said Ignitus, "and this time he is not alone."
"I have to stop him, he'll try to destroy the world if I don't." said Spyro.
"This is why I summoned you, you don't have much time left." replied Ignitus.
"Where can I find him?" Spyro asked.
"At his lair, deep in the Volcano, where you battled him." replied Ignitus.
"Okay, thanks Ignitus!" thanked Spyro.
"So long, young Dragon, I hope we meet again." said Ignitus.
The Background began to fade as Spyro appeared in the Ancient Grove.
Cynder was there.
"Spyro! I was so worried!"shouted Cynder.
"Cynder, we're no longer playing Tag right now, we must move." said Spyro.
"Why?" asked Cynder.
"Malefor will return, we must stop that from happening." said Spyro.
"What? That's impossible!" exclaimed Cynder.
"No it isn't, Ignitus summoned me." explained Spyro.
"Ignitus? He Died." said Cynder.
"His spirit moved on, he is the new Chronicler." continued Spyro.
"Oh fine, we must stop Malefor." replied Cynder.
And So the two set off.
Spyro and Cynder walked down the path until they heard a rustle in a bush.
"Grublins." said Spyro.
Spyro and Cynder were immediately greeted by Grublins.
The Grublins whacked at them with their clubs.
Spyro shot a earth missile.
Cynder did a Dragon Dance.
"Retreat!" shouted 1 Grublin.
All the Grublins flew away.
"Why are they retreating?" Cynder asked.
"The Golem is back, probably." said Spyro.
"It came from over there." said a voice.
Spyro and Cynder turned around and Pirates came out of a bush.
"Not them!" said Spyro.
"It's Spyro and Cynder the dragons Skabb captured years ago! Get them!" ordered the leader of the pack.
The Pirates grabbed Spyro and Cynder and realized they had chains on them.
"Someone already Shackled them." said the Pirates.
And So the Pirates took Spyro and Cynder to their ships.
They flew away.
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Edited 2 times - Last edited at 18:19:40 23/06/2010 by Fireball
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#2 Posted: 22:15:08 22/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 2

"You shall perish, us pirates have sealed any possible exit with steal, you won't escape the Arena this time!" said the leader of the pack.
"Oh no......" said Spyro.
The Pirates flew the small ship to the Main ship.
"There it lies, Captain Skabb's ship. He hasn't been forgotten." said the Leader Pirate.
The Ship came level to level with the deck of Skabb's ship.
"Move!" ordered the Leader Pirate as he pushed Spyro and Cynder off the ship.
The Pirates immediately took Spyro and Cynder inside.
"Here are 'ye cellar." said the Leader Pirate as he threw Spyro and Cynder into their cellars.
"Captured something, eh?" asked a familiar voice.
"Yes, and you are going to love it." said the Leader Pirate.
Scratch and Sniff looked into the cellar.
"Spyro and Cynder the dragons?! They've have caused us lots of trouble, it took us 50 years to rebuild this ship. I am glad you caught them, now they shall perish!" said Sniff.
"Well? Go on! Go back to Hunting! Shew!" said Scratch waving the Pirates away.
He turned to look at Spyro.
"You have a battle to go to. Cynder, you have one after him!" said Scratch.
2 Pirates came and opened the cellar.
"Boss, they're chained together with magic." said 1 Pirate.
"Looks like the work of Malefor, the one who attacked us long ago, very well. We'll have to cut it." said Sniff.
"You can't cut it! It's magic!" exclaimed Cynder.
1 of the Pirates whipped her.
"Don't talk back to me!" ordered Sniff.
Cynder winced in pain.
"As I was saying, we'll have to cut it, no I have a better Idea! We'll cut one of your necks off!" said Sniff.
"But that would kill us!" said Cynder.
The Pirate whipped her again.
"That's the point! Let's see, I think I know who will get it, Cynder!" shouted Scratch.
"Yes." agreed Sniff.
The Pirates nodded.
"No..........." said Spyro.
Cynder wept
"Don't cry," ordered Sniff as the Pirate whipped Cynder, "save that for when we kill you!"
Cynder quit crying.
"Take them to the emergency room. The Show is about to start, Spyro needs to get out there!" ordered Scratch.
The Pirates took Spyro and Cynder into a dark room and laid Cynder on a table, chaining Spyro to a bar on the door.
Cynder started to cry as 1 Pirate took out his Sword.
Spyro squinted his eyes and bit his lip, but then felt a jerk on his chain.
A Hand was untying it from the bar.
Whoever it was couldn't get in because the door was locked up.
Spyro opened his eyes.
He was free from the chain!
Spyro flamed the Pirates.
The Pirate dropped the sword and died.
The Other Pirates did the same.
Cynder got off the table and walked over to Spyro.
"How did you-" asked Cynder.
"It was me." said a voice.
A Cheetah stepped into the room.
"Hunter!" shouted Spyro.
"Yes, it is I, we were afraid you didn't survive, after the world was at peace we went looking for you, that was 47 years ago." said Hunter.
"We're sorry, we weren't thinking and didn't know it had been that long since we saw y-" said Cynder.
"Hey! Boss, they're escaping!" shouted a Pirate outside the room.
"Uh Oh!" they all said.
They ran out the door.
Sniff was at the end of the hall watching, with 100 Pirates with him.
Scratch stood at the other end with 100 other Pirates.
"Going somewhere?" asked Sniff.
Scratch squinted his eyes, "I can't believe it! It's Hunter of Avalar, another old prisoner!"
Hunter pulled out his bow.
A Pirate swiped it.
"We can't fight them." whispered Spyro.
"Follow me." replied Hunter.
Hunter ran to the center of the hallway and into a room.
Spyro and Cynder followed.
"Get them!" ordered Sniff.
The 3 heroes were now in the Arena.
Scratch, Sniff, and the 200 Pirates ran into the arena.
Pirates sat in their seats and laughed, thinking this was part of the show.
Spyro and Cynder ran towards the door on the other side of the arena.
Hunter followed.
They went into the second Hallway beyond that door.
Spyro and Cynder hid in different rooms.
Hunter hid in a room as well.
"What are we doing?" asked Hunter.
"We're using these cannons to blow an exit in the ship." said Cynder.
Spyro shot his cannon at the ceiling of the arena, for his connected to the arena.
Cynder's and Hunter's were the same.
They shot theirs.
The 3 blew a hole in the roof of the arena.
Scratch, Sniff, and the Pirates came into the Hallway.
"Get them, before they escape!" ordered Scratch.
The 3 heroes ran down the other end of the hallway and back into the Arena from a different door.
Spyro and Cynder flew out the hole.
Hunter jumped up to the hole and then out of it.
Spyro and Cynder ran towards the steering wheel on the deck.
Hunter followed.
He grabbed the steering wheal and began to turn it.
The Ship went towards the Ocean.
Scratch, Sniff, and the Pirates came up on deck.
"Attack!" ordered Sniff.
The Pirates ran towards the 3.
Spyro shot a electricity bolt and Cynder shot venom breath at the Pirates.
10 Pirates died.
Spyro and Cynder meleed 5 Pirates and defeated them.
The Ship whirled straight towards the Ocean.
"Spyro! Cynder! Come on!" shouted Hunter.
Spyro, Cynder, and Hunter ran towards the plank.
Spyro and Cynder flew away from the Ship.
Hunter jumped off the plank.
The Ship crashed into a huge rock in the Ocean, creating an explosion from it's cannons.
Hunter landed on a beach of the Dragon Kingdom.
Spyro and Cynder did the same.
"Wow, that was such a ride." said Spyro.
"Indeed." said Hunter.
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#3 Posted: 22:17:03 22/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 3

Cynder was breathless.
"At least they're out of the way." said Cynder.
Hunter looked across the Horizon.
"No, it can't be." said Hunter.
"What?" asked Spyro.
Just by the looks of Twilight, it seems that a Eclipse will come, soon." said Hunter.
"Oh no. Hunter, Malefor is coming back, we didn't exactly kill him." said Spyro.
"This is terrible, but we must not loose hope." said Hunter.
"Hunter is right." exclaimed Cynder.
"We must move quickly." said Hunter.
"We need to reach the Dragon City." said Spyro.
"Why?" asked Cynder.
"We need Terrador, Cyril, Volteer, and Sparx to come and help." replied Spyro.
"Spyro is right." said Hunter.
A High pitch shriek was heard from somewhere near by.
It became louder.
"What is that?!" wondered Cynder.
"A Dreadwing, I haven't seen one of those in years." said Hunter.
"But I thought they were extinct." said Spyro.
"They were, the last one seen was Assassin's." replied Hunter.
"Um, that's because it is Assassin's!" shouted Cynder as she pointed at a hill.
There stood a Dreadwing, with, riding it, a Dark suit of Armor, Assassin.
"Assassin." said Spyro.
"Spyro!" shouted Assassin.
"Prepare to die!!" roared Assassin as he flew at Spyro.
The Dreadwing pinned Spyro down.
Cynder scratched at Assassin, while Hunter found his bow on the shore and grabbed it.
The Dreadwing hissed as it bit Spyro.
Spyro winced in pain.
Hunter shot a arrow at Assassin.
Assassin slashed at Cynder and dodged the arrow.
Spyro flamed the Dreadwing.
The Dreadwing hissed and smacked Spyro with it's wing.
Cynder's wings were ripped.
Cynder fell to the ground.
Assassin slashed his sword at Spyro.
Hunter shot a arrow at Assassin.
Assassin was hit.
He fell off his Dreadwing.
The Dreadwing knocked Spyro unconscious.
Assassin jumped onto Cynder and cut the tip of her tail spike off.
Cynder winced in pain as she licked the wound.
Hunter shot another arrow at Assassin.
Assassin ducked and cut another piece of Cynder's tail spike off.
Cynder lost conscious from the attack.
Assassin picked Cynder up.
He hopped back and his Dreadwing and flew towards Spyro.
Hunter shot the Dreadwing with a arrow.
The Dreadwing roared in pain as it and Assassin, along with Cynder, flew away.
Spyro woke up.
"What happened? Where's Cynder?" asked Spyro.
"Assassin has kidnapped her." said Hunter.
"Oh no!" shouted Spyro.

Chapter 4

Spyro and Hunter trailed across a forest.
"We have to save her! This has happened before and I don't want it to happen again!" exclaimed Spyro as he ran down a hill.
"Spyro wait!" shouted Hunter.
Spyro ran through a waterfall, but didn't hit a wall, he hit a secret tunnel.
Hunter reached the Waterfall, "Spyro, I know your in there!"
Stepping into the waterfall, Hunter collapsed into the tunnel.
"Hunter, what is this place?" asked Spyro.
"The Crystal cave, the only place where you can have the answer to an impossible question, home to the Corener (Corner)." replied Hunter.
Spyro gasped, Who or what is the Corener?"
"The Corener is a Stone that knows anything, even the impossible, but to ask him a question, you must choose the right stone out of many, or you shall die." explained Hunter.
"Assassin might not of taken Cynder to Malefor's lair, I have to ask where he took her!" said Spyro.
"No Spyro, it's too risky." replied Hunter.
"But I must!" exclaimed Spyro as he ran down the hallway.
Hunter ran after him, "Spyro, no!"
But it was too late, Spyro was surrounded by stones in a huge chamber.
"Hello?" asked Spyro.
10 figures formed in 10 stones, one in each.
They were faces.
"Pick me!" shouted the 1st.
"Don't listen to that liar, pick me and you shall grow rich!" shouted the 2nd.
"Pick me and I'll give you all my love!" shouted the 3rd.
"I will get rid of all your foes if you pick me!" shouted the 4th.
"I own a castle and will give it to you if you pick me!" shouted the 5th.
"Don't listen to that fool, it's I who is the correct voice." moaned the 6th.
"It's me! I tell you, me!" exclaimed the 7th.
"Pick me and you'll get a lot of friends!" said the 8th.
"It is me who is telling the truth, me!" said the 9th.
"If you choose me, you'll have a fun life!" moaned the 10th.
"It's me! Me, I tell you, all me!" shouted the 7th again.
"No it is me." said the 1st.
"Friends." said the 8th.
"All your foes will be gone." said the 4th.
"It's me!" shouted the 7th again.
"Their all liars!" shouted the 2nd.
"No, your a liar." exclaimed the 5th.
Spyro couldn't decide he didn't know what to choose and knew he would have to soon. He couldn't tell. Which one? Suddenly, Spyro got a idea, "it's all of them!"
All the Stones stopped talking for 10 full seconds.
Then a Huge Stone in the center said, "what is your question?"
Spyro breathed a sigh of relief and then responded, "Where has Assassin taken Cynder?"
"He has taken her to the........." the Stone tried to say, but a blazing flame came towards it.
Spyro zoomed around and saw someone in the shadows, Hunter? No, it had wings. He walked towards the figure and saw that it was a Dreadwing, "Assassin."
10 dreadwings came in.
Assassin rode the biggest.
"Prepare to die!" he shouted.
Spyro stepped back as the dreadwings jumped at me.
Assassin threw bombs around the chamber.
Spyro did a fire fury on the Dreadwing and dove under Assassin's Dreadwing and ran off.
The Bombs blew up and the chamber collapsed. My only chance to find Cynder, ruined. thought Spyro.
Assassin chased after Spyro.
Spyro saw Hunter, "Spyro, slow down."
Hunter saw assassin and ran with Spyro.
Spyro and Hunter reached the Waterfall and jumped out of the tunnel.
Shooting a bow, Hunter jumped up into the trees and hid as he hopped away. The Bow hit Assassin and Spyro flew away while Assassin wasn't looking and escaped.
Landing at a Swamp, Spyro looked around for Hunter.
Hunter came jumping over to Spyro.
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#4 Posted: 22:17:57 22/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 5

"This is a nightmare, we don't even know where Cynder is!" cried Spyro.
"We'll find her." Hunter said.
Spyro looked at the swampland and gulped at the monsters that lie inside.
"The Haunted Marsh." responded Hunter.
"We have to cross it." Spyro said.
Spyro took a step into the water.
A giant squid grabbed his paw and took him underwater.
"Help!" shouted Spyro.
"Don't worry Spyro!" ordered Hunter as he shot an arrow into the Squid's eye.
Spyro fell to the ground ontop of a small Island.
"Hope that doesn't happen again." said Spyro as the Squid died.
"It won't." declared Hunter.
Spyro flew across the marsh and Hutner jumped from rock to rock.
10 crocodiles slithered in the water and then surrounded Hunter.
"Help!" shouted Hunter.
Spyro zoomed down and torched them with a fireball.
Hunter and Spyro moved on.
5 Grublins flew through the forest.
"- Malefor and Chaos are sure to win." Spyro heard one say.
"- agree, Chaos's plan will work-" said another.
Spyro ducked behind a rock on a island.
"I have the feeling someone heard us." whispered the 3rd.
"Nah." said the 4th.
"Lets get out of here." ordered the 5th.
The Grublins flew away.
"Who's Chaos?" Spyro asked Hunter.
"I'm not sure, but this sounds bad." replied Hunter.
Spyro and Hunter reached the other side of the marsh and made camp.
"We'll leave in the morning." said Hunter, eating his chicken.
Spyro took a bite out of his chicken.
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"Spyro." said Ignitus.
"What?" asked Spyro.
"I have just found out who is behind all this trouble. His name is-" began Ignitus.
"Shut up!" shouted an angry voice.
"Spyro! Help. He's... He's....-" began Ignitus.
But Ignitus's vision faded away.
"Ignitus! What's happening?" asked Spyro.
"You have to help me!" shrieked Ignitus.
"I will be there as soon as possible!" cried Spyro.
"Hurry, or he'll......." began Ignitus, but the vision went away.
"Ignitus!" shouted Spyro.
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Spyro woke up with a start.

Chapter 6

"Hunter, we have to get to the Celestial Caves." said Spyro.
"Why?" asked Hunter.
"Ignitus is in trouble!" shouted Spyro as he flew up into the sky.
Hunter ran on his fast feet, worried.
"The Celestial Caves is East from here, near the Ruins of the Mountain of Malefor. But it's far away from Malefor's lair." said Hunter as he dodged a tree.
"Anything to save Ignitus." responded Spyro.
5 grublins flew in the air.
"The purple dragon! Get him!" ordered the 1st.
The 4 flew at Spyro.
Spyro shot flames from his mouth and torched them.
A Troll popped out of the ground and grabbed Spyro by the leg.
Hunter shot a bow at the Troll's eye.
The Troll roared and fell to the ground.
Hunter jumped over the Troll and raced off with Spyro.
The remaining Grublin took a potion and grew huge.
"Your not getting away!" cried the Grublin.
Spyro evaded as the Grublin swiped at him.
Spyro shot ice and froze the Grublins right hand.
Hunter shot an arrow at it and broke it's hand off.
The Grublin roared and swiped it's club at Hunter.
Spyro shot fire at it.
The Club was on fire, "Uh oh."
The Grublin swiped it's club with the fire blazing.
Spyro evaded and shot Electricity.
The Grublin was shocked.
Hunter evaded the grublin's left hand.
Spyro created a Electricity Fury.
The Grublin was caught it a Thunderstorm, being shocked all over.
The Grublin fell to the ground, stunned.
Spyro couldn't reach the grublin's hand, and it would take to long to fly up, so he made earth steps with Earth.
Spyro ran up the steps and froze the Grublins left hand.
Hunter shot a bow at it and also broke it off.
The Grublins shrieked and shot fire from it's mouth.
Spyro stopped it with a Earth wall.
The Grublin grumbled.
Spyro shot an Electricity Fury and shocked the Grublin stunned.
He made Earth steps and tried to use ice, but it had a ice shield on.
Spyro torched the grublin with fire.
The Grublin caught on fire and fell to the ground.
"You'll pay for this! Malefor will return!" cried the Grublin as it turned to ash.
Spyro saw the Troll getting up, so he froze it in place and began flying.
Hunter shot a bow at it and shattered it to pieces, he then ran off.
The forest was now silent as they escaped.
Spyro saw the Catacombs coming into focus.
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#5 Posted: 18:38:00 23/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 7

"We're now entering the catacombs." said Hunter.
"We need to hurry." said Spyro.
The two ran into the dark catacombs and entered a huge cavern. A huge Golem popped out of the shadows. It roared and slashed its big hand.
"Run!" cried Hunter.
The two dodged the Golem's blows and quickly ran down the path.
The Golem slammed its fists and then clutched onto Spyro. It tossed him up in the air and raised its fist to punch him.
Hunter quickly shot an arrow in its eye.
The Golem roared in pain and fell into the shadows.
The two quickly ran for their lives and entered a treasure room. A huge chest sat on a table ahead.
"Don't touch anything, this treasure is surely cursed by Malefor himself." warned Hunter as he continued on.
Spyro followed behind.
A shadow lurked across the stone cold walls.
Spyro and Hunter entered a chamber. A huge statue of Malefor stood there in the center.
"Malefor, how ugly he is." said Spyro at the horrible face.
A huge warrior ran into the chamber and slashed his sword hard at Spyro.
Spyro was hit and he fell to the ground.
Hunter quickly shot an arrow at him.
The warrior blocked it with his shield. He quickly slashed harder.
Spyro moaned in pain. He quickly got up and tailslashed the warrior.
The warrior roared in anger and quickly slashed Hunter before he could fire another arrow at him.
Hunter fell to the ground.
Spyro quickly flamed the warrior.
The warrior growled in rage and quickly slashed Spyro hard, knocking him to the ground.
Spyro moaned even more.
Hunter got up and shot an arrow into the warrior's arm.
The warrior growled and quickly threw his sword at Hunter.
Hunter dodged and shot an arrow at the warrior's head.
The warrior growled and ran over to Malefor's statue. A large crack appeared in it as the warrior's sword hit it.
The ugly Malefor collapsed on top of the warrior, killing him.
Spyro and Hunter went into the next room which lead to a lavafall (a waterfall made of lava).
Spyro flew down it and across a lava river.
Hunter jumped down it and landed on a stone and began to hop from stone to stone to the end of the river.
They got off at a huge battle arena which stood the Golem.
It roared and smacked Hunter to the ground with its hand.
Hunter was unconscious.
Spyro attacked the golem's hands and then shot a earth missile into its eye.
The Golem roared and climbed the wall and went to the surface. It roared as it walked away.
"Oh no..." said Spyro.
He grabbed Hunter and flew to the surface.
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#6 Posted: 22:06:32 23/06/2010
O.o So many chapters... so fast.... SUCH A GOOD STORY!

Really good story Fireball, Keep it up ^.=.^
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#7 Posted: 03:10:56 24/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Well I copy and pasted them so, yeah. Thanks.
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#8 Posted: 16:40:14 26/06/2010
Good, I suggest less speech though.
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#9 Posted: 18:24:40 26/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Well I want to make it interesting. I try to hold back on the length.
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#10 Posted: 21:07:04 29/06/2010
I mean try put more into it than speech, like describe stuff. Here's an example of describing:

Slender tan branches with wrinkly russet leaves budged as the strong wind barges past. The sun’s light was dim and the sky was a pure azure colour with plump white clouds floating above. The diminutive grass violently swayed and hissed throughout the harsh winds as crowds of dead leaves from colours ebony to maroon scattered across the area. The air still remained fresh and alive. I inhaled quite deeply and gradually, watching a tawny bird flutter by. It’s large, impressive wings were detailed with such beautiful and unique patterns. I was stood still in the emerald grass, almost like the sub-zero ice in winter days.
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#11 Posted: 21:15:35 29/06/2010 | Topic Creator
I tried that once and I will try it again.
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#12 Posted: 19:59:34 02/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 8

Spyro landed and softly laid Hunter on the ground. He quickly tried to wake him up as the cold wind patted at his face and leaves flew around the quiet area. Then he spotted a small pool of water that was about and inch deep. Spyro picked up the unconscious Hunter and and slowly walked over to the pool of water and tossed Hunter into it.
Hunter immediately woke up. He snapped at Spyro, "Why did you have to do that?!" Hunter was as angry as a storm and his face was red. He got up out of the water and walked over to Spyro.
Spyro shrugged, red faced. He stared at Hunter and then noticed the Golem heading for Warfang out of the corner of his eye. He said to Hunter, "Hunter, the Golem is about to get into Warfang, and if he does then the whole city will be destroyed!!"
Hunter was shocked, wide eyed. He stared at Spyro and then turned to face the Golem's figure walk over a hill and towards Warfang. He ran towards it, growling.
Spyro followed him, "Slow down, Hunter!" He flew faster and caught up with Hunter. They both ran up the hill and stood at the very top, but it was too late, for the Golem had already reached the city.

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Sorry for it being so short.
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#13 Posted: 17:26:56 19/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 9

Spyro and Hunter jumped off of hill and landed soflty in Warfang's plaza. They looked at the Golem who was knocking down buildings with his stone fist. Spyro flew at the Golem and began to breathe ice all over his head.

The Golem roared and knocked Spyro away. The lava on his head melted the ice. He grabbed at Hunter.

Hunter jumped out of the way and shot an arrow at the Golem's eye. He stepped back as the Golem roared and shot fire out of his mouth and at Hunter.

The Golem roared again and was just about to squash Hunter when Spyro flew at him. He swiped at him, but failed to hit him.

Spyro flew around the Golem and then hovered above his head. Then he formed the earthball and fell on top of the Golem's head with a great big bang.

The Golem roared in pain and grabbed Spyro. He began to squeeze him. With his other hand, the Golem knocked Hunter into a building. He continued squeezing Spyro.

Just then, earth shot at the Golem's back along with ice and electricity. Behind the Golem hovered the three dragons, Terrador, Volteer, and Cyril. They charged into the Golem.

The Golem roared and knocked them away. He breathed fire at Spyro.

Then Hunter shot an arrow at the Golem's hand, causing him to drop Spyro just before the fire touched him. The Golem roared and charged at Hunter.

Hunter jumped out of the way. The Golem slammed himself into a tower, causing it to fall at him. The Golem attempted to move out of the way.

Cyril and Spyro began to shoot the Golem with polar bombs over and over, causing it to freeze in place. The Golem broke free of the ice, but was too late, for the tower hit him in the back. The Golem fell to the ground, dead.

The four dragons landed on the ground next to Hunter. Volteer was the first to speak, "Absolutely, possitivaly, heroically, great, extraordinary, the most victorious battle I've ever seen!"

Everyone stared at Volteer, telling him to stop. Volteer stopped and looked at Cyril. Cyril said, "Ah young dragon, that was the best fight I have ever done in a thousand years! I was so heroic!"

Spyro began to growl. Terrador shoved Cyril. Cyril replied, "I mean you were so heroic." Spyro stopped growling.

TO BE CONTINUED
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