All righty people! I decided to tell you my imagination that I usally don't tell this. This ones not that embarrsing but you guys might get jelous, I don't know! If you want your OC's in the story just tell me there ref! Ok on with it!
Chapter 12: Spyros world, part 1
I said good bye to my friends and went through the portal. A giant swirl of red, blue, and yellow. Then suddenly I saw a giant light and it got frezzing! I landed with a thump on my feet. "Ow!" I screamed in pain.
"Man, I have to learn how to land right wothout geting hurt!" I looked up so that way I won't pay attention to my feet the whole time.
"What is this place? Isn't supposed to be summer? I guess it's winter in this world." It was pure white of snow everywhere.
Suddenly, I heard a some sort monkey scream, then, in front of my eyes; a black shadow of some sort sped right in front of me, not even noticing me. Then I saw an ape chasing that shadow. That, or that shadow was leading away from harm. "What the-".
I ran to where the shadow ran to. Then I saw two dragons being surrounded by the apes that passed by before. They looked as though they were the same age as me. One dragon was purple with a yellow trace as horns and under belly. Next to him was what looked like a female dragon with black shiny scales and a blood red trim as wing membrane and underbelly. Her horns was almost as white as the snow. She looked like the shadow that passed by earlier. Suddenly, I relized that it was one of my favorite video game charcters. Spyro and Cynder. I was in there world, but wheres Sparks? What was more odd was that they were not attacking but scared. How can they be scared if they beat Malefor? No, I saw that there wings were broken and they probably ran out of energy to breath elements. I have to help them I thought. No one noticed me so I screamed "Hey retards, why don't you pick on some one your own size!"
They turned and I sent an aura sphere from the pendeant to the plam of my hand. I shot out and killed all the apes and gems poped out as usual. They absorbed the gems but not enough health gems to cure there bones. "Thank you" said Spyro. "You saved us"
"No problem" I said.
I saw that Spyro was not scared anymore but Cynder was scared at me. "Don't worry, I won't hurt you." I acted as if I don't know them so that way they won't think im stalkers. They started to walk away, "Wait, where you going? You can't fly, your wings are broken!"
"Don't worry were not flying away, were finding our freind Sparks." reasured Spyro.
Again, I had to act as though I didn't know anything! So I asked "Is that another dragon?"
"No" Cynder said suddenly. I was shocked that she talked.
"He's a dragon fly, I would hate to see him a a dragon though, always complaining about how his feet hurt and why he's all yellow. I hate that!"
"He sounds like a piece of work" I giggeled.
"He is" Cynder said in disgust.
"Im tired, lets go to shelter, I think theres a building with no apes in it near by."
So we walked untill we saw a building that wasn't blocked but looked scured. We crawled under a hole untill an old hospital with beds and a working fire was in there. Spyro and Cynder went an seprate beds but next to each other. "My name is Cynder and this Is Spyro" said Cynder pointing her wing at Spyro.
" Nice to meet you, the names Erica."
I sat down on a bed, it was pretty comfy. Then I heard the question I hoped not to hear.
"That was an impressive move back there, how did you do that and how did you get here?" Spyro asked.
"Well... its alot." i said.
Well thats part one! Tell me if you like it and I will go on!
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#1 Posted: 02:53:00 10/06/2010 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 20:58:59 10/06/2010
really good!
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#3 Posted: 21:38:44 10/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks! Heres chapter 12 part 2!
I told them the story how my friends found the ambulets day in the park and how are forms are. I told them that each pendant has a diffrent color for each temple it was made in. "As you can see, its red so im the leader." I said I continued how my form is the pokemon Lucario and that pokemon can control aura and that's how I sent that move to save them. Then, I told them that our ambulets are leaders by what order they were made in and that they can travel to diffrent worlds. "So, what worlds did you visit?" asked Cynder " Only to the pokemon world which is where we found out about our forms." I continued about how everytime I land in a place, that I land hard on my feet and then i modeled my reaction to do it. They both gigeled. Then I told them that in my world, Pokemon was a game. "So what was our world in your world?" asked Spyro "A video game to; in fact, your world was one of my favorite video games." I said. "So you knew us and our past the whole time?!" screamed Cynder. I sighed, "Yes, I wanted to keep it a secret so that way you won't get scared." I reasured. Cynder frowned, then started to cry. "You probably hate me for what i've done." I looked at Spyro, he was looking me but he wasn't mad; he probably wanted me to fix this. "Cynder, I don't hate you. Your actually one of my favorite characters!" I said. She looked up. "Really?" Cynder said wiping a tear with her wing. "Really." I said. Then to my surprise, she jumped off her bed and walked and jumped on mine. She then huged me with her wings and I huged her around the neck but i was still shocked. After she huged me she walked back to her bed and jumped. She curled up and fell asleep. I looked at Spyro who looked strait in my eyes. They wre telling me something but I couldn't tell. Then Spyro said "Good job." In a wisper so Cynder wouldn't wake up. Spyro then curled up in bed and fell asleep. I remebered that I had a Max potion in my back pack. I sprayed most of the bottel for Spyro and Cynders wings. They magicly healed. I then yawned. "I should get some sleep to." I thought. I layed down in the dusty, yet comfy bed; pulled the sheets over me and fell to sleep. *The Next Day* I woke up. I turned over to see Spyro and Cynder gone and the fire burned out. I took off from bed and crawled out of the hole and saw Spyro and Cynder sitting on the cliff looking at me. Also by there side was Sparks. Before I could say "You got Sparks!". He flew up to me and screamed "Good morning!!!!" "Ahhh!" I screamed covering my ear. "Whats wrong?" Sparks asked. "Nothing, except that you screamed in my ear when I just woke up!" I snapped. "Sparks flated back and behind Spyros horn. Before I asked how he wasn't scared, Spyro said "We told him your story." "Ok." I said understanding. "We have to go, Ignitus is wating." Cynder said "Wait, Ignitus is alive!?" I asked. "Yea, we were surpirsed when we found out; Hes the new chronicler. I told him your story in my dreams and he wants to meet you." Said Spyro. "Wait, how im I supossed to get there? Im not a dragon." I asked. "We know." Said Cynder breaking into a grin. I looked at Spyro, he had the same grin. Some how, I knew it wasn't going to turn out so good.
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#4 Posted: 03:04:11 11/06/2010
pretty solid
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#5 Posted: 03:07:38 11/06/2010
I dont realy understand the story line but I still enjoyed it. I give this my stamp of approval.
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#6 Posted: 11:37:29 11/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Its not really supossed to tell the plot line of this chapter yet, but if other people understand thats great!
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#7 Posted: 14:28:35 11/06/2010
Its really good!
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#8 Posted: 14:56:00 11/06/2010
Good!
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#9 Posted: 18:47:11 15/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 12 part 3
"You like flying right? You told us last night?" asked Cynder "Ya, but I can't-" "Get on." said Spyro facing his back twoards me. "I don't know." I said in dissproval. "Come on, it'll be fun." said Cynder. "But what if im to heavy?" I asked. "You won't, us dragons have a muscle in our necks that can hold weight up to 10 tons." Spyro said. "really?" "Yep." "All right." I got on to Spyro where the part of the muscle is by Cynder telling me. Cynder and Sparks glided of and they waited in midair. Spyro started walking like I wasn't even on him. He jumped and dived down. We where about a few feet from the ocean and I closed my eyes while hanging on to his horns and hoped to live. Suddenly, I felt a rush of air go past my face. I opened my eyes and we were flying! I looked around and saw Sparks on my left and Cynder on Spyros right. She looked at me and she winked. "This is amazing!" I thought. "So how is it?" Spyro suddenly asked. "It's, it's; it's amazing!" I exclaimed. "Thought so." He said. "Hey Spyro, lets show our new friend what our definition of flying means!" Said Sparks "Yea lets do it!" Said Spyro. "Bring it!" I said. Cynder only giggled. Then, I was tosed in a barrel roll while clinging onto Spyro horns. We dived down and flew up and twriled around. I was having the best time of my life! "Erica! When I say jump, jump ok!" demanded Spyro "Why?" I looked down and saw Cynder below Spyro instead of flying next to him. I then knew why. "Ok!" I screamed because I noticed we were getting faster and the roaring of the winds will drown my voice if I talked normally. "Ok! One...two...THREE! JUMP!" I pushed off of Spyros neck and I was free falling. Then I was catched by Cynder with a THUMP! i hanged on to her horns and I was sitting on the muscle like on Spyros neck. I saw land ahead of us and to my surprise, I said "LAND HOE!" *Meanwhile* "Look at those pethatic fools." Said a voice in the shadows. "I must tell Ambagon about the girl where she is, but first; I must kill Spyro and Cynder, and I think I know the right dragon to do it." The voice walked out into the light near a crystal ball showing me riding Cynder. The dragon had a black cloak and pure white skin, she had mint green horns and trim. She had cuts on her body but the other side was all skeleton with a few legemnts and musels and all organs. she had jelwery like Cynder but had chains on it showing that she had been chained to something but she broke free. Minions came crawling out of the shadows, they where gray and looked like they had webbed feet and hands, a bug like face and wings that where torn and faire like, they also had scorpion tails. When they came out, the white dragon orded them "Posin flutters! Release Malefore from his crystal prison." On of them said "Yes, malene your highness." and all of them flew off. Malene laughed and her body came full as though she didn't have and skeleton side of her body. A war was about to begin.
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#10 Posted: 19:55:50 15/06/2010
I like how you described the flying bit with Spyro and Cynder. I realy got the empression how much fun your character had. Well done!
I also like the ending, very foreboding.
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#11 Posted: 21:18:43 15/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks!
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#12 Posted: 17:33:35 16/06/2010
wow! Its really good!
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#13 Posted: 17:46:25 16/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks!
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#14 Posted: 18:07:41 16/06/2010
yeah, this is really good!!!
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#15 Posted: 22:24:36 23/06/2010
still going on strong!
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#16 Posted: 17:09:31 04/07/2010
This is good,
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#17 Posted: 17:20:19 04/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks.
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#18 Posted: 17:25:00 04/07/2010
wow nice
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#19 Posted: 18:46:03 12/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 12 part 4!
As we got closer to land, Cynder started to glide to the Temples balcony. We landed and I slid off. "Wow, I never thought I could be here." I said looking around. "Well, this is home to us so we're gonna come here often." Spyro said. "Come on, I think there in the Vision room." Cynder leaded. Then we walked into the Dragon training room. I looked at the statue of Malefor as we walked. The the doors opened to the Vision room. There was a green mini pool in the center and 4 banners that had element symbol and colors on it. Red for fire, Yellow for electricity, Green for earth, and Blue for ice. There was 4 dragons sitting in front of thoses banners. A yellow dragon, a blue dragin, a green dragon, and a strange blue one with a cloak sitting at the fire banner. This was Ignitus. The other dragons were Volteer, Cyril, and Terrador. "Welcome young dragons." Said Ignitus looking at us. I froze standing in place. Spyro walked by me and saw that I didn't want to move. So he whispered, "Don't worry, he won't hurt you." I still forze in place, I know he was a very nice dragon but he was so ig he looked like he could bite my head off. "Come here young one, Spyro has told me all about you." Ignitus said. I started to move very slowly at Ignitus and the other elders watched me as I walked on two legs "So, Erica. You said you can controll Aura. Correct?" He asked. I nodded. "And you can turn into the native of the worlds you visi if they don't have humans, is that also correct?" I nodded. My ambulet just shined. "Then why haven't you turned into a dragon yet?" He asked looking at the pendant. "I..don't know." I said. "Well, lets see if you can, follow me." Ignitus said as he walked to the balcony. I followed and so id Spyro, Cynder and the other Elders. We walked outside and h stood in front of me. "Do you know how to change?" He asked "Yes, I do." I said. "Alright, can you change into your dragon form?" He asked. "Not if I have data of it." I said gaining a little courage. "Well, mabye it all ready does." He said smiling at me. I started to smiled and thought of what my dragon would look like. In a blink of an eye. I opened my eyes and the other elders looked surprised at me but Spyro, Cynder and Ignitus. "Shes..shes..shes.." Cyril started to say. "A War Dragon." Terrador said. "Actually an Auraus Draconis Occidentalis." Volteer said. "A what?" I asked. Ignitus sighed. "Sorry Erica but Volteer meant an Aura Dragon." He said. "They are very rare indeed and they are called War dragins as well because of thier style in battle and how well they do in battle. The dragons where meant for battle when they we're born." He continued. "Hey guy's, whats that cloud over there?" Sparxs asked pointing to a fast moving dark cloud. "Thats not a cloud Sparx's thoses are Posin Flutters!" Spyro said. "Well I guess you get to figure out what you can do now as a dragon." Cynder said. I nodded. "Yep, it's time for action." I said.
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#20 Posted: 19:15:45 12/07/2010
neat!
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#21 Posted: 19:26:10 13/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks!
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#22 Posted: 19:29:53 13/07/2010
It is nice to see this fan fiction continued.
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#23 Posted: 19:30:33 13/07/2010 | Topic Creator
I know. :3
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#24 Posted: 15:03:24 19/07/2010
Still awesome.
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#25 Posted: 15:46:49 19/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Thank you much. Im so glad im in advance language arts.
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