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Blood Stain [CLOSED]
Cynder 19000 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1822
#1 Posted: 17:20:15 06/06/2010 | Topic Creator
********Another story. I actually have been thinking about making this story for a while now, but never posted it because only today have I come up with a title. Also just to let ya know... It'll involve Paranormal activities, and "Dark" matter... Anyways, please tell me what ya think.

Chapter 1

The blood tricled down my wrists... Freshly cut with my new knife. How I loved the feel of a sharpened knife pushing against my wrists. But not only my wrists I cut, no no, I would slice along my arms until you couldn't see my pale skin, I would thrash at my ankles and thighs... Oh, what a thrill it was! But that wasn’t the best part, the best part was... Knowing how much blood I've lost. Knowing that no matter how blood filled a the room was, no body would care! I'm a guy of many talents... Died at 14 years of age, and have no regrets! Although I get lonely at times in this new, even Darker world. That's why I can't wait when my new toys move in! Someone gotta feel my Misery... Don't you think?

"No! I don't want to move away Mom!" My younger sister, Heather wailed.
"Mom, we've lived here since...I could remember. All our friends are here. I don't want to move." I said, as I looked up from my pile of science homework.
"But Heather, Amber, we'll be living in a brand new house with neighbors, instead of this place out in the middle of no where. There's a conveniece store less then a block away. You guys will be able to walk there whenever, and there's a libary not far either." Mom said, with great joy. But when I gave her a cold look, her exspestoin changed fast.
"There is a libary here. Just takes a car drive to it, instead of a walk. I like living here on the farm," I said "A fifteen minute car drive, but it's still not that far away."
Mom sighed, "Please look forward to moving. Me and your Dad have already put the first morgage payment on it."
Me and Heather looked out our Mom with wide eyes as we both said, "You already baught the house with out letting us know?!"
"Well, it was supossed to be a surprise for you fourteenth birth-day Amber. But I couldnt keep it a secret any longer from you two. So I'm telling you now." Mom seemed to regret buying the house now, but that's what I wanted her to feel.

For an hour Mom continued to, try, to convince us that moving was a great idea. So far, she was failing. But then she said somthing that get Heathers attion. "Cookies?"
"Yeah, Sweetie. There's a bakery closer to us then the libary."
Heather looked at Mom like she was in heaven or something, I dunno. "Cookies all the time?"
"Well, every Friday as a treat I guess."
She was convinced. Thank you Heather, for helping us move the hell out.
"Amber, what about you? Were all exsited to go." Mom smiled at me.
To make her feel better I just said, "Libary...Sounds good I guess." Ok, not to covincing but it seemed to make Mom happy.
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I'm batman!! Shh...
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 17:29:05 06/06/2010 by Cynder 19000
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#2 Posted: 20:11:17 06/06/2010
cool!!!!
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#3 Posted: 20:22:30 06/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks! smilie
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I'm batman!! Shh...
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#4 Posted: 20:29:12 06/06/2010
more.....
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#5 Posted: 20:31:17 06/06/2010 | Topic Creator
More will come when I can ok? I gtg soon so I cant type a chapter now... Maybe later tonight though.
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I'm batman!! Shh...
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#6 Posted: 20:32:14 06/06/2010
ok....*waits*
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#7 Posted: 22:32:01 06/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 2

When I were to cut myself, it was my way of releasing presure. It worked too. But that wasnt the only reason I would slice at my body night and day, the other reason was just to feel a buzz, the strong smell, the pain! The buzz was like a drug, but running threw my veins. The smell would fill my nostrils, and make the hair on the back of my hair rise, it was so strong. The pain...Oh, the pain was like a hell on earth but, boy, that's why I loved it! It was worth dieing for this, I tell ya! But... The same thing made me Misrable. I want someone to feel what I felt... Or worse. That's why I cant wait for my little puppets to move in!

"Amber, Heather! Are you sure you have everything? Your Dad is packing the van up now." Mom yelled from the bottom of the stairs.
I heard my little sister yell back, "Just getting Teddy!"
"Im just trying to find Lucky!" I yelled. Lucky is our cat. Just as I was about to walk out my bed room to look for her, here she comes out of no where at my feet. I pick her up, and I can tell she feels uneasy. Lie, she knows something is going to happen. Witch made me feel really uneasy about moving.
"Ok, just make sure you have everything. Were not coming back if we forgot anything." Mom left the bottom of the stairs to help Dad.
I saw Heather walk out of her bed room at the same time I had.
"Amber," She said shyly "I didnt want to tell Mom but I'm scared to move..." she looked really pale, and it worried me concidering that she always had a bright roseing coloured face.
"It'll be alright, Heather...." Even as I said it, I knew I was wrong. I could feel Lucky's body tense up more as I said it too. "Let's go now, Mom and Dad are waiting." I said, then walked down the stairs. Reluclently my little sister followed.

"Were here!" Dad said, as we pulled up into a drive way.
"This is our house? Pretty small if ya ask me," I said. There stood house at the corner of two streets, with a 1 acer backyard, a few dieing flowerd on the front yard. Oh joy. Used to have 100 acers, and now we have this small piece of crap? Yeah, what a birth-day surprise, I continued to look at the house and then somthing seemed to... Get darker in a way. I dont know how, the sun was still out, it was just... the atmosfear shifted - Not in a good way.
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I'm batman!! Shh...
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#8 Posted: 22:36:50 06/06/2010
oooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, nice
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#9 Posted: 22:41:35 06/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Thankies. More....When I have more readers! smilie So unless you, Karen, get me another reader, or I aint continueing! smilie
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I'm batman!! Shh...
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#10 Posted: 22:46:07 06/06/2010
i love it!
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#11 Posted: 22:58:00 06/06/2010
AWESOMENESS!!!!!!
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#12 Posted: 00:22:29 07/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Yes a two new readers! smilie So I shall continue! smilie

Chapter 3

The knife would slice a clear cut in my wrist, I grited my teeth from the pain, the blood would make a river from my wrist, to my hands and finger tips, and I would flick my hand causing the blood to fling across the room. Hearing the splat from across the room... Powerd me to keep going. I held the knife in hand, reptivly slicing at the un cut skin. Heck, I never tried to hide it either! No long sleaved emo crap for me! Bring it out to the open, show others what Im capable of... The rush I felt, was worth the price I paid. But wanna know whats more of a rush? Watching others suffer, falling victom to your hands... Oh! The toys just showed up! Aw, **** that sucks... I can't come out and do my worse yet... Oh well. I have to introduse myself to the young kid anyways. Gives me time to study the puppets. Get 'em confused. Mess around with their mind with, quite a few, mind games are always nice too. How much fun this'll be!

I opend the van door and hoped out. Heather crawled out beside me. Mom and Dad were already out side, un-packing the van. I streched, a 5 hour car drive is trieing. Something still didnt feel right, but I didnt let it get to me, but it seemed as if Heather had. She pulled on my pant leg. "Amber... Do you feel it?"
I knew exactly what she was talking about but if this was the place we were going to live at, until were old enough to move out, I didnt wan't to worry her. "Heather, what are you talking about?"
"It's just feels... Scarey..."
"It's because were in a new place that we dont know, everythings fine." My stomache turned. No. Not 'everything's fine'. Something was wrong, but I caried away as if I didnt kno what she was talking about.
Heather looked up at me, her bright blue eyes staring right into my dark brown eyes. "Promise?"
"Promise."
With that, she lt go and ran to the other side of the van and then called me over. "Amber! Come!"
I ran to her thinking something bad had happend in the last few seconds. "What worng?!"
"Nothing. Just look at that boy over there! He look around your age, doesn't he? But... He looks creepy."
Turns out you can never trust a childs screams. But there was a boy, and she was right about one thing: He sure did look creepy. The boy had a scar over his left eye, a scare the continued from his right dimple that continued along the side of his face, and mutiple scared over his arms and legs. He had dark hair, witch he probally dyed black but was starting to fade, and had very pale skin. The boy waved to us with a smile, witch looked alot more bigger then supossed to be with that scar. "Yeah, looks about my age..."
"Don't you want to meet him?"
"No." Although I had to admit, under all those scares, he looked pretty cute. "But I'm not going to say hi."
Heather shruged. Then waved back at the boy.
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I'm batman!! Shh...
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#13 Posted: 00:25:54 07/06/2010
awesomness
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#14 Posted: 00:32:18 07/06/2010
*jaw drops* I am in the prescence of awesomeness!
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#15 Posted: 00:37:36 07/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Thank you ppl! smilie
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I'm batman!! Shh...
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#16 Posted: 00:49:04 07/06/2010
smilie Whoa. Horror. smilie
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#17 Posted: 00:51:38 07/06/2010 | Topic Creator
About time you show up! smilie
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I'm batman!! Shh...
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#18 Posted: 02:29:34 07/06/2010
Interesting...
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#19 Posted: 02:34:51 07/06/2010
its more then interesting its awesome
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#20 Posted: 02:44:42 07/06/2010
Couldn't have said it better, sis.
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#21 Posted: 02:45:27 07/06/2010
i no right sis?
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#22 Posted: 02:48:46 07/06/2010
Tahreh, awsome avi! my favorit charictors is hikaru and kaoru on ouran high school host club smilie

anyway, awsome chap.!
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#23 Posted: 02:54:44 07/06/2010
(: Thank you!
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#24 Posted: 21:33:17 07/06/2010 | Topic Creator
...Ok then to everyhting that was posted....smilie

Chapter 4

Oh, you pethedic little animals! Can't tell a dead man, from the living. How easy this'll be! Anywho, guess I should talk about other times then, shouldn't I? I would curl my fingers around the knife, sharp side to my palms, and squeaze hard. I would keep the blade in for minutes at a time sometimes hours if I had the chance, and let the knife slowly slice threw my hand. Surprising that I never cut a clear threw my hand, to this day I still don't know how that didnt happend! Why did I do this? Oh, same reason I cut myself anywhere else. But mostly so my hand would have a indent specaily for holding my knife! It came in handy, too. Let me have more of a death grip on it... It really helped when I were to slice at my back whithout it sliping out of my hand. But it helped in alot more ways then just that... Grip is needed so you don't drop your weapon at the scene on the crime.

"Who are you waving at, Sweetie?" Dad asked Heather, as he walked by, attempting to pick up two boxes at once.
I looked at him, "Can't you se-" I stoped in mid-sentance as I turned my head to where they boy had been, but now he was no longer there. That was strange. I didnt hear him walk off...
"See who?"
"No one..."
"What are you talking about Amber?! The boy! The boy that was just over there!" Heather said, and pointed to where the boy had been standing. I shot her a look. She looked back at me. Dad seemed to ignore us both and walked into the house. "Did I say something wrong?"
"No...It's just that... I dont think you should of told Dad..."
"Why?! He's just some guy!"
I looked off where the boy was standing a few minutes ago as I said, "I think he's more then 'some guy'..."
Heather gave me a puzzled look, then held my hand as if what I had said terrified her. Turns out it had. "More then 'some guy'...What do you mean?"
Quite honestly, I didn't even know. Just something. Well, the scares didn't help his case much but there was something more... "Nothing. Never mind I said anything."
Heather looked at me, not convinced, but let go of my hand anyways, and run to the front door.
I looked back at the place again, and couldn't help but to feel that something was there, when I felt something at my feet I nearly jumped right out of my skin, but then clamed down when I relived it was Lucky. I picked her up, her eyes at the place aswell, but she seemed to be following something. I put a hand on her head, and ran it along her back, "You know somethings there, don't you?" The response I got, that I took as yes, was her eyes wondeirng up to mine, then back to following what it was that she saw. I got a chill threw spin, then walked into the house.
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I'm batman!! Shh...
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#25 Posted: 21:35:55 07/06/2010
oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo...........................
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#26 Posted: 22:14:08 07/06/2010
More smilie.
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#27 Posted: 23:40:00 07/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Oh, you find this funny, do you? smilie

More will come soom. As soon as someone else read my story The Black Death.... *coughdfdcough* smilie
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I'm batman!! Shh...
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#28 Posted: 03:06:13 08/06/2010
Whoa...
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#29 Posted: 03:07:14 08/06/2010
i still like it
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#30 Posted: 03:27:06 08/06/2010
Quote: Cynder 19000
Oh, you find this funny, do you? smilie

More will come soom. As soon as someone else read my story The Black Death.... *coughdfdcough* smilie


Shut up. smilie
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#31 Posted: 10:57:25 08/06/2010 | Topic Creator
No. Im srsly not going to continue this untill someone, at the moment anyone, read The Black Death! smilie
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I'm batman!! Shh...
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#32 Posted: 20:26:06 08/06/2010
ok, i shall read it
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#33 Posted: 21:46:43 08/06/2010 | Topic Creator
....smilie


Also I'll be writing the next chapter later tonight if I can...
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I'm batman!! Shh...
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#34 Posted: 19:10:27 13/06/2010
I read it for gods sake >.> smilie
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#35 Posted: 04:49:51 16/06/2010
MOREZ!!!!!!!! pwease
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#36 Posted: 11:05:58 16/06/2010 | Topic Creator
MOREZ will come when I dont get so much homeowrk! k?
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I'm batman!! Shh...
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#37 Posted: 15:41:47 16/06/2010
Awesome story! Can't wait to read more!
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"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
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#38 Posted: 21:49:04 16/06/2010
ok..... i shall wait
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#39 Posted: 18:48:31 17/06/2010
Quote: Cynder 19000
MOREZ will come when I dont get so much homeowrk! k?


-waits-
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#40 Posted: 22:39:57 17/06/2010 | Topic Creator
*gives the evil eye to dfd* Sorry! I've got alot of tests coming up...
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I'm batman!! Shh...
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#41 Posted: 23:50:51 18/06/2010
...what is it with you and double posts? smilie -snickers-
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#42 Posted: 00:42:37 19/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Oh wow smilie MY computers messed it'll post doubles sometimes... How did I miss that?! smilie I'l, go delete one of 'em smilie
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#43 Posted: 03:17:43 19/06/2010
*waites*
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#44 Posted: 19:28:07 19/06/2010
-WAITS IMPATIENTLY- smilie
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#45 Posted: 20:00:23 19/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Oh shut up, dfd smilie I've got a week of school left, I'll post another when it's over. Got it?! smilie
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I'm batman!! Shh...
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#46 Posted: 20:10:24 19/06/2010
*waits* [User Posted Image]
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#47 Posted: 20:47:53 19/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Awww... Im still not posting another chapter for another week though smilie
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I'm batman!! Shh...
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#48 Posted: 20:51:51 19/06/2010
*waits*
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#49 Posted: 23:17:07 20/06/2010
Quote: Cynder 19000
Oh shut up, dfd smilie I've got a week of school left, I'll post another when it's over. Got it?! smilie



You're out of school in a WEEK?! I was off LAST MONTH!!! smilie
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#50 Posted: 23:17:58 20/06/2010
i got out a long time ago too.
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