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Makab [CLOSED]
Xia Blue Sparx Gems: 749
#1 Posted: 23:35:03 02/06/2010 | Topic Creator
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MAKAB is by © LadyScoliosis.deviantArt.com (me)

Contents:
Blood
Dry humor
Weirdos
......Dragons


It all takes place in the world of Makab, a sanctuary for deformed and malicious dragons. Black clouds swivel through the red sunless sky and the dead soil reeks with the stench of rotten meat. Makab remains uninhabited. No life appeared on it's surface, but two dragons traveling through the harsh barren. Their names were Ambre and L'Oviteer. Ambre is a deformed dragon. Instead of scales, the material of his skin is similar to tissue from the brain. A large black thorn protrude from the center of his head and his backside remains wingless. L'Oviteer is a skeleton dragon. His anatomy is similar to a Scorpion and the white plates on his bony skin are made from the purest of ivory. Also, he has no neck and his head is in the shape of a cow skull.

[Ambre] Pronounced Amb or Am-brah.

[L'Oviteer] Pronounced Low-veh-ture

Ambre: Where is everyone?

L'Oviteer: Amby, they could be in a village near by or they all died. There's a reason why these plains so are desolate.

Ambre: But, everyone can't just drop dead like that.

L'Oviteer: Amby, it's 150 degrees. Would you think life would survive?

Ambre: No. But, don't you think everyone just moved underground to escape the sun's heat?

L'Oviteer: I go against your logic, Ambre. Your trying to say that "everyone" and "everything" just went groudzero?

Ambre: Yes! This dragon realm ain't normal. I mean, the ground looks like a living creature and it stinks.

L'Oviteer: Ambre, I know this realm is a negative dimension reflecting the orginal dragon realm, but it is not that different. There better be a village near by because I have no time to die.

Ambre: Hey, look a pond!

L'Oviteer: An oasis?!

They both scurry to the watering hole, but finds out it was just a ditch. L'Ovinteer falls on his back, absorbing the sun's heat. Ambre peers over him, blinking rapidly.

Ambre: Somehow Makab is evaporated from water.

L'Oviteer: It was a mirage! We're gonna die out here!

Ambre: No, we're not. Let's go underground.

L'Oviteer: Let's what?

Ambre: To keep our tails from dying, we go underground.

L'Oviteer: I told you that's not logical, Amby!

Ambre: Come on!

He jumps within the ditch and use his claws to shovel his way into the Earth. L'Ovinteer spectates and dirt flies on him. He spits it out.

L'Oviteer: Ambre! You idiot! You're wasting time!

Ambre: Lo, I need your help. Please, you have to believe me. Just try.

L'Oviteer: Fine! I will. But, if your little theory of everyone moving within Makab is nothing but a fairytale, then you have to say I'm always right when ever you have a stupid idea.

Ambre: ....deal.
Edited 4 times - Last edited at 00:27:20 07/06/2010 by Xia
Whitedragon Ripto Gems: 963
#2 Posted: 09:15:43 03/06/2010
awesome!
Xia Blue Sparx Gems: 749
#3 Posted: 21:45:25 04/06/2010 | Topic Creator
[quote=[url=http://forum.darkspyro.net/spyro/viewposts.php?topic=30275&post=1754436]Whitedragon[/url]]awesome![/quote]


Thanks..I'll write more.
Xia Blue Sparx Gems: 749
#4 Posted: 22:27:35 04/06/2010 | Topic Creator
L'Oviteer joins Ambre on his escavation and when night falls, they both continue digging. Ambre dig his claws in the dirt, but hits a mysterious object. He pulls his hand from the earth and it reveals a red beam. Ambre taps L'Ovinteer to spectate. The skeleton tilts his head forward to get a closer look. He peers into the red light, then looks back Ambre. He finds out that it wasn't an object, but some kind of hole or opening within Makab. Ambre chuckles.

Ambre: This proves that all the dragons went underground.

L'Oviteer: Still, I deny your logic of an underground sanctum. You don't even know if red gems are down there. I will prove you wrong!

He stomps his pointed foot into the dirt and the ground crumble beneath them. They scream, falling into what looks similar to magma. Instead of plummetg in, they land on it's surface. The lava was sealed by a glass floor. L'Ovinteer stands, shivering in his exoskeleton.

L'Oviteer, in fear: We....We almost died. I thought we're going to die..

Ambre: Sorry, Lo, don't see no red gems, buuut, I do see a hollow passage. Hey, It might even lead us to that undergr-

L'Oviteer, cutting him off: Rubbish! That is complete rubbish! I can't believe it!

Ambre: Well, believe it.

L'Oviteer: But-b-but, I mean, caves unwardly in Makab. Core's labyrinth?! How is there a labyrinth in Makab? And, the lava is glass!

Ambre: Ya know, I ignore the whole labyrinthy thing, but I can go pass the glassy floor. Hey, Lo, who do you think did this?

L'Oviteer, tapping glass with pointed foor: I-I don't know. It's a liquid substance. Must be the Anti-Freezings. But, who would place this stuff over rivers of lava?

Ambre: The dragons and creatures that migrated within Makab! So, they don't get burned!

L'Oviteer: Imposible! Makab is ceased from water. The percentage of liquid on this planet is 2%. A fraud, I say.

Ambre:...Lo,...I-I think you got it all wrong. Your story is not complete. Remember, when I said Makab is like a-a living thing and evaporated the wa-

L'Oviteer, cutting him off: My book is comeplete and now, published into your ilogical mind. I am right,....You are wrong.
Edited 3 times - Last edited at 00:26:53 07/06/2010 by Xia
Xia Blue Sparx Gems: 749
#5 Posted: 00:26:20 07/06/2010 | Topic Creator
They both travel within the dark reaches of Makab. There were no signs of intelligent life, but small microscophic critters that burrow inside the core's earth. When they made it to the end, there were only more tunnels. Ambre scratched his head.

Ambre: Um, Lo, I think this is going to take a while.

L'Oviteer: No, I think this is a waste of my time.

Ambre: Lighten up, will ya? Why can't you accept the fact that I'm right.

L'Oviteer: You, right? Oh please, you're all talk, my little gullible friend. As I say, you support no advance logic what so ever. Now, I'm going back the surface.

???: Who are you guys?!

L'Oviteer and Ambre turn toward the mysterious voice

???: Well?

Ambre:....I was right....

L'Oviteer: I-I.....I-.........How is this logical?....
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