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Ember versus Cynder [CLOSED]
Whitedragon Ripto Gems: 963
#1 Posted: 20:10:00 17/05/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter one


Spyro skipped from land to land, admiring the new age. The wind calmy sang in a duet with the birds. He turned back to catch glimpse of Cynder. Cynder was racing towards him, desperate to catch up to him. She laughed and smiled when she cought up to him. Spyro grinned and greeted her by nodded his head and waving. Cynder patted him on the back.
"Hello Spyro," She said, settling down onto the short, bosky grass. Spyro stared. "About what I told you..." She said, drifting her speech. She expected Spyro to understand.
"What thing?" He asked, bulging his eyes. His crest flopped by the side a bit. Cynder sighed, and began I long silence. "Oh... That thing," He said, being silent himself. He looked at Cynder. [i]Was this the right time? [i]Should he tell her, or not? He blinked hard to gain courage. "Yes, I do love you," He said blushing. Cynder had wanted him to answer this question for a whole year. "And I want our relationship to last a long time... forever?" He suggested, eyes twinkling. Cynder hugged him and rubbed against him.
"Of course I will!" She cried, eyes gleaming. Spyro rubbed beside her too. It wasn't broken anymore, it was fixed. This was how it really should be. Spyro lifted his head away and stared blankly into Cynder's emerald green eyes.
"What about Ember?" He wondered, trodding around Cynder. Cynder smirked.
"That pink idoit? I don't think so. You have me, our love will last forever and ever, and no pink ***** is going to stand in our way. I don't care if she can't take it that she knew both of us were in love, she knows it deep down, so we don't need to worry about her," Cynder explained. She didn't notice that she was lurking behind her, listening to every word she said. She cleared her throat and clenched her fists. Cynder turned round. "Oh... It's you," She grumbled. Ember closed her eyes and sighed, before she could rage. Suddenly, she opened eyes full of fearsome fires that fluttered around like an old orange blanket thrown out in winds most uncommon. Cynder growled, and revealed shadows darker than the dark skies of Spyro and Cynder's previous bloodcurdling adventure.
"I heard every word," She growled, ready to pounce. Spyro didn't stop them, he stayed there watching, shivering. "You know me and Spyro are together, you know we are having a pretty wedding this monday, and you think you can get in the way of it!" She snapped, opening her jaw which revealed sharp teeth that could shred apart Cynder within seconds. Cynder snarled back as a remark.
"Let it begin shall we, my pink *****?" She said, eyes narrowing.

Ember clawed her with her tubby claws. Cynder screamed and blacked-out, but quickly got back on her paws. Ember didn't see what was coming. Fears taunted Ember's mind of marrige with Spyro, fear killed her mind in a flash, fear ate her up. Cynder took one last breathe, and the fear leaped away in the forests. Ember had a tear run down her face. She had been knocked over by just one breathe of Cynder. She had to fight back. She didn't want to lose.
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#2 Posted: 22:56:22 17/05/2010
nice, i like how it gives both girls strengths and weakness as well as that spyro is tied between the two.
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
SuperShadra64 Red Sparx Gems: 25
#3 Posted: 23:47:09 17/05/2010
Poor ember
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6158
#4 Posted: 06:42:19 19/05/2010
Yes, poor Ember...
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
Whitedragon Ripto Gems: 963
#5 Posted: 14:47:02 19/05/2010 | Topic Creator
@ NB It's not all you expect further on. Who knows what ember has within her? To be honest I hate Cynder. But you do not know what I have planned. MWHUHAHA.
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#6 Posted: 14:57:07 19/05/2010
smilie my sister is the opposit, she hates Ember {i think becuase of her being all pink and her hating pink } but i like both girls... I can't wait to see what will happen next. smilie
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
Whitedragon Ripto Gems: 963
#7 Posted: 15:16:42 19/05/2010 | Topic Creator
I hate Cynder with being a Mary-sue, so I like Ember because the way shes all clingy and stuff, and pink and more intresting than Cynder. Thank-you smilie. I will make the one with corrected spelling another time.

Chapter two


Ember opened her jaw and revealed sharp dagger teeth, she unleashed her claws from within her claws and snarled at ear-piercing volume. She pounced onto Cynder and dug the daggers into her hard, ebony black scales. Blood raced the tears as Cynder was pinned down. Cynder had only one choice. Element. She wondered, thinking which element would be wise. Suddenly, Ember hurled out a fire, which spread around Cynder as she struggled. Ember had the chance to kill Cynder. Cynder cringed, scracthing Ember, but Ember wasn't harmed. Ember had one more breath of inferno bullets to kill Cynder quickly. Ember breathed in. This was Cynder's last chance.

Spyro rushed in and knocked the two apart.
"Ouch!" Remarked Ember, getting back on paws. Cynder did the same. She glared at Cynder.
"Stop!" Yelled Spyro, anger in the eyes. The two scampered back.
"I'm sorry Spyro," Ember said, looking down into the grass.
"It's okay Ember... Cynder, can I talk to you?" Spyro asked, puppy eyes at Cynder. Spyro began flight, Cynder quickly joining him. Ember waited, listening.
Whitedragon Ripto Gems: 963
#8 Posted: 16:18:08 20/05/2010 | Topic Creator
"Cynder... I don't love you... I just wanted to make you happy. Ember must be my love, I think we are truly friends. I see now, that love isn't what I thought it was, I see a difference. I must love Ember, not you," He said, eyes down. Cynder snapped and rolled her eyes.
"Of course you love me, you said!"
"No, I do not," Spyro said, even more gloomy than before. Cynder flew away, out of Spyro's sight. Ember sauntered towards Spyro.
"Are you ok?" She asked, opening her emerald green eyes wide. Spyro nodded with an awkward grin, he didn't want Ember to see his feelings.
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6158
#9 Posted: 18:44:12 20/05/2010
Cool story, can't wait for more!
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
Whitedragon Ripto Gems: 963
#10 Posted: 15:01:06 21/05/2010 | Topic Creator
Ember slightly tilted her head, with being concerned. She skidded towards him.
"I heard you," She said, blinking hard. Spyro nodded slowly. He didn't have any 'time' to think. "I love you too," She said, nuzzling him. "I know Cynder well, I'm sure she can get a hold of herself about it soon,"
NightBlade Platinum Sparx Gems: 6019
#11 Posted: 20:58:38 21/05/2010
nice. Please put more. It is nice to see someone's opinion and story that isn't my sister's.
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The Eater of Worlds has awoken!
"Muttering curse words under her breasts..." - Jamie
Galaxies and Stardust. More Art Than Stars.
Whitedragon Ripto Gems: 963
#12 Posted: 13:58:41 22/05/2010 | Topic Creator
thank-you
Bolt Hunter Gems: 6158
#13 Posted: 09:24:56 23/05/2010
Yeah, please write more!
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you don't know me. i break things
I draw stuff.
crazyspyrofan Yellow Sparx Gems: 1042
#14 Posted: 19:09:29 26/05/2010
very good story,please write more
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"This twisted game needs to be reset,"-Solo Wing Pixy,Ace Combat Zero.
karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#15 Posted: 23:38:07 26/05/2010
more please! smilie
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~That akward moment when it seems like your post has made other people want to stop posting...~
DarkCynder_543 Platinum Sparx Gems: 5225
#16 Posted: 08:24:03 27/05/2010
It's good. I'm glad to see a change in storyline about Ember vs Cynder story lines.
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a true saiyan always sprinkles when he tinkles
GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#17 Posted: 08:24:48 27/05/2010
The wind calmy sang in a duet with the birds.
I love that sentence.
Whitedragon Ripto Gems: 963
#18 Posted: 16:47:39 27/05/2010 | Topic Creator
"I'm fine," Spyro said, nodding violently. My buldging eyes glinted, and I eyed the sunlight. Ember scrambled me to the floor and smirked.

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crazyspyrofan Yellow Sparx Gems: 1042
#19 Posted: 20:00:43 27/05/2010
Interesting,please keep going
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"This twisted game needs to be reset,"-Solo Wing Pixy,Ace Combat Zero.
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