darkSpyro

name: Silver
species: wolf
gender: male
age: 23 years
rank: alpha male
Clan: silvermoon
eyes: pure emerald green
talents: Jumping, climbing, hunting fighting (never loses at fighting!)
Appearance:

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Chapter 1 soon

you draw that

yup, i drew silver

wrong forum.

Cool. Anxious for start.

Take this as constructive criticism, but if you're going to write a story about wolves, at least know the difference between these two:

The plural of wolf is wolves. For example:

The wolves moved silently through the dark forest, their coats tinged with frost from the frigid air.

It can't be used as wolfs, unless you're saying something like this:

That wolf's coat is as red as the crisp oak leaves themselves.

The regular form of wolf is wolf. Not Wolve.

That should help.

Quote: ravenouscynder

wrong forum.

*facepalm* this is why your not on my friend list anymore

Quote: Firestar

Cool. Anxious for start.

Take this as constructive criticism, but if you're going to write a story about wolves, at least know the difference between these two:

The plural of wolf is wolves. For example:

The wolves moved silently through the dark forest, their coats tinged with frost from the frigid air.

It can't be used as wolfs, unless you're saying something like this:

That wolf's coat is as red as the crisp oak leaves themselves.

The regular form of wolf is wolf. Not Wolve.

That should help.

thanks, i will use that
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CHAPTER ONE
Hunters
Silver raced away from the hunters, he jumped over bushes and logs to get away from the hunters. he stop and looked behind him, the thought they were gone into a bullet just missed his head.
"IT IS THERE, THE WOLF IS THERE!" cried a hunter, Silver turned and ran! he looked around for help and howled but.........silence.....
he stood there for a couple of seconds, he lifted his ear to hear another wolf howl! he ran towards where the wolves were howling from, they got louder ever step of the way. he came to a tall rock and a clan of wolves sat around the rock, an old elder wolf was talking.
"the new leader shall be here soon, i can feel it" said the elder wolf, he collpased on the rock! silver gasped and ran to help, All the wolves backed off when he went near the leader
"It is him! he is here!" yelled a wolf from the crowd
"is it really him?" cried another
"i think you have got me mistaken for someone else, friends" he smiled "im silver, im just trying to get awa----" silver was interupted by another wolf calling out from the crowd
"It is him! its our new leader, silver!" cried the wolf, the whole crowd cheered
i have no idea what is about to happen thought silver...........

Cool. More

More tommorow

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Quote: ravenouscynder

wrong forum.

*facepalm* this is why your not on my friend list anymore

Quote: Firestar

Cool. Anxious for start.

Take this as constructive criticism, but if you're going to write a story about wolves, at least know the difference between these two:

The plural of wolf is wolves. For example:

The wolves moved silently through the dark forest, their coats tinged with frost from the frigid air.

It can't be used as wolfs, unless you're saying something like this:

That wolf's coat is as red as the crisp oak leaves themselves.

The regular form of wolf is wolf. Not Wolve.

That should help.

thanks, i will use that
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CHAPTER ONE
Hunters
Silver raced away from the hunters, he jumped over bushes and logs to get away from the hunters. he stop and looked behind him, the thought they were gone into a bullet just missed his head.
"IT IS THERE, THE WOLF IS THERE!" cried a hunter, Silver turned and ran! he looked around for help and howled but.........silence.....
he stood there for a couple of seconds, he lifted his ear to hear another wolf howl! he ran towards where the wolves were howling from, they got louder ever step of the way. he came to a tall rock and a clan of wolves sat around the rock, an old elder wolf was talking.
"the new leader shall be here soon, i can feel it" said the elder wolf, he collpased on the rock! silver gasped and ran to help, All the wolves backed off when he went near the leader
"It is him! he is here!" yelled a wolf from the crowd
"is it really him?" cried another
"i think you have got me mistaken for someone else, friends" he smiled "im silver, im just trying to get awa----" silver was interupted by another wolf calling out from the crowd
"It is him! its our new leader, silver!" cried the wolf, the whole crowd cheered
i have no idea what is about to happen thought silver...........

WAAAAAHHH!! THEN YOUR OFF MINE!! >:V

WRRONG FORRRUMMM

Shut up RC
name: Thorn
age: 22 years
species: wolve
gender: female
Rank: aplha female
appearance:

info: she is silvers mate and alpha female of silver moon
clan: silvermoon
talents: fighting and climbing
eyes: gold

Chapter 2
Alpha
Silver sat on the rock, still confused
"Look wolves, i think you have really got the wrong wolf. i will just be leaving now" Silver said, he started to walk away when he heard a familiar voice
"Where are you going, Silver" the voice said gently
"I know that voice.........Can it be.........Thorn??" he asked himself quietly, he turned to see a big white wolf with bright gold eyes and black marking under her golden eyes. she also had some stripes on her ears and her legs were long and could carrie her miles
"Thorn, is that you?" he asked
"Yes, Silver" smiled Thorn
"But, we were seperated by the hunters when we were pups! how could you become leader of silvermoon, silvermoon is the biggest and strongest clan and--" Silver was stopped by Thorn
"we were all Worried to death, Silver. but now your back, you can be alpha male with me" she smiled
"What, me, the alpha male of the silvermoon clan? i mean sure." he cried
"Then we shall meet her At midnight SHARP to have the new leader meeting" Thorn said, she turned and disipeared into a cave.......

Stll waiting for more

that was a great chapter
sorry about mia getting mad at you

its okay, we are cool now

Quote: ravenouscynder

WRRONG FORRRUMMM

oops. heh heh u are on the right forum. uh heh heh sorry.

May aswell delete that post
CHAPTER 3
WOLF MEETING
It was midnight and all the wolves sat around a fie in a cave, the only wolf not there was silver. Thorn lay on a big rock waiting for silver intil he finally appeared at the cave entrance, he walked nervously in.
"Sorry im a bit late, i over slept" said Silver, he sat on another part of the rock next to thorn. Thorn starred and nodded
"Oh right" silver laughed, he threw his head back and howled with thorn, the rest of the clan howled too to open the meeting. Silver stopped howling. He looked down at Thorn who was still starring at him
"What do i do?" whispered Silver quietly
"You need to talk about why you are here" Thorn whispered back, the fire kept crackling and all the wolves starred at Silver
"Uh, im silver and uh i just came up here when your leader died. im not sure if im really meant to be here or if im a simalar wolf to who your looking for but, i just happened to pop up at the time your leader died" Silver sighed, The wolves gave a simple stare for a bit then howled in upload
They like me, dont mess this up Siver! silver through to himself, he was about to say something when thorn stood up and said
"There are hunters out there in the snowy wilderness, we must protect our land and the animals that live on it!" she said "tommorow night, we must go on a night search and find out where these hunters are havin their camp and attack to make the hunters flee!" Thorn slammed her paw down on the rock and made silver jump.
What have i got myself into now? Silver though to himself

Cool, more.

OMG! I LOVE TIS SONG

CHAPTER 4
SAVIN THE CLAN
Silver wondered out the meeting cave with Thorn
"That was hard, when do i need to do that again?" he asked
"Everyday" replied Thorn, Silver froze in mid-walk
"Dont move." said Silver, he was starring into the bushes
"What?" hissed Thorn, Silver slowly moved a paw and point at 2 hunters lurking in the bushs taking aim at thorn and Silver! Silver's ears had gone down flat and he was snarling loudly
"What is wrong, Silver?" asked Thorn, Silver pounced forwards into the bush and tackled the hunters! All thorn could hear was screaming and howling and snarling.
More wolves ran forwards to the sence to see what was going on
"What is happening?" one wolf cried
"It cant be good!" cried anther
"What should i do? if i help, i will get myself killed and if i leave him, he will die!" Yelped Thorn, more wolves came running.......

That band who sings it is called Three Days Grace. One of my favorite bands, my favorite song of their's is probably The Good Life or One-X

more soon

Quote: Spyo

that was a great chapter
sorry about mia getting mad at you

thats ok you were only sticking up for your freind
never see me doing that would be hiding behind one of mine saying "dont let them see me don let htem see me"

anyway good story

Thx, i put alot into it

looks good

this is the last chapter guys
CHAPTER 5
FINALE BATTLE WITH THE HUNTERS
Silver was thrown out the bush, he was covered in blood and his jaw was broken!
"SILVER!" cried Thorn, she nuzzled him then growled at the hunters.
she pounced on the hunters and threw one back into a tree, she then span and kicked away another hunter!
"LETS DANCE!" she cried as she rammed into a hunter, it looked like she was dancing while fighting. a hunter shot at her but she dodged and broke his neck by force of her strong bite, she stood on 2 legs and started to punch a hunters before smacking another and making him fall into a bush! Silver got up, he tackled a hunter then ripped off his hand and killed him
"I KEEP BOUNCING!" silver cried, he smashed a hunter with his head before scratching another's face off.
all the hunters backed off and ran away
"IF YOU WANNA DANCE, LETS TAKE OUR CHANCE" they both cried, the whole pack howled as they did..............................................