darkSpyro

yes, i decided to make a percy jackson and the olympians story. i would suggest to at least read the first book(maybe???) if you want to understand everything, but i'm not really sure yet. i obviously haven't planned out the whole thing yet.
oh, and i haven't read the whole series. i'm on the forth one, so the prologe most likely won't be accurate, its just what i think happed when luke attacked the camp(if he even did...>.>)
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Prologe:
There were monsters everywhere. We were outnumbered by, well, a lot. Everyone knew we couldn't let them destroy camp half-blood, but the chances of us winning were worse than when Annabeth and I were against 3 scorpians, and everyone we knew was already here fighting with us.
Hey, boss! I heard Blackjack say, flying above me. Need any help? I can kick some of those monsters for ya. They'll be yelling for their mommys before i'm finished with 'em.
"We need all the help we can get!" I yelled up, hoping he heard me. From the corner of my eye, i saw Grover running from a cyclops. Chiron galloped over to him, so i stayed where i was. I could barely move around through all the monsters, campers, hunters, and other people. A few yards away i saw Luke. I would've lunged for him if i could have actually moved. Then i saw who was fighting him. Annabeth and Thalia. I tried harder to get through the crowd, but it was no use. Then, i saw Thalia get knocked aside. There was anger in Annabeth's eyes. She attacked Luke with all the force she had. It amazed me how angry she could get. Then again, when i'm angry i can do some damage with water, too. I was able to squeeze through the fighting and get to Thalia. She was hurt badly. I tried to get my ambrosia, but it wasn't in my pocket. I checked my other one. nothing. And thalia was getting worse. Hunters were immortal, but they could still die in battle. I was getting desprate. Thalia was running out of time, but i didn't have any ambrosia or nector. It felt just like what happened to Zoe. I didn't want the same thing to happen to Thalia. But when i looked back at her, i could tell she was gone. I looked up to see where annabeth was, but i couldn't find her. Who i did see was Luke, and he was walking right up to me, Backbitter was in his hands. I picked up Riptide, but everything went in a blur. He was moving too fast. I mean, too fast to be normal.
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i have to go, i'll finish later.

This is cool! xD I hope you continue it. x3

i will! so...just have to finish the prologe...
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i barely dodged out of the way. it was nearly impossable to at the speed luke was going. his sword was feet away from me one second, then the next it was about a centemeter away from my face. i knew i couldn't keep this up forever, but i had to try, for my friends. but then, everyone dissapeared exept for thalia, annabeth, grover, and luke. thalia was awake, watching luke and i. actually, they were all looking at us. suddenly, they all dissapeared, and then i woke up.
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did you expect that it was a dream?

xD No, I didn't expect that. x3 Good prolouge!

and i feel strange writing the first chapter. >.> but i'll put it right now anyways. *hides behind rock*
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chapter one:
"percy, are you okay?" I hear grover ask.
why is he in my cabin? i thought. "grover, why..." but i stopped when i opened my eyes. i wasn't in my cabin.
"why what? Are you okay percy? you were saying strange things in your sleep."
"yeah," i said. "just a bad dream." i got up. "where are we?"
"Yancy. are you sure your okay? you're acting really strange."
"i'm fine, don't worry."
"well, you better hurry up and get ready. the field trip is in an hour."
"which field trip?"
"are you having memory-loss or something? we're going to the musium today. the greek and roman one."
"oh, yeah, that one." i said. did all those things happen, or was it just a dream? i wondered while getting dressed. in about an hour, we both walked outside to the bus, and got in.
"whats wrong, percy?" Grover asked. "your being really quiet."
"nothing is wrong!" i said. "I'm just thinking about that dream..." Grover looked at me, worry on his face. maybe he's worried because half-blood dreams usually are important. or maybe just because i'm acting so strange. besides, why would i be going through this all over again? the bus stopped.
"okay, we're going to have lunch. don't go anywhere alone!" Mr. Brummer said. Everyone got off the bus. Grover and i sat down, and we still were quiet.
"are you going to eat your apple?" grover asked, then i looked at him, surprised.
"what? is eating apples illegal or something? really percy, something's wrong with you today." just then, nancy and her friends came over and she dropped her food on grover. i felt anger go through my body, and there was a tug in my gut, but i controled it, and it went away. nancy was still standing and not in the water fountain. that wasn't a dream! it was real.
"just leave him alone, nancy!" i yelled at her, trying to keep my anger under control. i hoped grover hadn't picked up that my scent was stronger. it should've been, since i was sure about being a half-blood now.
"like you can fight me!" nancy said, throwing a punch at me. i jumped out of my seat, holding back the reply "I've fought Ares before!". that would tell grover i knew, of corse, if he hadn't figured it out from my scent already. Dodging nancy was pretty easy, probebly because of fighting monsters. it went wrong when nancy and her friends pinned me against the fence. unless i wanted to be beat up by a few girls(i was starting to wonder how i had fought monsters before...)i would have to get nancy away from me, and the only way to do that was to control water. i tried to make the water grab her like i did the first time, but nothing happened. i was too far away, and if i tried to control it too much, it might cause an explosion like in the volcano. I saw a gap, and ran through the girls. nancy followed me, but then i saw Mrs. Dodds standing in front of us.
"no fighting percy jackson!" she said. "come with me!" and she walked into the musium. i glanced at grover. he looked terrified. just another piece of proof that my dream was real, which wasn't verry comforting. espeacially considering that i would have to face Mrs. Dodds alone...again. and this battle probebly wasn't going to be the exact same as last time. i looked at grover, thinking help!. i didn't know if he had made the empathy link. but he was already looking at Mr. Brummer, Chiron, whatever i should be calling him right now.
Grover! I thought again.
Percy! Don't go in there with her! i heard grover think back. well, that answered the empathy link question.
I know!
WHAT?! HOW?!
"hurry up percy jackson!"
i'll explain later, just make sure chiron helps me! but don't tell him i know about this already.
i won't, but do NOT die, percy!
i'm not going to die, grover. i thought, then followed Mrs. Dodds into the musium. My heart was pounding. just because i had been through this before didn't mean that i wasn't nervous. I stayed a little farther away from Mrs. Dodds than i did before. She turned around, smiled evily, then started to change into her real form. I clenched my fists. Chiron wasn't here yet. He should be. I barely dodged her first attack. I had to concentrate on staying alive until Chiron came.
Hey, Grover, might be good to have Chiron here right about now! I thought, then rolled away from another attack. Chiron was nowhere in sight. I felt inside my pocket. Riptide was already in it. I grabbed it out, and uncapped it. Mrs. Dodds growled, then charged at me. I sliced her wing, and she dissapeared into dust. I capped riptide and put it back in my pocket.
are you alive percy?
i don't think you would be if i wasn't. now can we go to camp before another monster comes and tries to kill me?
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i couldn't find a place to stop. so, now you know what this story is acutally about. tell me if you want me to keep writing...

please do. it is a good story.

yay! thank you!
have you read the series?

yes. i have. it is a good series.

i'll add another chapter tommarow.

yay! x explodes x

ummm....*backs away slowly* nothin to see here people! nobody, like, exploded or anything! what would give you that idea?! hehehe....*runz away*

fifteen.

i've died a lot before, but not acutually exploaded.

oh great.

cool!

That was an awsome chapter! xD *explodes too*

Lol now every on is ex... x explodes x

great. now i don't have any readers.

>.> okay then....O.O

lol. nice shorty. Now i have to kill you for blowing up the story.

Well i'll kill you again

xD I see pinkdesi101 has changed into Phantom. o.O

yes. i am now a phantom, and i will haunt u all. MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
lol.
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Chapter 2:
Grover and i met in the musium. He told Chiron that he was going to use the bathroom(i have no idea if he bought it or not, but he let grover go anyways) and we went out one of the emergency exits.
"What about your mom?" Grover asked.
"Oh, i forgot. This feels so strange."
"What does?"
"That i came back in time. I'm used to my mom knowing about quests and those things. How am i going to tell her i know everything? I just want to know who brang me back though. if it was..." I stopped. I couldn't tell anyone about Kronos, not yet, at least.
"Come on, lets get on the subway." Grover suggested.
"Okay." We both sat in silence the whole way, but i was thinking about what was going to happen again. Battling the Minotaur(twice, actually, but i didn't wnat to think about that). Going to the underworld. Having to hold up the entire sky. That one i was really hating thinking about re-doing. Finally, we got to my appartment. When i knocked on the door, My mom answered.
"Percy!" She said, then hugged me. "Aren't you supposed to be at school?"
How are you going to tell her that you know? Grover asked.
Trying to think of something to say!
We were both ushered inside. I saw smelly gabe sitting at the table smoking and playing cards. I forgot he wasn't dead. I almost complained. almost.
"Mom, can i talk to you for a second?" I asked.
"Sure, honey." She said. Grover looked at me.
"You're coming too, Grover." We all walked into my room.
"Uh, mom?" I said. I could barely get myself to tell her. "I know about dad"
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lol. cliffhangers rule!

xD Yus. Awsome chapter.

Nice.

random quote time!
Quote: Mr.D

Erre es korakas, Blinky! I will have your soul!

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Quote: percy

Mr.D, you said my name right.

Quote: Mr.D

I certaintly did not, Peter Johnson!

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Quote: Zoe

now let us get to the dam snack bar.

Quote: grover

the dam snack bar?

Quote: Zoe

yes, what is so funny?

Quote: Grover

oh, nothing. i want some dam french fries

Quote: Thalia

and i need to use the dam water fountain

Quote: Zoe

i do not understand

Quote: Grover

and i need to use the dam restroom

Quote: Thalia

and...i want to buy a dam t-shirt!

Quote: Grover

i heard a cow.

Quote: Thalia

a dam cow?

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Quote:

my dad is the evil titan king that wants to destroy western civilization! i wanna be just like him when i grow up!

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Quote:

pinchole is one of the best games humans have invented, next to pac-man.

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these quotes are brought to you by:
Atlas! Thank him for holding up the sky!
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lol. sorry i couldn't get another chapter in today, i didn't read the next few chapters, and for some reason, i just wanted to before continuing. >.> oh, and i'm still wondering if i should go through that, er, akward, conversation with percy and his mom. xD

xD I liked that scene at Hoover Dam. xD That was funny.

that was actually the first page of percy jackson and the olympians i ever read. xD
oh, and more to add on one of the quotes...
Quote:

Erre es korakas, Blinky! I will have your soul!

Quote:

its just a video game charictor.

Quote:

your point, jorgenson

Quote:

jackson

Quote:

yes! last level! take that you pixalated fiends!

what the heck Mr.D
oh, and i'm not having much inspiration for this story right now, due to my inspiration deciding to go into a different story i wanna do. (yes, percy jackson - realated)
do you want me to make it, Nightowl? lol. askin one person. hope more ppl read than just you, though. >.>

did some one call for inspiration?

i found it on google

lol. i like Annabeth! she's probebly saying "oh, hi luke. hehehe...." *faints*

nice pic. Ad more to the story, please!

okay, before i add on, i want everyone to vote:
1. write Percy and his mom's conversation
2. skip the conversation

Quote: Pinkdesi101

that was actually the first page of percy jackson and the olympians i ever read. xD
oh, and more to add on one of the quotes...
Quote:

Erre es korakas, Blinky! I will have your soul!

Quote:

its just a video game charictor.

Quote:

your point, jorgenson

Quote:

jackson

Quote:

yes! last level! take that you pixalated fiends!

what the heck Mr.D
oh, and i'm not having much inspiration for this story right now, due to my inspiration deciding to go into a different story i wanna do. (yes, percy jackson - realated)
do you want me to make it, Nightowl? lol. askin one person. hope more ppl read than just you, though. >.>

Yes, I suppose. xD But not if you stop this one, the plot looks interesting. xD

Oh, I vote 2.

I vote 1.

okay, karen will be the last vote(since you three are my only readers)

there is shorty...

okay, so shorty needs to vote to. tell her to vote, i'm too lazy.

if the conversation is about puberty, then 2.

karen, it's not about puberty, genious. >.>
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Finally, we got to my appartment. When i knocked on the door, My mom answered.
"Percy!" She said, then hugged me. "Aren't you supposed to be at school?"
How are you going to tell her that you know? Grover asked.
Trying to think of something to say!
We were both ushered inside. I saw smelly gabe sitting at the table smoking and playing cards. I forgot he wasn't dead. I almost complained. almost.
"Mom, can i talk to you for a second?" I asked.
"Sure, honey." She said. Grover looked at me.
"You're coming too, Grover." We all walked into my room.
"Uh, mom?" I said. I could barely get myself to tell her. "I know about dad"

great! now it is a tie again,

no, Karen said if it was about puberty. it's not, so that changes the vote to a 1. so conversation it is.
i can't write it right now. i'll write it tommarow (i'm not supposed to be here right now. )

dont get caught~!
yay more storay!

okay, time to write the akward conversation.
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"what?" My mom asked.
"I know who my dad is." I say again.
"did you tell him?" My mom asks Grover.
"no, he didn't. i don't know why, but...i just woke up this morning and, i don't know. i was at yancy when i was expecting to be in my cabin. And everything has been happening the same. well, exept that Riptide was in my pocket already when Ms. Dodds attacked me."
"What?!"
"okay, shouldn't have told you about Ms. Dodds." I looked at grover. He was eating a pillow.
"Percy, we need to get you to camp. now."
"Okay but mom, don't come with us."
"Percy, what if something happens to you? Another monster could attack you."
"Mom, i...i can't loose you again. last time, the minotaur attacked, and he captured you. i'm not going to let that happen again. I'll be fine, i've fought hundreds of monsters before."
"he's right. You can't come with us, for your safety." Grover finally spoke up.
My mom sighed. "okay, but Percy, promise me that you'll get to camp safely."
"I will, don't worry." I said.
"Hey, i need some bean dip!" I heard Gabe yell.
"Go out the window." My mom said, then walked out to the kitchen.
"Come on, Grover." I said, then opened up the window.
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okay, wasn't as akward as i imagined...oh well. xD i'll put the next chapter soon.