HELLO EVERYONE! Welcome to my story book Here, you will read my storys from raptors to dragons! Hope you all in-joy
Today's story is about Raptors and what happened to them when the apocalypse happened! The last storie topic i made was moved by dark (THANK-YOU DARK) to this selection from Fandom! unfourtantly, i did not get to it in-time and it was sent alll the way to the back of the topic list.
But here, you will experiance MORE BETTER stories than before
IN-JOY (By Kenny-fan)
DINO RUN
(Based on the game called dino-run from miniclip! play it, its great)
Rapto sat at the side of the cliff, he watched the Stegosaurus and
T-rexs walk by.
A young bright orange Raptor appeared behind him
“Hey Rapto, you said we were gonna go hunting today. Are we still going?” asked the young Orange Raptor
“We are Shelly, just give me a few minutes. I’m feeling very tired today.” Said Rapto
“But there is another Herd of brontosaurus passing our tribe today! We need to hunt the big ones before the Scuzzle tribe do.” Sighed Shelly
“Then lets go!” cried Rapto, he got up and began running when a big sturdy Raptor stopped him
“Rapto, where do you think your going?” Asked the green Raptor. The green raptor was Rapto’s dad; he was also the leader of Rapto’s tribe, the Strom-bringers.
“We are only going Hunting, Claw” Said Shelly
“NO!” Hissed Claw
“But Dad!” shouted Rapto
“NO BUTS!” spat Claw, he started to walk off.
“Lets just go” said Shelly as she ran off.
“Fine” Snorted Rapto, he began to follow.
Rapto waited in the bushes with Shelly
“There they are” whispered Rapto, he watched the brontosaurus pass the bush they were in.
“When should we strike?” asked Shelly quietly
“Now!” Cried Rapto, they jumped out the bush and roared at the brontosaurus!
The brontosaurus roared then started to run away from Shelly and Rapto, They both jumped on a baby brontosaurus and killed it
“Do you think that’s enough to last a day?” asked Rapto
“Yeah, but how are we gonna sneak it in? Your dad told us not to go hunting! If he found out, we would be dead meat” Shivered Shelly
“Were just gonna have to find a way around Claw’s cave and sneak it into yours” Replied Rapto
“That would work” said Shelly; she started to pull the dead Brontosaurus to the hill that Claw’s tribe lived. Rapto started to help.
“I’m still not sure about this” said Shelly
“Don’t worry, Claw sleeps a lot! I bet he wont take no notice” laughed Rapto
“Hopefully he’s asleep when we get there” cried Shelly.
Rapto and Shelly finally got to Claw’s cave
“Here we go.” Whispered Rapto, they started to pull it slowly past Claw’s cave and into Shelly’s cave
“Few, close one” laughed Shelly
“WHAT WAS A CLOSE ONE?” hissed a voice, it was Claw!
“Uh nothing! Nothing!” cried Rapto, they both stood infront of the dead dinosaur
“What have you got behind there?” asked claw
“UMMMMM, just a uh precious rock I found” coughed Shelly
“GET OUT MY WAY!” said Claw, he pushed them out the way and saw the dead brontosaurus!
“Uh oh!” whispered Rapto
“Is this a dead dinosaur?” hissed Claw
“Uh, we can explain” said Rapto, Shelly nodded
“Is this for me?” asked Claw, he turned
Shelly turned to Rapto
“He thinks we were hiding a present for him! Say yes” she whispered
“Yes dad” said Rapto
“How long have you had this?” asked Claw “did you go hunting today?” Asked Claw, but when he turned around; they were already gone!
CHAPTER 1 SOON
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#1 Posted: 13:35:39 05/04/2010 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 13:36:11 05/04/2010
Kool and your back yay!!!!
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#3 Posted: 13:38:54 05/04/2010 | Topic Creator
I am i came back with a number of story ideas! Did ya miss me? i missed you
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#4 Posted: 13:47:22 05/04/2010
yeah I missed ya
//forum.darkspyro.net/spyro/viewposts.php?topic=28432 heres a topic i made!!! accily I made a few like lion king, alvin and the chipmunks, royal hounds lol
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#5 Posted: 13:51:56 05/04/2010 | Topic Creator
There is already a lion-king topic, im simba!
So, are you gonna rate my story or just leave it be?
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#6 Posted: 14:08:13 05/04/2010
4/5
: D
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#7 Posted: 15:44:41 05/04/2010 | Topic Creator
YAY! what about /10?
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#8 Posted: 16:50:41 05/04/2010
9/10 lol
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#9 Posted: 19:52:57 05/04/2010
10/10 YAY FOR YOU!!!!
and i've played dino run before it is SO much fun |
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#10 Posted: 13:34:53 06/04/2010
Tell me about it! your story is really good C9999!
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#11 Posted: 17:40:39 07/04/2010 | Topic Creator
Sorry the 1st chapter toke so long, i was still planning the apocalypse
Chapter 1 The startling Rapto sat in his cave when suddenly, a Meteor came falling the sky and hit the earth! Raptor got up and looked around Whats going on? He thought Why is everyone running? I don’t understand Shelly ran up to him and cried “Rapto. It’s the end of the dinosaur world! We need to find somewhere to hide!” she screamed "Comon, quickly!" Rapto demanded, he started to run as fast as his legs would carry him! he ran faster and faster, but it seemed as he was going no-where. even shelly was in-front of him, and shes really slow "Hurry up!" hissed Shelly, he then speeded up and ran infront of all the other dinos and jumped over the small lake! When shelly tried to jump, she just fell into the lake but she then swam to the other side where Rapto was waiting "Who is the slow coach now?" he laughed "SHUT UP!" screamed Shelly, another meteor hit and caused her to freak out then start running. Rapto followed. Shelly was running really fast now, but still as not as fast as Rapto! Then Claw (Rapto's dad) Ran up to them and stopped them "Son, flee north and head towards a secret cave where me, your mother and some of the surviving dinosaurs will wait!" he cried, then another meteor hit and he ran off "Shelly, we need to go north! its where the only protected cave will be." he said to Shelly "Then lets go befor........" Shelly stopped when the sky turned red and more meteors started to fall "That....." she said in a sqeaky voice, se pointed at the red sky "CRAP!" screamed Rapto, they both toke off and started running into the jungle.
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#12 Posted: 20:10:53 07/04/2010
cool: D
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#13 Posted: 20:40:24 07/04/2010 | Topic Creator
while we wait for the 2nd chapter, wanna join the Toothless (the dragon) club in my guest book? just send me a Pm with a fan dragon that is a species of dragon from how-to-train-your-dragon and then you are in! (basicly, you count as a vicking looking after the fan-dragon u made)
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#14 Posted: 14:50:15 08/04/2010
that was a good 1st chapter
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