First of all, this fanfic is gonna start out with me... Please bare through until it gets exciting Also, I'm going to be called Queenie in this, since I don't wanna post my real name.
This is mainly about getting transported to Avalar and saving it from... a villain (don't wanna say or I'll give away part of it...)
Please tell me if you want to hear the story, or if I should just close this topic. I'll write a quick prologue now.
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Prologue
I sat at the table, on my laptop. I was in the middle of a RP on darkSpyro. I was, of course, being Cynder. I was just about to type in, Cynder blasted the ape with her eyes breath, when the strangest thing happened.
My mouse seemed to get a mind of it's own! I saw it move up to the top of the screen where it said GTG. Without me able to control it, the mouse clicked and in a moment it had loaded. I looked at the screen, puzzled. Suddenly, a burst of insanly bright light bursted out and blinded me momentarily.
When I opened my eyes again, I was no longer in my house... I was in Avalar!
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#1 Posted: 05:05:06 30/03/2010 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 05:17:57 30/03/2010
Hmm very interesting, I like where this is going so far.
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#3 Posted: 01:20:27 31/03/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks!!!
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 1 I looked around, frozen with fear. Where should I go? What should I do? I knew by playing the games that I was in Glimmer... Just like where Spyro started in Ripto's Rage. "Ah, I was wondering when another faun would show up." said a voice behind me. I whipped around and saw Elora, standing and looking at me. "How did I get here?!" I asked. "Through the darkSpyro portal, of course!" Elora replied as though it was obvious. "The what?" I asked. Elora rolled her eyes and didn't answer. "Wait, did you say another faun?" I suddenly asked. "Look at your feet," Elora replied, pointing. I looked down and gasped... I was a faun! My fur was black and my shirt, which I was wearing a few moments ago, had been replaced by a night-blue shirt that looked like Elora's green one. "How did this happen?" I paniced. Elora rolled her eyes, "You've been turned into a faun so you can save us!" "What? I don't even know how I got here... How could I save you?" I asked. "You see... someone's taken over Avalar. Hunter, Zoe, Moneybags, the Prophesor and I have been working to stop it." "And you expect me to?" I asked, "Couldn't Spyro do it?" "Spyro left, remember? He's back in the Dragon Kingdom!" Elora replied. "Couldn't you just get him?" "It's not that easy!" Elora replied, slapping me. I growled, but said nothing. Elora continued, "You're our only hope, Queen_Cynder." ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I hope you like it!
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#4 Posted: 22:04:45 31/03/2010
Cool thats a good story
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#5 Posted: 22:13:25 31/03/2010
weird, how'd your trip feel, being a fawn and all?
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#6 Posted: 17:53:43 01/04/2010
hahaha i like this story. funny but if the professor brought you there then why cant he get spyro to come back lol. but i like this alot new concept.
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#7 Posted: 01:54:59 02/04/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks guys!
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 2 "How'd you know my username on darkSpyro?" I asked, still starring at my hooves in awe. "Us fauns help run darkSpyro... we know everything about every user on there." Elora replied, once again sounding obvious. "Um... You guys run it?!" i asked in suprise. Elora nodded, "But we have more important things to discuss... Like the fate of Avalar!" "So what am I supposed to do?" I asked. Elora shook her head, "I don't know all the details... Go to the Prophesor, he'll tell you what to do. He's in Summer Forest." "Um... Don't I have to go through a portal to get there?" I asked. Elora nodded, "But Glimmer is in trouble again, so you'll have to save it fist." I sighed, "Great. But I don't even know how to fight!" Elora rolled her eyes, "You're a faun! Use your hooves." She then added in a murmur, "She doesn't even know the basics! This is worst then Spyro!" "Hey!" I growled. Elora shook her head, "Never mind that. Now you have to save Glimmer if you want to get to the Prophesor. Just find the natives and save them. Once you do that they'll grant you permission to go through their portal." I nodded - This would be harder than I thought. "Well, good luck!" Elora waved and bounded off. Before I could catch up with her, she was gone. I sighed, "Well... Let's see what I have to do..." ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Please comment!
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#8 Posted: 01:59:34 02/04/2010
Nice!
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#9 Posted: 05:22:56 02/04/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks!
I'll post more soon
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#10 Posted: 05:47:05 02/04/2010
nice I like it and its funny. If I was there, i'd be just as confused and lost as you would be.
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#11 Posted: 05:50:45 02/04/2010 | Topic Creator
It's funny you should say that, because actually, if it's alright with you, you may come in later.
(and a other friends if they ask)
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#12 Posted: 05:55:44 02/04/2010
Yeah that would be great. can I be my character dragon Tundra. hehe except i'd be called by my user name lol.
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#13 Posted: 06:05:09 02/04/2010 | Topic Creator
Yeah! (I was gonna make you a dragon, actually! Lolness) You're gonna come in at Chapter 4.
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#14 Posted: 06:06:23 02/04/2010
Hahaha, Cool sounds awesome thanks, cant wait now. Very cool
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#15 Posted: 06:37:25 02/04/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks!
And I'm trying to think of what to write, but I only have a few ideas so far.
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#16 Posted: 16:52:32 02/04/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 3
I looked around for a while, trying to find the Glimmer natives. It annoyed me that, since I hadn't played the game for months, I couldn't remember the proper name for the natives. Suddenly, I heard a squeek behind me. I whipped around, but I only saw a vase. "Hello?" I called, feeling stupid for talking to an inanamit object. "Oh, thank goodness! Someone finally came!" a voice squeaked back. I jumped backwards in shock. "You can talk?!" I asked in suprise. "Of course I can talk!" the vase replied bitterly. "Um... Vase's don't talk where I come from." I answered. "I'm not a vase!!!" the vase squeaked, "I'm a Gemcutter!" Suddenly, I remembered what the name for the natives here was... Gemcutter. I thought about how to break the vase... I didn't have horns like Spyro! I then remembered was Elora had said, Use your hooves. I took a deep breath and kicked the vase with my hooves. It shattered into pieces. In it's place stood a small, brown mouse with bright blue eyes and a little, yellow hat. "Oh, thank you, thank you!" the Gemcutter replied, dipping his head gratefully. "Um... Do you know where the other Gemcutters are?" I asked. "Yes, I'll get them in a moment. But is there anything I can do for you?" the Gemcutter asked. "Yes, actually." I nodded, "Do you think you could let me go through your portal? I need to get to Summer Forest." The Gemcutter shook his head, "I am afriad that the portals have broken after the evil attacked Avalar... They will take you to Winter Tundra instead of Summer Forest." I sighed, "I'll go... I guess." I followed the Gemcutter through the cave into the castle-like room. A portal appeared, but it was dark blue. I nodded in thanks to the Gemcutter, then leaped through. I was greeted by a gust of freezing wind. I looked around, shivering... I was in Winter Tundra.
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#17 Posted: 19:19:47 02/04/2010
Hahaha nice, guess its on to winter tundra.
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#18 Posted: 19:33:58 02/04/2010 | Topic Creator
Yup! When I have the full idea for the chapter I'll make sure you come in quickly!
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#19 Posted: 19:54:45 02/04/2010
hahaha ok cool cant wait.
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#20 Posted: 05:01:06 03/04/2010 | Topic Creator
I'm trying to think of something to add, but I'm still not sure of what will happen in this chapter.
I'm gonna have something soon, though!
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#21 Posted: 06:05:46 03/04/2010
thats good just take your time.
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#22 Posted: 00:47:01 04/04/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 4
I shivered as I looked around the Winter Tundra. How was I supposed to get to Summer Forest now? I suddenly heard a low growl behind me. "Hello?" I whipped around worriedly. "Who dares come into my terratory???" growled a voice. I gasped... A giant ice dragon was in front of me! (ok, so it wasn't giant, but it was pretty big) "Um... I'm Queen_Cynder..." I said shakily. "What? Queen_Cynder?" asked the dragon in shock. "Yeah? What's the matter?" I asked. "Well it's just... I'm S240sx24." the dragon dipped his head. "WHAT?!" I gasped. "It's true!" the dragon said, "But I'm in the body of my fandragon, Tundra." I nodded, "So... How'd you get here?" "I was teleported here from darkSpyro." he replied. "Same here!" I answered. "You're a... Faun?" asked S240sx24. I nodded, slightly embarassed. The one time we met and he was a dragon and I was a faun! "So I'm here to save Avalar." I said. "Same here," S240sx24 replied. "We should work together!" I suggested. "Sure," he replied. "I'm on my way to Summer Forest." I told him. "Well Hunter greeted me when I came here... He said to go there too!" S240sx24 replied, "But I started in Hurricos and was transported here instead of Summer Forest." "I started at Glimmer and the same thing happened to me." I replied "So we should work together, then." S240sx24 aggreed. "Great!" I said. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- There you go, S240sx24! I told you you'd come in!
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#23 Posted: 04:31:04 05/04/2010
Hahaha awesome exatcly what I would've done. Thanks queen cynder. cant wait for the next chapter.
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#24 Posted: 01:07:08 06/04/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks!
Chapter 5 The grass beneath my hooves was frozen stiff. I was shivering so much I could barely think! "Cold?" asked S240sx24. I nodded, "You?" "Seeing that I'm an ice dragon... No." he replied, breathing some ice breath to remind me. I smiled, "Right," "Now to get back on topic," S240sx24 began, "I think we should find a portal to go through." "But how would that help us?" I asked. "Well if the portals in Summer Forest took us here, maybe the portals here will take us to Summer Forest!" he answered. I beamed, "You have a point!" "So which portal do we take, is the question." S240sx24 said, wagging his sky-blue tail thoughtfully. "How about Robotica Farms?" I asked, walking in the direction of the level. "But, um, why that level?" he asked. "I dunno, it's just the first level I thought of!" I replied. S240sx24 followed me. We walked for a while, I was shivering horribly. S240sx24 seemed fine, though. Why did he have to be the ice dragon? I ignored the thought and continued walking. Soon enough, we were standing in front of the farms in Robotica Farms. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To anyone who's reading this: You can be in the story too, just send me a PM!
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#25 Posted: 02:23:37 06/04/2010
hahaha nice queen cynder very nice and if you want you can shorten my name to S240 if you want it, will be easier on your typing and the readers lol. but very nice chapter i liked it.
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#26 Posted: 00:10:55 08/04/2010 | Topic Creator
Ok, yeah. The name was pretty long to keep typing . And I'm writing the next chapter soon so it's not finished.
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#27 Posted: 05:46:05 09/04/2010
ok queen cynder take your time.
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#28 Posted: 06:30:18 09/04/2010
poor poor you. Did ya' get frost bite?
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#29 Posted: 04:07:32 10/04/2010 | Topic Creator
Lol, I dunno!
Chapter 6 We leaped through the portal. I looked around and gasped... Everything was gone! And by everything, I mean everything. The entire world was a dark grey with nothing - No hills, trees, grass, not even a sky! Just solid grey! "What happened?!" gasped S420. "I dunno," I shook my head. "This is... Wow." S240 said. I nodded in agreement, "I've never seen anything like this!" "Something's obviously wrong!" S240 exclaimed. "I know," I aggreed. "Wait a minute... How do we get back? The portal's gone too!" I realized S240 was right. My heart was beating against my chest and I shook with worry... We were trapped! "Don't panic!" S240 repeated. "I'M NOT PANICING!" I yelled. "Coulda fooled me!" S240 mumbled. I ignored his comment. With a sigh, I started walking around. "Well, we know NOT to go into portals anymore!" I decided. "Yup," "So what do we do?" I asked. S240 shrugged, "How about we just wait here... I'm sure someone will find us." "Like...?" I replied, sitting down. S240 shrugged once more, "Um... I dunno." He sat down too, and we waited. *** An hour later, we heard a loud bang. I leaped up, and heard someone howl in the distance. "You hear that?" asked S240. I nodded, "What was it?" "I don't know," S240 shook his head. Suddenly, a huge creature leaped out of the grey, grey sky and bit S240 on the tail. It had the fur of a wolf, the fangs of a saber tooth tiger, and the body of a... a... I wasn't sure. A jaguar maybe? S240 yelped in suprise, and I kicked the creature with my hooves. When I looked again, there were fifty of those strange creatures surrounding us! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Tell me what you think of it!
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#30 Posted: 04:12:55 10/04/2010
O.O owie...
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#31 Posted: 05:05:31 10/04/2010 | Topic Creator
Lolness
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#32 Posted: 06:19:57 10/04/2010
Yeah "OW!!! Dang it Take this!!!" *uses ICE ray attack at the wolve like creatures.* hahaha. nice chapter queen cynder.
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#33 Posted: 20:14:30 10/04/2010 | Topic Creator
Lol! Thanks
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#34 Posted: 20:25:13 24/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 7 ( haven't written this thing in forever! )
S240 looked around. "So do we fight'em?" I nodded. "Do we really have a choice?" S240 shrugged. "Yeah, good point." Taking a deep breath, he blew out a blast of ice, freezing two of the jaguar creatures. I gave him a thumbs up. "Great job." Running over to one, I kicked it with my hooves. "You're not so bad yourself." S240 told me. As we went in for another attack, one of the jaguar-creatures raised a paw. "Please, we do not want to fight you. However, our master has ordered us to take you to him." I exchanged glances with S240. When he gave a small nod I asked, "Well who is your master?" "He is the new ruler of Avalar. He has heard of you and wants to make a deal. Do you accept?" asked the creature. S240 spoke this time. "Yes, but you must promise not to attack us." The creature nodded. "Fine," They then took us and a portal opened. It revealed on the other side to be a huge castle. They shoved us through, then padded through themselves. "I don't like this," I whispered to S240. "I know, but it's the only chance we have of saving Avalar." he replied. I growled. "Fine I'll go along with it... For now." -------------------------------------------------------------------- Slightly short, but please tell me what you think! And if you want to be in the story, just PM me.
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#35 Posted: 05:37:58 26/07/2010
hahaha nice queen cynder.
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#36 Posted: 18:49:14 26/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks! More coming soon.
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