This is a non-Spyro fan-fic by me, Wolf. I love to write stories, so here's a little one.
Toby's Story
This is the story of Toby the dragon.
Chapter 1
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Toby lay under his favorite tree, blowing smoke rings. He was terribly bored. Oh, of course he had friends, but it seemed they were always occupied and never had time to spend with him. Looking up at the bright blue sky, Toby wished he had a loyal, loving friend to share things with, to tell secrets to. But after all these years he was sure that would never happen. The only friends he had, were not-so-loyal ones. Rising to his paws, Toby shook the boredom away and spread his wings. Flying will get my mind off of it, he thought as he took flight. Gliding smoothly through the air, Toby peered down at the mountains and valleys below. "I just love being a dragon," he muttered to himself. Closing his eyes, Toby let the wind carry him. It felt nice to be in the air. Suddenly, he heard a cry of distress far below. Jerking in alarm, he almost instinctively began to lose altitude. Toby had to see what was going on, since he was a dragon of the curious type. He landed neatly in a wide vista. Where did it come from? he thought. Toby got his answer when the cry echoed again. It was behind him, in the woods, and not far off. Padding silently towards the cry, he thought, Am I doing the right thing? Without giving himself an answer, he walked into the woods behind him.
If you guys like it, I need at least 5 more posts to post the rest of chapter 1.
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#2 Posted: 21:29:25 13/02/2010
WOW THATS AWSOME
its really good.....good job |
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#4 Posted: 21:34:44 13/02/2010
can't wait for the rest
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#6 Posted: 21:39:15 13/02/2010
YESSSSSSSS.......(can you tell i love dragon storys)
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#7 Posted: 21:51:52 13/02/2010
Good start plz continue.
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#8 Posted: 23:29:58 13/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Okay, I accidentally deleted what I had. Here it is:
Chapter 1 - Continued *********************** Padding silently through the strange, unfamiliar forest, Toby wondered whether this was a bright idea after all. Now, where did that come from? he asked himself. He got his answer with the scream for help. It was really close. With a hop and a leap, Toby, peering through some brambles, saw the source of the screams. "Help!" a young male dragon shouted. "Get off me!" A huge black and red dragon chuckled with clear amusement. What a sadistic little brute! Toby thought. "Help!" That done it. Toby burst through the brambles. "Hey!" he yelled. The big dragon whirled around. Then he laughed. "You wanna get killed too? Then come on!" "I don't think so." Toby replied calmly. Though he tried to sound laid back, he was trembling with fear. On the inside of course. "Leave him alone, Cike." the little dragon murmured. He had gotten up, but was bloody, and he shook with fear and pain. Cike laughed. Toby had finally taken in every detail of Cike. He was black, with red and purple features. He had bright green eyes, and he talked with a raspy, demonic voice. This dragon was clearly possessed. "Alright now," Toby said, gouging the ground with his razor-sharp claws. He was nervous, but he was going to make a stand. "Let him go." Again, Cike laughed. Then, he lunged at Toby. "Ah!" Toby screamed. He evaded just in time to avoid being slashed. Landing a blow on Cike's tail as he turned, Toby felt a rush of enjoyment inside. It was clear he loved to fight. Cike whirled around, lashing his tail out. Toby easily jumped and as he landed, blew fire out of his mouth. "Ragh!" Cike growled. Then, he shot out a purple beam. "What the-?" Toby had never seen such a thing. Apparently, the little dragon hadn't either. He stared wide-eyed at Cike. Toby glided over the beam. Cike glared at Toby with pure hatred, then charged forward. Anything that got in his way would be impaled. Rolling to the side, Cike whizzed past Toby and crashed into a tree, knocking himself out. "What a clumsy!" Toby laughed. Turning to the shaky young dragon, he said "What's your name?" "I- they call me Fireball." "Fireball, eh?" Toby replied. "Well, you just got your butt saved by me, Toby." he laughed. "Now, let's get outta here before that brute wakes up again." And with that, Fireball and Toby took flight, and left Cike to wake up by himself. |
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#9 Posted: 01:36:57 14/02/2010
cool story.
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#10 Posted: 02:24:48 14/02/2010
i like it. MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Chapter 2
******************** "So, Fireball," Toby said. "What happened back there? Who was that Cike guy?" Soaring high above the mountains, Toby and Fireball had decided to fly far away, where Cike wouldn't find them. "Well," Fireball started. "I got mad at my friend. He lied to me... Ah, long story. So I stormed off, and happened to stray into what we call, 'the dark part of the woods'. It's a terrible place. They say who goes in rarely comes out. If it weren't for you, I wouldn't have come out." Toby smiled. "It was nothing. Continue." Fireball nodded. "Cike is an evil, malevolent dragon, possessed by a dark force." This alarmed Toby. "What sort of dark force?" he asked. "Some shape-shifting dragon they call Jay-Doque." "Jay-Doque?" Toby echoed. Fireball nodded. "She's very, very powerful. Shape-shifters are rare, and when they're dragons..." "Whoa, she?" Toby was in disbelief. Again, Fireball nodded. "Yes, SHE." Shaking his head, Toby said, "Let's land down here so we can talk." The two landed in a small clearing surrounded by trees. "I'm guessing Jay-Doque possessed Cike," Toby said once they landed. He was eager to learn more. "Yes." Fireball said. "Him and many, many more. Just sit back, and I'll tell you everything I know..." To be continued... |
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#12 Posted: 03:15:08 14/02/2010
dun dun duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuun!
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please?
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#13 Posted: 03:58:03 14/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Lol! I'm not that good, surely?!
Chapter 2 - Continued "My uncle used to be friends with Jay-Doque's sister," Fireball explained. "He learned a lot from her. Her sister, who's name I cannot recall, told him a lot of things about Jay-Doque." Toby nodded. "She often spoke of her sister mysteriously changing into different things, and harnessing some weird powers." "What kind of powers?" Toby asked. "Powers to read others' minds. To move things without moving herself." "Psychokinetic?" "Yes. After a while, she began to train with these powers. Jay-Doque became a master of mind-reading. Over time, this became a major problem. She abused her power. Jay-Doque would read everyone's mind, and then tell everyone else their secrets. It was horrible, according to my uncle." Toby nodded, indicating for him to continue. "Everyone hated her then. That kinda corrupted her. So she ran away." "That figures," Toby said. Fireball nodded and grinned. "And of course, she turned to evil, and chaos led her the way." Toby shook his head. "What a shame..." he muttered. Fireball nodded. "Agreed." "I feel sorry for Jay," he said. "But it was her fault. Do you know anything else?" Fireball hesitated. "Yeah. She lives in another realm, called the Shadow Realm. Surely they couldn't have come up with something better... Anyway, she, through some allies and dark magic that she harnesses, possesses innocent creatures and sends them out to possess others. I would be a rabid beast if it weren't for you. You have my respect and gratitude." "Thank you," Toby replied. He finally found a friend. "Anyway, Jay-Doque is pretty powerful. I doubt there's any beating her in a fight." "Never say never," Toby said. "Where there's a will, there's a way, and I WILL put a stop to Jay-Doque." Stay tuned for Chap. 3... |
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#14 Posted: 04:01:22 14/02/2010
yes u are!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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#15 Posted: 04:03:11 14/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Lol Why thank you.
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#16 Posted: 04:04:23 14/02/2010
your welcome. ur story is good!
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#17 Posted: 04:12:51 14/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks. I just type as I go. That's what I always do. It must be a talent, if it's good when I type as I go.
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#18 Posted: 04:13:51 14/02/2010
Lots of story ideas have been jumping out at me lately, but i don't know if i should write them.
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#19 Posted: 04:16:53 14/02/2010
your story is awesome, you come up with some very interesting names.
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#20 Posted: 04:20:25 14/02/2010 | Topic Creator
@ Pinkdesi: Just write! I do when I have an idea. If I think it sucks, I delete it!
@ torok: Thanks! My trick to coming up with names: I look away from the keyboard and type random letters. Sometimes the letters make a name form in my mind. |
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#21 Posted: 04:24:19 14/02/2010
i just tried it. u don't wanna know what name came out.
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#22 Posted: 04:27:20 14/02/2010 | Topic Creator
LMAO!!! PM me! Plz!
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#23 Posted: 04:28:34 14/02/2010
ok.....
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#24 Posted: 04:34:46 14/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Ok, that was pretty funny.
My next chapter of Toby's Story will be tomorrow, unless I can't get to sleep and I get bored or something... Just to inform you. |
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#25 Posted: 04:36:17 14/02/2010
i hope that happens. sorry, but i want more!!!!!!!!!!!
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#26 Posted: 04:53:20 14/02/2010 | Topic Creator
You'll get more, trust me. Just not tonight. Maybe....
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#27 Posted: 04:54:30 14/02/2010
I need to go in 6 min. it's ok, i can wait.
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#28 Posted: 04:55:14 14/02/2010
i have to catch up horrible flu, too tired...D:
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#29 Posted: 04:56:49 14/02/2010 | Topic Creator
That sucks. Sry GM_76.
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#30 Posted: 04:58:08 14/02/2010
awww. hope u feel better soon!
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#31 Posted: 04:58:51 14/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Okay, signin' out for now. See you peeps tomorrow, when I'll type more!
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#32 Posted: 04:59:21 14/02/2010
bye!
(filler)
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#33 Posted: 05:00:15 14/02/2010
cya Dragon Lover!
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#34 Posted: 18:23:15 14/02/2010
Thats one of the BEST stories ive ever read......seriously
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#35 Posted: 18:51:35 14/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks, azaria. I always loved writing, I guess this is where it has led me. Chapter 3 will come soon, when I have time later. I promise.
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#36 Posted: 23:25:13 14/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 3
******************** Jay-Doque clicked her nails with impatience. A dream had told her a young male dragon by the name of Toby planned to take her down. Ha! Foolish, arrogant young twit! "Cike!" she barked. "Come here!" Cike stepped out of the shadows. "Yes?" "You know that Toby? The purple and green dragon with yellow eyes that kicked your butt last week?" Cike looked away in embarrasment. Then he nodded. "Well I want you to take him out. Here." Jay-Doque handed Cike a small leather strap with a black crystal tied to it. "What is this?" he asked. "It is a crystal I have formed with dark magic." she explained. "It will give you infinite magic." Looking into Jay-Doque's bright purple eyes, Cike didn't know what to say. Then, he tied the crystal around his neck. "Good, good," Jay-Doque rasped. "Now go kill that dragon! And his pathetic friend too! No, no, possess his friend. There's no greater pain than losing an only friend." Cike nodded, flicked his tail, and bounded out to kill Toby. To be continued... |
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#37 Posted: 23:30:09 14/02/2010
im still sick... so im staying home... but i read the first part...
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#38 Posted: 23:34:22 14/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Cool. Do you like it?
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#39 Posted: 00:11:01 15/02/2010
I LOVE THIS!!!!
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#40 Posted: 00:18:48 15/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks, cuz.
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Chapter 3 - Continued
************************ It had been over a month since Toby met Fireball and learned about Jay-Doque. He had pondered so long on what to do. Fireball and he had thought and thought about how to approach the matter, but could come up with nothing. "I have no clue whatsoever," Fireball said, thumpimg the ground with his thick tail. Toby blew out a long breath. "But there has to be a way!" he said. "But she's a mind reader. She'd know your next move before you did." Toby was clueless. There had to be a way. But there couldn't. There were so many possibilities, but they were all pointless. "I know you're thinking there's no possible way," Fireball muttered. "But we have to try. Ever since Jay's empire began to reign over the Dragon Lands, there's been numerous dragons trying to kill her, but there's no way. She's a psychokinetic, shape-shifting mind reader, Toby! Jay is one tough chick!" "I know!" Toby exclaimed. "There's no killing her! But we have to try. There's one out of a million, and I truly feel like I'm the one." Fireball let out an explosion of laughter. Toby felt a bit embarassed. But it was true. He felt like the one who was destined to kill Jay-Doque. After Fireball finished laughing, he said, "Okay, that was hilarious. But back to the-" Suddenly, a rustle of leaves. Then, Cike jumped out. "Oh that figures," Toby murmured. Leaping up, he said, "Wadda you want?" "Oh nothing," Cike rasped. "Except your life!" Then, Cike lunged. Toby jumped one way, and Fireball the other. Almost as if their minds were connected with an invisible cord, the two friends slashed into Cike's side. The evil dragon roared in pain, then the claw marks on his sides grew back! What the-? Toby thought. Cike laughed evilly. "There's no stopping me," he said. "I have infinite magic, and health." "What?!" Fireball exclaimed. "You heard me!" Cike snapped. Toby's eyes grew wide. Was there really no stopping this evil dragon? To be continued |
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#42 Posted: 01:27:37 15/02/2010
i like it.
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#43 Posted: 01:28:59 15/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks. It's good to have a few readers.
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#44 Posted: 01:31:07 15/02/2010
it's strange y not many ppl read this story. it's so good!
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#45 Posted: 01:31:12 15/02/2010
Cool story cuz.
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#46 Posted: 01:32:35 15/02/2010
NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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#47 Posted: 01:36:21 15/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks, guys, I'll type more tomorrow. I promise. I won't let y'all down.
Perhaps you guys could copy and paste the link to this on your GB? |
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#48 Posted: 01:37:49 15/02/2010
what? >.> have no idea wat u just said...
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#49 Posted: 01:38:26 15/02/2010
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#50 Posted: 01:41:07 15/02/2010
HOW COULD YOU?!?!
lol
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