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"Legend of Elijah", (plz comment) [CLOSED]
ElectricDragons Ripto Gems: 1138
#1 Posted: 14:00:08 12/02/2010 | Topic Creator
A Story of Elijahs life. There will be 11 or 10 chapters.
Following Main Characters:

Elijah
A main character, Enemy of Robert.
Robert
A dark character, Born in Convexity, And met Elijah as an enemy.
Shept
A Crystal dragon, half ice dragon. He helps Elijah in these rounds.
Ujlia
A Unknown Character, found at the Tails' Roin
Elemental Dragon
A dragon with Elements of Fire, Electricity, Ice, And Earth.
Aurai
The Queen of Tails' Roin.
Garry
A fire dragon, Prince of Tails' Roin.
Harlan
A dragon warrior, with full protection armour.

Intro: The living dragon
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One night, Elijah was play with his friend, Shept.
Later on, Elijah tripped over, and got up, and he spotted a crystal glowing of darkness. Inside the crystal was a mysterious dragon. The crystal looked like someone was suffering inside. The crystal was just standing on top of a brick. Shept took the crystal.

Elijah: What is this crystal? or what does it mean?
Shept: I dont think it means anything...

Shept looked inside the crystal.
Suddenly...

The crystal started growing, and growing. Then, a dragon unleashed out.

Elijah: Robert! what do You Want? Huh! Is this one of you're tricks again? Hah!
Robert: Oh, well, well, well. Poor Elijah. I guess the crystal is mine!

Robert holded out the crystal, and something popped out and shooted to Elijah.

Shept: Elijah! look out!

Elijah rolled over, and missed Elijah and hit the ground. Robert had now disappeared somewhere, but Elijah didnt care. All he cared about that he was gone.

Elijah: Looks like we got a job to do Eh?

Shept nodded.
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I hope you liked that intro!
Edited 3 times - Last edited at 09:12:45 13/02/2010 by ElectricDragons
ElectricDragons Ripto Gems: 1138
#2 Posted: 14:41:26 12/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 1: Out on a Quest

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Elijah & Shept were sleeping in there bedroom, and woke up.

Elijah: Shept wake up! Properly! We have to rush to the Tails' Roin!
Shept: I'm not under my blankets. I'm outside silly!

Elijah went out of the room. Elijah & Shept ran. When they arrived, Elijah put his map out.

Elijah: Here we are... the Talis' Roin.

Suddenly, there's screaming.

Shept: What was that?
Elijah: i dunno, but we have to move fast!

They run on top of the buildings, and they sense where the screaming is.

Screaming Person: Help me!

Elijah ran into a corridor, and find the person who was screaming. She was locked in a cage, with a key in front of the cage. He picked it up, and unlocked the cage.

Screaming Person: Thank you...my name is Ujila
Elijah: Hello, im Elijah.
Shept: Im Shept.
Ujila: Well, in these rounds they are not safe. You must stay away from Robert. He locked me here.
Elijah: Well, i see.

In a mysterious place,

Robert: You!
Demon: yes master?
Robert: take care of these sewers! and dont let the blue brat go thourgh there! if you let me down...you know what will happen...
Demon: sure...urm master.

Demon leaves.

In Tails' Roin, Inside a cave like a sewer

Elijah: So, this Robert's lair? A Sewer? You have Got to be kidding me.
Demon: Hey you! Youre Elijah arent you? Robert sayed to stop you from coming here!
Eiljah: yeah yeah! and if you...

The demon pushes Eiljah into the water. Demon thorws a spear at Shept. It hits him, and he trips over a bump, and falls into the water as well. Ujila uses aqua bomb before he attacks, and the water goes in hes face and falls into the water. Ujila saves Elijah and Shept, and they all move on.

Later on, Elijah was reading his map.

Elijah: hmmm.... that way guys! *points to the right*

Elijah turns to the right, and he still points. While he turns, he notices that hes pointing at Robert.

Robert: Ahhhhhhhh. You again... You think i will never find you? were ever you go, i will be there.

Robert points his staff, and the staff is aims at Elijah.

To be Contiuned...
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Hope you like that chapter! smilie
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#3 Posted: 01:00:04 13/02/2010
i found it!

the one you posted in my guestbook wouldnt work...
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#4 Posted: 01:06:00 13/02/2010
Pretty nice.
ElectricDragons Ripto Gems: 1138
#5 Posted: 03:33:38 13/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Next chapter.

Chapter 2: Revenge!
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Contiuned from Chapter 1.

Robert: Ahhhhhhhh. You again... You think i will never find you? were ever you go, i will be there.

Robert points his staff, and the staff is aims at Elijah.
Something popped out of the staff, and hit the ground. Something appeared, like a forcefield. Robert looked in the forcefield, and saw the Elemental Dragon trapped with ropes. Robert was pleased.

Robert: he he he he, HA HA HA HA HA!

Elijah rolled his eyes, and charged him. He fell back, and flew on top of the buildings. Elijah, Shept & Ujila ran out and tryed to escape, but Robert aim his staff down, and made a forcefield to block the way out.

Robert: You'll have to deal with me to escape! You wont beat my Infinte Ultimate power!

Elijah whispered a plan, and they all used there fury. Elijah used fire fury, Shept used Crystal fury, and Ujila used Ice fury. Robert was weaked. he fell to the ground, and dropped his staff. A fairy released from the staff, and flew away into a bubble.

Elijah: Well, looks like you're power wasnt so infinte after all!

Elijah, Shept & Ujila left. They found a cave, and went inside. they rest inside the cave and went to sleep safe, and sound.
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Chapter 3: Snow is...Christmas!

All three legends sleeping in a backyard.

Elijah: *wakes up* woah.. that was a good dream!
Shept: no.. it was terrible!
Ujila: it doesnt matter...but its freezing!
Shept: lets check what has happened.

They walk somewhere, and they find white stuff in the ground.

Elijah: wait... its snowing!
Shept: and look at those nice lights!
All: woaah!
Elijah: I'm gonna play a snowfight with Shept.
Ujila: I'm hungry. I havent eaten.

Ujila freezes a rabbit, and it defrosts. She puts the rabbit on the spitfire to cook it alittle. She ate it, leaving the bones and burning them.

Ujila: Mmm. I think i ate a bone...
Shept: Elijah! Look!

Elijah looks behind him, and Shept thorws a snowball.
Suddenly the all the snow disappears.

Robert: Remember what i said in you're dreams? Were ever you go, i will be there.
Elijah: well, this crystal is mine!

Elijah holds up the crystal, and drops it on the ground. The crystal breaks, and smoke comes out.

Robert: NOOO! You idiot! Now you're presentation will be cursed!
Eiljah: *rolls eyes* Oooh...Spooky!
Shept: Oh, well. Lets just carry on. Besides, you have to take care of him.
Elijah: Wait... Guardians?

Robert uses his staff and points at Elijah. Something hits him, and Elijah Shept & Ujila disappear somewhere.

All: ARGHHHHH!!!
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Hope you liked the two chapters. smilie
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 05:51:22 16/02/2010 by ElectricDragons
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#6 Posted: 17:37:51 13/02/2010
Woa, that's a really good story u got there
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Twinkies and 2hus
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#7 Posted: 18:40:40 13/02/2010
Pretty good so far. Could use a bit more planning and grammatical corrections though.
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