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#1 Posted: 20:51:02 06/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Starting soon.
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#2 Posted: 21:23:46 06/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter one
The dragon stood tall in front of her a chortled at her weak stance. She lifted her self up and plucked up the last of her corage. The dragon raised the navy blue scales above his amber eye with a coral line of evil across it. The dragon wacked her green petite tail at the large dragon. The dragons chortles volumed up. He hooked the chain over her and dragged her back and fourth. "Let go off me you insane fool!" She cried as he poked his sharp nails at her small skull. Magic turned into her soul as she tugged at the chain. Nothing happened. All was silent but the laughter of the dragon as he pulled her chain as if she was some kind of dog. The magic ate her soul up, making her forget every trace of detail she knew like erasing mistakes on paper. Her grasshopper green scales smeared to jet black as her eyes turned pure red like the blood spilled from those dying. "Now I shall drink the blood of the weak's might!" He chuckled. He stabbed her with a razor sharp sword and licked the blood spilling out from her wounds like wine. He spoke of a few words before he grew taller and powerfuller. He breathed a breathe of fire. The fire spread around the cave as he roared like a tiger. "Car noir grefalier trwoo ja! Car noir grefalier trwoo ja! Heeyoo heeyoo! Grawshee! Nuki kar mow!" He chanted, clashing his staff into the ground. |
karen f
Yellow Sparx
Gems: 1578
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#3 Posted: 07:18:31 08/02/2010
cool! add more
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spyro super fan
Emerald Sparx
Gems: 3096
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#4 Posted: 11:00:30 08/02/2010
nice chapter, and good villian aswell, the villian sounds creepy, and when was he able to hold a staff? i am tired of stories with people forgetting and making the dragons act more like anthros with no tailblades than dragons
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#5 Posted: 17:18:53 08/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Most my dragons hold a staff, thanks.
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#6 Posted: 18:39:40 08/02/2010
wtf? that dragon is a vampire oohhh scary. lulz
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#7 Posted: 16:38:41 09/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Nope...
Chapter two The darkness plucked her up by the neck like a baby lion. Finally, her eyes opened like dust infested rubies that lurked, forgotten. continue later |
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#8 Posted: 11:16:25 18/02/2010 | Topic Creator
im closing this one two this is crap
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